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Posted: 18 years ago
omg...i hope nothing happens to kash's father...poor sujal wil feel so much guilty ...bechari kashish 😭 lol...hopefully her father wont interrogate him much...newayz awsomeeeeeeeeee partttt...cont sooooon!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-

d-ye wohi..hai naa..wohi laadka hai naa..jisne tumhare saath..party mein..wo hi badrameez hai naa!

K looks at s

Aur s guiltily nazrein jhuka leta hai

d-KASHSIH! Tumne isseeeeeeee shaadi ki hai ISSE!

k-papa…wo…

d-kyun kashish?kyun?tumhe ise gai guna achche aur sanskaari ladke milte,tum iske changul mein kyun phassi,zarur issi ne kuch patti padai ho gi tumhe,warna….

k-papa..plz..aap ye kya keh rahe hain…sujal..aise nahi hai,jaisa aap samaj rahe hain………..

d-aisa nahi hai???????to kaisa hai?????????JANTI BHI HO YUM ISKE BAARE MEIN??????

S is standin silently,saab kuch chup chap sun raha hai sar jhuka ke

d-jaanti bhi ho tum iske parivaar ke bare mein?muje to kuch pata nahi tha,paaar ye ladka to iss sheher mein badnaam hai,saab jaante hain iss sheher mein rehne wale log,hum to naye the humein pata nahi tha,bhala ho mere ek saathi proff ka jisne iss ladke ke bare mein muje bataya,ye log mere college ke tristee hain,aise hi muje pata laga kii..kii….chii muje to bolne mein bhi sharam aa rahi hai!

k-papa ..aap sujal ko..galat samaj rahe hain!

d-jaanti ho tum,iski maa ek vaishya hai

s closes his eyes coz of the pain these words r causin him,k looks at s k ke ankhon mein asoo hain,wo s ki haalaat samaj sakti hai

d-jaanti ho tum?tum kaise janogi,iss dhokebaaz ne bataya hi nahi hoga tumhe!jaisi maa ,waisa beta!ye bhi aisa hi hoga,charitrahiin,naa jaane itni ladkiyon ke saath..aab kashish tumhare saath bhi,maine tumhari maa ko bataya nahi,usse kya bataun,wo to sunn hi nahi pati,to ye hai isski asliyat,pata bhi hai tumhe?jaanti ho tum??????????chod do kashish iss ladke ko!

S ke dil mein ye baatein naasoor banke chubh rahi hain,his pain is raisin with every word,he is tightenin his fist 2 control it

Abb k cant tak anymore

k-HAAN JAANTI HOON MAIN!jaanti hoon!pata hai muje!

S is shocked at k ka sudden out burst,& k dad also

k-saab jaanti hoon!sujal ne khud bataya hai muje!khud!papa,kya ye zaruri hai ki maa jaisi ho beta bhi!aap unn logo ki baton mein aa gae,jo sujal ko jaante nahi,unn duniya walo ki baton mein,jinhe sirf logon ke baarein mein baaknaa aata hai,aur kuch nahi!papa,main sujal ko jaanti hoon,itne din saath rahi hoon sujal ke,agar aapko apni beti paar bharosa hai ,vishvaas hai to,meri baat maniye,aap sujal ko samajne ki koshish to kijie!

d-koshish karun samajne ki???kisko koshish karun samajne ki,usko jiski paidaish ki itni ghinauni hai!
K ko abb gussa aa jaata hai,s ke bare mein aise baatein sunkaar

k-BASSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…….BASS PAPA ..BASSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!………ek shabd bhi matt kahiega aur sujal ke khilaaf!plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s is shocked,he had never ever seen k in itna gussa!

s-kashish…………..

k stps s in btw,haath dikhake

k-nahi sujal…muje bolne do……….papa!aap mera pita hain,bade hain,uska lihaaz kaeke aab taak main chup thi,aur aapke damad yaani sujal,bhi aapka lihaaz karke,abhi taak chup hai,paar agar aapko ye laagta hai ki aap mere pati ke bare mein kuch bhi kehte rahenge,aur main chup rahungi,to galat lagta hai aapko!papa,jis tarah aapke lie mamma ki izzat maine rakhti hai,aap she nahi sakte ki mamma ko koi bhi apmaan kare,to mere lie bhi sujal ki izaat ,uska samman bohot maine rakhta hai!

d-kashish!tum isske lie,apne pita se iss tarah……….

k-nahi papa,baat pita ya pati ki nahi hai,baat sahi aur galat ki hai,aur main galat ka saath kabhi nahi dungi,chahe wo galat kisi ka bhi ho,aur iss baar galat aap hain,aur sujal sahi!sujal aap se chotte hain paar iska matlab ye to nahi,ki sahi hone paar bhi sujal ko galat thehraya jae!sujal,aapki itni izzat karr rahe hain,ki apne itna kuch sunaya ,itna kuch kaha,zyaadaataar galat,phir bhi sujal ne ek shabd bhi nahi kaha,paar main apne saamne galat hota hua kaise dekhun??????????????boliye

d is silent

k-aur papa,rahi baat uss party wale haadse ki,to kya do pyaar karne walo mein jhagda nahi ho sakta!papa,taab jo bhi sujal ne kaha dil se nahi kaha,wo gusse mein the…aur..naashe mein bhi…emm..hum dono mein jhagda hua tha..to..sujal …upset the..aur main bhi,islie sujal ne gusse mein…………paar papa saach to ye hai ki,main sujal ke saath bohot khush hoon,bohot khush!

S is looking at k,with hairaani bhaari nazar

k-papa,honeymoon paar,rohit laut aaya tha..sujal ne hi muje usse bachaya,usse sazaa dilvai,sujal…mere saath nahi hote..to pata nahi………….aur papa,apke illaj mein madaat bhi sujal hi karr rahe hain……….papa sujal waise nahi hain!plz papa mere sujal ko ek mauka dije,wo aapka dil bhi jeet lenge!hai naa,sujal!

s-emm..emm..ah..haaan!

d-hmm[thinking]

s-emm..emm..err..excuse me…a..a..emm..main abhi aata hoon..!

