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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome ............... 👏 i wanna see smth romantic 😳continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
srry neel 4 commentng late again....da stry iz gng gr8 n da romantic parts u added were jus awesome.. 👏 ..loved it...bt yeh kya abhi tu laga tha ke sab kch theek hoga n wht u did.. 😕 😕 😕 ..yeh sujal bhi na akal ka istimal karey na.. .usey nazar nahee araha kya...bechari kashish was so shock when he talk abt tina n all.. 😭 ...yeh sujal na...isko bolo shak karna band karey.. 😡 ..n make both unite again.. 😳 ..as we cant see them lik this... 😃 ..ur doing gr8 job and continue doing it... 👏 ..do cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow! 😉😉😉 superb part neelu 😛😛😛 . mujhe hasi to is baat par ayii when kashish ask sujal that woh khubsurat hai kya and then sujal replied kaun aur kya.....that's so stupid of sujal😆😆[LOL😆.i was damn sure yaar that when kashish will ask sujal about her he will reactlike this 😃. GOD he is so bhulakkad .jo khudne bola wo khud hi bhul gaya . but,then afterwards when he says that yeah she is beautiful and very nice that was really sad neelu😭. pata nahi how can kashish bear this all.she is really a bold and patient lady yaar. bohot sehenshilta hai usme 😊 .and NOW THIS SUJAL IS TOOOOOOOO MUCH 😡 how can he say that kashish is not hot and sexy. i mean who is he to predict whether she is hot or sexy.again he called her behengi😭😭.how dare he to say this thing again😡😡😡. didn't he see when kahish wore short black skirt and top. that time, i am sure she must be looking(in sujal's word) hot and sexy 😳😳😳.i hate him for this neelu 😡😕😡.itna to hurt koi kisi ko nahi kerta. he is making her life a living hell 😭. neelu the part was awesome yaar.it was too good 👍🏼.now neelu i think that in next part ye dono aise hi tadap te rahenge and will try to kill each other by pain.especially sujal will to surely do something stupid and will disgust kashish by his talking when he will come home fully drunk. but neelu ab i think, ki kashish ne bhi chup nahi baithna chahiya.she should try to ask him that why is he behaving with her like that but this time in a bit rude way 😡 . toh hi is sujal ko samaj ayegi ki what he is doing is completely wrong 😕😕 .and u know what, ab kashish ne really aise tayar hona chahiye ki sujal ke hosh udjaye 😲😲. usne sujal ko yeh batana chahiye that she can be what he wants her to be, but she really cares of him, his feelings, his emotions 😭😭 . ho sakta hai ki yeh baat uske dimag me jaye aur use ye ehsas ho jaye that he is wrong 🤢😕🤢 . neelu yaar ab kuch aisa jadoo karna ki really sujal will learn a lesson from it or atleast he will feel ki that what he is doing is completely wrong and he should't hurt kashish like this by saying she is not beautiful and stuff. neelu part to bahut pyaara tha 😛.it was really good especially the conversation between sujal and kashish.and yeah! continue soon yaar!plz.......can't wait any longer.bye. takecare.😊😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 wats happening to sujal's character.i hope he realizes his mistake soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
neelu yaar please next part jaldi se post karo na... me waiting eagerly .. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-[thanxs 2 fabremixed 4 commentin,keep commentin]

Aisa kehkaar sujal office chala jaata hai

Aur kashish wahin apni bebasi ,mayus,asooi aur tooti hui umeedon ke sath wahin reh jaati hai
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Sujal drive kar raha hai 2 office

Bohot hi rashly drive karr raha hai

Traffic rules ke saath to dur dur se koi naata nahi

Abb ek police wala usse rok leta hai

p-sahab uthro!

s-kya hai?kya pareshaani hai?

p-saab khud rules todte ho,phir ulta humi pe chikhte ho

s-haan haan!main chikhunga..main saab pe chikhunga…main puri duniya pe chukhungaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kyunki dimag kharab ho gaya hai mera.pagal ho gaya hoon main!!!!!!!![bangs his fist on the car & kicks the tyres]…………aajkal wo hi karta hoon,jo..jo karna nahi chahta!

