SwaRon OS :Need You Now ...(current track) last part pg- 14

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awesome os

liked it

swayam and Sharon pov's were needed actually

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

am speechless u have penned down swayam and sharon's POV so well..

just awesome.. plzz dom update soon i am so loving this just wowww :)

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cscs

@cscs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Why do u always write so well..see nw u made me emotional na😭

very nice deep as usual..

u expressed their emotions so perfectly n amazingly..

its such a khubsurat os..

loved it😊

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

U write so well...

I loved it...

I just started wrong my first OS...

But after reading urs I feel I need to learn...

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Beautifully written dipi...😃

Emotions are very well expressed...😊

Just like the way-- things were happening... you remembered every minute details... 👏

Bahot complications hai relationships me...

Ye swayam bhi bahot zyada hi ulta bol deta h kabhi kabhi...😳

& sharon ka toh vaise hi old timepass hai... gussa karna... 😆

God knows... inki fight kab solve hogi...💔

I agree... bahot kuch baseless ho raha h d3 me...🤢

Ab ya to swaron ka patchup ho jaye ... ya fir show hi band ho jaye... 🤣

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fanista

@fanista

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

bohuth acchha lekhti hai aap 😊

apppko ek humble request hai...😃

pls aur lekiy na abbh iss tym mai 😭swaron os ki sakth zaroorath hai 😊

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

awesome os.. loved d way u showed swayam's n sharon's pov brilliantly... hope anything like this comes in show... loved d way swayam remembered his harsh words n sharon d memories... loved d way both felt bad for not understanding each other n fought unnecessarily... waiting for 2nd part... s it swayam outside d window???