s goes out of the room,almost runs out of the room




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Posted: 18 years ago
wow neeeelu great prt tooooooooo tooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood ....yeh kashish ka dad arrrrrrrhhhhhhhh 😡 itna bak bak krta hai ussseh kashish ki bbi sunnni chaiye keh kkya sach hai aur kya jooth baaash essse hi bolta gya sujal koinsult karta gaya woh kashish k batata hai keh yeh ek vaishya kah beta lolz jesse kashish ko nahin pata and woh sujal aur uski maaa ko galiyan dettta raaahhhha detta raha uski parvarish ko usk khoooon ko aur uss wakt sujal chp raha usne kuch nhin kaha kashish ki dad ki batein sujal ki dil ko chub rahin thi kaante ki trah and kashish hii hai jo uss wakt sujal ka haaal samaj sakti thi aur koi nahin and kashish ka dad toh bolta gaya itni insult kiya bichareh sujal ko agar woh ek dhande wali ka beta hai toh usmein sujal ki kya galti galti toh uski dad ki hai toh usseh kyn battein sunna parreh sseh kyun duniyan mein zillllat sehna parreh thats not right parh yeh baat kashish hi samjegi kynke woh hai jo sujal seh itna pyar karti hai ...abhkashish ko sujal ki aur bjjati bardasht nahin hotttti aur woh apne papa ki saaamne awaaz uthati hai she say baaaash abh mein aur nahin sunungi sujal keh ilawa kuch b jessse she says after calming down kyunke woh appne apa ka dil nahn dukhana chahti thi she says jaise mama ki izzzat app keh dl mein maine rakhti hai esseh hi mere sujal ki izzzat mere lye she says haaan mujeh sjal eh bataya tha kyunke agar woh jootha hota toh yeh baat kashish seh chupa sakta thaaa lekin usne nahin chupaya..sujal wanted to stop kashish lekin kashisn nahin ruki uski dil mein jo aya woh kehti gai kynke uskeh paa neh bezzat ki haadh hi paaaarh kar di thi..she evn tell he papa uss din party mein woh nashe men tha aur ska aur sujalka jagda hogaya tha isiliye sne aisa kiya and sujal usseh baaari hairani seh dekh raha hai .woh apne papa seh keht hai sujal bohot accha hai sne mujeh bohot kush rakh hai aur hir honeymoon peh usne mujeh rohit seh bi bachaya usseh ek mauka dennna chaiye...kashish fnishes aur kashish ke papa sochne lagte hai and sujal runs out of the roooom 😕....awesoem part eeelz i hope kashish keh papa sujal ko ek mauka dedeh uska dard samjeh jesseh kashish saamaj rahin hai continue soooooon can't wait more..
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kashish good going [; 😉 )] 😉 😉 .nice part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
an amazing part just loved the way kashish supported sujal i think u have written this part fabulously 👏 this was for the story and this is for you 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazinggg neelu...222222222 gooood...the dialogues were just tooo awsum...i am sooo happy kash supported sujal 😛 ...hope her dad gives s a chance 2 prove himself gud hubby n damad...waise sujal se acha ladka unhe nahi milega 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey neelu..yaar sorry...really very very sorry... i know mujhko yeh comment bohat pehle hii post karna tha.. par kya karthi kar nahii paayi.. kyunke my irritating net screwed up.. aur usse theek hone ke liye itna sara waqt laga.. ab mera net theek ho gaya and me posting your comment.. i'am extremely sorry... hope you understand....and hope you like the comment.... 😃
ab neelu coming to my analysis on the parts... well part bada hii mast tha..it was totally awesome.. mujhe yeh part sachchi bohat hi achcha laga....yaar tu har baar itna achcha kaise likh lethi hai.. hamesha kuch aisa likhthi hai tu which is just too remarkable.. too stupendous... har baar teri writing mujhko choukake rakh dethi hai... mere tho soch ke pare hai the way you write.. i completely love your writing.... very dhassu.... your writing completely rocks.... and as your story is progressing me getting more and more stuck to your story... your story is all what i think about when i do nothing... har waqt sirf tumhari hii story meri zehan mein hotha hai... i totally love the way you present each and every emotion... everything is damn perfect in your story.... tumhari story mein ek bhi aisa part nahii hai which can seem to be absurd... all are just too wonderul, fantastic , marvelous , excellent , par excellence , jhakaas , bindaas , super cool , totally amazing , zabardast...... achcha chal neelu now i'll start my analysis on the part... well part was really very nice.. tho part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan kashish sujal ko sahara dethe hue usse bed kii taraf le jaathi hai... aur sujal khud ko sambhal nahii paa raha hai.. he is unaware of the surroundings.. but he knows and he realizes kii he is with kashish...us nashe ke haalat mein sujal kashish ko mehsoos kar pa raha hai... kashish usse jahaan pe le jaa rahi thi he was going.... ab kashish usse bed pe bitakar uske saamne bait jaatthi hai sujal kii aankhein num hai... ab sujal bas kashish ko dekhe jaa raha tha... ab kashish sujal ke jhoote utarne uththi hai.... tab sujal does not let her go aur uska haath thaam letha hai.... kashish sujal ko dekhthi hai bade hii pyaar se.... kashish se tho sujal ko is haalat mein dekhi nahii jaa rahii thi... kashish's eyes are welling up with tears kyunke sujal is in such a state...i even feel kii kashish feels herself responsible for sujal kii haalat kyunke ussi ke zidd kii wajah se sujal took her to that aurat aur sujal kii saari poorani kadiwi yaadein taaza hogayi.. aur tho aur ab kashish ne sujal ki akele jaane diya.. i think kashish also in her heart is feeling guilty kyunke indirectly hii sahii ab agar sujal is haalat mein hai , aise tadap raha hai tho uska mool kaaran kashish hai... sujal now just kashish ko dekhthe hii dekhthe uske gale lag jaatha hai.. woh us nashe kii halat mein kashish ka naam letha hai aur kashish ke agosh mein apne aankhein band kar letha hai...... kashish makes sujal comfortable in her arms...... she sees to it kii sujal ko koi aur takleef na ho.. something like she wants to relieve all his pain...... me sure kashish can see all the pain evident in sujal's eyes even though woh nashe kii haalat mein hai... bechare sujal ka tho haal aisa hai kii even in that sharab ka nasha bechara apne dukh , dard bhula nahii paa raha hai.... mere hisaab se tho sujal apni takleefo se durr bhaagne ke ke liye itna peekar aaya hai par itna peene ke baad bhi bhale hiii uske hosh udd gaye ho , usse apne aas-pass ki cheezein kuch theek se samaj na aa rahi ho lekin aisi haalat mein bhi one thing that is prevelantely and permantely there with sujal is his pain.. woh dard joh woh kissi se bhi baant nahii sak raha hai.... both sujal , kashish ek doosre ke baahon ke ghehre mein khud ko bhula rahe the....... sujal ka dard uske aasoo bankar beh rahe the..... aur kashish ko bhi yeh mehsoos ho raha tha.... he was just like a small kid.... ab sujal bas kashish ko tightly jakde hue kashish kii bahon mein kho sa raha tha.... this is something like sujal kashish ko khona nahii chahtha tha aur issi liye he has got the strong hold on her.. kyunke sujal ko dil mein yeh darr hai kii sab ke jaise kahiin kashish bhi usse chod na de..ab coming to kashish ka going to sujal taking him in her arms... pacifying him..soothing him... comforting him in the warmth of her arms... well is jagah pe kashish ko dekhkar mujhe aisa laga kii kashish is taking care of sujal as a mother... jaise ek maa apne rothe hue bete ko sambhalthi hai.. ussi tarah se kashish usko sambhal rahii hai.. yahaan also kashish is nibhaying the role of a friend , joh apne dost ke saath uske har musibat ke waqt mein rehtha hai.... she is acting liking a true friend.... and woh apne biwi hone ka farz bhi badi khoobi se nibha rahi hai.... me liking kashish very much.. the way she is handling the situation is just too good... kashish mujhe suddenly badi mature lag rahi hai... kashish ko dekhkar tho mujhe yeh lagtha hii nahii hai kii yahii woh kashish hai joh sujal se har chotti si chotti baat ke liye zidd kiya karthi thi... woh kehtha hai na zindagi kab , kaise , kin haalattho mein badal jaye yeh koi nahii keh saktha... sirf us din ke ek event ne kashish se uske bachpane ke behaviour ko leliya.... sujal se us ek event ke aankhon ke saamne aajane se sujal kii saari bebasi , uska dard bhi bahar aagaya... well mere hisaab se tho achcha hii hua kii yeh baatein aqbhi bahar aayi kyunke agar yeh baatein jis tarah se bahar aayi hai woh nahii aathi tho kashish kabhi nahii jaan paathi kii sujal kii zindagi mein uspar kya kya beetha hai.. issi wajah se atleast kashish sujal ke dard se waakif tho hui.. ab kashish koi kasar nahii chookegi sujal ke zakhmo kar marham lagane se... and ab me very khush kii kashish itne mushkhil ke waqt mein bhi is standing by sujal is giving him all the concern... kashish ka sujal ko apni baahon mein rakhna... it is something like kashish sujal ko duniya ke saare dard , takleef se chupa kar apne agosh mein usse sama rahi hai..... aur ab sujal ko us nashe kii haalat mein ehsaas hona kii uska kashish ke itne kareeb hona theek nahi.. he seprating kashish telling her kii yeh theek nahii.. he telling her kii he is a dog...... bechara sujal.. me feeling very bad for him..... aur sujal aisa kyun keh raha hai me will cry....... sujal ka not going to kashish even in nasha this shows sujal dil ka kitna achcha insaan hai... he is a perfect gentleman.... woh aise nashe kii haalat mein bhi kashish ke saath kuch bhi ghalat nahii kar raha hai.. aur me sure agar woh kashish ke kareeb bhi jayega tho kashish usse rokhegi bhi nahi... aur agar rokhna chahe tho bhi rokh nahii payegi... par sujal hai hii itna achcha he will till his last breath jab thak khud kashish uske pass na aaye... par kabhi sujal haalat ka fayada nahii utayega.... this shows kii sujal ka bachpan jitna bhi bura kyun na hua hai par usmein itni kadwahat tho nahii hai kii woh ek ladki ke saath zabardasti dse pesh aaye... he is such a sweetie-pie..... sujal ka kashish se kehna kii yeh theek nahi hai... he moving away from kashish...me sure kashish ko sujal ke is baat ka zaroor suprise hui hogi..... then sujal telling kashish something like kii uska kashish ke kareeb hona is not right... in that state sujal ko patah hai kii kya ghalat hai aur kya sahi hai..... sujal ka kashish se kehna kii woh mailli ho jayegi.... his eyes expressing all the pain... he telling her kii he is a prostitute's son.. par kashish is as pavitra as gangajal....... well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai sujal maana kashish pavitra hai tum usmein sama jao tho tum bhi achche ho jaoge.....waise tum ab bhi achche ho sabse achche..... sujal refers to himself as gandagi.... uff nahii sujal tum koi ghandagi nahii ho kachra tho woh log hai joh tumko nahii samajthe..... i think sujal kashish ke kareeb aur kareeb jaana chahtha hai aur apne saare dard