PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 110

aah............i thought kashish doesn't have brain.........but i have changed my opinion.........sujal doesn't have ne brain 😡

well the part was awesome 👏

sori for not commenting these days 😔 ......... i wass a little busy

ok so sujal is an idiot...cnt he c the pain in kash's eyes...n how how cud he call kash a saman ...fabulous part neelu but very sad...y sujal hav to hurt kash so much n insult her and her family...god man just get ur things str8 rather than blaming neone 4 no reason whatsoever...4 baseless things 😡 😡 😡
cont sooon!!!!

nice update.. 👏 ....... why is sujal acting this way.......i wanna read more........continue soon......... 😊

GOD!neelu i can't believe that sujal will behave with her like that 😡 . he is so rude 😡 . how can he tell kashish that she is a samaan aur samaan ki tarah padi raho. he is out of his senses yaar . pagal ho gaya hai. you know what kashish should leave him alone for some days then he will understand her value otherwise he will keep on behaving with her like that for whole life😳. this time it is his mistake, he is wreaking and making all the things bad. bechari kashish 😭😭 how can she bear him when he comes home fully drink 🥺 . i really hated him when he tells that he was with tina. i mean come on that is toooooo much. aur kitna hurt karega use 💔🥺💔 . she will go mad yaar. neelu ab next i really don't know what will happen. maybe now he will tell her his condition after giving her money she needs. and that will be the exciting as well as sad part cause sujal will for sure tell her to do something like that which will be beyond her limits. i am sure it will shock kashish 😲 . neelu it was a sweet part. nice job yaar. simply adorable 😉. and yeah! continue soon yaar. can'y wait any longer plz............ bye take care. 😊😛😊

Ok nxt prt-

Aur k ki ankhon se apne aap lagataar asoo behne laagte hain!

S ke ko side haataakaar,uss haalaat mein chodkaar,room mein sone chala jaata hai!

Kuch der baad k bhi kamre mein aati hai

Aur dekhti hai ki sujal batti band karke so gaya hai bed paar

Sujal ko dekhkaar k ke zehen mein sujal ki baatein aur gunj rahi hain

Aur uski ankhon se lagataar asoo bahe jaa rahe hain

Kashish apni usual jagah,yaani ke zameen paar aakaar let jaati hai

Paar neend hai ki ankhon se kahin ruthkaar durr chaali gai hai,jis tarah se uss waqt sujal usse dur hai

Abhi kashish ke paas hai to bass asoo,jo uski ankhon se lagataar bahe jaa rahe hain

Abb kashish apne mann mein soch rahi hai ki-

K[mann mein]-sujal,aisi kya galti ho gai mujse ki tumhe………..aisi kya kaami reh gai muj mein?

Aise hi,kashish ki saari raat asooyon ke sahare aur neend ke bina guzar jaati hai
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Subah ho jaati hai-

Kashish uth jaati hai,uthti kya wo to puri raat soyi hi nahi

Paar aaj ka din kashish ke lie alag hai

Aaj ek ajeeb sa khalipann hai,mayusi hai

Wo apne roz ke saare kaam kar rahi hai,paar uska mann kisi kaam mein nahi laag raha
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Kuch der baad,jaab kashish apne kamre mein ghusti hai

To dekhti hai ki sujal taiyaar ho raha hai

Kashsih ,sujal ke saamne jaakaar khadi hoti hai aur usse uska wallet,saab de rahi hai

Sujal ne subah se kashish se koi baat nahi ki hai

k-wo..bohot ..khubsurat hai?

Aisa kehte hue,k ki ankhon ke kisi kone mein ek asoo ubhar aata hai

Her voice is a bit choked,chahe wo rone se ho,ya iss baat se jude dard se

s-[confused]kya????????..kaun??????????

k-t..tina..bohot khubsurat hai?

s-haan,bohot zyada,bohot hi zyada![sujal kashish ko hurt karne ka chance kaise miss kar sakta tha,uske hisaab se to kashish ke dhoke ka jawab dene ka yahi tarika tha naa ki,wo usse ehsaas dilae ki wo uski parwah nahi karta,she doesn't exist 4 him]

k-mu..mujse zyada khubsurat hai? [kashish ki ankhen asyon se laal ho gai hain]

s-haan,wo khubsurat ke saath saath hot & sexy bhi hai!tumhari tarah nahi,behenji!

