My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
Hey guys what do you suggest.. I still don't know which name to use for my ff..

tere pyar mein ho jaao Fanaa?😳

Destroyed in Love😳

Teri Aashiqui mein😳

Hamara yeh rishta..😳

I dun like any of thes.. You give me suggestions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
I think teri aashiqui main is the best. I don't them to get destroyed😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
maybe you can you pyar ka ristha.... and awesoem part! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I say Teri Aashiqui mein and then Destroyed in Love, but I don't want themt o be destroyed!

Plz cont soon!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: soaps_01

I say Teri Aashiqui mein and then Destroyed in Love, but I don't want themt o be destroyed!

Plz cont soon!



Teri Aashiqui mein...Hum Ho gaye fanaa😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86

Ok guys I already apologize coz this part will be a lil bore...





A lil reminder...This is what angad and kripa where doing.. Previously😆😆

Angad and kripa are still in each others arms
and guess who saw everything? No one but PRIYA! Priya can't believe what she just saw...She starts crying and runs away.. (poor girl😭😆) Angad and Kripa are too lost in each other to realise she was standing there...

Angad and kripa hug each other.. and angad gets something out of his pocket..He goes and stands behind her..He puts a locket around kripa's head..


Kripa: Angad what is this...

Angad: Dekho to zara..


Kripa looks at the locket.. It's a beautifull little gold heart that can be opened.. Kripa opens it and sees her and angad's picture in it.... She starts smiling..

Kripa: Oh angad.. Tum bhi naa..

Angad: Kyon acha nahi laga??

Kripa starts laughing and they share a cute romantic moment..



Kripa: Angad let's go before anybody notices whe arn't in our rooms..

Kripa and Angad aren't aware priya already saw them! they go back home...

Next morning:

Angad and kripa are still sleeping while everyone is awake and having breakfast..

Neelam: Are yeh angad aur kripa dono abhi tak so rahe hai.. Kya yeh dono poori raat jaagte rahe hai..

Neelam laughs and has made an innocent joke not knowing priya is giving her the killer look coz priya knows A-K indeed where together ALL NIGHT! Priya spots her dad sitting alone outside and goes to him..

Priya: dad...

Mr Mittal: oh beta come come sit here..

Priya: dad... I dont think angad loves me dad..

Mr Mittal: whaatt??? Ofcourse he loves you... Why wouldnt he...

Priya: No dad.. I don't think so.. He hasn't been paying me any more attention.. and I don't think he wants to marry me.. Maybe he's in love with someone else??

Mr Mittal: WHAT RUBBISH! Angad loves u and he will only marry YOU.. I WILL SEE TO THAT.. U don't worry...


Later that day all parents are in a heavy discussion while all their children have gone shopping..When they return they see their parents distressed..

Angad goes over to his mom: Mom kya huwa... Aap log itne chup kyon hai?

Naina: Angad woh beta...

Dilip: Whe have preponed your marriage beta...

Angad: WHAT..I mean.. kyon?


Priya smiles evil...Kripa's heart starts breaking..

Naina: No need to ask why.. There is just one reason.. we want you to get married as soon as possible.. We where going to do it over three weeks.. why not do it next friday?

Angad: But mom! Thats 5 days away from now! You can't arrange that can you!

Naina: OFCOURSE WE CAN! Mr mittal and your dad know a lot of people.. and they'll arrange it in a minute!

Angad: but mom....

Neelam: Kripa beta..You know what that means?

KRipa: waht?

Neelam: Whe have preponed your engagement too... Its the day after tomorrow.. and tomorrow night we'll give a lil sangeet party..A lil mehndi ki rasam.. I have already invited all your friends...


Kripa is shocked and so is angad.. Kripa's engagement is hurting him more than his own wedding...And angad's wedding is hurting kripa more than her own engagement..


Mr Mittal: Start packing guys!!! We have to leave tonight! There are arrangements to be made...!

Priya feels she has won! Finally angad will be hers... She laughs sneaky and goes to her room..At the other hand raj smiles shyly and is veryyyy happy.. he got the love of his life and she'll be his sooon! Everbody goes to their room exept angad and kripa...

They both start crying..



Angad sees kripa crying and his heart breaks even more.. he wants to console her.. He start walking towards her and just as he wants to put his hand on her shoulder...

Priya: Angad... Come here you have to help me na!

Angad leaves a heartbroken kripa behind and goes to his own room..Once reached he starts crying too...

***Background voice***

Itni chaahat..Phirbi Itni Tarap Kyon Hai..

Itna pyaar..Par phirbi ye adhura kyon hai..

Ek dooje bin reh na paye aisa yeh pyaar hai..

Ek doosre ko mil na paye.. Kaisa Ye pyar hai?....



***To be continued***

PS. Sorry guys for so much heart breakk! But believe me......You will be happy soon...........😳😆

Edited by Aisha_86 - 19 years ago
purishivani thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
awww nice part!!! i dont want anagd to marry PRiya!! i am sure u will get them back together!
Continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
😭 😭 Nice part 👏

Plz cont soon!
Edited by soaps_01 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
awe sad prt 😔 plz cont soon..i like the name Teri Aashiqui mein it goes well with the ff 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
😭
nice part...please continue soon

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