PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 109

Ok nxt prt-

s-emm..emm..err..excuse me…a..a..emm..main abhi aata hoon..!

s goes out of the room,almost runs out of the room

s arms cross karke,ek kone mein,deewar se tek lagake

s ki ankhon se naajaane kyun apne aap asoo beh rahe hain,k ki baatein s ke zehen mein gunj rahi hain

kahin naa kahin s ko apni k ke himmat pe naaz bhi ho raha hai,aur garv bhi,ki kashish uski patni hai!

Tabhi k wahan aati hai

K ko dekhkaar s apne asoo ponch leta hai

k-arre yahan kyun aa gae?

s-[holdin her by arms,at lookin at her with affection] pata hai,pehli baar kisi ne mere saath dia hai!pehli baar koi mere lie laadaa hai!

K smiles

S also gives her a thodi si smile

s-kashish!can I ask u something?

k-yes,sure!ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai!offcourse,u can ask me anything!

s-kashish,tumne papa ki saari baatein chup chap kyun suni,I mean tumne kaha kyun nhai ki tumne ye shaadi unki wajah se hi ki hai!

k-nahi sujal,chodo naa![with a bit upset face]

s-waise ek baat to hai!

k-kya?

s-gusse mein tumhari awaaz bilkul badal jaati hai?haan..bilkul…jhaasi ki rani types,talwar leke hamesha taiyaar..!

k[hits him playfully on arm]sujal!..mazak matt karo!

K mom comes

K mom-kashish..!

k-jii mamma!

K mom-wo ye kuch medicines laani thi!

k-oh…

s-emm..mamma!app muje prescribtion dejie,main leke aata hoon!

S goes

Tabhi dr comes

Dr -Ms kashish!

k-yes dr!

dr-miss kashish,kya aap those der ke lie mere cabin mein aenge,muje aapse kuch zaruri baat karni hai!

k-sure dr!

k goes with dr

dr-miss kashish maine aapse kaha tha naa ki aapki papa ke ilaaj ke lie 40 lakh Rs chahie!

k-han dr wo to aap jaise jaise keh rahe hain,main de rahi hoon naa!

Dr-haan lekin,wo aapki dad ki haalaat aur complicated ho gai hai,jiske lie aur advanced medication aur treatment chahie!

k-complicated??????[k is worried & shocked]

dr-haan!aur uss treatment ke lie aur 10 lakh Rs chahie!

k-10 lakh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![shocked]

dr-aur ye paise abhi jamaa karvane honge,kyunki agar late hua to halaat bigad sakti hai!

k-paar dr aapne abhi bahar kaha tha ki wo thik hain,aur abb..

dr-haan kaha tha,kyunki aapne mujse kaha tha ki agar kuch bhi prob ho to aapko bataun jisse apki family pareshaan naa ho,ussi baat ko dhyaan mein rakhkaar main ye jhooth bola tha!

k-paar dr..main..main itne paise kahan se laungi???????????

K ke ankh mein asoo aa jaate hain

amazing part neelu 👏 👏 👏 ...ye doctor bhi naa 😡 ...i tell u neelu this hospital waale toh kash ki family ko sarasar loot rahe hain pehle 40 lacs aur ab 10 lacs aur...chor kahin ke...newayz isi bahaane our sujal ko kash ki family ki help karne ka aur apna pyaar aur care jatane ka mauka toh milega 😉 😳