p-saab,thik se gadi chalaya karo!rash drivin kyun karte ho?

s-karunga!!!!!!karunga main rash drivin.jiski biwi ke saath jiska…………..wo rash drivin hi karega naa!

p-kya hua saab?biwi se jhagda hua?

s-jhagda!..jhagda!..[moves his hand arnd his hair in frustration]…….dil dukhaya maine uska.rulaya usse…..damn it![kickin on the car].kyun rulaya usse?..kyun?.gussa aa raha hai muje.damn!gussa ..aa raha hai khud paar……………..to rash drivin nahi karunga to kya.bhajan kirtan karunga!..jst leave me alone!

p-paar saab ye chalan!

Sujal sunne bina car mein baithkaar chala jaata hai
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Abb sujal office pohonchta hai

Office mein bhi saaraa din wohi haal

Bina wajah harr kisi pe chila raha hai

Harr kisi pe apna gussa nikal raha hai

Cheezein idhar udhar phek raha hai

Aur kaam mein to mann hi nahi laag raha

Saar pe haath rakhke bikhri hui filon aur cheezon ke beech baitha hua hai

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Shaam hoti hai-

Sujal ghar aata hai

Rings the bell

Kashish darwaza kholti hai

Paar jaab wo kashish ki taraf ankh uthake dekhta hai to kuch palon le lie dekhta hi reh jaata hai

Uski saari thaakaan kahin ojhal ho gai hai

Sujal ka mann uski kashish ko tabhi apni bahon mein bharkaar chumne ko karr raha hai

Kyunki aaj wo haseen se bhi zyada haseen laag rahi hai

Kashish ne aaj wo dress pehni hai jo sujal ne usske lie honeymoon paar li thi

Kashish aaj wo backless violet gown pehenkaar massom khile hue evening flower jaisi laag rahi hai

Wo aaj itni khubsurat laag rahi hai ki khubsurati bhi ussko salaam kare

Aur uspaar kashish ka wo pyaara sa muskurata chehra uski khubsurati pe char chand laga raha tha

Sujal to is totally awestruck

k-socha aaj ye dress pehnke tumhe dikhaun!kaisi laag rahi hoon main?

Sujal ka mann to ye kehne ko karr raha tha ki tum aaj bohot hi khubsurat ,sabse haseen laag rahi ho.aur sujal ka mann karr raha tha ki kashish ko apni bahon ki gehrayon mein thaamkaar uski khubsurati ko nihaare

Paar sujal ke dimag ko uska maksad phir se yaad aaya,phir se ussne kashish ke dhoke ke bare mein socha.aur kashsih ko dukh dene ke iraaade ko apne mann ko maarkaar, aur pakka kar lia

k- kaisi laag rahi hoon main?sujal!

s-tum?tum.[looking at her upar se neeche taak].tum,as usual,bekaar laag rahi ho!

k-huh?[k mayus ho jaati hai uska haasta hua chehra utaar jaata hai]

s-ye saab western kapde tum jaiseyon ke lie nahi,inn mein to meri Tisha achchi lagti hai!

k-Tisha???ye Tisha kaun jhai?

s-Tisha kaha tha naa meri nayai sexy girl frd

k-lekin tumne to Tina kaha tha!

s-emm..aa..emm.tina?haan,tina ho ya tisha ek hi baat hai,hai to tumse better!

k-reaaly?aisa kya hai usmein jo mujmein nahi?

s-saab kuch,[stepping close 2 k,bilkul k ke chehre ke pass jaakaar].wo khubsurat hai,tum badsurat ho!wo sexy hai tum behenji ho!,usmein clas hai tum unclassy ho!wo sophisticated hai tum raw ho!wo high society ki hai,tum middle class ho!wo intelligent hai,tum idiot ho!

K ki ankhon se asoo lagataar bahe jaa rahe hain,chahe wo kitna bhi koshish kare unko rokne ki!abb usse aur sujal ki kadvi baatein aur baartaav sehen nahi ho raha!

Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
neelu yaar dekh tune part post kar dii aur main aagay apne comments lekar teri story par.. i hope tujhe mere yeh comments achche lage... 😃
tho part yahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan sujal , kashish ko kamre mein bebas , besahara chod kar chale jaatha hai.. aur kashish wahii rothi bilakthi hui hothi hai.. pehle tho bechari raat bhar nahii soyi aur rothi rahi aur ab subah bhi usko chaine nahi.. sujal usko raat se bhi aur zyada bohat zyada taiz pohanchcha kar chala gaya... bechari kashish... tni zyada tadap rahii hai....chalo sujal gaya tho gaya kashish ko chot pohanchcha ne ke liye uske dil ko tho sukoon milni hii chahiye naa..lekin nahii yahaan pe sujal ka haal bhi poori tarah se ulta hotha hai... sujal ko dekhkar tho mujhko aise lag raha hai kii uski haalat tho kashish se bhi bhattar hai... his haalat tho bighad rahii hai bhat se baththar banthe hue jaa rahii hai...mere hisaab se tho sujal kashish se zyada khud ko sazaa de raha hai.... joh takleef woh kashish ko de raha hai woh kuch bhii nahii hai joh takleef woh khud ko de raha hai... main aisa is wajah se keh rahii hoon kyunke sujal ek taraf kashish ke dhoke kii ghalatfaimi lekar tadap raha hai tho doosri taraf he is feeling even more miserable kyunke woh khud kashish ko tadpa raha hai , usse rula raha hai.. jis kashish ko sujal kabhi rotha hua dekh nahii saktha hai , usse kabhi bhi koi bhi mushkhil mein nahi dekh saktha tha aaj wohii sujal kashish ko dil par itne ghehre-ghehre zakhm de raha hai tho bas socho kii sujal kitna zyada tadap raha hoga.. uska dil tho itna zyada ro raha hoga... maana sujal is hurting kashish at every instance but then woh khud ko kashish se double zyada chot aur takleef pohanchcha raha hai.. he is hurting himself double times more than what pain he is giving kashish.... kashish tho phir bhi apne zakhmo par ro dethi hai lekin sujal tho na kissi se kuch kehtha hai aur na hii ro kar apne jazbaat bayaan kartha hai.. sujal kuch kartha hai tho bas apna dukh dil mein hii dabake rakhkar ghuttha rehtha hai... ab sujal gaadi bohat hii rashly chala raha hai... he does not care for any kind off traffic rule... woh tho badii hii teezi se chala raha hai.. you know what sujal kii aisi rash driving dekhkar andaza lagaya jaa saktha hai kii sujal dil se kitne zyada hadh thak tadap raha hai...sujal bhii bebas hai jahaan ek taraf kashish apni bebasi ko dikhathi hai rokar sujal is showing his bebasi driving the car rashly.... it seems like sujal itna rash is wajah se chala raha hai kyunke may be he wants to find a solution from the situation he is facing now... sujal ke is type of behaviour ko dekh kar aisa bhii lagtha hai jaise sujal wants to rewind the events and days of his life joh do dino se ho raha hai.. may be sujal wants to really get back to the time jab woh apne honeymoon par tha... jab un dono ke beech kii dooriyaan bohat durr aur woh dono hadh se zyada kareeb the... sujal surely according to me wants to go back in that time.... ab sujal aisa rash drive kar raha hai tho police ka tho usse pakadna lazmi hai... ab that police asks him to get down ab sujal is like in a very irritated mood woh poochtha hai kii kya pareshaani hai... ab the police is like saab khud rules todte ho phir ulta humi pe chikhte ho.. well yeh baat tho sahii kahii us police waale ne... ghalthi sujal kii aur ab woh kaise aise cheekthe chillathe hue reh saktha hai... yeh baat tho waise hii hui na ulta chor kotwaal ko daante... aur lagtha hai sujal mahashay tho ek cheez poori tarah se bhool hii gaye hai aur woh yeh baat kii har koi kashish ke jaise nahii hotha joh bina ghalthi kare bhi daant sune... yeh tho bas kashish hii hai joh chup-chaap sujal kii harkatein bardhast kar rahii hai... warna agar koi aur hotha jaise kii yeh police waala woh tho