PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 112

woooooooooooooooooooooooooow neeluuuuu too cool, amazing,zhakas, mind blowing, infact mind blasting yaar 👏. kya kahoon hosh hi udadiye tumne mere ⭐️⭐️⭐️ . atlast my wish came true, akhirkar kashish ne woh dress pehen hi li😍😍😍. and sujal uska to muh khula hi rehe gaya 😲😲. he must be thinking for a sec. ki wo kahin galat ghar mai yo nahin agaya because he never expected sudden change in kashish after the morning discussion. it was superb neelu 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼. ab sujal ko yakeenho gaya hoga that kashish can be what he keeps on saying[ hot,sexy,beautiful] 😳 and the best part was when he feels a sudden urge to kiss her ❤️❤️❤️.i am damn sure sirf kiss karne ka nahi kuch aur karne ka bhi irada hoga. but HEY BHAGWAN HE HAS GONE NUTS 😡😡😡 .how can he say that again ki she looks behengi, she doesn't have intelligence. he is so stupid. itne ache mood ko, waqt ko kharab kar diya.you know what neelu pehele lagta tha that kashish does't have brain ab lagta hai that sujal doesn't have one. kuch karo yaar neelu. bechari kashish kitna sahegi. lekin the last part was best when kashish gets mayus,angry and irritated by sujal's behaviour😭 . ab lag rahahai that she will protest herself from this. she will fight for it. that was the best thing neelu.that part was very romantic because the feelings you created in the part were awesome. keepit up neelu 👍🏼 👍🏼 . ab i think that in next few parts suajal will act in same way with her but i think that kashish will also give him moohtod jawab due to which he will cool down a bit. and also neelu aj jo kashish ne kia use to ye lagta hai that she wants sujal to near her and she wants to go closer to him toh i think ki she will try to seduce him more by being what he always say to her 😳😳😳 .she will try to attract him more by maybe ignoring him and his saying due to which sujal will get more closer to her. neelu it was fantastic part aur i know that the next parts will also be romantic too 😳 . good job 👏 👏 👏 . and yeah!continue soon yaar plz...... can't wait any longer. ok. bye take care.😊😛 😊

hailaaa kya part tha...2222222222 gooood...god ye sujal bhi naaa...na kash ko dukhi dekh sakta hai na khush...the way he was shouting at traffic police awwwwwwww i was touched....the dialogues were just toooo gud yaaar...and then in evening the comparisons 😡... he cant even remember his so called gf's name afta seeing kash 😳 😳 😳....superbbb!!! 👏
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excellent part yaar 👏 .comparisons r nice, that to moving close to her 😊 .yeh syjal bhi na 😡 ruladiya na kashish ko 😭 . cont soon 😊 😊 😊

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K ki ankhon se asoo lagataar bahe jaa rahe hain,chahe wo kitna bhi koshish kare unko rokne ki!abb usse aur sujal ki kadvi baatein aur baartaav sehen nahi ho raha!

k-[ankhein asooyon se bhari hui]itni hi buri lagti hoon to.chod kyun nahi dete ,muje!

s-kya karun,tumse shaadi karke ye galti jo karli naa,abb tumhare saath hi saar phodna hoga![bangin his hand on his head]

k-haan to isile hi to keh rahi hoon ki chod do muje,jst leav me,divorce ,seperation anything!chale jao apne tina,tisha jo bhi naam hai uske pass,main rokungi nahi!

s-kashish,shayad tum ye bhul rahi ho ki,maangne wale uchii awaaz mein baat nahi karte!

k-aur shayad tum ye bhul rahe ho ki main sirf tumse maang nahi rahi hoon,tumhe de bhi rahi hoon,kisi se kuch lie bina use tum kuch do,tum mein itna dum kahan!

s-kashish!apni zaban ko lagam do warnaa…….

k-warna kya?kya kar loge tum?kya karr sakte ho tum?kuch nahi!

s-don't try me!agar maine tumhare saath ye contract tod dia,aur tumhare papa ko sachchai bata di to….

K ki ankhon mein asoo aa jaate hain,s usse aise unkindness se bhi pesh a sakta hai,usne socha nahi tha


k-to?to kya?papa ko batana chahte ho naa,bata do!