neelu dear tune part post kar dii aur is baar main aagayi apne comments lekar..without any kind off delay... i hope you like this comment... 😃 tho part yahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan sujal kamre se hadbadi mein chala jaatha hai... aur me sure he wants to hide his tears... sujal ek khone mein jaakar khada ho jaatha hai... aur sujal ke aankhon se aasoo beh rahein hai.. sujal unhe rokh bhi nahii paa raha hai... sujal ke aasoo automatically behthe jaa rahein hai... sujal bas apne arms cross karke soch mein duba hua khada hai... aur sujal ke kaano mein kashish kii baatein goonj rahii hothi hai... is baat pe aur sujal ke aasooyo par mujhe yeh kehna hai kii sujal ke aasoo are not because of any hurt feelings... mere hisaab se tho sujal ke tears is because of the reason the way kashish ne uska saath diya.... sujal is too over-whlemed kii kashish ne uska saath nahii chodda... yahii wajah hai sujal ke aasooyo kii.. sujal ke yeh aasoo ghum ke nahii balki khushi ke aasoo hai... sujal ke dil mein kashish ke himmat ko lekar naaz hai.. sujal ko is baat ka garv hai kii kashish uski patni hai , uski jeevan saathi hai... well is baat pe mujhe kehna hai kii sujal never expected kii kashish aise react karegi tho sujal kii soch mein suprized feeling bhi hai aur khushi bhi... aur kashish pe garv karna is totally lazmi... kashish ne itna achcha kaam joh kiya hai... 100% surely kashish ke himmat kii dhaat deni padegi... aur waise bhi ek baat aur dekhne ke layak hai kii kashish ko yeh himmat agar mili hai tho bas sujal kii wajah se... uske saath kii wajah se.. sujal ke pyaar ke wajah se hii kashish could do all that... this is what i feel.... ab wahaan kashish aathi hai... kashish ko aatha hua dekhkar sujal foran apne aasoo pohanch letha hai.. he does not want kashish to see his tears... well is baat pe mujhko kehna hai kii sujal ko dekhkar yakeen hogaya kii "a man will always be a man...." ek aadmi who totally cares for his beloved will never shed tears in front of his beloved... he remains strong... sujal bhii yahii kar raha hai... lekin ek baat joh woh nahii jaanthe kii agar woh jitna bhi chahe koshish kare apne aasoo chupane kii unke life partner ko patah chal hii jaatha hai... aur mere khayal se tho yahaan par kashish bhi is poori tarah se waakif of sujal's haal... par woh yeh baat dharshathi nahii.. and behaves normally with sujal.. too good jii.. un dono kii understanding kitni mast hai... me loving it totally....ab kashish asks sujal kii woh yahaan kyun aagaya... sujal kashish ke baat ka jawaab na dekar he catches kashish by her shoulders aur pyaar se kashish kii taraf dekhtha rehtha hai.. totally sujal ke aankhon se love is over-flowing.. ab sujal kashish se kehtha hai kii aaj pehli baar kissi ne uska saath diya.. koi uske liye lada... well is baat pe mujhko sujal se yeh kehna hai kii sujal kashish tho tumhare saath har pal , har kadam pe hogi.. tumhe is baat kii chinta karne kii koi zaroorat nahi.. kashish will always stand by you... aur sujal joh baat tumne kahii na kii kabhi kissi ne tumhara saath nahii diya.. well is baat par mujhko yeh kehna hai kii jin logon ne tumhara saath nahii diya unko laath maaro , unko goli maaro... ab tho tumhare pass kashish hai na tumhe kissi bhi baat kii fikar karne kii koi zaroorat nahii... ab kashish ka smile karna... well kashish kii smile to sujal also shows what i told kii care a damn for who don't care about you main tumhare saath hamesha rahoongi.... aur sujal ka bhi smile karna... well mujhe bohat achcha lag raha hai kii sujal has also started opening up nahii tho pehle sab apne dil kii baat dil mein hii rakhkar woh restless hua kartha tha... aur us restlessness kii wajah se hamesha woh kashish pe apna ghussa nikaaltha tha... nahii tho apne feelings chupane ke liye apne aap ko us sharaab mein duba rakhtha tha.. ab he is showing , expressing all his dil kii baatein , his feelings to kashish... sujal dheere dheere se kashish ke liye ek khulli kitaab banthe jaa raha hai... yeh sujal , kashish ke rishthe ke liye bohat achchi baat hai... it is a very big plus point according to me because if both start sharing their feelings like this then woh waqt durr nahii jab woh dono dost banega aur pyaar kii taraf , pyaar ko aur mazboot karne ke liye dosti hii pehla kadam hotha hai..... tho hui na yeh achchi baat... ab sujal kashish se poochtha hai kii kya woh usse kuch pooch saktha hai... kashish says ofcourse he can.. well kashish kii yeh baat also has one more meaning that sujal need not take her izzazat to tell her something... i think kashish indirectly wants to say kii kashish par sujal ka poora ka poora hakh hai.... ab sujal kashish se poochtha hai kii why did she listen to all her fathers allegations.. jab bhi she married sujal just because of her dad... well sujal ka yeh sawaal shows kii usse achcha nahii laga kii kashish ko woh saari baatein sunni padi.... sujal is may be kind off sad kii kashish ko saari dant sunni padi... aur sujal is a bit more guilty because it is uski wajah se joh kashish ko yeh saari baatein sunni padi.. sujal surely is very depressed kii kashish ke aankhon mein assoo asaye woh bhi indirectly uski wajah se... ab kashish makes an upset face and says kii chodo na sujal... well i think kashish is upset because woh chahthi hai kii woh sujal ke saath apni zindagi bitaye even after the contract just like a actual marriage... aur sujal ka yeh sawaal upset her because may be kashish ke dil mein yeh umeed jagi thii kii sujal unka rishtha nahii thodega after the contract ends... on the other side i even think sujal asked