kabhi chup hii nahii rehtha... ab sujal ka mood tho pehle se hii bada kharaab hotha hai tho ab woh apne saara ghussa us bechare police waale pe nikaal detha hai... he start shouting kii woh cheekega sab par cheekega saari duniyaan pe cheekega...... well kya sujal ko lagtha hai kii woh duniyaan ke upar cheekega aur duniyaan chup rahegi ya phir sujal yeh sochtha hai kii duniyaan uske intezaar mein baiti hui hai kii kab sujal aayega aur un par cheekega..oh..forget it.. sujal has completely lost it....... sujal tum ek baat bhool rahe ho har koi tumhari aisi behaviour sehen nahii karega woh tho bas kashish hai who puts up with what all things you keep doing.... sujal says kii uska dimaak kharaab ho gaya hai.. pagal ho gaya hoon main.. aisa kehthe kehthe sujal hits his hand on the car or rather bangs his hand aur khud ko chot pohanchcha raha hai.. he hits his leg onto the car wheel in frustration... and then he says kii woh aaj kal woh kar raha hai joh woh karna nahii chahtha hai.. uff..sujal jab tumyeh baat jaanthe ho kii tum joh kar rahe ho tumhe waisa nahii karna chahiye tho tum kyun kar rahe ho aisa aur tum kyun khud ko aur kashish ko bhi takleef pohanchcha rahe ho..... ab the police tries to tell him kii he has to drive properly na.. tab sujal kehtha hai hai kii woh rash driving karega... he says kii jiski biwi ke saath uska..yeh kehkar woh rukh jaatha hai and continues his talk saying kii woh rash driving nahii karega tho kya karega.. sujal has completely lost it now me totally sure of it.. sujal aise kaise kar saktha hai he is discussing his personal problem with some aira-gaira.... GOD...sujal get a life... ab the police is like jhagda hua.. yeh dekho sujal has himself invited trouble by giving the police to intrude in his personal life.. yeh ek aur musibat.. ab sujal is like jhagda... he runs a hand on his hair and says dil dhukhaya uska... he gets angered with himself he kicks the car in ghussa and says kii kyun rulaya usse.. it's something like sujal khud se yeh sawaal pooch raha hai.. and it also shows kii he is feeling miserable to see kashish ke aankhon mein aasoo aur usse bhi badi baat which he is unable to digest is that kashish ko woh aasoo dene waala koi aur nahii balki woh khud hai.. that makes him feel even more worse and miserable.. ab sujal aage kehtha hai kii gussa aa raha hai muje.damn.....gussa ..aa raha hai khud paar……………..to rash drivin nahi karunga to kya.bhajan kirtan karunga....jst leave me alone.. sujal bechara is completely angered with himself... woh kya kare uske tho samaj mein kuch nahii aa raha hotha hai.. he is like leave me alone... sujal ka yeh leave me alone is not for the police but actually according to me it is for his dimaak.. sujal shayad nahii chahtha kii uska dimaak uske dil par haavi ho jaye that is why uske dil aur dimaak ke beech joh jung si chidi hui hai sujal chahtha hai kii usmein uska dimaak usse akela chod de uska dimaak har jaye.. ab the police is like lekin sir yeh chalaan.. ab sujal is of the attitude you and your chalaan can go to hell aur woh apni gaadi mein baitkar with a care not attitude towards the police he drives away from there.. ab sujal office jaatha hai tho bechare ka haal aur bhi zyada bura ho jaatha hai.. woh office mein har kissi pe chilla raha hotha hai..cheezein idhar-udhar phek raha hotha hai.. sar pe haath rakhe hue aas pass saari file - cheezein bikhraye hue baita hotha hai.. sujal ko dekhkar tho mujhko aise lag raha hai jaise he is sitting as if uski saari zindagi , uski duniyaan khatam ho gayi ho... waise dekha jaye tho sujal jis tarah kii harkatein kar raha hai his life , his zindagi joh abhi kuch din pehle hii khushaal hone lagii thi sujal khud apne haatho se apni zibdagi ko andhera mein dhakhel raha hai.. sujal khud apne haatho se apne bani banayi grehasthi ko aag mein juloos raha hai.. par phir me mujhko sujal ke haal par bhi bada rona aa raha hai... though he is giving kashish pain he himself is experience the every inch and pinch of the pain he is giving to kashish.... me feeling very bad at sujal's state too..