Holds s ka arm & drags him twrds the telephone,& dials the no. 2 call her dad

S is shocked by k ka rxn,he never expected k kuch aisa karegi

K gives the receiver 2 s,k ki ankhon se lagataar asoo beh rahe hain,voice is choking

k-ye lo!bata do,jo batanaa chahte ho!agar unhe sehna hoga to thik hai,agar nahi,to….nahi!

s is looking at k with shocked expression

usse yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki ye wohi uski bholi bhali si kashsih aaj aise react karr rahi hai

s ph ka receiver down karke rakh deta hai

k-kya hua?rakh kyun dia?karo ph?batao sabbko!karo naa!

s-kashish..bass..

k ki ankhon mein jitna determination hai,s ki ankhen sharam se utni hi jhuki hain

k-haan wohi to main keh rahi hoon tumse sujal!ki bass!bass karo,mere sabr ka aur imtehaan lena,kahin aisa naa ho ki mere sabr ka bandh kisi din tutt jae!

s-kashish,behas matt karo mere saath,tum iss ghar mein meri wajah se ho..

k-achcha?kya kar loge tum,ghar se nikaal doge muje?haan?nikal do!

S is chup,k ki baatein sunke usske pass uske pass kuch kehne ke lie bachaa hi nahi hai

k-lekin nahi!tum muje iss ghar se nahi nikaloge.pata hai kyun,kyunki bohot kimti hoon naa main tumhare lie,main dadi ko dhoka dene ka zariya hoon naa!tum mujse keh rahe the naa,ki main tumse maang rahi hoon,to sujal main tumhe bata doon jinke ghar sheeshe ke hote hain naa unhe dusro ke ghar pe paththar nahi marne chahie,main tumse kuch maang rahi hoon,uski wajah majboori hai,paar tum to mujse kai zyaada gire hue ho,kyunki tumhare mujse maangne ki wajah kisi apne ko dhoka dena hai!

S is looking at s with sterness on face,& shock ki kashish jaise react karr rahi hai,waisa roop kashsih ka naa pehle s ne kabhi dekha tha,naa wo uski socchke daere mein tha

Aur ye kehkaar k mudke chali jaati hai!

OMG...fantabulous...i just loveeed it...the outburst of kash was so natural and spontaneous and i love the way u described it...hats off 2 u 👏 ...sujal ne to socha bhi nahi hoga ki dari sahmi kashish itne strong niklegi...wat kash said was cent percent truth...omg i loveee it...cont sooooonnn

⭐️perfect 100% neelu 👏. kya likha hai 😊. uffff! ye kashish ka to jawab hi nahi.what jabardast arguement with sujal sach maza a gaya ⭐️⭐️⭐️ . it was awesome neelu. ab sujal ko samaj aaye ga ki kashish ko dard dene ka kya anzam hota hai. first he kept on hurting her feelings very badly 😭 because he thought that she will not be able to say anything as she is majbur because of her father but what can i say kashish is way too smart she just knows what to do in every situation 😉. u know what neelu sujal deserves this. use na aisa hi chahiye. ab akal aai sujal. aisa aainda se kabhi mat karna.neelu yaar bahot hi khub part tha 👍🏼. especially the way kashish argues with sujal and fights with him with all the courage and daring was the best part 😊😊.⭐️⭐️ .jab insan ka sabr tutta hai to aisa hi hota hai. she is not a god yaar. kitna sehen karti bechari.she is a woman and she also have her dreams which only sujal can fulfill as she loves him and he is her husband. it's high time now. sujal should understand this and if he doesn't she should leave him for some period all alone so that he could understand her value and understand what she has gone through 😡.lovely neelu 😊.ab neelu i think ki woh dono aik doosre se khafa jaroor rahenge lekin maybe sujal will start realising his mistakes. use lagne lage ka ki shayad jo woh kar raha hai galat kar raha hai. but i really don't know ki aisa hi kuch hoga kya because i don't know what you will put, as everything u write is just shocking😲😲and amazing too 😍😍😍 . you keep on giving surprise in every part 😳, pehele sujal kashish ka closeness 😳😳😳. then suddenly his mother coming in the part 🤓. then they be together 😛 .phir sujal ke dimag me who badle ki baat 😡😡😡 and now kashish being so strong and courageous ⭐️. neelu ab i am really excited for the next part because i want to see what sujal does to kashish after all this arguement.how will he again react with her.neelu yaar ab the next parts though they will be silent but will also be very romantic. they will show an indication of sujal kashish getting together and coming closer to each other 👏.thax for such a ovely part. 😊😊.ok neelu continue soon yarr plz.......... can't wait any longer. ok. bye. take care. 😊 😛 😊

wow excelent part 👏 .sujal dint expect kash can react like this 😃 waiting 4 next part 😊 😊