Sujal ki ye baat kashish ke dil mein teer ki tarah chubhi,aur uski ankh se ek asoo chalak hi gaya

k-to……….[break in her voice Is significant]…..bohot..achchi..hai wo?

s-achchi?..she is perfect!

Sujal ki ek ek baat kashish ke dil mein aur gehri tiis paida karr rahi hai

k-..bohot..pasand hai tumhe?

s-pasand?kaun usse pasand nahi karega,she is every man's desire!

k-oh!

Abb kashish ki ankhon se nahi dil se asoo nikal rahe hain

k-..chahte ho usse?

Kashish khud hi jaanti hai,ki ye kehne se pehle wo kitni maute maari hai,uska dil kitna roya hai ye shabd apni zaban se nikalne se pehle

s-kaun usse nahi chahega?wo mil jae to zindagi mein aur kya chahie?

Aisa kehkaar sujal office chala jaata hai

Aur kashish wahin apni bebasi ,mayus,asooi aur tooti hui umeedon ke sath wahin reh jaati hai

ok thats it...sujal needs a tight slap...i never thought i wud say this 4 my darling...but why he has to hurt her so much...poor kash...i think now kash wil look out 4 a make over...hot n sexc n seduce sujal...oooh lala 😉 😳

hey plz don't make sujal character like this........i can't imagine it like this 😭