😭 ab shaam ka waqt ho jaatha hai..sujal ghar pohanch jaatha hai aur woh door-bell bajatha hai... kashish hamesha kii tarah darwaza kholthi hai.. ab jab sujal kashish ko dekhtha hai tho maano jaise sujal ko ek jhatka sa lag jaatha hai.. bechara ko kashish ko dekhkar current sii lag jaathi hai... sujal ke tho maano jaise hosh hii udd gaye ho... sujal tho kashish ko dekhkar jaise kho sa gaya ho... jaise hii sujal kii nazar kashish par padii sujal kii nazar tho kashish pe hii atak gayi kuch pallo ke liye.. sujal kii maano jaise kashish ko dekh kar din bhar kii saari thakkan uska ghussa , irritation foul mood sab kuch gayab ho hii jaatha hai jaise kii choo mantar kali kalantar.. aur ab sujal ka mann is being naughty what he feels like doing is kashish ko apni bahoon mein tight tarike se lekar kashish ko choomna..hye..kya baat hai..sujal kaa mann is just too good..aur sujal ke mann mein aise baat aa rahii hai na tho mujhko is baat par sujal se kehna hai kii sujal naik kaam mein doorie kaisi , subh kaam hamesha foran kar dena chahiye.. tho what are you waiting for sujal lag jao kaam pe.. sujal ke hisaab se tho aaj kahish haseen kya sabse zyada haseen lag rahii hothi hai.. waise bhii sujal kii nazro se dekho tho uske liye kashish is always beautiful.. aur rahi baat aaj kii tho kashish ka chaand se bhi khoobsurat lagna is totally lazmi kyunke afterall kashish is wearing the dress sujal gifted her on the honeymoon.. well lagtha hai kashish ne woh dress issi liye pehni hui hai kyunke woh sujal ko seduce karna chahthi hai.. woh sujal ko is baat ka ehsaas dilana chahthi hai kii sirf uska naam kashish nahii balki usmein bhii kaafi hadh thak kashish hai which can attract him.. she wants to show him kii woh bas naam kii kashish nahii hai... very good kashish..bohat achche jaa rahi ho.. kashish in that backless violet gown was looking like a phool joh abhi abhi khila hua ho.. sujal ka tho mann kar raha tha kii woh usko salaam kare kashish itni zyada khoobsurat , ravishing lag rahi thi... itni khoobsurat kii khoobsurathii bhi usko salaam karne pe majboor ho jayegi... chand kii chandini par bhi daag hotha hai lekin kashish was looking as pure as possible.... sujal waise peekar tho nahii aaya hai par me sure sujal kashish ko aise dekhkar usko tho bin piye nasha chad raha hai... sujal is completely awestruck and dumbstruck... sujal ko tho kuch samaj mein hii nahii aa raha tha kii woh kya kare.. kashish was looking absolutely killing... ab kashish tells him kii socha aaj tumhe yeh dress pehenke dikhaoon.. well kashish is being so honest here.. agar woh chahthi tho koi bhi aur bahana bana de sakthi thii kii she was going out and usse kuch mil nahii raha tha pehenne ke liye tho usne yeh dress pehen li.. lekin nahii kashish acts frank and puts it straight to sujal that she thought aaj woh yeh dress pehenkar usko dikhayegi... she makes it very clear to sujal that usne yeh dress sirf aur sirf uske liye hii pehni hui hai... ab kashish sujal se poochthi hai kii woh kaisi lag rahi hai... well this quality of kashish tho har ladki , har lady mein hotha hai kii woh hamesha apne chahne waale se yeh zaroor jaanna chagegi kii woh kaisi dikh rahi hai... yeh tho ladkiyo kii khasiyat hothi hai unhe apni tareef sunna behad pasand hotha hai.. though they know kii woh achche lag rahein hai lekin jab thak unke tareefho ke ek lambi list na sunayi jaye woh satisfied nahii hothi.. yahaan par kashish ka haal bhi kuch aisa hii hai woh sujal ke mooh se apni tareef sunna chahthi hai... tho ab sujal ka mann tho is too damn mischeivous , usko tho shararat sooj rahi hai... he wants