neelu yaar dekho tune itna achcha part post kiya hai.. aur main aagayi apni vishesh tipenni lekar tumhari story pe... hope tumko yeh mera comment achcha lage... 😃 ab part yahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan kashish ke aankhon se lagataar aasoo beh rahe hothe hai.... usse sujal ka yeh bartaav bardhast nahii ho raha hotha hai..woh sujal kii yeh berukhi samaj hii nahii paa rahi hothi hai.. kashish badi bebas hai aur uski bebasi is coming out in the form of tears... bechari ko aur koi raastha soojha hii nahii apni feelings ko zahir karne ke liye.. tho bechari roye jaa rahii hai.. agar hum aisa sochthe tho hum ghalat sochthe agar kashish ko ek tarah apne ghumo par ro sakthi hai.. tho kashish ne aaj yeh bhi dikha diya kii woh lad bhi sakthi hai... woh un mein se nahii hai joh mushkhil ke waqt hathyaar daal ke bait jaye... aaj tho kashish ne saabit kar diya kii usmein ladne kii bhi taakat hai... she has the power to retaliate.. she is not the type of the girl joh apne upar hothe hue har nainsaafi ko bardhast karke chup-chaap baiti rahe.. she is indeed very brave... she has proved kii woh ek weakling nahi...and me so happy kii aaj atlast kashish ke mooh mein apne khilaaf hothe hue nainsaffiyo ke khilaaf zubaan tho aayi.. ab kashish kuch is tarah ladi... first uske aankhon mein aasoo hai... she just holds back the tears in her eyes and then says kii agar itni boori lagthi hoon tho chod kyun nahii dethe mujhe... are wah.. kashish mein itni himmat aagayi kii she had the guts to talk to sujal.. me very happy kyunke unlike sujal who is trying to run away from the problem wahii kashish is ready to face it... kashish is doing exactly what i told sujal to do that is talk it out clear all the things between them......veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllll kashish.......main kashish kii himmat kii dhaat dethi hoon shabash kashish.... very good... ab sujal is like kya karoon tumse shaddi karke yeh ghalti tho karli hai ab tumhara saath hii sar phod na padega..saying this he hits his head with his hand..well sujal mujhe is baat pe tumse yeh kehna hai kii tumhare yeh joh nautanki hai na woh mereko digest karna bohat zyada mushkhil hue jaa raha hai.. sujal agar tumhe lagtha hai kii kashish se shaddi karke tum ne ghalthi kar dii tho anyway your shaddi is only a contract marriage you can nullify it at any momemt..sujal isse behtar tho yeh hotha kii tum joh dil mein hai woh baat kehthe naa ki aise joote baatein banana.. ab kashish ko tho sujal pe aur bhi zyada ghussa aa jaatha hai aur woh sujal se ussi tarah jawaab dethi hai jaise kii woh uske saath behave kar raha hai and she tells him kii woh wohii keh rahii hai..kii woh uske divorce lele aur apne us tina , tisha ke pass chale jaye.. she tells him kii woh usko nahii rokhegi.. well is baat pe mujhko kehna hai kii i think kashish sujal ke dil ko tatol ne kii koshish kar rahi hai.. she wants to see kya ab sachchi sujal will tell her kii yes you are right humein alag ho jaana chahiye... ya phir woh kuch aur kehne yeh baat ko taal dega... kashish bas wants to know kii sujal ke dil mein woh kaunsi baat chal rahi hai... ab sujal because the fact remains kii woh kashish ko koi chodna vodna nahii chahtha diverts the topic and says kii tum yeh bhool rahi ho kii maangne wale unchi awaaz mein nahii baat karthe..well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai kiii sujal har kissi ke voice kii ek pitch hothi hai aur unki voice maangne wale yaa dene wale ko nahii dekhthi.. samjhe... aur waise sujal ne ek achcha diversion dhoonda hai topic se paare... lekin sujal yeh baat nahii jaantha kii aaj kashish koi bhi mood mein nahii hai to take and give heed to all the nonsense talks of sujal... ab kashish sujal ko ek baat bolthi hai which completely sujal pe ek bomb karke ghirthi hai.. she is like haan woh maang rahii hai lekin badle mein kuch usse kuch de bhi rahii hai.. then kashish sujal ko taunts karne mein utar aathi hai aur woh kehthi hai kii tum kissi se kuch liye bina usse