i hope he realizes his mistake soon........... 😔

hey neelu..dekho main aagayi comment lekar on the two parts joh tune post kiye hai... sorry for the delay and hope you like my comment....😃
tho coming to the analysis on the part.. part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan kashish ko pareshaani ho rahi hai kii uske dad ke liye paiso ka intazaam kare tho akhir kaise kare... kashish doctor ke cabin se bahar aathi hai.. uske mann mein hazaro sawaal hothe hai.. kashish ke tho samaj mein jaise kuch bhi nahii aa raha hotha hai.. uske mann mei baar baar reh rehkar bas ek hii baat aathi rehthi hai kii woh in paiso ka intazaam kiss tarah se kare.. me sure kashish apne aap ko bada bebas , besahara mehsoos kar rahi hogi.. na woh yeh baat apne kissi ghar waale ko bata sakthi hai aur na hii akele un paiso ka intazaam kar sakthi hai.. bechari kii haalat pe mujhko tho bada taras aa raha hai... ab wahaan sujal aatha hai and he is like kashish main tumhe kabse dhoond raha tha.. maine medicines mamma ko de diye hai... uff... yeh kya baat hui..sujal kya ek baar bhi kashish ke chehre ko dekhkar yeh pad nahii saktha kii kashish kiss trauma se guzar rahii hai... sujal tho har chotti se chotti baat jaan letha hai joh kashish ko khushi dethi hai , lekin ab kashish ka aisa utthra hua chehra bhii dekhkar sujal ko hasi-mazaak sooj raha hai... ab kashish apni soch mein ghum hothi hai aur bas kuch bhi nahii kehthi hai...... ab sujal gets confused kii kashish ko kya hua hai woh jawaab kyun nahii de rahi hai , tab he shakes her tho kashish apni soch se bahar aathi hai aur sujal ko apne saamne khada paathi hai.... ab sujal is like kya hua tumhe... tho kashish bas manages to say sujal... ab sujal mazaak ke mood mein hai he is like woh kuch dhair neeche kya gaya kashish tho uska chehra hii bhool gayi hai.. ab kashish ka reply is totally uninterested... tho ab sujal kehtha hai sorry bad joke.. yeh sujal ko bhi na patah nahii kab mazaak karna hai kab serious hona hai.. kya woh kashish ke chehre par shikan nahii dekh paa raha hai... aur woh laga hua hai apne mazaako mein.. ab kashish starts fumbling like sujal..wo..papa…p..p..paise..doc..doctor…... bechari kashish ka haal tho mujhko lagtha hai bada hii behaal hai.... woh sahi tarike se baat karne ke liye shabd bhi juta nahii paa rahi hai... ab sujal ko tho jaise kuch bhi samaj nahii aatha hai.. tho woh kashish se kehtha hai kii woh saaf saaf kahe... ab kashish takes him to the side and tells sujal kii doctor ne usse kaha hai kii uske dad ke treatment ke liye 10 lakh kii aur zaroorat hogi... ab kashish sujal ko kehthi hai kii kya woh usko woh paise de saktha hai.. she says kii usko un paiso kii bohat zaroorat hai... well this shows kii kashish kitni zyada majboor hai... aur usse paise maangne pad rahe hai... ab sujal ka mann mein yeh baat aathi hai kii kashish joh bhi uske saamne keh rahi hai woh sab jhoot hai.. he thinks kii abhi kuch dhair pehle doctor ne kaha kii her father is alright... sujal thinks kii kashish ka yeh sab ek plan hai paiso ko aithne ke liye... he thinks kii kashish apne dad ko unki tabiyat ko zariya banakar usse paise lena chahthi hai... well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii chi..chi..chi.. kitni ghatiya soch hai tumhari sujal... tum kya samajthe ho ek ladki paiso ke liye apne pita kii zindagi ke baare mein jhoot bolegi... lekin agar tumhe aisa lagtha hai tho tumko yeh bilkul ghalat lagtha hai.. sujal bad very bad.. tum kashish par inti ghinnouni soch kaise rakh sakthe ho.. itne dino se woh tumhare saath rahii lekin ab bhi tum usko samaj na paye.... very damn bad... sujal kii soch par mujhko ghussa aa raha hai..sujal further thinks kii ohh tho he feels kii kashish uske saath itne din jaise bhi pesh aa rahii thi woh sab natak tha uska vishwaas jeetne ke liye...well is baat par mujhe sujal se kehna hai kii kashish ke itne din uske saath rehne ke bawajood bhii kya fayada jab woh kashish ko ek prathishat bhii nahii samaj paya hai tho... now he thinks kii itne din se woh kahiin na kahiin dil mein soch raha tha kii his earlier soch about her was wrong... well sujal tum tab sahii the aur ab ghalat ho.... sujal further thinks kii kashish bas uske paiso se pyaar karthi hai... well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii agar