My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH

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I don't know if I'm allowed to post this here.. But I wanted to make a fan-fic for my fav couple Angad and Kripa....Here goes my introduction of the characters.. Hope you like it😃


Angad Khanna:
Angad Khanna is a good looking 25 years old guy, living with his loving parents and little sister. He works for his fathers company and his mom and dad think he's ready for marriage.. He doesn't disagree with the fact..but does say he wants to wait for the right girl...He hasn't met her.......YET. Angad is a very serious guy, not at all fun-loving, but he loves his family a lot. There's no one he loves more than his family....or is there?

Kripa Sharma:
Kripa (21) is the girl next door.....LITERALLY. Kripa and her mom (neelam) live next to angad and his family. Kripa lives alone with her mom while her dad works in london for a big company. She's the exact opposite of angad... She's funloving and only looks at the brightest sides of life.. She's only serious when there are problems...but she doesn't have real problems so most of the time she smiles... and brings a smile on peoples faces..Everybody loves kripa..except one person.......ANGAD.. he can't stand kripa. Kripa knows this and loves to annoy the poor guy. Kripa is naive and believes she can make as cheerfull as she is..Kripa has a soft spot for angad in her heart......



The Khanna's:
They are a very wealthy family. There is mom (naina), dad (dilip, son (angad) and a teenage daugther Sur. Sur is very sweet, but just like kripa, she too likes to irritate her brother. She does love him alot. Sur and Kripa are good friends and kripa comes over alot to meet sur
(😳or her brother?)..Dilip and Kripa's dad Neeraj used to work together in Mumbai, while kripa and her mom lived in Nainitaal. Dilip lived with his family in Mumbai from the beginning and when Neeraj's family came, Dilip and Naina helped them settle and since then Neelam and naina are good friends.. (not the best freinds.. But FRIENDS)


The Sharma's:
Neeraj spoils his only daughter a lot but still keeps her remebering the values and her culture. Kripa does miss her dad a lot.. but she's got a distraction😳Neelam also loves her daughter a lot.. but doesn't spoil her. Neelam goes to the khanna's to help them or to ask their help...They help each other out coz they are good friends.. Remember GOOD friends not BEST friends... The khanna's have somebody else.. who they call their best friend...

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Before I begin my story..let me give you a scene which shows you the "relationship" angad and kripa share.. since they are the main character of my story..


One morning kripa went over angad's house to meet "sur"..It was around 12.30 pm and everybody was having breakfast.. everybody Except angad..

Kripa: Sur...Tumhara bhaiya kahan hai? Nazar nahi aa raha..Where is he?

Sur: Where do you think he is? He is in his bedroom.. On his bed.. SLEEPING...

Kripa: WHAT! Abhi tak so raha hai? Wait...(kripa giggles naughty)..Let's go wake him up..

Sur: NO leave him.. you know how mad he gets...

Kripa doesn't care.. she has already run upstairs.. with two big frypans in her hands (don't ask me why shes holding fryingpans)..

Kripa goes into angads room and sees him sleeping..he looks very cute and kripa keeps on looking at this gorgeous guy looking damn cute..She almost forgets why she came...She stands over angads bed and bangs the tow frying pans.. making the ugliest noise...Angad gets scared and wakes up instantly.. with a concerned look on his face looking into his room..and then he sees her.. The one he deosn't ever want to see😆...

Angad: What the hell is this? How dare you come into my room.. GET OUT.. LET ME SLEEP.. DON"T COME BACK AGAIN..(angad has the most angriest look on his face..almost a kind of disgust)

Kripa doesn't care leaves the room silently and bursts into laughter..

Angad: Itna acha sapna dekh raha to.. Idiot.. Damn I hate her.. annoying woman..

Angad goes to sleep...again.......


This was a ordinary day out of angad and kripa's life...Now the real story begins...It begins with Naina and Neelam talking in the khanna's lving room..Having a very serious look on both their faces..

Naina: don't worry neelam..everything will be fine.. Main hoo naa..

