My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 I don't know.. they just look so cute when they cry for each other.. But they'll be happy soon😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I luv ur Fanfic..pls continue soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Really really GREAT fanfic just addicted to it!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok guys are you ready for whats coming up next😆😆😆

Let me show you where I left angad and kripa the previous part



Remembered??

Angad and kripa are still in a tight hug and don't want to let go of each other..But they realise everybody is inside...There's one person who saw EVERYTHING....

Kripa: Angad....Tum aa gaye... Par kyon..?

Angad: I read you letter.. Kripa I'm sorry I was so rude to you.. I know its not your fault.. I love you kripa..

Kripa: angad I...

Sur: Ahem......!

Angad and kripa are shocked... Did she hear everything? It's like sur can read there mind..

Sur: Haa meine sab sun liya...Bhai? What are you doing??

Kripa doesn't know what to do and runs into the cottage..Sur continues interrogating her brother..

Sur: What do you think you are doing bhai? Sab log andar hai..

Angad looks away and doesn't know what to do..

Sur: Waise bhaiya this choice is better😉

Angad is shocked.. what did she just say😕?

Sur: Yep bro.. I LOVE KRIPA.. I am so happy for you.. Par itni der kyon laga di.. I am gonna tell mom just wait..

Angad: SUR wait.. You cant tell anybody.. ANYBODYYY you understand...! It's too late now.. nothing can happen...

Sur: What do you mean nothing can happen.. You guys are totally crazy about each other.. What i just saw was for real!

Angad: I know but...

Sur: No but.. Tum dekhna I'll do something..Don't you worry..Kripa will be yours..ONLY..I'll make you admit your feelings infront of EVERYONE! Wanna bet..

Sur gives angad a naughty look and winks at him😉 they go inside and everybody is happy to see angad...Priya wants to ignore him...But she sees angad isn't in the mood to play the "i am sorry forgive me i love you" game with her..So she straightens her face and acts as if she's totally happy..

She hugs angad and keeps sitting next to him holding his arm..knowing kripa is watching.. and only to make her jealous...Angad tries to pull his arm back knowing kripa isn't liking any of it.. put priya keeps on pulling it back... Angad is trapped.. Sur notices and comes to her brothers rescue..

Sur: ALRIGHT EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ab hum ek game khele gay.. you know HINTS???? Everyone will have a turn and will have to hint everybody else a phrase... the one who guesses has to hint next.. UNDERSTAND!!! Ok priya your first..

Sur gives priya a phrase and she acts ridiculously..Nobody can guess what shes trying to hint so priya stops and goes sit next to angad again..

Sur: Ok..Since priya couldn't hint.....Angad bhaiya YOUR TURN...

Angad is hesitant but this way he can get away from Priya.. he sees kripa is in a bad mood since she saw priya all mushy with angad...
Sur whispers a phrase in angads ear.. Angad wants to kill Sur..

Angad starts hinting...



Nobody can guess what he's saying.. Angad gets annoyed



Kripa gets bored and starts walking to the room.. right past angad... Angad grabs her hand and stops her...

He starts using kripa as a hinting object😆...He first points his finger towards her... Everybody is staring at them and waiting eagerly for what angad is trying to describe...




Kripa's starting to get scared for what angad is trying to do...Everybody is looking remember..

Angad then grabs her hand and slowly puts it on his chest😳 and makes kripa feel his heartbeat..Kripa realises what angad is saying.. and keeps dreaming in his eyes😳




Sur gets all excited and priya get aggitated... The others don't even realise what's happening...

Angad is pouring his heart out to kripa in front of everyone.. while everybody thinks he;s hinting them😳..Kripa knows what hes doing..and starts having tears in her eyes... Angad gets tears in his eyes too and puts holds kripa's hands tightly




Angad and kripa are now lost into each other not realising whats happening around them...Suddenly neelam yells:

"Tum dil ki dhadkan mein rahti hoo"

Angad and kripa snap out of their dream and let go of each other...

Neelam: Tum dil ki dhadkan mein rahti hoo right?!! That is it right?

Sur: YEs yes that was it...

Angad and kripa don't know where to look and kripa runs into her room...Angads eyes follow her and he tries to go after her.. but he knows he can't..

Priya had her doubts.. but now she knows for real.. She looks at angad with evil eyes and wants to kill someone.. meanwhile sur is happy coz she made angad do what she wanted..

*** Too beee continueed!😳****



Edited by Aisha_86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
hey great part!! evil priya!! lol anywayz continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOME PART!!! I loved it 😛 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heya...i read all ya ff..itz gr8 4 a first try...plz cont... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok so are you guys ready for whats coming up next😆again???