kashish ko sirf paiso se hii pyaar hotha tho woh sujal se aur paise maang sakthi thi at the time of their contract marriage... lekin nahii kashish asked him only the money joh uske dad ke treatment ke liye zaroorat thi.. aur sujal yeh baat jaantha hai... can't he atleast once for heaven's sake use his brain and analyse the situation...ab dekho tab dimaak mein fithur bharke rakhtha hai aur na jaane kya kya sochtha rehtha hai.. aur yeh saari baatein sujal ka dil nahii balki uska dimaak keh raha hai... aaj uska dimaak uske dil par haavi ho gaya... aaj uska shak wapas panap utta.. shak is a dangerous slow poison joh ek aadmi ko dheere dheere karke maartha hai.. sujal ke saath bhi kuch aisa hii ho raha hai... ab sujal apne aap se waada kar letha hai kii kashish uske maksad mein kabhi kamiyaab nahii hogi.. and he also promises himself kii is baat kii saza kashish ko milkar hii rahegi... well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai sujal mahashay tum keh rahe hona kii tum kashish ko apni maksad mein kamiyaab nahii hone donge tum jaanthe ho kya kashish ka maksad kya hai kashish ka bas ek hii maksad hai tumhe pyaar karna , tumhe har khushi dena... ab tum khud kashish ke maksad ke raasthe mein rukhawat bankar khade hue ho tum khud apne pairo parr khulhadi maarr rahe ho.. aur tum kashish ko saza tho zaroor doge lekin usko takleef pohanchcha ne kii zidd mein tu kyun khud ko bhi jahanoom mein dhakhel rahe ho... aur kashish ko kiss baat kii sazaa milegi bechari ne tho kuch kiya hii nahii... woh tho bas tumhe apna samaj kar madat maang rahi hai aur tum ho kii...... sujal kii aankhon mein thode se aasoo bhi aajaathe hai... well me feeling bad for sujal too.. woh bas uske dilo-dimaak ka khel hai jis mein aaj phir se sujal ka dimaak jeet gaya aur uska dil haar gaya... yeh aasoo sujal ke dil se behrahe hai...
ab kashish sujal se poochthi hai kii kya he can give her the money.. sujal kehtha hai kii haan woh de saktha hai... kashish is baat se sujal pe greatfull ho hii rahii hothi hai jab sujal usse kehtha hai kii agar main kahoon kii main woh paise tumko nahii doonga tho..... ab kashish ke bijliyaan ghirthi hai... she again pleads sujal... kashish ke pairo tale tho jaise zameen hii khisak jaathi hai... sujal kii baat sunkar...ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii woh usse paise na de tho...ab kashish continues to plead him kii she is in need of money urgently.... tho sujal usse kehtha hai kii unke saude mein 40 lakhs kii hii baat hui thi... ab how can she ask for more money.. well sujal is telling all this because he thinks she is after his money... well is baat pe mujhko sujal se poochna hai kii sujal agar kashish bas wanted your money tho ab woh bas 10 lakh kii maang kyun karthi when she knows kii tumhare pass aur bhi bohat saare paise pade hue hai... socho sujal socho.. sujal also says kii if he gives her the money then uske liye woh ghaate ka sauda hoga... uff.. kya sujal har cheez fayada aur nuksaan mein tholtha hai.. sujal aisa kab se hogaya... pehle tho kabhi aisa nahii tha woh... woh rishtho ko paiso ke tarazoo mein thol raha hai... sujal itna zyada pattar dil kyun ho gaya... bas ek shak ke wajah se....GOD..... ab kashish ko jhatka lagtha hai kii sujal used the word sauda... she never expected aisa thing from sujal jab kii their rishtha was going towards sawarna... lekin ne tho usse aisa jhatka diya hai kii zor sa jhatka dheere se direct dil pe lage.... ab kashish usse kehthi hai kii to believe her she will return the money soon.... ab usse yeh paise de de... ab sujal is like tum par bharosa karoon..agar tum fraud nikli tho... aur sujal directly usse taana maartha hai kii woh paise kashish kabhi louta hii nahii sakthi... uff.. sujal ko apne paiso par itna zyada ghamand kyun hai.. agar kashish kii koi majboori nahii hothi tho woh sujal ko thokar maarke chali jaathi , kashish jaise self-respect ko mayine dene waali ladki.. yeh tho bas us bechari kii majboori hai kii woh tumhare saamne haath phila rahi hai.. ab sujal ke is bartaav ko dekhkar kashish rone lagthi hai aur woh sujal se kehthi hai kii please woh usse paise de de.. kashish sujal se minnathein karthi hai.. i can say woh sujal se paiso kii bheek maang rahi hai, woh usse kehthi hai kii woh uske haath jodthi hai , uske pair padthi hai.. par please woh usse yeh paise de... sujal ko yeh sab bhii dekhkar bechari kashish par thoda bhii reham nahii aatha.. kiss mitti ka bana hai sujal...kashish kii aisi haalat dekhkar bhi uske samaj mein yeh baat nahii aathi kii woh joh keh rahii hai sach hai..... ab kashish usse kehthi hai kii tum jao kahoge main wo karungi..bass tum muje ye paise de do... yeh tho bas kashish kii bebasi hai... joh ussr yeh karne par majboor kar rahii hai... ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii o kahunga karogi!to thik hai main tumhe ye paise dunga....paar..meri ye shart hai..uff.. sujal is behaving so mean.. i don't like it at all... shart my foot.... ghussa aa raha hai mujhe sujal pe... ab kashish usko thanks kehthi hai aur shart ke baare mein poochthi hai... sujal just replies kii woh joh kahe usse karna padega..kashish maan jaathi hai... bechari is in such a distress... sujal is like paar mukarne se nahi hoga...jo kahunga woh karna hi hoga.... well sujal kya tum kashish ko dhokebaaz samajthe ho kii woh apne kiye hue waade thod de.. kaisa pyaar hai tumhara tum apne pyaar ko nahii samaj paa rahe ho.. tho tumhe laga woh sahi joh tumhe ghalat laga woh baat ghalat... yeh kya baat hui sujal.. zindagi ko hamesha sirf sahi aur ghalat mein nahii dekhna chahiye.. uske alawa bhii aur bohat kuch hotha hai zindagi jeene ke liye.. jaise majbooriyaan.. dooriyaan.. par yeh sujal samajtha hii nahii.. sujal ke chehre pe ek wicked smile hai...yuck... how can sujal behave like this with kashish.. bohat bura kar rahe ho sujal... ab kashish says again kii joh woh kahega woh karegi.. sujal says kii sahii waqt par usse bata dega kii usse kya karna hai... ab kashish asks about the money tho sujal says kii paise uske manager us thak pohanchcha dega.. kashish usse thanks kehthi hai.. par sujal wahaan se chala jaatha hai.. with a kind off wicked smile on his chehra... sujal is behaving so damn badly with kashish... aur kashish bechari dukhyaari... sujal pe mujhe bada ghussa aa raha hai... jee kar raha hai kii sujal ko kheench ke ek thappad maroon.. and my sympathy is with kashish i pity her...
ab sujal kashish ko wahii hospital mein chodkar chala jaatha hai... aur bechari kashish ko tho ek baar bhi palat kar nahii dekhtha.. yeh sujal ka dil itna zyada khator kyun ban gaya.. kabhi tho sujal ek candle , moum kii tarah hotha hai joh pal mein pighal jaatha hai.. lekin kabhi he becomes such a changed person.... aise lag raha hai kii ek insaan ke itne saare roop.. he is really multi-facet... ab kashish kii mom kashish ke pass aathi hai and she enquires about sujal... kashish khud bhi sujal ke changed behaviour kii wajah nahii samaj paa rahii hothi hai... par kashish does not want kii uske ghar waale sujal ko ghalat samjhe tho woh keh dethi hai kii sujal ko koi zaroori kaam tha issi liye usse jaana pada... ab kashish kii mom kuch nahii kehthi... kuch dhair aur kashish wahaan rukhthi hai aur phir ghar chali jaathi hai... ghar jaake kashish ko ram singh se patah chaltha hai kii sujal ab thak ghar nahii louta.. ram singh kashish se kehtha hai kii subah sujal uske saath gaya tha.. aur ab thak nahii aaya... ab kashish ko pareshaani gheir lethi hai... us bechari kii zindagi mein kya pareshaani pehle se kum thi kii sujal usse aise penalize kar raha hai.. kashish is totally pareshaan kii sujal akhir gaya kahaan.. she calls his cell par sujal ka cell tho unreachable aa raha hotha hai.. this increase kashish's worry aur zyada... kashish intezaar kar rahii hothi hai aur dekhthe hii dekhthe raat ka samay ho jaatha hai.. khana table pe hotha hai aur kashish has also not eaten anything... aur woh bechari kha bhi lethi tho kaise khana thodi na uske halak se utrega... sujal kii chinta usse khaye jaa rahii hai usse khane bhi nahii dega... kashish bechari ko darr lag raha hotha hai.. woh sofe pe simatkar baiti hothi hai.. aur bas sujal ka intezaar kar rahii hothi hai... ab raat ke do baj jaathe hai aur door-bell bajthi hai... kashish bell kii awaaz sunkar she runs to open the door.. tab uske aage sujal khada hua hotha hai... sujal is tried aur ab bhi uske chehre par woh coldness towards kashish prevails... aur sujal ke aankhon se ghussa saaf chalak raha hai.. ek baat meri samaj mein nahii aathi kii sujal ghusse kisse hai.. apne aap se because