kuch do.. tumne itni dam nahii.. are wah kashish kya baat kahii hai and i agree with you completely tum bhi sujal ke saath ussi narak mein jal rahi ho aur sujal how can he har waqt tumpar ehsaan jatatha rehtha hai... lekin ab sujal ko bhi patah chalna chahiye ki for the money he is giving kashish uske liye kashish bhi apna wadaa nibha rahi hai and she is acting in front of dadii... sujal bhi koi bheek nahii de raha hai kashish ko , koi khairaat nahii baant raha hai woh.. it's high time he knows it.. and me glad kashish told him... achcha ab sujal ko mirchi lagi and he is like kashish apni zubaan ko lagam do.. warna........ sujal jab tum kashish se baat karthe ho tab kya tum apne zabaan ko lagaam dethe ho.. nahii naa tho tum ab kyun yeh expect karthe ho kii kashish apni zubaan ko lagaam se , apni hadh mein rahe.. sujal ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna first look at yourself.. aur haan sujal tum yeh dhamkhana-vamkhana apne pass hii rakho... kii tum kya ho phir doosre pe ungli utana... ab kashish litrally challenges him kii woh kya kar saktha hai kuch bhi nahi.. well kashish ne yeh baat is liye kahii kyunke she knows kii agar woh majboor hai tho sujal bhi majboor hai..she pretty well knows kii sujal kuch nahii kar saktha... ab sujal is like don't try me.. well sujal kya bura lag raha hai kii your wife is challenging you , talking to you in the same manner how you talk commandinly... he says kii he can as well break the contract and tell all the truth to her father...sujal tum aisa kayeku kar rahe ho... jab tum jaanthe ho kii you will not do any of these options itna tum bhaav kyun kha rahe ho.. ab kashish ke aankhon mein aasoo aajaathe hai.. and usko yakeen nahii ho raha hai kii sujal is so unkind to her... well bechari kashish is unable to belive kii yeh wohii sujal hai joh uski khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar saktha hai.. aaj he himself is behaving to be sach a pattar dil with her..obviously yaar kashish ke aankhon mein tho aasoo honge hii na.. ab kashish is like kya bataoge..bata do.. she holds sujal's arm drags him to the phone dials the number to contact her dad.. aur receiver sujal ko de dethi hai aur usse kehthi hai kii joh bhi usse batana hai woh bata de... kashish kii aankhon se lagataar aasoo beh rahe hai... she tells him kii agar uske dad bardhast kar paye tho theek hai.. nahiii tho....sujal kashish kii taraf shocked hokar dekhtha hai.. as he did not expect such a reaction from kashish not even in his dreams he must have thought kii kashish aisa kuch react karegi... sujal is shocked to his wits seeing kashish react like this.... ab kashish bhi is very curt saying kii agar uske papa se sehna hoga tho woh seh lenge..agar nahii tho.. she stops saying..uski awaaz bhi chok ho rahi hai... well kashish kii himmat is too much.. she is ready for the worst to happen.... ab sujal ko yakeen nahii ho raha tha kii uski bholi bhali kashish aisa kuch kar sakthi hai... well yakeen tho mujhe bhi nahii ho raha kii kashish aise bhi react kar sakthi hai.. jhatka tho humein bhi laga tho sujal tho who is facing all the situation he will be like what the hell...he must bhi surely thinking kii uski bholi bhali kashish mein kabse aisa kali-maa ka roop aagaya hai.. waise bhi mere hisaab se tho sachchi jhansi kii rani ka roop le liya hai.... me totally proud of kashish... ab sujal tho does not really intend to tell kashish's father anything nor break the contract... woh tho bas aise hii kehne ke liye badi badi baatein kar raha hai tho he takes the receiver and puts the phone down... ab kashish is like kyun kya hua..kyun rakh di phone.. batao sabko...karo na... are wah kashish you are too awesome.... mujhe tumko shabhashi dekar tumko thapthapane ko jee kar raha hai..... jis tarah kashish is facing kashish it is way too commendable..... absolutely stupendous....... you are presenting a brave front.. great going kashish... shabash.... ab sujal se yeh baat bardhast nahii kar paa raha hotha hai... kii kashish usse aise