SwaRon OS :Need You Now ...(current track) last part pg- 14

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

it was simply awesome Di..totally loved it... 😃

no one else can describe emotions better den u...

loved every part of it...it was so emotional...

and thos dialogues which u hav put in between brought back old memories..

Di plz update it soon... 😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Thank you so much for the response guys ...i am overwhelmed 😳..will update by tomorrow night 😊thank u so much🤗

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Thank you so much for the response guys ...i am overwhelmed 😳..will update by tomorrow night 😊thank u so much🤗

waiting eagerly... 😃

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Madhura

@Madhura..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Very beautifully penned down Deepika...way u described pov of Swaron was so perfect and true. The dialogues...guilt...memories..complexity..brilliantly potrayed.

Finally am here...apologies for not being able to read ur work before. U know reason.

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

I always loved ur write-ups deep😃🤗

I like ur choice of words..

This was yet another beautifully penned down thoughts..

The description and portraying of their feelings through words was fantabulous👏👏

keep writing😃

Lots of love..

- Snigdha :)

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hey deepika

awesome OS 😊

really loved it ❤️

it is penned down so amazingly 👏

u emotes the emotions so beautifully cannot express in words

keep the great work 👍🏼

want to read more from u so do write more

and thanks for the PM

love

Mehvash

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Dis is d first swaron 😳story im reading
all thanx to u for d PM a big wala thanku
awww beautifully writter
lovely❤️
all d pain of both swaron has been depicted sooo well all d emotions,d pain all beautifuly written
bang oon wala OS👍🏼