he loved kashish or rather he loves her yaa kashish par who is so true to him.. sujal kii ghussa hone kii wajah bas uski woh stupid si ghalatfaimi hai.. kashish can even smell sharab from his breath.. well this was the most expected thing joh sujal se expect kiya jaa saktha tha.. agar problems se durr bhaag na hotha hai tho woh sharaab peetha hai.. isse tho achcha yeh hotha kii he better talks it out with kashish aur problem solve ho jaathi.. lekin yeh sujal ko tho apne shak , shraab , planning se fursat hii kahaan milthi hai kii woh kashish se baatein clear kar le..... ab kashish bohat hii softly usse poochthi hai kii woh ab thak kahaan tha..sujal tells her very curtly kii muje kya harr baat tumhe batani hogi.... ab kashish is confused at sujal ka behaviour.... ab kashish still maintains her calm talks like a understanding wife she tells sujal that kii she knows kii sujal uske dad kii kahii hui baaton ke wajah se pareshaan hai.. she tells him kii usse fikar karne kii koi zaroorat nahii her dad will understand all the situation dheere dheere... kashish tho uske dad ke kahii hui baat ke liye sachche dil se maafi bhi maangthi hai... ab sujal kashish se kehtha hai kii his life is barbaad only because of them.. he refers to kashish as a sar dard.. and he wants to say like ek ke baad ek sar dard aa raha hai uski zindagi mein... well sujal is baat par mujhe tumse kehna hai kii ab kashish ke tumhare zindagi mein aane ke baad hii tumhari zindagi aabaad hui hai... aur ab tum khud apne haatho se apni khud kii zindagi barbaad kar rahe ho.. tumhari zindagi barbaad hone mein kashish ka koi bhi haath nahii... yeh tho sujal khud hai joh apni aur kashish kii zindagi barbaad karne mein tula hua hai..and he calls kashish a sar dard.. well sujal khud apne liye aur kashish ke liye sar dard banthe jaa raha hai... kashish bechari ko sujal kii baatein buri lagthi hai... par phir bhi kashish kuch react nahii karthi aur sujal se kehthi hai kii kya woh khana laga de.. ab sujal kashish ko taana maarthi hue kehtha hai kii woh khake aaya hai.. and he taunts her even more saying that instead of eating the beswadi khana of her hand he can aswell go hungry... uff.. mera tho jee kar raha hai kii main sujal ke mooh par plaster laga doon.. uske mooh ko stitch kar doon.. ulte-seedhe baatein kar raha hai... kashish ke aankhon mein aasoo aa jaathe hai... ab phir bhi kyunke kashish cares she asks him khake aaye ho.. khaan se.. this is may be because kashish knows kii sujal kuch khake nahii aaya and he is lying to her.. ab sujal is damn rude to her and he says kii uff….kitni baar batana padega tumhe ki I am not answerable two you... sujal ke is baat par mujhe usse kehna hai kii agar he is not answerable to kashish then who the hell is he answerable to.. he is surely answerable to only kashish kyunke usse zyada apna sujal ke liye aur koi bhi nahii hai... ab kashish still is calm and says kii itna hi to puch rahi hoon ki kahan se khana khake aaye ho,kahan the tum itni der,naraz kyun ho rahe ho.... right yahii sawaal mera bhi hai... sujal ne apne dimaak mein ghalatfaimiyaan paal rakhi hai aur ghussa kashish pe nikaal raha hai..... ab kashish says kii kya mera itna bhi puchne ka haak nahi... kashish tumhara tho poora hakh hai.. lekin yeh sujal ke dimaak ko yeh baat samaj nahii aa rahii.. ab sujal is frustrated and he is like nahii bilkul..tum kaun hothi ho mujhse sawaal poochne waali.. he tells her kii woh ek kharida hua samaan hai.. and woh padi rahein baaki khride hue saamano kii tarah..baat baat par hakh na jamaye kare... uff sujal ko tho do chaar thappad maroongi main tho... he is behaving itna zyada disgustingly... sujasl pe mujhe bohat zyada , hadh se zyada ghussa aa raha hai... and kashish ke aankhon mein tabse joh aasoo usne rokh rakhe the chalak hii padthe hai... ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii aur rahi baat mere kahin jaane ki,to ek baar keh de raha hoon,dubara matt puchna,main tina ke saath tha.... uff yeh sujal tina ka naam le raha hai just to hurt kashish.. jabki sachchi baat tho yeh hai kii woh kissi tina-vina ke saath nahii tha... woh tho apni tanhayi mein khokar , sharaab pee raha tha..uff.. yeh sujal na khud ko bhi taiz pohanchcha raha hai aur kashish ko bhi takleef pohanchcha raha hai.... ab kashish is like kaun tina.. she is confused..tab sujal kehtha hai tina meri nayi girlfriend.... kashish ke tho maano jaise hosh hii udd jaathe hai.. she is dumb-struck.. uske pairo tale zameen khisak jaathi hai... woh kuch keh nahii paathi.. bechari is shocked to the maximum extent.. ab kashish ke aankhon se aasooyo ka sailaab shuru ho jaatha hai.. ans sujal does not care woh bas kashish ko hatatha hai...woh kashish ko us haalat mein chodkar chala jaatha hai apne kamre mein..... sujal's attitude disgust me..it irritates me.... aur bechari kashish.... tina... us sujal kii tho matti maari gayi hai... me getting too angry on him.... GOD..how can he do this... he is totally impossible....
ab next part ka haal kuch aisa hai kii sujal kashish ko wahaan chod kar wahaan se chala jaatha hai... well i think sujal wahaan se chala jaatha hai kyunke he could not see aasoo in kashish's eyes... it was hurting his heart to see kashish like that in front of him... par sujal ka dimaak joh uske dil pe haavi tha his dimaak did not want to pighal in front of kashish aur narmi se pesh aaye... woh apne aap ko pathar bana ke rakh raha hai... that's why he leaves the place and goes away...ab kuch dhair baad kashish apne kamre mein aathi hai... tho dekhthi hai kii sujal already bed par so chuka hai... i think sujal soya nahii balki sone ka naatak kar raha hai... sujal kii kahii hui baatein kashish ke kaano mein goonj rahii hothi hai.. aur woh baatein kashish ko aur bhi zyada tadpa rahii hothi hai... kashish ke aankhon mein sujal ko dekh dekhkar aasoo aa rahe hothe hai... ab kashish settles herself in her original place of sleeping yaani ke zameen par.. par kashish ke aankhon mein tho neend naam kii ek percent cheez bhi nahii hothi... woh raat bhar aasoo baha rahii hothi hai.. sujal kii berukhi usse bardhast nahii ho rahii hothi hai... kashish apne aapse poochthi hai ki sujal aisi kya galti ho gai mujse ki tumhe karna pada......aisi kya kaami reh gai muj mein .... well kashish se mujhko is baare mein kehna hai kii kashish tumse tho koi ghalthi nahii hui hai.. aur na hii tumne koi kammi hai... kammi tho sujal ke brain mein aagayi hai kii woh tumko samaj nahii paa raha hai.. aur tum dono ke beech kii dooriyaan bada raha hai... kashish ki saari raat asooyon ke sahare aur neend ke bina guzar jaati hai... aur me sure sujal bhi aankhein band karke kashish kii rothi hui siskiyo se waakif hai.. usse laga bhii hoga kii utkar kashish ke pass jaye aur usse console kare... par yeh sujal ke dimaak ka fithur usse aisa karne se rokhtha hai.. ab subah ho jaathi hai.. kashish is awake.. waise bhi woh poori raat so hii kahaa paayi thi... ab kashish gets to the daily chores joh woh roz karthi hai par uska mann tho in kaamo par bhi nahii lagtha...usse tho sujal kii bewafayi reh rehkar yaad aa rahi hai... kashish kii woh subah mein roz kii baat nahii hothi... us bechari kii zindagi mein khalipan aur maayusi ke badal ghehre hue hothe hai.. ab kuch time baad kashish apne kamre mein aathi hai tho dekhthi hai kii sujal is getting ready woh sujal ke pass jaakar uska wallet aur baaki cheezein de rahi hothi hai... sujal tho kashish se koi baat nahii kartha he is kind off ignoring kashish kii presense... ab kashish sujal se poochthi hai kii kya woh bohat khoobsurat hai..kashish ke aankhon mein aasoo bhi aajaathe hai.. kashish kii voices chokes usko yeh kehthe kehthe bohat dard ho raha hai.... ab sujal is confused like kya....kaun.. ab kashish says kii tina..bohot khubsurat hai... ab sujal is like bohat bohat zyada... well aur yeh baat sujal aise hii kehtha hai kyunke woh kashish ke dil ko chot pohanchcha na chahtha hai... and according to him kashish ko chot pohanchcha ne ka isse behtar koi tarika nahii ho saktha... are yaar koi is sujal ke bheje mein thodi tho akal daal do... woh aise kyun kar raha hai. he is behaving like kashish does not even exists for him balki sahii baat kehne ko yeh hoga kii agar sujal ke liye kashish exists nahii karthi tho uske liye uski zindagi exists nahii karthi..... ab kashish asks mujhse zyada khoobsurat hai.. kashish ke aankhein pehle se hii laal hai due to tears....... ab sujal kehtha hai kii haan woh khoobsurat ke saath saath hot & sexy bhi hai....tumhari tarah behenji nahi.. well is baat par mujhe sujal ke behaviour pe kehna hai kii