baat kar rahi hai.. he is like bas.. are wah sujal itni jaldi tumhare kaan pakh gaye kya aur joh kashish tumko itne time se bardhast kar rahii hai uska kuch nahiii.. ab tumhe bhi sunna hii padega.. aur is baar kashish ke aankhon mein ek tarah ka determination tha aur sujal kii nazrein sharam ke wajah se jhuki hui thi.. well kashish way to go..super cooll.... aur sujal tumhari nazro ko jhukana shows kii tum jaanthe ho dil se kii tum joh kar rahe ho woh ghalat hai issi liye tumhari nazrein ab is waqt jhuki hui hai sharam ke wajah se... agar tum apne aap ko agar sahii maanthe hothe tho tum kashish se nazre milakar baat kar rahe hothe.. aise sar ko jhukaye khade na hothe.. ab kashish yells back at him saying kii wahii tho main keh rahii hoon sujal ab bas bhii karo.. mere sabr ka itna imtahaan mat lo... kii kahiin uske sabr ka baan kahiin toot hii na jaye... well this shows kii kashish kitni zyada vexed hogayi hai with the way sujal acting with her...bechari sachchi pakh gayi hai... she is broken at heart sachchi... ab sujal is like kashish behas matt karo tum is ghar mein sirf meri wajah se ho... well sujal ko badii ghalatfaimi hai lagtha hai.. kashish us ghar mein uski wajah se nahii balki sujal ke liye hai kashish us ghar mein... agar kashish us ghar mein sujal kii wajah se hothi tho kashish kabka usse tokar maarkar chali jaathi for the way he is behaving with her.. kashish us ghar mein hai only for one fact kii sujal ko uski zaroorat hai warna kashish tho kabka chodkar chali gayi hothi sujal ko..but kashish us ghar mein hai kyunke woh yeh baat jaanthi hai aur samajthi bhii hai kii sujal ko uski kitni zyada zaroorat hai... aur yahaan tho haal kuch aisa hai kii kashish ka ghussa thanda hone ka naam hii nahii letha tho ab woh sujal se kehthi hai achcha..tho kya kar loge tum..haan..ghar se nikaal doge... tho nikaal do na... are tooo gooodd kashish.... ab tho tumne sujal ko khone ka , usse durr jaana ka bhi koi bhi darr nahii hai... yeh baat shows kii kashish is just way tooo damn tired with the kind off behaviour sujal is doing with her.. she is totally upset.... aur jaise kii kashish ne kaha tha lagtha hai kashish ke sabr ka baan lagbhag toot hii chuka hai... bechari... but me happy looking at the way kashish is facing it...ab aayega sujal ke akal tikhaane... ab sujal is all the way quite.. uske pass kehne ke liye aur kuch bhi nahii hai... boltha bhi kaisa woh jaantha hai kii kashish ke iss type of bhartaav ki wajah sirf ek hii hai aur woh hai sujal khud... ab kashish sujal ko sabse bada jhatka dethi hai.... she tells him kii tum mujhe is ghar se nahi nikaloge..... pata hai kyun kyunki bohot keemthi hoon naa main tumhare lie..... well kashish kya baat kahii hai tumne tum sachchi badii keemthi ho sujal ke liye...... kyunke sujal kii zindagi hai tho bas tumse tho hui tho tum uski zindagi hii na uske saansein chalne kii wajah..... lekin hai ek difference hai woh yeh kii kashish yeh baat keh rahii hai in a alltogether different context.... kashish phir aage kehthi hai main dadi ko dhoka dene ka zariya hoon naa...... haan kashish kii yeh baat bhii sahi hai woh dhoka de rahii hai dadi ko sujal ke saath ek jhoote rishte ka nakaab pehni hui hai.... ab kashish says tum mujse keh rahe the naa ki main tumse maang rahi hoon tho sujal main tumhe bata doon jinke ghar sheeshe ke hote hain naa unhe dusro ke ghar pe paththar nahi marne chahie.... well that's right aur main bhii wahiin keh rahii hoon pehle sujal should have a look at himself.... usse pehle yeh baat zaroor dekh leni chahiye kii woh khud kya kar raha..... ab kashish aage kehthi hai main tumse kuch maang rahi hoon uski wajah majboori hai....paar tum to mujse kai zyaada ghire hue ho kyunki tumhare mujhse maangne ki wajah kisi apne ko dhoka dena hai.. wah..wah..wah.. totally zabardast... kashish kii iss baat par tho talliyaan bajne chahiye.... sahii kaha kashish ne woh sujal ke saamne apna haath phaila rahi hai just kyunke she has no other way to go majboori hai bechari hai.. bebas hai woh.... lekin