Neelam: yes..par I'm worrying about kripa

Naina: tum choro yeh sab.. Go book your flight

Now this kripa overhears...

Kripa:FLIGHT.. WHAT FLIGHT!!! Kaun kahaan par jaa raha hai😕

Neelam: woh kripa your dad..

Kripa: DAD what happened to dad!!!TELL ME MOM

Neelam: kuch nahi beta...the doctors told him he has a burnout... He should take some rest....ANd I am going to London to take care of him..

Kripa: WHAAAAAAAAT.. you are kidding me right.. Mujhe akele chor ke jaao gi

Neelam: listen beta.. You can't come.. You know you have your final exams...

Kripa: BUT MO...

Kripa can't finish her sentence...coz her mom interrupts..

Neelam: You don't have to worry beta...Tum yahaan raho gayi.. Aunty Neelam ke paas...

Kripa gets a strange twinkle in her eyes..A whole week.. with the khanna;s .. with angad...😆

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This is the beginning of my story.. tell me if you guys like it.. I'll continue it then😳



Edited by Aisha_86 - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Like itT???!! I love it!😳
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its nice and cute 😃 😛 😉 ...and funny 😆
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its very nice plzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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I'm glad you guys liked it coz i wanted to continue😆

Ok so here I go again

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Angad hears Kripa's mom is going to london and he thinks kripa will joun her mom.. Little does the poor guy know.. Kripa isn't going anywhere.. She's still there and now she's IN HIS OWN HOUSE😆...That's why he gets a big shock when he sees her coming with a suitcase..

Nothing special happens though.. Angad is just really bothered and goes to bed early to avoid bumping on to kripa..

The next morning.. Angad is in his room working out.. Kripa goes to his room.. again without asking...Angad has a weight lifter in his hand...


Kripa: wow angad... Waise.. you don't need to work out you know..

She almost touches his arm to feel it and he rolls his eyes and turns his back towards her..

She goes and stand infront of him...Keeps looking at how he lifts the weight..

Angad: What? Tum uthaana chahti ho? Wana try..

Angad gives the weight to kripa..Kripa drops it and starts screaaming and sits on the bed holding her foot.

Kripa: ahhhhhh😭

Angad: KYA HUWA.... Lagiii😕? Did it hurt..

Kripa looks into his eyes and says..: Haa laggi😳

Angad again gets an angry look and now kripa knows its time to leave his room... She goes to naina and starts talking in her ear... Angad sees this and wonders what shes saying..

Naina: ANGAD! Yahaan aoo jaldi..

Angad gets scared.. Did kripa spill on him:?!

Angad: yes mom?

Naina: Angad...Kripa has to go shopping for her mom.. go take her.. she can't go alone can she.. Jaao choor do usko

Angad: Moom.. mein to isse hamesha CHOORNE (emphasises this word) ke liye tayaar hoo...heheh..par aaj nahi ok.. I have to go to my friends house ok?

Naina: SO WHAT... you can drop her? JAOO BAS mein kuch nahi sunna chahti..

Kripa gives a naughty smile to angad and angad gets out of the house.. cursing her for doing this.. He goes and sits in the car... Kripa has just put her self in the car.. not even closed the door yet.. And angad starts accelerating...Kripa almost falls out of the car.. and angad laughs evil in himself..Kripa doesn't care about these things (naive?)..

Right in the middle of the way.. Kripa yells: STOPPPPP roko roko ghaari..

Angad is like what?????😡 and stops the car..

Kripa runs out of the car.. sees a icecream saloon and says: Angad😳..Mujhe woh ice cream leke do gay😳..I forgot to bring my money..

Angad keeps cursing her but still gives the money..

Ice cream guy: Wow sir.. aap dono ki jodi KAMAAL HAI

Kripa gets shy and smiles.. bbut hides her smile from angad..

Angad: SHUT UP.. tum ice bech rahe ho.. Mind you own business..

Kripa sees a woman with a baby and starts playing with her baby...

Kripa: Babies are so cute na angad?

Angad: No babies are ugly now lets go..

