Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track) - Page 6

Originally posted by: nami2811

Omg Shilpu! 😲
Kya likha hai tu ne?! I'm pleasantly surprised wid dis. Lagta nahi ki tera pehla waala OS hai.. Current track pe likhne meon mujhse competition aa gayi ai tu 😆
I liked how you showed d naughty Sharon n Swayam n is is d best compensation ever 😳
Waise ek baat samajh mein nahi aaya tera.. Agar Swayam usse utha kar rakha hai apne dono haathon se toh woh usse chup karane ke liye fingers uske muh pe kaise lagata 😕🤣

I loved d OS shishya!! And I liked d surprise!!

Thanks a lot guru ji ur comment means a lot to me...
Am happy u liked it. . N tune toh prove kar diya ki tu guru hai meri Kya analysis nikali hai 😆 😆
Waise die hard d3 fan hun toh blooper Nahi dalu aisa kaise ho sakta hai 😆
N woh swayam hai Mr majnu n Mr unpredictable toh usne sharon ko ek hath se balance kar liya hoga Kyun ki sharon feather jaisi Halki hee toh haii 😉 😆

Res..i know m extremely late..sry😳

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Thanks a lot chandu🤗am so so happy seein ur comment.. n u commented first hmmm wow... even i want to see dis sequence happening yaar.. thanks a lot dear ur comments means a lot to me😊

n sneha nahi its sakshi..

yaar u r my bestiee...so i will try to comment first na...plss writee more dear😃😃

Amazing os 😊

Originally posted by: vrushaan

shocked. ...😲
will unres soon... 😉
unres
haww did i see this...m hell shocked dii...itna romantic os...esa likha h ki meri dimak aap me aa gyi ho...lagta h meri devil mind aap me aa gyi...😳
dii was simply outstanding...apne tho muje b compedition de diya naughtiness me...😆
swayam n sharon being naughty...😉
awww i luvd hw sharon give tht bonus to swayam ek kiss pe ek kiss free...😉
n thn naughty sharon humare bole bale majnu ko tang kr rahi thi...thn khub satane ke bad majnu ko shock mil gya...lips pe peck...😳
it was just ossam dii...
do write more...
n plsss esa naughtiness se bara hi likhna...yeh style suits u better...😳

Originally posted by: kitty_swaron

shilpa di

ap bohut acha lika thi ho di

it was beautiful , amazing n romantic

loved it

aaye blushing swayam n sharon

m mar jawa

pls do write more di

vishu di ty ase hi di se aur story lika wana 😉

Originally posted by: fun4ever

Amazing os 😊

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

awesome Di...totally loved it... 😃

how adorable swaron can get... 😳 wish d actual scene was similar to dis... 😳

but nywaz cuming back to ur OS...amazing Os Di...

loved d way u hav described everything... 😊 it was really cute and romantic... 😉

compensation by naughty swayam... 😆 dat was romantic...

and den Sharon irritating him...poor Swayam... 😆

and den d end with d kiss...it was megical just like swaron... 😉

Di u surely should write more...dis cant b ur lst OS...wil like to read more frm u...😃