bhula dena chahtha hai... par the fact that is killing him andar hii andar woh yeh hai kii woh ek prostitute ka beta hai... and he does not want kii joh beizzathi usne hamesha sahii.. ab kashish ke uske saath judne ke baad woh bhi yeh beizzathi sahe... yahii sabse badi wajah hai why sujal is always keeping himself away from kashish... kashish ka tho i think sure usko laga hoga kii sujal aise kyun soch raha hai... and hearing sujal talk like this i'am kind off sure kii kashish ko bhi ehsaas ho raha hai kii what sujal is going through.... ab kashish ka usse kehna kii sujal woh kamal ka phool hai joh khichad mein rehkar bhi apni achchayi , apni khushboo nahii khota.... and according to me tho woh kamal ka phool khichad ka bhi shoba bada detha hai.... log aksar kamal ke saath saath us khichad ko bhi dekhthein hai... aur woh khichad us kamal kii emiyat ko khoob jaantha hai.... woh koi moorkh hii hoga joh sujal kii qadar nahii karega... jaise kii woh aurat... zaroor un logon kii matti maari gayi hogi kyunke un logon ne sujal ke saath bura kiya.. joh sabke saath itna achcha hotha hai... uske saath koi itna bura kaise ban saktha hai.. woh aurat tho bilkul pagal hai...waise chodo uski baat.. ab neelu kya tujhe yaad hai main hamesha tumse kehthi thi kii sab mein kahiin na kahiin kuch hadh thak bachpana chupa hua hotha hai.. well mujhe woh baat , woh bachpana sujal mein ab dikh rahi hai.... kyunke woh chahtha hai kii koi usse sambhale..... koi uske saare dard ko mita de... yeh ek chota bachcha hii kartha hai.. kyunke jab koi ek chotte se bachche ko chot lagthi hai tho woh chahtha hai kii uski mom usse sambhale aur uske us dard ko mita de...ab sujal also just like a chottu bachcha needs all the care and concern and love to be showered on him by kashish..... sujal ka yeh kehna kii kashish malli ho jayegi... well sujal yeh baat kyun nahii samaj raha hai kii shayad kashish sujal ke pyaar ke rang mein khudko khokar mailli hona chahthi ho... shayad woh sujal ke pyaar ke rang mein dhoob kar bheeg jaana chahthi ho....shayad issi liye woh sujal ko apne itne kareeb aane de rahi hai... waise dekha jaye tho i think sujal is fully aware of that kii kashish uski ho jaana chahthi hai...par phir bhi woh kashish se apni doori banaye rakh raha hai...kyunke he feels kii kashish uske saath khush nahii hogi... sujal ko ab bhi lagtha hai kii he is not the right person for kashish...sujal yeh baat nahii samaj raha hai kii agar woh hai tho kashish hai.. kashish kii har saans sirf usse se judi hui hai..lekin yeh baatein tho sujal ke samaj nahi aathi.... he just thinks kii kashish uske saath khush nahii hogi... aur kashish kii khushi ke liye woh kashish ko apne aap se durr kar raha hai though he very well knows kii uski kashish sirf kashish ke saath hai.. uff.. in dono ka pyaar tho kabhi kabhi mere hii samaj ke bahar hai... these both ka pyaar is totally mahaan..... though their pyaar is not jismani... par phir bhi woh ek doosre ke sabse zyada kareeb hai... unke beech mein ek ehsaas hai which is undefinable and which makes the relationship they share sabse anoka sabse anoota....sujal , kashish dil se jude hue hai.... unka dil unke dil ki har baat ko ek duje thak pohancha hii detha hai chahe zubaan kuch bole ya na bole........ ab sujal ka usse kehna kii woh jhoot bol rahi hai , par sujal also adding in kii chalo jhoot hii sahii pehli baar kissi ne pyaar tho jataya...... warna sab dhokebaazz... well is baat mein ek cheez observe karne ke layak hai aur woh yeh hai kii sujal ne sabko dhokebaaz kaha lekin he excluded kashish from it... ab iska matlab tho yahii hua na kii sujal ka joh kashish pe shak tha woh abhi thak almost kahiin kho gaya hai..jaise paani kii tarah sujal ka shak bhi beh gaya.......and sujal also tells kashish kii woh achchi hai.. tho sujal samaj hii gaya kii kashish kitni achchi hai masoom hai.. woh pehle se uska dil yeh baat jaantha tha par uska dimaak nahii maan raha tha.. ab uske dilo-dimaak se kashish ke upar se shak uth gaya and uske zubaan par bhi yeh baat aa hi gayi........... isse tho achchi aur koi baat ho hii nahii sakthi hai... absolutely amazing yaar.... this is completely awesome to good......ab next kashish sujal ka haath thaam lethi hai...... aur sujal kehtha hai kii woh darrane ki cheez hai... well i think woh darane kii nahii pyaar karne ke layak hai..... sujal kehtha hai kii usse nafrat karo.... lekin mujhe yeh baat batao kii koi kyun kare nafrat sujal se woh hai itna zyada achcha kii koi chahkar bhi usse nafrat nahii kar payega...... he says saari achchi ladkiyo ko usse bachao.... well yeh dekho sujal kya kya keh raha hai.... woh sujal joh apni biwi ke pass nahii jaatha joh sujal apni kashish ko chodkar kissi aur kii taraf nahii dekhtha ladkiyon ko usse kya khauff...... and he says ladiyon ko uske peeche lagao usse phasane ke liye..... this shows kii sujal kii zindagi mein jab thak kashish nahii aayi thi his company was not good and also shows kii he was surronded by all tugghi cheat people..... this also shows kii sujal ko ek sachche saathi kii ek dost kii kitni zaroorat hai... and kashish is fulfilling her duty very well....ab kashish is crying par woh sujal ko har comfort dena chahthi hai... ab woh sujal ke sar ko apni godh mein rakh lethi hai.........sujal is sleeping on kashish's godh and forgetting all his pain........ aise lag raha hai kii kashish ke godh mein sujal apna sar rakhkar duniyaan bhula raha hai.. aur kashish ka sujal ke sar par apne haatho ka pherna... aur me sure sujal kii aankhein kabhi band tho kabhi khul rahi hogi and me sure he is liking kashish ka care... aur kashish ka haath pherna shows kii woh sujal kii kitna parwah karthi hai , it also shows kii kashish ko sujal kii chinta andar hii andar khaye jaa rahi hai.... this also shows kashish ka pyaar towards sujal..... oh.. yaar me completely loving each and every bit of it... it is completely just too good... woh ek dusare se itne alag hothe hue bhi ek hai..unke dilon ne sirf ek duje ke liye dhadhakna seekha hai.... yaar this scene was very damn awesome to the maximum extent... everything was just so good in this scene... it showed the love , the care sujal , kashish have for each other.... though not physically they are bound together by the relationshup of their hearts... aur yahii unke rishthe kii sabse badi khoobi hai... and you have presented it very well... very nice.... the only word which suits your story and your writing is perfectly rocking.....neelu yaar sujal kashish ko aise saath mein dekhkar ek hii gaana mere dil mein aa raha hai aur woh yeh gaana hai " Chup tum raho..Chup hum rahein.. Khamoshi ka khamoshi se..Zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do........ Ankhon mein kho jaye aankhein...Bole haath se haath...Bahon mein chupkar sanso se jaise dole raat...Ungliyo ko ungliyo se mausaum ko shoukiyo se baat karne do... Chup tum raho..Chup hum rahein.. Khamoshi ka khamoshi se..Zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do......." yaar sachchi mujhko yahii gaana gaane ko jee kar raha hai.. i think it suits perfect for the situation..... hye..yaar..un dono ka pyaar..uff..it's increasing har pal , har second.... aur yahii sabse achchi baat hai..... this part was indeed very sweet and cute.... simply amazing.... 👏 ab kashish ke aankhon se aasoo beh rahe hai... sujal ka dard kashish ke dil mein ut raha hai... sujal ka dard kashish ke dil ko cheer kar rakh raha hai... woh sujal ko is tarah nahii dekh paa rahi hai tadapthe hue... bilakthe hue... ab sujal very innocently asks her kii woh kin ladkiyon mein se hai... ab kashish tells him kii woh inmein se koi bhi nahii.. par sujal nahii maantha aur kehtha hai kii woh koi tho hogi... even kashish is on the adamant stand kii woh inmein se koi bhi nahii hai... i think kashish sujal ko ehsaas dilana chahthi hai kii she is alag from the people who have hurt him till today aur sujal in that nashe kii haalat also kashish ko parak ne kii koshish kar raha hai.. ab kashish is not able to see sujal in that pain aur woh sujal ka haath bade tightly thaam lethi hai something like sujal ko yeh ehsaas dila rahi ho kii woh hai uske saath.. woh kabhi nahii chodegi uska haath... she is giving him the ehsaas kii woh uske saath hamesha rahegi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye zindagi aage kitni hii kyun na karwat lele but she always will remain by him.... ab sujal bilkul ek chotte bachche kii tarah usse kehtha hai kii ek dil kii baat kahoon.. kashish sujal se kehthi hai kii woh kahe and woh sujal ke sar par apna haath pherthi bhi rehthi hai.. wah..wah..wah..kya baat hai.. bohat hi mast zabardast.... aur ab sujal kashish se kehtha hai kii woh bohat achchi hai... sujal kii dil mein joh baatein thi kashish ke liye woh ek ek karke sabhi bahar aa rahi hai.. aur isse achchi baat tho aur koi bhi ho hii nahii sakthi... simply amazing...issi nashe ke bahane sujal joh joh kashish se kehna chahtha hai woh baatein tho sujal ke zubaan par aagayi na.... yeh hui na baat... ab kashish sujal kii taraf pyaar se dekhkar kehthi hai kii woh bhi bohat achcha hai... ab kashish as a caring loving wife sujal se kehthi hai kii woh sharaab na peeya kare... sharab insaan ko maar detha hai.. ab sujal marne kii baatein kartha hai tho kashish darr rahi hothi hai.. tho ab sujal zara sa usko chaid the hue kehtha hai kii kashish bohat zyada darrphok hai.. aur sujal kashish se kehtha hai kii kashish ne ab usse bhi darrphok bana diya hai... he says kii pehle usko maut ka intezaar hotha tha lekin ab he wants to live his life with his zindagi.. that is pointing to kashish... sujal kashish se yeh baat bayaan kar raha hai kii kashish uski zindagi hai... sujal ke aankhon mein woh passion hai and he is looking at her with reddish drunk eyes showing all the pyaar he has for her.. sujal kii yeh baat sachchi mere tho dilko choo gayi yaar...sachchi keh rahi ho.. woh itne honest , sachche mann se kashish se yeh baatein keh raha hai... kashish bhi yeh baat samaj jaathi hai kii sujal usko hint kar raha hai.. kashish ko khushi hai.. aur uske aankhon se aasoo beh rahe hai she is unable to control herself aur woh sujal ko hug kar lethi hai bohat tight tarike se... something like woh sujal ko apne pyaar mein jhakkad rahi hai.. woh sujal ko apne uske saath hone ka ehsaas dila rahii hai... ab kashish is like sujal.. aur kashish dheere se places a kiss on his cheeks.. sujal thoda sa sharma jaatha hai.. hyee..kya baat hai.. aisa lag raha hai maano jaise kashish ne apna saara darr samait kar khabadi mein de diya ho now she isbeing bold enough.. mazaa aagaya sachchi mein... aur sujal ka sharama uska main kya kahoon.. he is shoo cute..... ab sujal us nashe kii haalat mein bhi is getting a bit naughty and he asks her can he get another kiss.. ab kashish ka sharmana.. oye..oye.. balle..balle... jaise maine kaha kashish has thrown away her sharam-waram