this question because woh kashish ke mann ko tatol na chahtha hai... he wants to find out from kashish kii kya kashish is ready to stay with him after the contract also... jaise uske mann mein hai... sujal ke mann mein bhi yeh baat hai kii woh contract ko radh karke they be like real pati-patni...that's why he asked that to kashish... yeh sujal , kashish aur unke indirect sawaal jawaab aur unka pyaar kya baat hai... ab sujal kashish se kehtha hai kii ek baat tho hai.. ab kashish kii like kya.. tho sujal kashish ko zara chaidthe hue kehtha hai kii ghusse mein kashish kii awaaz kitni badal jaathi hai.... he even compares kashish to jhansi kii rani aur woh kehtha hai kii talwaar lekar ladne ko taiyaar... well sujal kii yeh baat shows kii sujal kashish ko uske upset mood se bahar laana chahtha hai.. and that is the reason why he is doing this chaid-khaani with kashish.... woh kashish ko dukhi nahii dekh saktha... me love sujal... kashish kii muskaan mein hii sujal kii saari zindagi hai.... simply marvelous... ab tho kashish also knows kii sujal is teasing her tho woh sujal ko mazaak mein maarthi hai.. and she is like sujal mazaak matt karo.. hye..in dono kii pyaar is ada is so simple yet so cute , yet so sweet.. so nice... there pyaar gives me a total good feeling.. har jagah their pyaar spreads a possitive energy... umeed bikherthi hai chaaro taraf unka saath..... ab kashish kii mom wahaan aathi hai and she asks kashish to get the medicine... isse pehle ki kashish kuch kahe sujal says kii woh bhi rukhkar kehtha hai thoda sa hichkhichakar kehtha hai mamma.......app muje prescription dejiye....main leke aata hoon.... how good is this.. sujal has become the son of that house usse dekhkar tho aisa lag raha hai kii woh us ghar ka damaad nahii balki beta hai... he is such a agyakaari beta banthe jaa raha hai.. me liking it very much.... jis tarah sujal kashish ke family ka saath de raha hai... just simply superb....shabash neelu... bohat achcha likha hai tumne.. sachchi mazaa aagaya.. mera tho dil khush ho gaya... you keep up the good work going...👏 ab sujal wahaan se chala jaatha hai.... tabhi doctor comes to kashish aur usse kehtha hai kii he wants to meet her in the cabin... kashish wahaan aathi hai... tab the doctor starts explaining kii he had told them earlier kii unke dad ke ilaaz ke liye 40 lakhs ka karcha hoga.. ab kashish is like yes... aur jaise they are asking for the money she is giving... ab kashish is surely pareshaan kii doctor kya kehne kii koshish kar rahein hai... ab the doctor now saying kii her father's case has become even more complicated.... and they need about 10 lakhs more for the treatment.. the doctor kind off throws a bomb on kashish are kashish pe tho bijliyaan sii ghirthi hai... pehle tho her father's case being complicated then now the need of more money all have increased kashish's tensions... ab the doctor throwing more shock to her saying kii unko tabhi woh paise jama karwaane honge for the treatment to carry on.. he even says kii otherwise her dad's haalat might get worse... uff bechari kashish... usko itna tension kyun mil raha hai.... aur sujal bhi uske saath nahii hai.. to handle the situation... bechari is baat ka saamne kaise karegi... ab kashish tries to maintain her composure and says kii he told kii her dad was fine just sometime back... ab the doctor clarifies saying kii because kashish had told him kii agar kuch bhi prob ho to aapko bataun jisse apki family pareshaan naa ho ussi baat ko dhyaan mein rakhkaar doctor ne jhooth bola .... well kashish ne is baat mein samajdhaari dikhayi hai.. agar doctor sabke saamne says the truth tho sab pareshan hothe... lekin ab bechari kashish pareshaan ho rahii hai... uske dad kii yeh haalat jaankar aur paiso kii maang jaankar kashish ke dil mein ek bada sa bhoj sa cha gaya hoga... me feeling very bad for her... ab kashish ko samaj nahii aa raha hai kii woh itne paise kahaan se laye.. aur kashish ke dad kii zindagi ke liye yeh paise bohat mayine rakhthe hai.... bechari kashish uljan mein phas gayi....aur uske aankhon se aasoo behthe hai... me feeling really bad at kashish's state.... bechari phas gayi... me getting rona at her state... she is so helpless.....😭 ab neelu yaar next part ke liye mera guess yeh hoga kii shayad kashish kii pareshaani will keep on increasing.. woh sujal se bhi yeh baat nahii kahegi joh doctors ne kaha hai.... she will on her own self keep breaking her head kii woh ab kya karein.. and shayad sujal will get to know about the sachchayi of the need of money by kashish tho shayad sujal kashish ke father ke ilaaz ke liye saare paise arrange kar dega... in this way sujal aur kashish will come closer and also sujal ke mann ka shak about kashish kii she is with him for money woh shak dhul jayega.... aur shayad sujal , kashish ke zubaan pe yeh baat aajaye kii they really want to give their marriage a chance.... aisa ho saktha hai nahii tho iska bilkul ulta bhi ho saktha hai kii sujal se kashish paise maange aur sujal misunderstands the whole thing and his doubts increase kii kashish is with him for money.. he will make more misunderstandings in his mond about kashish... but then come to know kii kashish is in need of the money really and not off any greed but she needs the money for her dad's treatment...tab sujal fundas the treatment and in both the cases sujal , kashish kareeb aayenge... ab bolo neelu what do you think of my guess.. do you think me right or wrong...😉 ab neelz dear please do post the next part soon..me waiting for it very eagerly.... can't wait to read it... do post soon...😃

