My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 11

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Ok.. Lets continue..

Angad and kripa are still in each others arms..



Suddenly there's a knock on the door....

Neelam: Kripaaaa.. Beta bahar aao... All your friends are waiting for you..

Kripa gets scared and lets go of angad..Angad on the other hand is in no mood of letting goo...He comes even closer..

Neelam bangs on the door again and Angad lets kripa go...Kripa goes out of the room and angad tries jumping out of the window but sees soms guests standing outside...HEs STUCK!

Kripa: yes mom?

Neelam: What are you doing in there sab bahar hei.. Come let's go..

Kripa follows her room...Angad grabs his oppurtunity and sneaks out of the room...He walks to the door and talks to some aunty...

Meanwhile kripa has gone to her freinds and NEelam notices kripa's hands...

Neelam: Kripaaa! What did you do to your MEHANDI! Its ruined

Kripa doesn't know what to say and is shocked and scared at the same time..

Kripa: Mom woh.. mein woh.. wait I'll go wash it then my friends can apply it again ok.. plz don't get mad..

Kripa runs off to the washroom..

Neelam at her daughter: uff...yeh meri beti bhi nah..

She starts walking and greets some of the guests.. Then she notices Angad and is delighted to see him..

Neelam: Angad beta tum aa gaye..I am very happy to see you.. what do you think of the arrangements? BTW? where's everyone elsee... Abhi tak nahi aaye..

Angad: Oh..No woh bas abbhi atey honge..And the arrangements are great.. But if you excuse me I have to goo..

Neelam says bye to angad and has alread started talking to some other female guest...

Suddenly she moves her head to call angad back and there it is... THE MEHANDI STAIN ON ANGADS SHIRT....Neelam is SHOCKED.. she can't believe it... *****Ekta style drum play on the background*******
While neelam gets flashbacks of kripas hands ...

Neelam starts walking...and thinks in herself: "How did that stain come on angads shirt....Angad came all alone... Kripa bohat dher laga rahi thi darwaza khol ne mein...Were they together...No meri beti aisa nahi kar sakti...."

Neelam calls kripa and starts interrogating: Kripa beta.. Woh yeh mehandi kaise kharaab huwi?

Kripa thinks to herself: "Why is she still asking about the mehandi..Theres definately something wrong"

Kripa: woh mom... actually I don't know either... Mujhe nahi patta.. I wasnt paying attention I guess...Maybe I touched the sofa or the bed.. I really don't know?

Neelam gets suspicious: Are you sure? ok fine then.....Let's leave it...

Kripa feels relieved... but doesn;t know her mom saw the stain on angads shirt..

****Scene switches***

Angad is in his room changing his clothes.. he notices the stain on his shirt and realises Neelam must have seen everything.. He's afraid of the circumstances.....


Next day..Kripa's engagement night...:

Kripas getting ready and cant stop thinking about angad...

She looks aside and sees him laughing at her...

She smilesss....

but realises she was just imagening him..

She turns around and again sees him... This time she thinks he has come for reall...BUt again she is just imagening it..Kripa gets tears in her eyes...



Tum chupaa na sako ghi main woh raaz hoo..
Tum bhulaa na sako ghi woh andaaz hoo..

Ghoonjta hu jo Dil mein to heraan ho kyo..
Mein tumhaari hi dil ki to awaaz hoo...



Mein hi mein ab tumhaar khayaloo mein hoo..
Mein jawaabon mein hoo mein jawaabon mein hoo..

Mein tumhaare har ek khwaab mein ho bassa..
Mein tumhaari nazar ke ujaalon mein hoo..

Dekhti ho mujhe... dekhti ho jahaan....

*****Scene switches******

All guests have arrived including angad...Kripa comes down the stairs.. THey both look at each other...

Everyone is happy....Kripa and Raj exchange their rings...Everyone claps and is happy.. Angad turns his back to the whole scenery...

Mr Mittal: Now the luvbirds will have the first dance of the evening..

Kripa looks at angad hurt.. and starts dancing with raj...Everyone starts dancing and Priya drags Angad to the dance floor too..

Suddenly a little tune is played... And everyone is looking at angad...

Angad starts singing a song😳

Yeh dua hai meri rab se..Tujhe Aashiqon mein sab se..
Meri aashiqui pasand aaye...
Yeh dua hai meri rab se..

Angad is dancing with priya while singing this song so everyone thinks he is singing it for her.. BUt angad's eyes search someone else...



Suddenly priya starts singing too:

Yeh dua hai meri rab se..Tujhe doston mein sabse..
MEri dosti pasand aaye...
Meri dosti pasand aaye...

Priya hugs angad.. and angads feels guilty..



Then suddenly raj feels he has to sing too..He sings while looking deep into kripa's eyes..:

Tu husn ke rangon se likhi huwi ghazal hai..
Tu pyaar ke dariya mein khilta huwa kamal hai..
Yeh dua hai meri rab se..Tujhe Shayaron mein sabse...
Meri shaayari pasand aaye...

Raj starts walking around kripa and comes real close... Angad doesn't like the look of it a bit.. And starts walking away..Kripa realises Angad is hurt...

She starts singing for angad...Though Raj gets all excited..Kripa does hint angad she's singing for him..


Mere dil ki aaine mein tasveer hai tumhaari....(Kripa holds the locket angad gave her.. Angad turns around looks at her and is happy)

Mere dil ki aaine mein tasveer hai tumhaari...
Ab tum to ban gaye ho zindagi hamarii..
Yeh dua hai meri rab se.. Tujhe saadagi mei nsabse..
Meri saadagi pasand aaye...

Suddenly everyon switchese places... and Angad grabs his chance and starts dancing with Kripa...

Now he sings with the deepest feelings inside:

Tujhse nazar mila ke madhosh zindagi hai..
Din raat mere dil pe bas teri bekhudi hai..
Yeh dua hai meri rab se..
Tujhe deewanagi mein sabse....Meri Deewanagi pasand aaye..

Meri deewanagi pasand aaye...

Angad and kripa are still dancing and Neelam doesn't like it a bit... The song ends finally and everyone stands clapping... Kripa walks back to Raj... Priya runs to Angad and gives him a drink....

Priya: Angad you where amazing.. Such a sweet song..Wait I'll be right back..

Angad stands there alone looking at Kripa and Raj feeling JEALOUS... HE knows kripa only loves him.. But the thought now kripa's name will be linked As "Raj's fiancee" makes him disgusted.....Neelam notices Angad glancing at Raj and KRipa and stands next to him..After this dance her suspicions have grown...

Neelam tries to throw salt on Angads wounds: Angad.. What a lovely evening isn't it??? Dekho na Kripa or raj Kitne ache lag rahe hai ek saathh..

Angad balds his fist..

Neelam continues: You know everyone told me.. NEelam tune bilkul PERFECT damaad chunna... The jodi is ROCKING... I am soo glad Kripa got Raj.. You Know.. I wanna send them to Dubai for their Honeymoon..

This is the limit Angads eyes are full of rage...He brakes the glass in his hand...




Everyone is shocked and looks at angad..Neelam can't believe what he just did...

Too be continued..😳Hope you liked it😕

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ur fan fic is AWESOME!! i totally love it! omg poor angad! god this neelam what kinda mother is she, she knows that angad and kripa like/love each other phir bhi UGH!! anyways plz plz plz continue soon!

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Originally posted by: hello64

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nice part......can't beleive a mother would stop two lover from being together geez plz bring them together