to hold kashish close to himself and tell her kii aaj kashish sabse zyada haseen lag rahii hai... he wants to take her in the gharmahat of his arms aur woh chahtha hai kii woh kashish kii kboobsurathi ko nikhare.. well bhow romantic.. aur sujal ka kashish kii khoobsurathi nikhare se matlab hai kii to get intimate with kashish.. kiss her.. feel her.... and taste each others dil mein basa hua pyaar.. me sure sujal kuch aisa hii karna chahtha hai.. yaar this scene is romantic to the heights of heights though it does not have any physical closenes between sujal, kashish but still this scene spoke romanticizm to the maximum heights yaar... simply outstandibg.... mujhko tho sharam aa rahii hai.... me liking it very verry very very very very very damn much to the power of infinite.... super-duper cool..sujal ke thoughts pe tho main vaarijaawa.... main tho sujal kii soch padke sharam se paani paani , laal-peeli hue jaa rahii hoon.. ☺️ sab kuch aachche se jaa raha hotha hai.. sab kuch is just too perfect..aisa lag raha hotha hai kii sujal , kashish ke beech ka ice kissi bhi pal toot saktha hai aur woh dono kareeb aa sakhte hai lekin nahii correct time pe sujal ke dimaak kii intervention hothi hai.. aur uska dimaak wapass uske dil par haavi ho jaatha hai.. usko wapas woh kashish ka bematlab sa dhoka yaad aa jaatha hai..... ufffffffff......... kya pareshaani hai.... ab tho sujal kashish ko takleef dene kii soch mein apne mann kii sachchi baat ko chupakar kashish ko hadh se zyada takleef dene ka tai kar letha hai....GODDDDDDDDDDDDDD.......sujal ko wapas apna woh befizool sii misunderstandings yaad aa jaathi hai.. dhat teriki... satyanaas...gayi bhais pani mein... ab kashish wapas apna sawaal douraathi hai saying kii woh kaise lag rahii hai.. ab sujal sees her from top to bottom though he wants to tell her kii woh hadh se zyada khoobsurat lag rahii hai he says as usual brkaar behenjii.. sujal ko bhi na aur koi kaam dhaam nahii jab dekho kashish ko hurt karne mein hii laga hua hotha hai...sujal akhir aisa kyun kar raha hai..woh tho khud apne mann kii baaton ka gala gout raha hai.. ab bechari kashish ka chehra utar jaatha hai.. she again gets mayoos... something like usne itna sajne sawarne mein waqt lagaya just to impress sujal lekin ab tho kashish ko me sure aise lag raha hoga kii saari mehnat bekaar gayi.. ab sujal taunts her saying kii this type of western clothes do not suit her.. sujal agar kashish pe yeh kapde suit nahii karthe hai tho shayad tum bhool rahe ho kii tumne hii zidd karke kashish ko yeh dress kareed ke dii... kyun khareed ke dii tumne... bolo bolo...then he adds saying kii these clothes look good on his tisha... ab kashish is like kaun tisha.. tho sujal very coolly says kii kaha tha na meri sexy girlfriend tisha..uff sujal jab jhoot bolna nahii aatha tho bolthe kyun ho.. girlfriend my foot.. tumhari kya kashish ke liye koi bhi ek bhi ladki hai tumhari zindagi mein nahii naa.. tho tum yeh dramebaazi karna band karo tumko yeh zara sa bhi suit nahii kartha... ab kashish is like usne tho tina kaha tha.. pakde gaye sujal mahashay.. hahahaha...tho ab sujal fumbles and is like tina ho ya tisha kya farq padtha hai hai tho tumse behtar hii hai.. well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii sujal naam se bohat zyada padtha hai.. yeh naam ka hii tho khel hai joh ek naam ko doosre se jodh detha hai... aur rahii baat kashish se behtar hone kii tho sujal bhale kii tumhari baatein yeh kahe kii that tina tisha joh bhi imaginary character hai woh kashish se behtar hai lekin tumhari yeh joh aankhein hai sach kehthi hai kii kashish jaisi koi nahii aur na koi ho saktha hai... ab kashish apne jealous feelings ko aur rokh nahii paathi aur poochthi hai kii aisa kya hai usmein jo mujmein nahi..... well kashish is baat ka jawaab main tumhe dethi hoon us tina , vina