Ok nxt prt-[very very very special thanxs 2 my dearest bestest surya!]


k-paar dr..main..main itne paise kahan se laungi???????????

K ke ankh mein asoo aa jaate hain

k comes out of dr cabin shocked & shaken by his words

k[mann mein]-hey bhagwan!abb main kya karun..itne saare paise!..10 lakh..wo bhi..itni jaldi..main kaise

tabhi s wahan aata hai

s-arre kashish!kahan thi tum?kitni der se tumhe dhund raha tha?ehere were u?khair maine medicines laake mumma ko de die hain!ok!

k is in her khayal doesn't reply

s-ok?????

k-huh?

s-kashsih!okkkkkk?????????????

shakin her

s-kya hua tumhe?

k-su..sujal!

s-haan sujal! main thodi der ke lie neeche kya gaya,tum meri shakal bhul gai!

k-huh?

s-sorry,bad joke!

k-sujjal!…sujal..wo..papa…p..p..paise..soc..doctor…

s-kya?????kya keh rahi ho,saaf saaf bolo!

k-sujal wo…tum idhar aao[s ko side mein le jaati hai]

s-haan,kya ?kya baat hai?

k-sujal wo,dr..dr ne kaha hai ki papa ki treatment ke lie aur paise chahie,10 lakh!sujal plz muje in paiso ki bohot zarurat hai!tum de sakte ho abhi?
s-[mann mein]-kitna galat samaj raha tha main tumhe,kya plan banaya hai kashish wah,tum to apnemplan mein kamayab hi ho jaati,abhi dr ne kaha tumhare dad thik hai,aur abb aur 10 lakh chahie,papa ki treatment ka jhootha bahanaa banake paise aithna chahti ho!itne din mera vishvaas jitne ka natak kia,tabhi sochun kyun,tumhare mann mein chor hai!muje laaga tha jo main tumhare bare mein soch raha tha wo galat hai,paar nahi dikhadi naa apni haisiyaat,ye hi hai naa tumhara pyaar,sirf paiso se pyaar karti ho tum,auro ki tarha!paar sujal garewal tumhe apne maksad mein kamyab nahi hone dega,uske saath dhoka karne ki sazaa to tumhe milke rahegi![aisa sochte hue,s ke ankhon ke kone mein kahin thode asoo aa jaate hain]

k-[shakin s]sujal!bolo naa!de sakte ho tum muje abhi itne paise?