After the hints game everybody went to sleep..Pria's hatred for kripa is growing.


The next morning everybody's sitting around the breakfast table and kripa's serving breakfast.. Priya hasn't come out of her room yet so the chair next to angad is still available 😆.. Angad winks kripa to come and sit next to him.. Kripa goes and sits in front of him.. Angad get irritated but realises now he can have a better sight at kripa.. His joy is whipped away when raj comes and sits next to kripa..while on the other hand priya goes and sits next to angad..(....😡)

Angad are both quite and start having tehir breakfast.. Priya sees how angads attention keeps drawing towards kripa...She realises she hss to make a point to kripa..

Priya: Angad.. yeh tumhare moo par kya laga hua hai? Let me wipe it off for you..

Priya starts cleaning angads face and comes very close to him.. Kripa sees this and isnt in the mood to have her breakfast anymore.. She excuses herself and goes t o her room.. angad notices kripa is hurt

Angad: Priya what are you doing? Just stop it ok?

Angad has raised his voice for the first time regarding priya and everybody is shocked..

Angad starts whispering: Priya don't do these kidn of things in front of everyone ok? Excuse me I have to go for a walk..

Angad stands up and leaves the cottage..Naina foloows him

Naina: Rukjao angad.. Whats wrong with you? Did you have to yell at that poor girl?

Angad: I didn't yell.. i told her the truth that is wasn't polite .. she was being shameless.. her father was there for gods sake.. (no angad kripa was there😳)

They hear someone clap from behind.. Its mr mittal

Mr mittal: wow beta.. I'm very proud of you.. I know my daughter is a bit ill mannered.. THats why I am glad you will be her husband real soon.. I am really happy ke tum mere damaad bano ge.. and no one else..

Angad feels miserable at the thought he wont be able to marry the girl he loves.. and instead has to marry the one his parents loev..

Later that night:

Everybody has gone to sleep and angad hasn't closed one eye yet.. He didn't get the chance to talk to kripa.. and feels the need to see her right away..

He goes to her room silently and steps over to her bed.. kripa is sleeping peacefully and looking innocent and loveable....

Angad bends over and start whispering in kripa's ear..


Kripa: Angad..Tum???

Angad: shhhh... He puts his fingers on her lips so she keeps quite..

Angad: come with me...

Angad holds kripa's hands and leads her outside..They keep walking till the farmhouse is nowhere to be seen..

Kripa: Angad yeh hum kahaan aa gaye?

Angad: just close your eyes..

Angad holds his hand in front of kripas eyes and pushes her to a gorgeous place where he has lit a bonfire..

Kripa: Angad what's this?

Angad: Something special for a special someone..

They gaze into each others eyes.. and kripa gets shy.. Angad and kripa both sit around the bonfire



Angad: I've an Idea lets dance..

Kripa: but angad thers no music:?

Angad: ofcourse there is..Listen...

He puts kripas head to his chest... and makes her listen to his heartbeat (again lol)

Angad: Let it be so silent.. we could hear each others heartbeat...That the best music there is.. Move your feet on the rhytm of my heartbeat..

Angad pulls kripa real close towards him and starts dancing




😳

They forget all there problems.. they forget there parents... they forget everything.. They are in a whole different world.. They are togheter.. and thats what important.. Thas what they need.. They keep looking into each others eyes and angad comes real close to kripa..



Angad thinks to himself:
"She's looking so pretty..If only she could be mine forever.."

Kripa thinks to herself:
"I feel so safe in his arms.. If only we could dance like this..Forever.."

***
Background voice***

mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa

Now they really forget everything around them and get drawn towards each other..Angad comes real close to kripa and tries to kiss her..😳







Kripa tries to walk away but angad stops her..

Kripa: Angad this is wrong.. we are betraying all our loved ones..

Angad pulls kripa back.. and holds her face..

Angad: Forget everything..It's the moment that counts..It's us that counts..

Angad and kripa KISS finaally😳..For a moment everything just stops existing.. Its just angad and kripa..Together.. Forever.. Nothing else.. No one else..






**background voice**
rone de aaj hamko do aankhen sujaane de
baahon mein lene de aur khud ko bheeg jaane de
hain jo seene mein qaid dariya woh choot jaayega
hain itna dard ke tera daaman bheeg jaayega






**Background voice**
adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhoori thi adhooren ham
magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur ab pooren hain ham

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DON"T WORRY GUYS THEY ARENt that pooren..:p they just kissed..

** too be continued**😳







Edited by Aisha_86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh my god I'm gonna faint😳

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