joh bhi hai uska naam uska asal zindagi mein koi existance hii nahii aur tumhara existance hai... ab sujal ka going close to kashish's face and then saying sab kuch...wo khoobsurat hai, tum badsurat ho.... sujal zara meri yeh doubt clear karna tumhe kashish kiss angle se badsoorat lagthi hai.... sujal continues saying woh sexy hai tum behenji ho... achcha jii sujal sahab says she is behenjii woh sexy nahii agar aisi hii baat hai tho sujal ka mooh kashish ko dekhkar khulla ka khulla kayeku reh gaya.... he says usmein class hai tum unclassy ho.... sorry sujal lekin is baat par tho mujhko comment karna hii padega jin ladkiyo ke saath tum hothe ho except for kashis un mein koi class nahii hotha..ek number ke waste hothe hai sabke sab....wo sophisticated hai tum raw ho... well sujal mere hisaab se tho i think even you feel kii ladki jab raw hothi hai tab bhi achchi hothi hai......badi qatil uski ada hothi hai....wo high society ki hai tum middle class ho.... well sujal yeh high class , middle class kii baat kahaan se aagayi sujal ne khud kashish ko chuna tha apni biwi ke naathe.. ab woh aisi baatein kyun kar rahii hai.... woh intelligent hai tum idiot ho... well saari baatein sujal kashish kii hii tareef kar raha hai par us tina-tisha kii zehen mein rakhkar... he calls her an idiot... hmm ok sujal ka kashish ko idiot kehna shows sujal kii dil kii haalat.... and sujal ke dil kii haalat tum jaanthi ho kya hai...IDIOT means I DO ISHQ ONLY TUMSE... tho hua na yeh sujal ke correct dil ka haalat.....
this is just too good... ab kashish ke aankhon se lagataar aasoo behne lagthi hai...kashish ko sujal kii indirect baatein samaj nahii aa rahii hothi hai... she is not able to tolerate sujal kii baatein aur sujal ka bhartaav though she wants to stop her tears usse ho nahii raha hai... bechari kashish... very bad.. agar yeh sujal apne dil kii baatein sachchi-sachchi keh detha tho kitna achcha hotha.. lekin nahii yahaan tho sujal , kashish ka dil khoon ke assoo ro raha hai... dono tadap rahein hai... me feeling damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.... 😭 😡
ab neelz my guess for the next part would be that sujal , kashish ke dimaak mein apne liye aur nafrat banayega... sujal kashish se aur bhi zyada se zyada nafrat karega... aur kashish bhi aur zyada royegi... lekin sujal kii yeh harkatein kashish ke dil mein shak paida karegi kii kya sujal joh bhii keh raha hai woh sab kuch kahiin jhoot tho nahii....
sujal doosri taraf ek bhi kasar nahii chodega kii to hurt kashish..aur yahaan doosri tarah kashish will trip-over the sachchayi kii sujal usse joh bhi baatein kar raha hai woh jhoot hai.. she will come to know kii sujal is acting to be bad with her... tab shayad kashish yeh faisla kar legi kii woh sujal ke dil kii har baat ko jaankar rahegi.. and i also think kii kashish sujal ko dheere-dheere zyada hadh se zyada seduce karne lagegi..chahe sujal , kashish ke beech kii dooriyaan kitni hii kyun na bhad jaye there will be romance also increasing between them.. this is my guess neelu ab bolo kya main sahii yaa ghalat... 😉
😉 😉 😉 😉 ab neelu yaar please jaldi se agla part post karo.. itne interesting part padne ke baad sachchi i can't wait... post soonnnnnnnnn..... 😊 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
neelu yaar me so happy that me was the first one to comment..yippee...
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Posted: 18 years ago
great update.......... 😊 ......sujal wantt hurt kashish, but he doesn't want to ..........but think's abt the bretrayal n insult her.......even though he say does thing the one how very get 's hurt is him............continue soonnnn plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part 👏
hope sujal changes his attitude towards kashish sooon
cont. soon

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