s-haan, de sakta hoon!

k-oh thanxs sujal!thanxs a lot,tum nahi jaante,tumne mujpe aaj kitna bada ehsaan…

s-paar,agar main kahun ki main tumhe ye paise nahi dunga to!!!!!!!

K is shocked 2 her wits,she never expected this,tears wel up frm her eyes

k-nahi doge!paar..paar kyun?plz//plz sujal plz,muje inn paiso ki abhi bohot zarurat hai,plz!

s-main wo saab nahi jaanta,hamara contract 40 lakh ka hua tha,abb tum extra paise maang rahi ho!main kyun doon!ye to ghaate ka sauda hua!

k-sauda!!!!!!!!!sujal,tum…main tumhe ye paise kaise bhi lauta dungi,mera vishvaas karo,paar..abhi muje ye paise de do!

s-tumhara kya bharosa,tum paiso lautao ya nahi!tum fraud nikli to!rahi baat paise lautane ki,ye main bhi jaanta hoon aur tum bhi,ki tum mere paise kabhi lauta nahi paogi,so jst forget it!

K strts cryin helplessly at s ka coldness

k-sujal!..sujal plz!aisa matt kaho!main tumhare saamne haath jodti hoon,tumhare pair padti hoon,tumse bheek mangti hoon..pl..plz ye paise muje dedo,muje inn paiso ki bohot zarurat hai!mujpe taras khao plz!sujal..tu..tum jao kahoge main wo karungi..bass tum muje ye paise de do!

s-kya kaha?jo kahunga karogi!to thik hai main tumhe ye paise dunga!paar..meri ye shart hai!

k-thanxs sujal!shart kaisi shart!

s-tumhe wo karna hoga jo main kahun!

k-haan main wo karungi!kya?kya karna hoga muje?

s-karogi?paar mukarne se nahi hoga!jo kahunga wo karna hi hoga![with a bit of wicked smile]

k-haan sujal,main karungi jo tum kahoge!

s-abhi nahi,sahi waqt aane paar bataunga!kashsih!

k-thik hai,jaisi tumhari marzi!emm..paise?

s-paise mera manager yahan pohoncha dega,ill caal him!

k-thanku sujal![with gr8fulness]

s doesn't reply & goes away with a wicked smile

sujalll 😡 ...he is sooo dmn rude n harsh n idiot...how cud he think so low abt kash...mujhe laga ki itne din ke sath ke baad sujal kash ko samajhta hoga lekin wo moron...arghhhhhh main tumhe bata nahi sakti mujhe kitna gussa aa raha hai 😕...hopefully woh kash ke samne kuch aisi condition nahi rakhega jo uski maryada ke agnst ho....fabuloussssss part vry well written... 👏

neelu awesome part yaar! ⭐️ bahut hi khub 😛😉😛 . and what happened to this damn sujal, yaar why can't he undestand kashish's condition 😡.how can he be so rude 😡 . instead of spending so much time with her at their honeymoon why is he behaving like this. i really don't understand yaar. this is now going from bad to worst. in between everything was going well. but now everything is going to wreak up because of stupid sujal 😡. bechari kashish use to kuch pata hi nahi what condition is going to come her way 😕😕 .neelu it was absolutely fantastic part 👏 . it was a sudden twist yaar.but u know what i was ready for it because that was i was thinking that how come everything turned so rosy and good. there was something fishy going on and i knew it. i knew that sujal will think something like that some day and see it happened. but it's bad 😔to see yaar yet it is also damn interesting 😉 . neelu you are great⭐️👍🏼⭐️. the way you bring twists and turns in story is amazing.excellent job and keep it up 👍🏼 . ab my guess for next part is ki sujal will again start behaving with her the same way he used to behave with her before.i think that at the end of the day he will tell her his condition and that condition will be beyond kashish's imagination 😲😲.i think that u know that condition which sujal will ask kashish to fulfill.yaar neelu i am desperately waiting for the next part 😍.continue soon yaar plz........ can't wait any longer for the next part yaar.i am damn sure something exciting is going to come up and i can tell this because of sujal's wicked smile 😈 towards kashish. i am waiting for kashish's expression towards sujal's condition and her action for it.continue soon plz...... 😊😉😊