sujal ko apne matlab ke liye kashish ko use kar raha hai woh bhi dadi ko dhoka dene ke liye.... sujal ko tho yeh baat behad buri lagi hogi me sure of it.. sachchi baat kahoon tho mujhe bhi bilkul bhi achcha nahii lag rahi hai kii sujal ko itni baatein sunni pad rahii hai... lekin i think he desrves it... and me proud of kashish.. woh kehthe hai na kii every coin has two sides this bartaav of kashish proves that... this also shows kissi ki kissi ke patience ko itna zyada bhi nahii test karna chahiye kii log majboor ho jaye and show their other side too..aur jaise kehthe hai jaisi karni waisi bharni...well according to me tho sujal has got back the same what he gave kashish.. and yeh sahii bhi hai kashish kyun hamesha dabh kar rahe apne armaano ka gala gout kar rahe just because sujal waisa hai it does not mean that kashish bhii waise hii ghutte... and me tho fulltoo khush kii kashish is talkng her heart-out to sujal... ab sujal ka haal tho aisa hai he is completely dumb-struck.... chouksa gaya hai woh... his face has a stern expression unable to believe kii kashish ka aisa bhi koi roop ho saktha hai... woh bas issi soch mein hotha hai naa kuch keh paata hai aur na hii kuch kar paatha hai.. well chalo achcha hua... sujal kii bolti baand hogayi...me so damn glad with this fact... atleast yeh baat sujal ke dimaak mein thodi si akal tho dalegi.....he must have surely realized kii khali-peeli bina kashish ke koi bhii ghalthi ke he should never ever give rise to her anger.......aur kashish tho yeh saab kehkar wahaan se chali jaathi hai.. leaving sujal in a daze... kya baat hai yaar.. kashish ne tho is part mein jaise kamaal kii kar diya... she certainly reminds me off jhansi kii rani..mujhe kashish ke liye yeh baat kehni hai khoob ladi mardani woh jhansi kii rani..kashish ka tho is part mein jawaab nahii.....simply amazing,awesome,stupendous,marvelous,par excellence,outstanding... mind blowing... in simple words is part mein kashish and the part were completely rocking... mere tho hosh udd gaye yeh part padke...is part ka tho jawaab nahii it was completely lajawaab.. jis tarah sujal is dumb-struck seeing kashish like this me completely awe-struck....
ab neelu yaar coming to my guess on the next part.. mera next part ke liye guess yeh hoga kii.. ab se sujal poori kii poori koshish karega kashish ko hurt karne ke liye.. par kashish usse har baar mein maath degi.... she will surely behaving the way he is behaving with her.... me sure of this fact.... i also think kii sujal apne harkato se thak jayega kyunke woh jitni bhi koshish kare woh kashish ke dil ko chot nahii pohanchcha payega... agar sujal kashish ko chot pohanchane ke maamle mein kamiyaab bhi ho jaye tab bhi kashish yeh baat kabhi bhi sujal par zahir hone nahii degi kii sujal ne usse hurt kiya... ab sujal , kashish ke beech kii cold war aise hii chaltha rahega... aur issi ke chalthe beech sujal , kashish zaroor kareeb aayenge.. unke takkar se bhi ek doosre ke liye pyaar hii umdega...... neelu yeh hai mera ek guess hai is guess ke hone ke zyada chances hai.... wahiin on the other side mujhko ek aur guess hai.. well this guess of my is just my intution... i think kii ab ussi din sujal will get a doubt about kashish telling kii it is just her majboori.... tab shayad sujal hospital jaye aur us doctor se mile.... ab shayad the doctor tells him kii indeed 10 lakh kii aur zaroorat hai for kashish's father's treatment.. ab sujal khud ko maaf na kar paye... woh ghar aaye aur kashish se maafi maange and he talks to kashish about his feelings... then shayad sujal , kashish ke beech woh lamha aaye jab woh dono ek ho jaye.... this is just a intution... ab i don't know kii mere in do guesses mein se kaunsa sahii hai...waise in both guesses dono zaroor kareb aayenge.... tho ab neelu tu mujhko bolna kii mera kaunsa guess sahi hai... 😉 neelu ab please post the next part soon... me will be waiting for it eagerly.. and sorry yaar kal raat me could not post the comment... you do post the next part soon.... 😃 😃

