Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track) - Page 7

Originally posted by: anandita

OMg ..di kya bolu...!!! it was totally amazing...!!
i wish ye sach mein hua hota...!!!
sweet simple pure...!!! and really enchanting..!!!
it was damn cute...!!
aww love the way u potrayed it...!!!
each and every emotion...!!! their naughtiness...!! compensations and formost...!!!
one for one free😆 heheh...!!😳
i loved it to the core...!!!
kaun kahega...its ur first Os ...
supar chool...!!!
and romantic...

loads of love,
anny...

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

Loved it loved it loved it...
Kaash aisa hi hota...

Loved th e Sharon blushing ...
N Compensation was wow..!

Swayam manofying Sharon...So cute...
Last peck by Sharon...
Hayee...! So lovely...

*I Blushed with Sharon*
Do write more...
Love,
Sakshi...<3

Originally posted by: shardhasingh

Hey Shilpa!!
I have just read your OS and i must say it was Awesome👏
Luved it. I can imagine Swayam blushing AAyyee Haayyee!! ☺️
AT members r write u r a great writter👍🏼
Keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

Res..i know m extremely late..sry😳

edited

err well i know i took ages to edit😛

issliye skipping to the os

awesome situation given by vish😉

and an equally fab os written by u di🤗

simply loved it..

it was sweet romantic and adorable:)

the title is nicely justified

loved their antics..sort of cute i guess:P

the getting angry then compensation rounds were nice..

Di u r superb writer..aapko aur likhna chahiye u know na😉

plz do write more on swaron:)

-Veronica

PS- ( a last sry for my laziness😳)

Aww thank u so much my jerry for dat lovely comment 🤗

Shilpa you told me you're not much of a writer but I would'nt agree to that notion of yours. You're very much a writer and an awesome one at that..
Bahut hi achha tha OS yaar it was simple cute and adorable.. The teasing, the blushes the compensation kisses, the fake anger,the different ways swayam tried to make it up to sharon and last but not the least the peck on the lips.. Swayam's reaction were worth a million dollar, I enjoyed reading your OS.. I had a smile on my lips all throughout it trust me..😊.
You should write more and when you do write something pm the link to me..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Shilpa you told me you're not much of a writer but I would'nt agree to that notion of yours. You're very much a writer and an awesome one at that..
Bahut hi achha tha OS yaar it was simple cute and adorable.. The teasing, the blushes the compensation kisses, the fake anger,the different ways swayam tried to make it up to sharon and last but not the least the peck on the lips.. Swayam's reaction were worth a million dollar, I enjoyed reading your OS.. I had a smile on my lips all throughout it trust me..😊.
You should write more and when you do write something pm the link to me..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

Thanks a lot for dat lovely comment yaar. .
It means a lot to me. . U made me smile..
Thank u so much 😊

Ye to maine padha hua tha...
I love this one...bohot awesome...
Good good shatabdi xpress ...aapko to writing bhi aata hai...

Originally posted by: ...Sanyukta...

Ye to maine padha hua tha...
I love this one...bohot awesome...
Good good shatabdi xpress ...aapko to writing bhi aata hai...

Thank u sandy 😊