awesome part,,,,,,,,,, 👏 ......why don't sujal understand that kashish really loves him....n she's not after his money.... 😡 ..... he's so rude sometimes 😡 😡 😡 ........ hope everything is going to be fine again...... 😊 ......great update......... 👏 👏 👏 .........update soon........... 😊

nice part 👏 sujal , how can u do this to kashish😡 when she luvs u so much. 😭 😭 😭

Ok nxt prt-

s doesn't reply & goes away with a wicked smile

s hospital mein k ko akela chodkaar chala jaata hai

k mom-kashish!sujal kahan hai?

k-wo..wo mamma,kuch zaruri kaam aa gaya islie unhe jaana pada.

K mom-oh

K bhi kuch der baad wahan se ghar aa jaati hai

k-ram singh ji!

Rs-ji memsahab!

k-saab kahan hain?

Rs-saab?saab to yahan nahi aae

k-nahi aae?to kahan gae?

Rs-pata nahi memsahab,aapke saath gae the,phir aae nahi

k-aae nahi?thik hai tum jao

k is worried ki s akhir gaya to gaya kahan

she tries callin him paar ph unreachable jaa raha hai

k is watin & waitin

bohot raat ho gai hai

khana table paar pada hai,k ne bhi nahi khaya,wo bohot pareshaan hai

sofe paar simatkaar worried baithi hui hai aur s ka besabri se intezaar karr rahi hai

kareeb raat ke 2 baje callin bell rings

callin bell ki awaaz sunkaar k khush ho jaati hai,ye sochkaar ki s aaya hoga

she opens the door

uske saamne s khada hai

looking a bit exausted with a stern expression

ankhen laal hai gusse se bhi sharab se bhi

thodi thodi sharab ki smell aa rahi hai

k-kahan the?itni der kahan laag gai?

s-muje kya harr baat tumhe batani hogi?

k-huh?[she surprised & confused at s ka behavior]

k-tum mere papa ki baton ki wajah se upset ho naa,sujal maine papa se baat ki hai,dheere dheere wo bhi samaj jaenge,tumhe bura laga to unki taraf se main tumse maafi maangti hoon.

s-tum logo ki wajah se hi to meri zindagi barbaad ho gai hai!pehle tum ek sar dard uske upaar abb…….

K ko bura lagta hai

k-khana laga doon?

s-khake aaya hoon,waise bhi tumhare haath ka wo beswaad khana khane se achcha hai main bhooka rahun!

K ke ankhon mein thode se asoo aa jaate hain

k-emm..khake aaye ho?kahan se khake aaye ho?

s-uff….!kitni baar batana padega tumhe ki I am not answerable 2 u!

k-itna hi to puch rahi hoon ki kahan se khana khake aaye ho,kahan the tum itni der,naraz kyun ho rahe ho!kya mera itna bhi puchne ka haak nahi!

s-nahi,bilkul nahi!tum ho kaun mujse saawaal karne wali?kharida hua saamaan ho,baaki saamaano ki tarah padi raha karo,baat baat pe haak maat jataya karo!

K ki ankhon se ek asoo chalak jaata hai

s-aur rahi baat mere kahin jaane ki,to ek baar keh de raha hoon,dubara matt puchna,main tina ke saath tha![ok s jhooth bol raha k ka dil dukhan eke lie,wo actually apni tanhai pt paar tha]

k-tina???????kaun tina???????? [hairaan]

s-tina meri new fresh girlfrd!

K is shocked,uske pairo ke taale se maano zameen hi khisak gai

She is speechless

Wo kuch keh nahi pati,she is so shocked

Aur k ki ankhon se apne aap lagataar asoo behne laagte hain!

S ke ko side haataakaar,uss haalaat mein chodkaar,room mein sone chala jaata hai!