he was talking about keeping kashish in mind.. he was telling kashish indirectly kii woh kitni khoobsurat hai , hot hai , sexy hai.. and sujal ka adding the sentence tumhari tarah nahii behenjii.. well sujal tho bas says this only to hurt her.. aur Mr. sujal tumhara dil bhi issi behenjii ladki pee aaya hai samjhe tum... sujal kii yeh baatein kashish ke dil mein theer bankar chubthe hai.. aankhon mein aasoo hothe hai... sujal kii baatein is directly attacking on kashish ka dil... bechari.. ab kashish thoda rukh rukhkar poochthi hai kii woh bohat achchi hai.. ab sujal very casually says achchi she is prefect... well is baat par mujhe lagtha hai kii sujal ke dil mein zaroor yeh bat hogi kii haan kashish tum perfect ho... lekin tum mere saath dhoka kar rahi ho....kaash tum mujhse yeh dhoka na karthi... sujal is telling all only keeping kashish in his zehan... kashish ke dil ko sujal kii baaton se bohat chot pohanch rahi hai.. even sujal cannot think of kashish ko kitna zyada dard ho raha hai... why is sujal doing this.. mujhko rona aa raha hai.. woh bhi jee kar raha hai main phoot phoot kar roun..... sujal kashish ke saath aisa kyun kar raha hai... kashish ko though dard ho raha hai she continues asking questions she asks kii bohat pasand hai tumhe.. ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii pasand.. she is every man's desire... uff.. koi sujal se kaho kii woh uska naatak band kare.. mere tho bardhast ke bahar ho raha hai yeh sujal kii nautanki... ab kashish ka dil bhi rone lagtha hai... and woh sujal se poochthi hai chahthe ho usse.. kashish yeh baat karthe hue hazaar se bhi zyada maut marri hai... she must surely be feeling like usse kissi ne koi poori kii poori kheel lagi hui suli par chada diya... ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii kaun usse nahii chahega... woh mil jaye tho zindagi mein aur kya chahiye.... well sujal kii yeh baat sunkar ab me 200% sure kii sujal yeh saari baatein kashish ko hii zehen mein rakhkar keh raha hai... par phir bhi uska shak uske dimaak se nahii nikal raha hai.. he is telling all his feelings about kashish just by using the name tina... aur ab sujal wahaan se office ke liye chala jaatha hai... aur kashish wahiin hothi hai bebas , aankhon mein aaso aur dil mein toote hue umeedo ke saath.. well sujal kashish ko kiss haal mein chod gaya hai jaanthi ho neelu i'll tell you jaise kissi mariz ke dono haath aur dono pairo ko kaath diya gaya ho... aur us mariz ko sadne ke liye chod diya jaatha hai.. kashish kii haalat bhi mujhko kuch aise hii lag rahi hai... on these three parts neelu me getting fulltoo rona on kashish kii haalat... and too much of ghussa on sujal.... sachchi yaar bechari kashish... aur very bad sujal.. though sujal is hurting himself but he by all his own self is making his life let go... he is making his life and kashish's life a jeetha-jhaagtha hua narak.... GOD...i don't like it even an inch... sujal ne tho mera dil hii thod diya... and me feeling badddddddddd for kashish..... 🐷 ab neelu coming to my guess on the next part...next part mein i think sujal , kashish ke beech kii doorieyaan aur bhi zyada bhadengi.... sujal will leave not even a single chance to hurt kashish... lekin ek baat tho zaroor hogi kii sujal jitna kashish ke dil ko thodega utna hii kashish ke aasooyo ko dekhkar sujal ka dil bhi choor-choor ho jayega... i think agle kuch parts mein sujal , kashish ke beech kii durriyaan aur bad jayengi.. kashish ke aasoo aur bhi zyada honge... aur sujal bhii tadpega... sujal will surely make every moment of kashish's life hell... shayad sujal ko kabhi thoda thoda ehsaas bhi ho kii shayad kashish is sahii and sachchi... par sujal will not let that thought take over his mind.... i think ab se kuch samay ke liye we all will get to see the old rude sujal joh hamesha sharaab mein duba hua hotha tha ab woh apne ghum ko chupaane ke liye aur peeyega... and i think kissi ek character kii nayi entry hogi joh is baat mein madatkaar sabit hoga to get sujal , kashish close.... aur unki ghalatfaimi durr karne mein... ab neelu bolo kii kya mera guess sahiii hai ya phir ghalat.... do tell me... 😉 ab neelu yaar please do continue soon..will be waiting for the next part eagerly.... hope you liked the comment.... do post the next part soon...😛 😃