hey neeelu m so so sso so sorrry 4 commenting late...abh sujal yeh sabh karwi battein sunta hai ussseh bardasht nahin hottna na hi kashish keh as kashish sujal seh bohhot pyar karti hai ...woh jaanti hai keh sujal sahi hai aur uskeh papa galat toh woh sujal koh harh tarah seh support karti hai and sujal runs out woh ek jagah par kharreh ho jata hai and is proud of kashish ussseh upar aur pyar arraha hai and is is really proud keh kashish uski biwi hai jab kashih bahar attti hai sujal keh ankhon mein bohot sarreh asoooon hai and kashish is worried abot it sujall kashish seh kehta hai keh aaaj pehli baar kisine mere liye ladaaa hai kisine mera sath diya ha essa kabi nahin hua kashish purrri tarah sujal ko support karh rahi thi jitna uskkeh papa uske liye maineh rakhte hai isssi tarah sujal ki bi izzzat hai kashish keh dil mein he comments on her voice when she was houting at her father in the hospital rooom kehta hai keh woh bilkul jhassi ki rani ki tarah lag rahi thi and donon hassh parte hai tabhi kashish ki mom ati hai and tells kashish she'll go get the medecine lekin sujal kehta hai keh he will go and he goes by the time kashish was called by the doctor and she gets a big shock from the doctor keh ussseh 40 laks ke ilawa 10 laks aur chaiyeh jo uskeh passh hein hi nahin 40 lakhs bi usne sujal seh contract marraige seh milenge par aur 10 lakhs kahan seh ayenge essse hi ukeh pairon talleh zameen ghizak jaaati hai usseh kuch samaj nahin araha hai... 😕....bahar jaaati aaate walking near he corridor usseh sujal milta hai she is so tensed keh ussseh sujal dikhai hi nahin de raha hai tha she decides to telll sujal about the money aur omg omg omg omg not again y don't u nderstand... sujal keh maan meh jo shakh tha woh phir seh mazbut aur zindah hojata hai usseh lagta hai kashish ko paise apne app ke liyeh chaiye she is a money lover .sujal abh manna kar detta hai as he says contract ke mutabik she will just get 40 lakhs not more than that woh ro rahin hai aur sujal seh beg kar rahin hai keh please gie me some mone mein kuch b karne ko tayar hun and he ageees jab woh yeh kehti hai ke i will do any thing aur he says mauka anneh peh mein apni shart bataunga . Aur sujal is smiling iska mutlab kuch toh gharbar hai this is a reallly bad sign of DANGER iska mutlab sujal is uto something...abh sujal leaves the hospital wahin jaa raha hoga apni best place paarh jahan woh jaaaat hai ghanton dher raaaaat tak sharab piiitah hai and kashishgoes home inquires about sujal lekin sujal toh ghar par hi nahin hai abh kashish bohot bohot pareshan hojatti hai usske dimag mein yahin arhaha hai keh kya sujal ne khana khaya hoga kya woh theeek hai its around 2 jab kashish sofa parh s rahi hotti hai bt wakes up and see's sujal is bak it clearly shows keh usne bohot sharab pii hai kashish usseh sawal puch rahin ha and he reply's all of them rudely kashish abh bohot shocked ho jatti hai sujal keh is bartav seh jeesseh sujal uski baton ka jawab deh raha tha she was feeling bad about that woh usseh kekhta hai keh koi haaakh nahin hai tumeh mueh yeh sabh puchne kah you are just a thing that s bought by me and he lies ke he was with his newly made girlfriend tine she is damn shoked to hell usseh kuch samaj nahin arrahaha hai dekhte h sujal kashish ke saamne seeh jaa karr kamre mein jaata hai sone ke liye ... 😭 abh kashish rooom meh jaati hai toh dekht hi keh lights off hai aur sujal kabka sooh chuka hai woh apne norma jagge par jaati hai aur sonneh ki koshish karti hai lekin neeed lenne ka neeem hi nahin le rahi sirf roooh rahin hai continuously jab subha hotti hai kashish feels keh yeh aaaj normal subha ahin hai yeh din uslkeh liye ek andhera sah le ayah hai . She goes into her rooom passes everything to sujal aur ussseh puchti hai tina keh barreh mein kya woh acchi hai kya woh usseh pasand karta hai wagera wagera and sjal says she's the prefect lady woh uski itni tarreeef karta hai keh kashish ke dil mein uski batein teer k tarah choooob rahin hai pooooor her i feeel so baaad for her aur yeh sujal arrrrhhhhhh...abh sujal challah jatta hai wahan seh office ke liye ur gadi ko bohot tezh chala raha hai by breaking alll the rules aur achanak ek police usseh rok lettah hai he gets mad and says whats the problem he shouts and says usne apni biwi seh jagda kiya hai uske bohot dil dukhaya hai aur ussi ki wajeh seh he is ttensed apna hath gadi ki bonnet par marrh raha hai tyres ko laath marrh raha hai usseh bhot bura lag raha hai kyunke woh janta hai joh une kiya woh bilkul ga;laaat tha lekin galti karne ke baaad pashtaneh ka faida kiye and he leaves without listening to the police . Woh office jatta hai aur wahin haaal hai pareshan dukhi saaah sabh paaar gussah nkal raha hai jab ghar pohnchta hai kush hojata hai jab kshish ko dekh raha hai woh jesse ek pari jo asmaan seh utar kar aii hai sujal appne sarreh dukh dard bhul jaata hai and gues what kashish neh wahin dress pehne hai jo sujal neh ssseh gift kiya tha honemooon par when kashish asks sujal how m i lookig she was expecting something gooood lekin daath teri ki sujal neh toh sabh kuch burah kehdia ....kashish ko aabh bohot bohot bura lag raha hai woh seh nahin pah rahi hai jo sujal neh kaha she gets angry and says toh chordo mujeh challe ao un larkion keh sath kyun ki mujse shadi and sujal kehta hai keh yahin toh meri galti thi kashish ko sujal ki harrh baaat buri lag rahin hai he tellls kashish agar mene tumeh chordia contract ke mutbaik u wn't get amoney woh cup ojatti haiphir bi bohot gussa aur pain seh barri hui hai abh kashish barrdasht nahin karh sakti woh sujal seh keht hai theek hai toh leh meri baaaap ko phone karrro aur usseh batadoh sab kch sujal is in a shoked stage kashish ke yeh reaxion and she even says keh j hoga dekha jayega sujal keeps the receiver down and tells her keh mind your language ussseh kashish ki bholi bhali zindagi barbaad karne peh pashtawa ho raha hai he is really sad usseh kuch samaj nahin araha ai kashish sujal ko insult krti hein aur wahan se chali jatti hai😭 ....geat part neeeeeelz awesome tooooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooood continue sooooooon cant wait more... 👏