far away and she kiises him on the other side of his cheek too... ab sujal tho aur bhi shaitaan ho gaya hai and he is like aise nahii... ab kashish is like aur.. tho sujal usse kehtha hai kii usse honto par kiss chahiye.. wah sujal kya maang hai absolutely too good.... woh kashish ko dekh raha hai with all love in his eyes... ab kashish sujal ke is baat se hairaan hai.. lekin sujal tho apni hii dhun mein hai.. he is getting too romantic and i love it completely yaar... he tells her kii woh usko kiss karna chahtha hai.. sujal dheere se touches kashish ka gaal.. gets his face her closer to hers.. kashush dheere dheere madhosh ho rahi hai.. woh apna hosh kho rahii hai... and ab kashish ko dekhkar aisa lag raha hai kii she is ok with it.. she has no regrets of what she is doing... ab sujal takes his lips closer to her lips..kashish ka closing her eyes..shows her sharam..... dono can mehsoos ek doosre ke saansein , unki saanso ki garmahat , ek doosre ke pyaar ko mehsoos kar rahein hai.. they are enjoying the moment and living in it.... ab sujal kashish ke kareeb aur bhi kareeb jaa raha hai.. the closeness between sujal and kashish is increasing with every minute , every second that is passing by.... aur kashish kii dil kii dhadkano ka taiz hue jaana.. sujal bhi apne aankhein band kar letha hai... both sujal and kashish are relishing the moment of being so close to each other... ab kashish ko darr kum aur excitement zyada ho rahi hai... she is waiting for the moment jab sujal ke honth uske honth ko touch karenge.. when the chotti sii durri joh unke beech hai kab mitegi she can feel his lips aganist her's ..toooo coolllllllllll.... how romantic...simply superb.. this means that kashish poori kii poori tarah se sujal kii ho jaana chahthi hai.. woh sujal ke pyaar ke rang mein rang jaana chahthi hai... kashish wants to feel the moment jab woh dono ke honth milne ke baad woh ek dusare ko kareeb se bhi zyada kareeb mehsoos karenge... hye.. hye...kya baat hai... sujal bhi kashish ke aur kareeb jaa raha hai..woh bhi un dono ke beech kii har doorie mita dena chahtha hai... uff..yaar... this is shooo damnnn romanticc... i loved it completely.. me blushing and me blushing too hard seriously.. sujal , kashish ek doosre ke itne kareeb..yeh tho meri jaan nikaal ke hii rahenge...completly rocking..raapchik... too marvelous...
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☺️par achanak aisa kuch hotha hai which is totally unexpected aur woh yeh kii sujal kashish ke shoulder par behosh hokar ghir jaatha hai.. well neelu in your story maine hamesha ek baat dekhi hai aur kayi baar tujhse kahii bhi hai kii always expext the unexpected and see here is a unexcepted thing which has happened.. aur mujhe is baat par koi udassi nahii hai balki me laughing to the maximum extent.. bechara sujal behosh ho gaya aur kashish kii haalat dekhne layak hai... kashish is completely bewildered woh apni aankhein kholthi hai... kashish ko kaise react kare samaj nahii aa rahi thi... woh bas sujal ko khulle mooh dekhe jaa rahi hothi hai.. usko tho pehle samaj bhi nahii aatha kii kya ho raha hai... well you can call this sought of sujal ka badla.. remember jis din sujal wanted to kiss kashish in that waterfall gufa tho kashish ne keh diya kii usse darr lag raha hai... that time he wanted to kiss her.. ab this time kashish wanted to hold him close kiss him un dono kii saari doorie kashish mita dena chahthi thi par ab sujal behosh ho gaya though jaan bhooj ke nahii.. it was seriously like a tit for tat... and me cannnot stop laughing...ab kashish ka holding him and usse thapkiyaan maarna... par no reaction from sujal.. ab kashish sulking like kii so gaye kya..then sujal ka tho apne hosh mein hii nahii rehna.. aur kashish trying to wake him up.. par sujal se koi reaction na paakar kashish bas aahein barthi reh jaathi hai... aur utkar sujal ka shirt uske jhoote utar dethi hai..well yaar me seriously laughing on this scene.. it must be so funny just to imagine kashish in that situation.. uski sulking... and all.. just too damn funny yaar.... 😆 ab kashish sujal ko bed par sula dethi hai... she makes him comfortable on the bed....sujal bed par bilkul ek bachche ke maafiq so raha tha.. ab kashish bhi sujal ko dekhkar uske chehre par bhi ek halki si muskaan aa hii jaathi hai... haan kashish ke honto kii muskaan sahii bhi hai kyunke sujal se ghussa hona , usse irritated rehna koi zyada dair nahii nahii reh saktha.. sujal ka attitude hii aisa hii woh kuch bhi kare uspar tho bas pyaar hii aatha hai... uske liye dil mein pyaar hi pyaar umadtha hai... aur sujal tho ghehri neend mein so hii gaya... ab kashish sujal ke chest par apna sar rakh kethi hai... she keeps looking at sujal very intently... woh dheere se sujal ke chehre pe kiss karna shuru karthi hai..she first kisses his forehead , followed by two sides of his cheeks.. kashish kisses him even without missing a single spot of his face... then she stops at his lips.. woh dheere se apne honth sujal ke honth ke pass le jaathi hai.. she sees kii woh so raha hai.. woh pyaar se sujal kii taeaf dekhthi hai... sujal tho jaise ghehri neend mein so raha hai aur kashish ke sapno mein kho raha hai.. ab kashish gets her lips more closer to his and finally with all the courage and guts puts sujal's lower lips in between her lips.. and she kisses his lower lips.. is baat pe tho talliyan honi chahiye.. it seems like kashish is liking every bit of what she is doing.. and me completely loving it... ab kashish moves away aur she sharamaifies thinking of what she just did now... well is baat par mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish ab tho sujal hosh mein nahii hai and you kissed him aur ussi ke liye tum itna zyada sharma rahii ho.. aur tum tab ki sochcho jab sujal hosh mein hoga and you will kiss him with all your being.. tab sochcho tumhara haal kya hoga.. me sure tab kashish bilkul ek tamato kii tarah laal laal the darkest red ho jayegi... ab kashish apne haath ko sujal ke neck pe daal lethi hai... woh uske khande pe sar rakhkar sujal ke saath hi wahaan lait jaathi hai.. being too close too him..ohh..too wonderfull.. ab kashish apne nose se nuzzles his neck... uske kaan ke kareeb jaakar usse kehthi hai i love you... then she kisses him on his arms , neck aur sujal ko apne pass jakad ke rakh kar so jaathi hai.... wow yaar..yeh kashish tho badi hii bold ho gayi hai... and it is completely amazing..rocking.... yeh scenes padke tho me getting sharam.. main sharam se paani paani hue jaa rahi hoon.... hyee..hyee... main varijawaa... agar mera yeh haal hai when only kashish is trying to get close to him tab baat sochne layak hoga tab jab sujal bhi hosh mein hoga aur woh kashish ke kareeb jayega... tab tho main bilkul hii marr hii jaaungi...waise i also think kii sujal though is sleeping usse ehsaas hai i mean in his sub-concious mind kii kashish uske kareeb se bhi zyada kareeb hai... simply a mind blowing scene... mind blasting yaar... awesome.. dhassu...jhakkas...bindaass..very cute...sweet... tweet.. totally romantic.... me enjoyed these scenes to the maximum extent... this scene is been written with total perfection... ⭐️
ab neelu my comment for the next part posted ab raat guzar jaathi hai.. agle din subah pehle kashish uth jaathi hai... sujal is still sleeping like a small chottu bachcha... ab kashish frees herself from sujal's hold and she goes to get ready... and by the time she is out sujal is still sleeping.. kashish usse dekhkar uske pass jaa kar baijaathi hai.... woh sujal ke sar par apne haath pherthi rehthi hai jab sujal kii aankh khul jaathi hai.... kashish usse kehthi hai kii woh so jaye par sujal nahii maantha aur fresh hone ke liye chala jaatha jai........ kashish knows kii sujal ke andar ek toofan sa umad raha hai.. par she knows sujal needs sometime for his ownself.... ab jab sujal comes out of the washroom tab sujal usse kehtha hai kii woh log aag wapas jayenge he says all this on a serious stand.......he says something like he knows kii unhe wahan kuch aur din rehna tha par woh jaana chahtha hai.. he also apologizes..... well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii he does not need to apoligize.... uski tho koi ghalthi nahi hai.....well pehle kashish zaroor thodo suprize thodi udaas hui hogi with that decision of sujal's par kashish being a understanding wife tells sujal kii it's ok they will go back to India...kashish sujal ke kareeb jaathi uske chehre pe haath rakhthi hai.. and all..... are wah kashish tho sujal jab hosh mein hai tab bhi uske kareeb jaa rahii hai..... bohat achche...... sujal is kind off greatfull to kashish kii woh usse itna samajthi hai.. he is happy that kashish listens to him...actually sujal kashish ko apne pass bed pe bita letha hai aur uske godh mein apna sar rakhtha hai and kashish keeps running her hand over his hair.... he even has a smile on his face.... then he goes to book the tickets and tickets book ho jaathi hai..... ab sujal kashish ke pass jaatha hai aur najaane usse kya soojtha hai woh kashish ko tightly hug kar letha hai.. kashish is suprised by this... sujal usko thanks kehtha hai... this shows kii sujal ko apne us bure samay mein kashish kii kitni zyada zaroorat thi and kashish stood by him.... yeh hai sabse achchi baat........ ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii thanks for everything.... tho kashish uske cheeks ko touch karthe hue kehthi hai kii he need not be thankfull atlest to her...... ab sujal holds kashish by her arms then usse apne saath bed par bita letha hai....... ab sujal kashish ki godh mein sar rakhkar aankhein band kar letha hai.. usne kashish ke haath ko apne haath mein thaama hua hai..... aur kashish pyaar se uske baalon pe haath pherkar sehla rahii hai..... both are quite..... ab kashish utna chahthi hai to go and do the packing kyunke unki ticket us din ke liye hii confirm ho chuki hothi hai... lekin sujal usse jaane nahii detha... woh kashish ko aur tight tarike se thaam letha hai... not wanting her to go..... sujal usse poochtha hai kii woh kahaan jaa rahi hai.. tho kashish kehthi hai kii packing karke aayegi woh..... ab sujal is like mat jao na yahii raho mere pass....how cute is this..he is really a sweetie-cutie pie..a darling... ab kashish is like usko packing karni hai.. but still sujal does not want to let her go.. sujal ke dil mein ek darr sa bait gaya tha kii sabke jaisa kashish bhi usse chodkar , tanha chali jayegi... ab kashish kind of tells him kii woh usse chod kar nahii jayegi.. aur woh 5 minute mein packing khatam karke wahiin ussi ke pass aajayegi.. she also tells him like woh packing karthe hue bhi uske saamne hii hogi na... she also assres him kii she will never at any cost leave him.. and she also is like woh uske saamne hi tho hogi..... ab sujal again asks her kii mere pass hii rahogi na ....then he lets her go.. kashish packing kar rahi hothi hai when sujal sees kii kashish ke haath mein chot ke nishaan hai... he realizes that kashish ko woh chot tab lagi when he was litreally dragging her in his ghussa... he goes to kashish he is very guilty and apolegictic about what has happened... but kashish brushes of the matter saying it is just a chotti si chot.. she even smiles and does not even give sujal ka chance to repent..... aur sujal is feeling too guilty he even bangs his hand on the table..... and kashish usse kehthi hai kii she has also hit him so many number of times aur usne uff thak nahii kii kashish mazaak mein yeh bhi kehthi hai kii she is not nazook dard sehne kii himaat hai usmein.. sujal kii worry.... kashish ka letting go the matter easily..... too goodd..... this shows the care they have for each other.. kashish does not want to hurt sujal telling him ki usse dard nahii ho raha hai which i'am sure kashish ko raha hai.... and sujal feeling guilty and blaming himself for being rude and harsh with kashish... this shows both cannot see each other in any kind off pain.. dono ek doosre ke liye are ready to face any kind off pain but are not ready to give each other pain.... wah.. kya baat hai... excellent.... ab next coming to the cute luggage scene jahaan kashish apna luggage utta rahi hothi hai par sujal does not allow her and is like main utta raha hoon na... and he carrying all the luggage by himself.. by not giving kashish any takleef.. sujal ko dekhkar mujhko tho mujhe aisa lag raha hai kii woh apne pyaar , apni biwi ke liye raahoon mein har jagah phool bicha raha ho.. he does not want kashish to face any difficulty... chahe woh ek chotti si takleef of lifting the luggage hii kyun na ho par nahii sujal mahashay tho is ready to handle everything on his own par woh kashish ko ek bhi takleef nahhi dega... aisa hai humara sujal.. sabse achcha sabse nirala... sabse anoka hai woh... lakhon mein ek hai sujal... he is such a sweetheart yaar sachchi... kabhi kabhi his care for kashish tho meri aankhon mein aasoo laa dethe hai.... ab they are in the airport.... sujal is not leaving kashish uska haath thame hue hai sujal that too tightly... sujal keeps his head on her shoulder and kashish kisses him on the forehead pyaar se.. hye.. kya mast hai yaar.... inka pyaar is going on increasing.... simply too amazing...... ab sujal , kashish in the flight being so close to each other.... sujal is quite par he is still sad kashish understand it perfectly well...... sujal going close to kashish..both of them are liking being close to eachother and words are not needed to be expressed what they are feeling.... it is just moments of silence between them which both are enjoying and relishing to the maximum extent... yeh hai sujal , kashish ke saath kii , unke rishthe kii sabse badii khoobsoorathi..aur sadagi.... there love is so simple , yet so pure without any kind off lust... just unka pyaar sachchi bohat sachcha hai... har sach se sachcha.... itna pure.... just awesome yaar totally.... ab sujal ka kashish ke haatho ko pakadna uske godhi mein apna sar rakhna... he kissing kashish ka haath... all are tooo damn lovely yaar.. mazaa aagaya mujhe tho poori kii poori tarah se..... kashish caressing his hair... she kissing him near his eyes.. all were superest-duperest and the coolllestttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.......... aur sujal might sure have the feeling of protected..... yeh feeling kii somebody is there to take care of him too... somebody is there joh uske liye jeetha hai... yeh saari baatein give sujal the strength to fight aganist all the odds that exists in his life.. kashish ka pyaar sujal ko woh hoshla detha hai by which he can fight over all the difficulties that exist in his life... according to me kashish ka pyaar towards him is his life saviour.... and me sure sujal ke bhi aise hii kuch milthe-julthe khayaal honge... kashish surely is sujal's life support system and the same way kashish kii jaan bhi sujal mein hii basthi hai..... ab wahaan par us air-hostess ka aana... she asking kii kya unhe koi drink chahiye... kashish ka mana kar dena and asking sujal... aur sujal tho kashish ke godh se apna sar bhi nahii utatha... and he tells kashish bohat hii sweet tarike se kii ask that air-hostess to go away... sujal kii yeh baat mujhko badi hii cute aur sweet lagi... mujhe sujal ke is baat par uspe bada pyaar aa raha tha.... you know what i think neelu sujal indirectly told the air-hostess not to interrupt their private moment..... not to be a kawaab mein haddi in his and kashish pyaar bhare meete meete pal... basically he wanted no disturbance..... sujal ka kissing kashish on her forehead... kashish ka not objecting.... she too being close too sujal.... all were extremelly and totally stupendous..outstanding yaar.. simply out of the world... par excellence.... your story completely rocks.... ab tho main tumhari story se aur bhi zyada bohat zyada chipak gayi... your story has that kind off nasha joh peeye bina hii logon par asar karthi hai... excellent job done yaar.. keep up the good workgoing.....👏
ab coming to he next part tho is part mein aisa kuch hotha hai kii sujal , kashish kii flight India mein land kar dethi hai... aur woh dono khushi khushi ghar kii taraf chal dethe hai... ab ghar jaathe hii dadi unhe dekhkar khush hothi hai lekin she is even suprised kii sujal , kashish apne honeymoon se jaldi kaise lout aaye.... dadi sujal se poochthi hai kii why are they back early tab sujal ko samaj nahii aa raha hotha hai kii woh kya bole... sujal keeps fumbling for words and is hesitating to tell the fact to dadi... sujal dadi se sachchi baat kehna nahii chahtha tha kyunke he knows she will get worried agar usne dadi ko sach bataya tho.. and woh dadi ko batana aur unhe pareshaan karna nahii chahtha tha... aur dadi was asking sujal this question because she was worried kii kahiin sujal , kashish ke beech koi ladayi , koi nok-jhonk tho nahii hui hai... dadi knows kii sujal ko kashish kii kitni zyada zaroorat hai... dadi can surely see the pyaar evident in sujal , kashish eyes for each other... tho issi wajah se dadi is pareshaan she does not want her potha to go back to the miserable akela life he was leading before kashish came into his life.... ab kashish sujal kii hichkhichahat samajthi hai and she covers up for sujal yeh kehke kii sab theek hai... it is just that she wanted to come back... and usko homesick feel ho raha tha issi liye they came back... aur kashish also manages to maintain her innocence saying something like foreign-voreign mein itne din rehna uske bas kii baat nahii hai... ab sujal kashish ko dekhtha hai kii kaise she managed everything.... sujal bas kashish ko dekhtha rehtha hai aur mere hisaab se tho sujal ke aankhon mein kashish ke liye thankfullness tha... ab dadi tells kashish kii achcha hua kii woh log aagaye... kyunke kashish ke ghar se call aaya tha kii kashish ke papa kii condition hospital mein bigad rahii hai... ab kashish yeh baat sunthe hyper hone lagthi hai kii uske papa ko kya hua hai... kashish poori kii poori pareshaan hone lagthi hai... me feeling very bad kii yeh ghumo ka badal kyun cha gaya abhi abhi tho sujal , kashish ko unke deserve kii gayi hui khushi naseeb hone lagi thi... kii abhi kashish ke papa in the hospital... bechari kashish... khushiyaan kabhi sujal , kashish se saath zyada dhair thak tikki hui nahii rehthi hai... hamesha khushiyaan unko milthe-milthe reh jaathi hai.... lekin in sab mein ek cheez achchi hai kii sujal , kashish saath hai.... they are not leaving each others saath... dadi suggests kii unhe hospital jaana chahiye... ab kashish kehthi hai she will go.. lekin sujal usse kehtha hai kii woh bhi uske saath chalega... kashish mana kar dethi hai yeh kehkar kii uski tabiyaat theek nahii hai.... this shows kii kashish sujal kii kitni zyada parwah karthi hai.. uski kitni care karthi hai..... lekin ab sujal uski ek nahii suntha he is adamant on his stand of point kii woh bhi uske saath chalega... kashish usse tokne kii koshish karthi hai par sujal uski ek nahii suntha... kyunke he preety well knows kii kashish ko uski is waqt kitni zyada zaroorat hai.. he knows kashish is emotionally weak right now... he knows kii kashish ko is pal mein , us haalat mein akele chod dena sahii nahii hoga... issi liye he does not budge and just tells kashish chalo..... ab hospital ka scene kuch aisa hai kii mehak and kashish's mom are there sitting and are completely worried... ab kashish wahaan aathi hai she meets mehak and her mom aur uske papa ka haal jaanthi hai.. kashish is not at all being able to stand it kii her father is in such a critical condition... ab kashish rone lagthi hai....ab sujal ka going to kashish , kashish ka sujal ke baahon mein chali jaana aur rona... she expressing her darr on her father's haal to sujal... ab sujal tho kashish ko aise dekh nahii paa raha hai... he is trying totally to calm kashish down.... he is running his hand on her back and telling her that kuch nahii hoga... main hoon na.. kuch nahii hone doonga... ab kashish asking him kuch nahii hoga na... tab sujal assuring her kii nothing wrong will happen... kashish then hugging sujal and relieving all her darr.. jis tarah se sujal kashish ka sahara ban raha hai it is too commendable......... you know what neelu dear i think sujal , kashish kabhi saath rahe ya phir na rahe lekin woh dono hamesha mushkhil ke samay mein ek doosre ka saath denge...yeh baat me sure of... kyunke dekh na neelu jis tarah kashish ne sujal ko London mein sambhala... aur ab jaise sujal kashish ka sahara ban raha hai... this shows kii they are the strongest support for each other at the time of difficulty... they both are always there for each other always but most at the time of the need..when they need a crying shoulder sujal is there for kashish and kashish is there for sujal.... they are the strongest pillar supports for each other.... ab kashish kii mom ka sujal , kashish ko saath mein dekhna and she having a satisfactory smile on her face kii sujal , kashish are happy together..... atleast kashish ke mom ke dil mein sujal , kashish ke rishthe ko lekar joh darr tha ab sujal , kashish ko yun saath dekhkar woh darr tho durr hua.. ab kashish kii mom's heart will be at peace seeeing kii unki beti is having a happy married life.... well this scene is commendable..... mujhe bohat hii zyada achcha laga... it is totaaly superb yaar.... mind refreshing... though dukh tho is last scene mein , worry tha lekin sujal , kashish ka saath nullifies all the worries and tesions to minus zero percent... jab thak sujal hai kashish ke saath sujal kashish ke aas-pass kuch bhi bura nahii hone dega.... me sure of it... and itna bharosa i have on sujal... the way sujal supported kashish giving her sahara was just too wonderful.... 👏


Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
tho in the next part here kashish mom is happy seeing kashish and sujal together ab sujal kashish ki mom ke pass jaatha hai and he is like aunty.... phir sujal bada hichkhichakar kehtha hai mamma.. kashish kii mom ko bhi achcha lagtha hai... sujal says kii agar unhe koi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho tho usse pooch le.. ab kashish kii mom bilkul ke maa ke jaise sujal ke sar par haath rakhthi hai and refers to sujal as beta and says kii ab woh aagaya hai tho all will be fine.... are wah.. atlast sujal is getting a maa ka pyaar which he deserves.... me very happy..very very very damn glad... sujal ke aankhon se halke se aasoo beh rahein hai aur yeh khushi ke aasoo hai.. he gives her a smile.... yeh totally is awome me very damn khush sachchi for sujal.. uske ghaav mujhko mitthe hue dikhayi diye..... and me liking it too much.... 👏
ab wahaan doctor aajaatha hai and he tells kii patient ko hosh aagaya and they can meet him.... kashish wants to go but uski mom usse rokh lethi hai aur mehak ko andar bhej dethi hai yeh kehkar kii usse sujal , kashish se baat karni hai... sujal , kashish are kind off confused aur woh ek doosre ko dekhthein hai aur mehak andar chali jaathi hai... ab kashish's mom tells kashish kii usne uske papa ko bata diya hai kii she has got married.... ab kashish is pareshaan kii paa ne kya kaha... her mother says kii her father was very angry and unhappy with kashish.. uff.. neelu tu mujhe bata is baat mein nakhush hone kii kya baat hai kashish ne shaddi hii tho kii hai koi jurm tho nahii... ab kashish becomes upset and her mom continues saying kii she says kii her father told kii unko kashish se yeh umeed nahii thi.. jab uska pariwaar is in the dukh she got married... and phir jab uske papa zindagi aur mout ke beech lad rahe the she has gone to enjoy her honeymoon.... he also said kii jis kashish pe unko garv hotha tha ussi ne sharam se unka sar jhuka diya.... uff.. how could kashish's father say all this even without knowing the truth.. kashish ne shaddi kii tho sirf aur sirf uske dad kii zindagi bachcha ne ke liye.. kashish ko koi shouk nahii tha apne armaano ko khuchal dene ko.... aur haan woh gayi apne honeymoon par tho ismein kya ghalat kiya usne.. kashish ne sujal se shaddi karke uske dad ke ilaaz ka bandobasth kiya.. aur ab uske yeh naye rishthe ko i mean uske shaddi shuda zindagi ko bhi uski zaroorat thi.. kashish is fulfilling her responsibilities on both the sides ek side pe rehkar tho doosre side pe help kar ke.... ab kashish rona shuru kar dethi hai... me sure sujal might also be feeling so helpless.. woh zaroor kashish ke aasoo rokhna chahtha hai par he knows no way how he can do it... ab kashish kii mom continues saying kii she tried to tell her hubby kii kashish ka pati achcha hai , woh kashish ka khayal rakhtha hai , kashish bhi khush hai , woh apni nayi zindagi mein khush hai.... arewah.. achcha laga yeh dekhkar kii sujal kii sasuma is by his side... very nice... ab kashish is like phir.. tab kashish kii mom continues saying kii but still her father is in the same point kii why did kashish do like this.... woh itni khudgarz kaise ho gayi... i think khudgarz tho kashish nahii balki kashish ke father hai he is not thinking from his daughters point of view... kashish's mom continues saying kii how did she forget her sanskaar.. is baat par mujhe kehna hai kii kashish apne sanskaar nahii bhooli bechari kiss duvida mein phasithi aur usne yeh faisla liya koi bhi nahii samaj saktha... kashish's mom continues saying kii her father told kii he is happy that kashish is happy in her life.. but kashish ne joh kiya uski wajah se unka garv choor-choor ho gaya... ab kashish is crying aur sujal bas sar jhukaye sab sun raha hai and puts his haath in his pocket... bechare sujal , kashish... khushiyaan kabhi in dono ko raas hii nahii aathi aathe aathe lout jaathi hai.... unki zindagi abhi sawarne hii lagi thi kii unko phir zindagi kii bebasiyo ne gheir liya hai.. me feeling bad for both of them... rona aa raha hai mujhko un dono ke haal par...😭
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ab the next part....well is part mein aisa kuch hotha hai kii kashish kii mom is getting worried kii till now kashish ke papa does not know the fact that kashish is married to sujal... she is like he does not know kii kashish has married the same guy who insulted kashish in the party.. jiski wajah se he is in hospital today... kashish kii mom bhi yeh saari baatein zara sa hichkhicha kar keh rahi hogi kyunke sujal unke saamne khada hua hai...par mujhe sujal ka haal sochkar bada dukh ho raha hai.. he must be feeling so bad..he must surely be feeling miserable.... he must be blaming himself now for kashish ke father ka haal... woh zaroor apne aap ko khos raha hoga.. kii usne joh bhi kiya woh kyun kiya.... kashish kii mother is getting fulltoo worried kii najane kya hoga when her husband gets to know about the sachchayi... ab is scene mein mujhe kashish ka reaction bada achcha laga.... she telling her mother kii but in any circumstance they surely have to tell her father that sujal is her husband.. she has married sujal... well kashish yeh baat sujal ko dekhkar kehthi hai..aur sujal turns the other way round.... this shows kii sujal kitna zyada guilty feel kar raha hai.. sujal according to me is surely feeling kii yeh usne kya kiya.... he is surely blaming himself... aur sujal kashish se nazarein nahii mila paa raha hai , issi liye hii turns around.... bechara sujal..... aur kashish badi himmat wali hai... she does not want to hide the fact that usnesujal se shaddi kii hai bhale hii uske baad kuch bhi ho jaye... kashish is ready to face any situation... aur mere hisaab se tho kashish ko yeh himmat yeh hosla sujal ke saath kii wajah se hii mili hai... ab kashish kii mom says kii she knows what kashish is saying is right but she is sure that her father will not like it.... well is baat par mujhko kashish kii mom se kehna hai kii when she knows kashish joh keh rahii hai joh kar rahii hai woh baat sahii hai tho phir why is she trying to put negativity in kashish's mind... par is baar bhi kashish is not listening and she says kii her father has to accept the fact that she has git married to sujal... aur kashish yeh bhi kehthi hai kii she will tell her father the sach and not lie to him about her marriage..... kashish is ready to face the situation... aur is situation mein yeh bhi baat saaf hui kii kashish does not want to let go sujal... woh sujal ko besahara nahii karna chahthi.... me liking it very much the way kashish is trying to balance her relationships..... ab kashish kii mom bhi is baat se sehmat hothi hai... kashish apne papa se milne jaa hii rahii hothi hai... jab she sees kii sujal uske saath nahii aa raha hai... ab woh mudthi hai aur sujal se uske saath chalne ko kehthi hai... tab sujal is like main... this baat shows kii sujal has somewhere deepdown in his heart has realized and pretty well knows kii what he has done is wrong.. aur issi liye ab sujal is baat se hichkhicha raha hai.. and sujal ke dil mein darr bhi hai kii kya kashish ke papa usse accept karenge yaa nahii.... kyunke zindagi ke is modh par aakar sujal kashish ko khona nahii chahtha tha aur woh yeh bhi baat usko gawara nahii thii kii uski wajah se kashish ke papa kashish se apne saare rishthe-naathe thod de... yahii hai sujal ka darr... ab kashish still maintains her firm stand... and she says kii woh dono jayenge papa se milne... par sujal usse mana kar detha hai yeh kehke kii kashish uske papa se mil le woh wohii theek hai... lekin kashish nahii maanthi... and she tells him kii woh dono ek saath jayenge.... well yeh baat yeh dikhatha hai kii kashish ke liye sujal ka rishtha bhi bohat hii ehm , important ho gaya hai... though unka rishtha is on a contract basis but still there is a bond between them... yeh bond hai the bond of hearts... which binds the hearts together in a special relationship.... kashish ka bhale hii bas kuch mahine hue hai sujal se shaddi karke par woh sujal ka saath chodna nahii chahthi... kashish pretty well knows kii if she does not asks sujal to come with her sujal ke mann mein zaroor yeh baat aajayega kii may be kashish also holds him responsible for what has happened.. par kashish does not want sujal to feel like that and hurt him more... that is why she is acting brave.... aur woh sujal ko ehsaas dilana chahthi hai kii chahe whatever the situation comes woh dono us situation ka milkar saamna karenge... aur us situation se durr nahii bhaagenge.... this is was very nice.... 👏 ab sujal maan jaatha hai... and he starts walking with kashish... lekin us room ke entarance pe jaathe hii sujal rukh jaatha hai.. kashish is suprized kii sujal kyun rukh gaya hai... tho sujal usse kehtha hai kii tum jao.. main yahiin hoo..agar zaroorat pade tho usse bula lena... this shows or indirectly means kii kashish ko jab bhi sujal kii , uske saath kii zaroorat padegi tab tab sujal usse bas ek kadam peechche rahega aur agar kashish usse ek awaaz lagayegi tho woh aajayega uska haath thaam ne ke liye... yeh tho achchi baat hai.. ab kashish bhi sujal kii baat maan jaathi hai and she goes inside her dad is on the bed lete hue.... she goes to him and says papa.. tab uske papa uspar badak utthe hai aue kehthe hai kii mat kaho mujhe papa..tum jaisi ladki ka pita nahii hoon main.... uff.. her father is so rude to her.. aisa kaise keh sakthein hai woh... aur bechari kashish ke aankhon mein aaso aa jaathe hai... bechari kii zindagi mein kya dukho kii bouchaar kum hai kii ab uske papa uske saath aise kar rahein hai.... kashish is like papa aisa mat kahiye... ab kashish's father calls her a khudgarz... yeh kashish bechari khudgarz kab se ho gayi.... usne agar shaddi kii hai sujal se tho only for her father though ab she loves sujal intially she spoilt her life only because of her father's haalat... jis din yeh baat kashish ke father ko patah chalegi tab he will surely hung his head down and he will also be proud of his daughter.... ab her father says kii shaddi karna itna zaroori tha kii she could not even wait till she could tell them... kashish apni nazrein neechchi kar lethi hai.. and her father starts all the lecture bazzi... kii like -kyun sharam aa rahi hai,mujse nazre milaane mein...taab sharam nahi aai,jaab ye besharmon ki tarah haarakaat ki thi..... mujhe ek baat batao kashish ne kya ghalat harkat kii hai... ghalat tho woh ab kar rahi hai that is she is keeping quite for all her papa ke lagaye ilzaam.... he continues saying kii kashish main chahta tha meri beti ki shaadi aise ladke se ho jisse uske lie main pasand karun agar tumhe love marriage karni thi kamm se kamm mujse apne baap se ijazaat le li hoti.... well is baat par mujhko kashish ke father se kehna hai kii he wants her to marry someone whom he choses but he is forgetting that kashish ka usse pasand karna bhi zaroori hai kyunke it is afterall kashish kii zindagi anmd she has to live with the person.. aur kashish ne koi ghalthi nahii kii sujal se apne pyaar se shaddi karke... aur rahi izzazat kii baat tho phir tho ek baat saaf hona chahiye kii kashish married sujal with her mom's consent... aur phir kashish ke father izzazat dene ke haal mein nahii the.. aur tho aur kashish married sujal only because of her father.. nahii tho joh beizzathi sujal ne kashish kii hai usse tho kabhi ek ladki uske taraf wapas dekhthi bhi nahii... kashish father is not at all understanding... ab kashish ke aankhon se halke se aaso beh rahe hothe hai... aur ab kashish ke dad usse kehthe hai kii kahaan hai woh... he says very sarcastically kahaan hai tumhare pati parmeshwar.. unse milvaogi nahi... this is soo rude... i don't link.. not even an inch of it.... ab kashish manages to say kii he is outside.. tho ab uske papa aur bhi sarcastically comment karthe hai kii bulayiye unhe.. suna hai bohat bade aadmi hai.. kya unhe bulane ke liye card chapvaane padenge... uff.. itna ghussa kyun hai kashish ke dad ko.... sujal tho kabhi dikhawa nahii kartha.. woh bas thoda sa darr raha hai isi wajah se bahar hai.... ab kashish ka sujal ko support karthe hue kehna kii sujal ke baare mein aisa na kahe... ab kashish calls sujal saying jii suniye... this is a typical achchi biwi... oh.. i liked the way kashish called sujal.... ab sujal kii awaaz aathi hai tho kashish usse kehthi hai to come inside... sujal ab sar neeche rakhkar andar aatha hai dheere dheere... wah sujal.. kya baat hai.. oh.. i love sujal.. look at the izzat he is giving kashish's father joh sujal kissi ke aage sar nahii jhukatha is having his head down... sujal is too good... woh badi kii izzat karna khoob jaantha hai.... sujal tells namaste papa... he addresses kashish's father as papa.. this shows sujal kashish kii family ko apni family maantha hai... he seeks the love from kashish's family.. joh pyaar usse na mil paya.... ab kashish ke father par bijliyaan ghirthi hai.. and he is like tum... sujal is shocked... he is worrying himself kii aage kya hoga and kashish bhi darr jaathi hai... woh sehmi hui hothi hai... ab kashish ke papa kehthe hai kii sujal wahii ladka hai na jisne uske saath party mein batameezi kii thi... kashish sujal ko dekhthi hai... aur sujal is guilty aur woh apni nazrein neechchi kar letha hai.... well mujhe kashish ke father pe bada ghussa aa raha hai.. he is making sujal feel so miserable.. sujal abhi abhi tho us aurat ke wajah se mile ghav se ubhar ne laga tha.... kii ab kashish ke father is hurting sujal... ghalthi ho gayi bechare se.. ghalthi insaan se hii hothi hai.. kashish ke father badapan dikha kar usse maaf bhi tho kar sakthe hai.. lekin nahii.. woh tho koi kasar nahii chod rahe sujal ko guilty feel karane mein... me getting ghussa on kashish's father and bechare sujal aur kashish....
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kashish's father... ab kashish uske father se kehne kii koshish karthi hai kii sujal aisa nahii hai.. and her father yells saying kii aisa nahii hai... jaanthi bhi kya ho tum iske baare mein.. sujal kuch bhi nahii keh raha bas chup chaap saari baatein sun raha hai.... ab kashish father starts saying things like do you know about his family.. yeh tho poore seher mein badnaam hai... they were new to the city par ek professor ne inhe bataya sab... he says kii sujal unke college ka trustee hai... and he also continues saying kii tab baton baton mein unhe pata laga kii he stops saying actually he wants to say kii woh ek vaishya ka beta hai par woh shabd use ne karna chahna he says chii...mujhe to bolne mein bhi sharam aa rahi hai....... me getting really very damn angry on kashish's father... how can he believe on suni-sunayi baat... sujal itna achcha hai.. aur uspar aisi baatein karthe hue logon ko sharam aani chahiye... tho kya hua kii woh ek prostitute ka beta hai... woh tho us mahol se durr hai.. woh tho achcha hai na.. lekin nahii yeh kashish ke father to uff....... ab kashish is like papa aap sujal ko ghalat samaj rahe hai... now again kashish father starts saying kii jaanti ho tum,iski maa ek vaishya hai .... tho kya hua... uski padaish ek vaishya ne kii ho par uski parwarish tho us sabse alag hui hai na... just because he is a prostitute's son yeh baat tho sahii nahii hai kii sujal ke maathe par ek stamp laga de kii woh bura hai aur har koi uski burayi kare... sujal ko in saari baaton se takleef ho rahi hai.. woh apni aankhein band kar letha hai.. he has tears in his eyes.. kashish usse dekhthi hai aur uska haalat bhi samaj sakthi hai... yeh kashish ke father is totally getting on my nerves.. bechare sujal ko dard de rahein hai... ab kashish ka father continues saying kii kya sujal ne kabhi bataya usse apne baare mein.. then he says kii nahii bataya hoga.. he refers to sujal as dhokebaaz and also says kii jaise maa waise beta... how dare he....GOD........he continues saying kii najaane kitne ladkiyo ke saath aur ab kashish tumhare saath bhi... is baat par mujhe kehna hai kii aaj thak sujal ne kiissi bhi ladki ko nahii dekha siwaye kashish ke..... he has been so true to kashish... lekin kashish ke father sujal ko samajne kii koshish kii nahii kar rahein hai.. bas sujal par ilzaam par ilzaam lagaye jaa rahein hain bas lagaye jaa rahein hai... ab kashish's father is like i don't woh uski mom ko kaise bataye... then he tells kashish kii woh sujal ko chod de... well is baat par mujhe kashish ke father se kehna hai kii how can he tell her kii woh sujal ko chod de yeh kashish kii zindagi hai.. kashish apne zindagi mein sujal se shaddi karke aage bad chuki hai..if her father does not like sujal it is his problem.. woh kashish se uski khushi kaise cheen sakthein hai.. ab sujal ke dil mein kashish ke father kii har baat nasoor bankar chub rahi thi.. par phir bhi woh chup tha.. kyunke woh kashish ke father ka lihaaz kar raha tha.. agar koi aur hotha joh yeh saari baatein sujal ko suna raha hotha tho sujal kabhi aisi bakwaas nahii suntha.. woh tho bas kashish ke liye chup baita hai and he listening to all the nonsense spoken by kashish's dad.. sujal ko ghussa bhi aa raha tha and he is controlling all his anger by closing his fist tightly... aur yeh kashish ke dad se tho mujhko jaise kii nafrat sii ho gayi hai... how can he talk like this... my ghussa has reached the heights for him... really my ghussa is on a very high-rate... 😡 ab sujal tho yeh saari baatein sun letha hai.. lekin kashish se yeh sab bardhast nahii hotha... she could not take it anymore... and she shouts kii woh sab jaanthi hai... sujal never expected this out-burst from kashish and also kashish ke dad is suprised... well achcha hua kashish ke dad ke saath he deserved it.. tab se sujal chup hai tho joh mooh mein aaye baake jaa rahe the.. ab kashish kii baat unko sunni hii hogi...ab kashish says saab jaanti hoon.......sujal ne khud bataya hai muje...khud....papa.... yeh tho sujal kii achchayi hai kii sujal ne kashish ko saari baatein batayi... warna koi aur hotha tho zaroor baat chupatha.. lekin sujal had the guts to face the reality and he told kashish.... kashish continues saying....kya ye zaruri hai ki maa jaisi ho beta bhi..... right this is exactly my point too.... kashish then says kii aap unn logo ki baton mein aa gae,jo sujal ko jaante nahi,unn duniya walo ki baton mein,jinhe sirf logon ke baatein mein baak naa aata hai,aur kuchnahi.... papa,main sujal ko jaanti hoon,itne din saath rahi hoon sujal ke,agar aapko apni beti paar bharosa hai ,vishvaas hai to,meri baat maniye,aap sujal ko samajne ki koshish to kijie.... i agree with kashish completely.. logon ke bhakwaas par kabhi yakeen nahii karna chahiye woh tho kutte ki tarah bhokthe hii rehthe hai.... and then she says she knows sujal aur uske papa se kehthi hai kii if he has belief in her he would believe her yakeen... well yeh baat bhi sahii hai.... agar kashish ke father ko kashish pe vishwaas hai tho unhe kashish ke faislo uske yakeen yaani kii sujal par bhi yakeen hona chahiye... ab kashish ke father phir kehthein hai kii kya samjun main..he says kii sujal kii paidaish itni ghinoni hai usko samjoon..... well i think kashish's father should be reminded kii kamal ka phool khichad mein rehkar kar bhi sundar hotha hai aur chandan ke paid par sarp hotha hai lekin us paid{tree} par us saap ke poison ka koi asar nahii hotha woh sheetal kii sheetal hii hothi hai.. sujal bhi aisa hii hai.. buri paidaish se koi bura nahii bantha... yeh baat kashish's father should understand... ab kashish's ghussa increases and she shouts saying kii bas papa bas..ek shabd bhi nahii kahiye ab sujal ke khilaaf.. too good kashish way to go... sujal is hairaan kyunke usne kabhi kashish ko itne ghusse mein nahii dekha.. he tries to stop kashish calling her name.... par kashish nahii sunthi.. she