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S is looking at s with sterness on face,& shock ki kashish jaise react karr rahi hai,waisa roop kashsih ka naa pehle s ne kabhi dekha tha,naa wo uski socchke daere mein tha

Aur ye kehkaar k mudke chali jaati hai!

Abb k bedroom mein jaakaar

Bed pe let jaati hai,aur takiye pe mooh chupakaar zor zor se ro rahi hai,phut phutke sisak sisak ke

Kuch der baad s enters the room

Jabb wo darwaze ke pass khada hota hai,taab bed pe letkaar roti hui k ko dekhta hai

Usse samaj mein nahi aa raha ki kya wo room ke andaar jae ya room se chala jae

Uss palo ki iss uljhan ke baad he enters the room

Abb room mein to enter karr lia

Paar roti bilakhti k ko dekhkaar ye samaj nahi paa raha ki uske pass jaakaar usse chup karae ya usse akela chod de

Issi asmanjas mein

S confused sa,sits on the bed,on the other corner frm k

S ko ye to pata hai ki k ro rahi hai,paar k ka chehra uske baalon se dhaaka hai,islie s ko k ka chehra nazar nahi aa raha

S wahin baitha hua hai,confused abhi bhi te nahi karr paa raha kya kare

Kuch der baad

Abb k ko bhi ehsaas hota hai ki uske siva kamre mein koi aur hai

Wo nazre uthake,apne baalon ke beech se s ko wahan baitha pati hai

k-jao, chale jao yahan se!

s-huh?

S is confused,he gets up & stps twrds k 2 knw ki usse kya hua

But k is badly angered ,irritated & is in extremely bad mood

K holds a pillow & throws it twrds s,but misses

k-jaaaaaaaaaaaaaooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!chale jao!akela chod do muje!!!!!!!!jao!!!!

s pehle se bi zyaada shocked aur confused ho raha hai k ke baartaav se

islie bina kuch kahe chup chap room se chala jaata hai'

abb k again digs her face on pillow

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kuch ghante beet jaate hain-

abb s again himmat karke,expectin ki k ka mood thoda better hua hoga,aur wo thodi calm hui hogi,sochkaar enters the room

paar wo dekhta hai ki

k to rote rote wahin bed paar so gai hai

she is lyin on her stomach

k ne to apne kapde taak nahi badle,she is still wearin the gown

k ke chehre paar baal bikhre pade hain

abb s looks at gehri neend mein so rahi k

& stps twrds her

he touches & fells her soft smooth arms,by slidin his fingers over it slowly & softly

then,he fells,& touches her bare back,by movin his fingers dheere se arnd whole of her back,very slowly & softly

then he runs his hand arnd her head

aur uske bikhre balon ko k ke chehre se bade pyaar se aur dheeme se haataa tha hai

& gives a small soft peck on her rosy cheek dheere se with ounce of affection