stops him haath dikhakhe... kashish sujal se kehthi hai kii nahii sujal bolne do... then she tells her father... aap mera pita hain,bade hain,uska lihaaz kaeke aab taak main chup thi,aur aapke damad yaani sujal,bhi aapka lihaaz karke,abhi taak chup hai......yup yahii wajah hai kii sujal bechara itna chup hai and also kashish is hearing all nonsense aganist her pati....... warna koi aur hotha tho najane uska haal ab thak kya hogaya hotha...... then kashish continues saying paar agar aapko yeh laagta hai ki aap mere pati ke bare mein kuch bhi kehte rahenge,aur main chup rahungi,to galat lagta hai aapko......papa jis tarah aapke lie mamma ki izzat maine rakhti hai....aap seh nahi sakte ki mamma ko koi bhi apmaan kare,to mere lie bhi sujal ki izaat ,uska samman bohot maine rakhta hai... too coolll kashish.. yeh baat tho sahi hai har koi apne life partner par koi bhi aanch nahii aane detha.... and kashish kii baatein is right and very nice... me liking it very damn much the way she is siding sujal..bina kissi bhi baat kii partwah kare... she is supporting him... bohat bohat hi achche... haan aur sahi kaha har insaan ka kartavya hotha hai kii apne better half kii raksha karna... aur kashish apni yeh zimedaari badi bakhoobi se nibha rahii hai and me very glad with this fact... ab kashish ke father kehthein hai kii tum iske liye mere saath aise baat kar rahi ho..uff..yeh kashish ke dad ko ab bhi samaj nahii aayi kii kashish kii zindagi mein sujal kii kya emiyat hai and that's why he is talking like this getting on my nerves... ab kashish kehne lagthi hai kii nahi papa , baat pita ya pati ki nahi hai,baat sahi aur galat ki hai,aur main galat ka saath kabhi nahi dungi,chahe wo galat kisi ka bhi ho,aur iss baar galat aap hain,aur sujal sahi.. is baat par tho talliyaan hona chahiye.... kashish ne bilkul sahii kaha sujal is right woh tho is baat kii saza bhughat raha hai jis mein uski tho koi ghalthi hii nahii..... and kashish ke father is only wrong..... and me proud kii kashish is supporting the right and has the guts to go aganist her father......... kashish continues saying kii
sujal aap se chotte hain paar iska matlab ye to nahi ki sahi hone paar bhi sujal ko galat thehraya jaye.....sujal aapki itni izzat karr rahe hain,ki apne itna kuch sunaya ,itna kuch kaha,zyaadaataar galat,phir bhi sujal ne ek shabd bhi nahi kaha,paar main apne saamne galat hota hua kaise dekhun........wah kashish tum tho poori kii poori tarah se chah gayi yaar... kya baatein kahi hai bilkul sahi saari baatein 100%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% sahi hai... sujal is listening to all sab chup-chaap agar woh chahtha tho bohat kuch keh saktha tha lekin nahii he is being so goos and keeping quite.... ab kashish ke dad chup ho jaathe hai.. tab kashish aage kehthi hai ki ab kashish kehthi hai kii us raat when sujal shouted at her insulted her tab un dono ke beech jhagda hua tha.... sujal ghusse mein tha aur nashe mein bhi tha aur she was also hurt... issi liye baat utni aage bad gayi.. and she tries to justify what sujal has done saying kya do pyaar karne walon ke beech jhagda nahii ho saktha... ab sujal ka kashish ko hairani bhari nazar se dekhna... his look is surely like kashish usse itna zyada kaise samaj lethi hai... i think sujal must be surely feeling kii kashish usko usse behtar jaanthi hai , samajthi hai.... ab kashish continues saying kii uske honeymoon pe rohit lout aaya aur sujal ne usse bachaya agar sujal na hotha tho patah nahii kya hotha.. then she also says kii sujal is funding his treatment.... and she pleads her father kii woh sujal ko samjhe... she says kii if sujal was given a chance woh unka dil bhi jeet lega... sujal bhi is baat kii haammi bhartha hai... and kashish father bhi soch mein pad gaye.... kashish totally wonderful... bohat achche tarike se sujal ka defense present kiya hai kashish ne.. badi himmat dikhayi hai... she refers to sujal as mere sujal..ahh... how swweetttttttttttttttttttttttttt......... ab sujal wahaan is fumbling kii woh kya kahein.. he just manages to say kii woh bahar jaa raha hai and he goes out or rather runs out of the room.. well i think sujal aise chala gaya kyunke uske aankhon mein shayad aasoo the kii kashish ne uska itna zyada saath diya.... he is too over-whlemed i think that's why he went out... and kashish was totally awesome in this scene... woh tho poori kii poori tarah se chah gayi...👏 ab for the next part mera guess yeh hoga kii shayad sujal , aur kashish ke father will be in talking terms... i think kii kashish ke father will surely understand kii sujal itna bhi bura nahii hai... kashish ke father will see kii kashish aur sujal ek saath kitne zyada khush hai... and shayad kashish ke father will accept sujal as his damad aur he will also treat sujal like a son... aur sujal bhi in sab mein khush hoga.. kyunke joh rishthe ke liye sujal bachpan se tarsa hai woh usse ab jaakar milengi... sujal shayad kashish ke father ka dost bhii banega aur woh beta bhi which he might have dreamt of having..... sujal hospital mein kashish ka , kashish kii mom ka sabka poora dhyaan rakhega.. he will be the perfect ideal damaad... sujal , kashish will surely start getting close.... unke beech ka pyaar aur bhi zyada mazboot hotha jayega.... i think kuch time ke liye tho sujal , kashish kii zindagi mein khushiyaan hii khushiyaan hongi... ab neelu bolo yaar mera guess kaisa hai.. kya mera guess sahii hai yaa phir ghalat......😉
neelu yaar i hope you liked the whole of the comment.... sorry for the delay... mera net is irritating me to the maximum extent... even now me typing the comment aur net connection nahii hai.. aathe hii i'll post this comment.... and you do post the next part soon will be waiting for it very very eagerly....😃
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hey neelu thanks for the part yaar. GOD!i can't beleve that kashish ke papa ne sujal se is taraha baat ki. i am getting damn angry now 😡 .he is so rude 😡😕😡 . how can he say that sujal must have been with other girls and is now being with kashish. height ho gayi yaar! he is so stupid and extreme rude to sujal. though he knows that about sujal's past he should try and understand that his daughter is not so idiot that she married him. it was for his own good that she married him. kher! jiska dar tha woh to gaya and the best thing in part was when kashish takes side of sujal and get into an argument with her dad. that was so good to see yaar 👏 . again she has proven her self as an elegible wife of sujal garewal 😊😉👏 . the way she stands for him and with him was simply amazing and too good.now sujal is like in total shock 😲 cause he has never seen kashish in so much anger, well he is also surprised that how come kashish took his side though he has got her into so much pain. it was really cooooooooooooooool! ⭐️ neelu. you are the best👍🏼. you know what i always keep thinking about your story 😍 . how can you imagine so well i just don't understand yaar. sachi mazaa a gaya 👏👏👏 . now i think that ki kashish ke papa will try to understand what kashish was telling him and will think about him and will give sujal a chance to prove himself and i am sure sujal will 😊😛😊 . he wil be the best damad ever. he will take care of her family very well and this will bring more feelings in kashish's heart about sujal and i am sure they both will really come close😳😳in the further parts after her dad is all well and her dad will also treat him as his son and damad and will give him all the love which he never got in his life before kashish came. that's all i want to say nellu 😉 . you are too good and excellent job 👍🏼 . i am really excited about the next part.ok. and yeah! continue soon yaar plz........... can't wait any longer. bye and take care 👏
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wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w.................great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... 👏 .......................i don't like how kashish dad doesn't like sujal.......he's so rude with sujal 😡........who could he say those things abt him........and poor sujal 😭 he's just listing to him.......without saying a word....i just love kashish part...... 😊 ....how she was defending 4 sujal........she can't listen a wword against him .......... 😊 .......how sweet........ 😳 😳 😳 ..........great update........ 👏 👏 .....i wanna something romantic btw them.........plzzzzzzz............continue soon..........can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w.................great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... 👏 .......................i don't like how kashish dad doesn't like sujal.......he's so rude with sujal 😡........who could he say those things abt him........and poor sujal 😭 he's just listing to him.......without saying a word....i just love kashish part...... 😊 ....how she was defending 4 sujal........she can't listen a wword against him .......... 😊 .......how sweet........ 😳 😳 😳 ..........great update........ 👏 👏 .....i wanna something romantic btw them.........plzzzzzzz............continue soon..........can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w.................great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... 👏 .......................i don't like how kashish dad doesn't like sujal.......he's so rude with sujal 😡........who could he say those things abt him........and poor sujal 😭 he's just listing to him.......without saying a word....i just love kashish part...... 😊 ....how she was defending 4 sujal........she can't listen a wword against him .......... 😊 .......how sweet........ 😳 😳 😳 ..........great update........ 👏 👏 .....i wanna something romantic btw them.........plzzzzzzz............continue soon..........can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

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