Kripa: YOU LOOK LIKE A BABY😡

Kripa runs off to the car and angad throws a stone towards her, but misses (i know the guy is mean..but he isn't in love yet😳
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Angad and kripa reach home where their waits them a big surprise...Dilip is in the room talking to a man... Angad recognizes him immediatly.. Its Mr Mittal.. Dilips BEST CHILDHOOD friend...And he hasn't come alone.. He has come with Priya and Raj.. His two good-looking kids..

Angad looks around and sees this stunning girl and keeps looking at her... he even forgets to blink... Priya comes over

Priya: Hi angad.... and she hugs him (the...😡😆)

Angad is happy to see her too.. He and priya used to go to the same college and where "best friends😡" till priya and raj moved to America.. for their further study..Angad takes priya to the other room and catches up with her..

Kripa sees this and gets a strange feeling.. Is she jealous?... She has a feeling her life will change for good now.. Kripa sees angad Likes priya a lot.. And walks away....not nowing she;s being watched by Raj... who has seen her too and is mesmerized😆 (uh oh?_)

I know this was a little bore.. But believe me from now on it will get better..

Edited by Aisha_86 - 19 years ago
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Who needs EKTA...when your here Aisha... 😛
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Originally posted by: Vanzi

Who needs EKTA...when your here Aisha... 😛



Wooooow thaaaankss your sooo sweet😃😳!!!! thank you😛
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to need 2 rite more this is soooo GUD I LUV IT ALISHA plzz rite more
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that was great continue asap 😊 !
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Hey guys thanks for the great replies.. Let me continue then😆..😳

Ok so here it goes...I'll give a little summary and then my story will continue for realll..

Angad spends a lot of time with priya and something "blooms"... Their parents see it too.. and start talking about marriage... Naina brings the news to her son and asks him..


Angad starts blushing.. and says he's ready for marriage.. He thinks he has found his "match"..The parents start talking and fix the engagement.. while on the other hand It breaks kripas heart to find out angad will never be hers...Her mother is back.. and she goes back home.. Priya's gut feelings tell her kripa is in love with angad and insults her in some kind of way everytime she's around...She acts really bitchy everytime kripa's near and Angad tries to stop her.. but doesn't really mind.. (coz you know he dislikes kripa too)

Now.. today it's angad;s birthday and Priya is in the kitchen yelling at the cook.

Priya: Kheer banni ya nahi!

Cook: Yes meemshaab.. Ban gayi yeh li jiye..

Priya: Ok thanks now get out of the kitchen before someone sees you..

Priya walks out of the kitchen end the morron is looking in the mirror while walking to set her hair and impress angad with the kheer "she made" especially for himm... Becoz she isn''t paying attention.. she bumps on to kripa and her kheer falls down..

Priya: What the hell! Andi ho kya.. Dekh ke nahi chal sakti .. Damn it..

Kripa: sorry woh priya..

Priya: what sorry huh?!

Priya sees angad coming and starts to "cry" (damn it i hate her😡)

Angad: Kya huwa.. what happened why are you crying?

Priya: dekho na angad.. Maine tumhare liye yeh kheer banaayi..coz i wanted to surprise you.. it's your birthday...and...Kripa ne JAAN booch kar meri kheer gara di.. She is just jealous angad.. BECOZ SHE LOVES YOU...

She runs off leaving angad alone with kripa

Angad looks at kripa like his looking at the most horrible person in his life..

Angad: WHAT THE HELL IS YOU PROBLEM.... Can;t you just get a life... Mein jaanta tha ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho.. But i thought if i got engaged you would stop your nonsense.. But now you make my soon to bee fiancee cry.. DAMN IT... You are pathetic..

Angad gooes on insulting kripa..finally kripa blurts out

Kripa: YES i LOVED you.. I loved you a lot...I didn't care if you knew.. Would I act that stupid...NO.. coz I loved you.. Even if you didn't love me.. Why do you think I woke up early everyday.. only coz I could see you the first thing in the morning...But it was my mistake.. I had already given up the day your engagement was fixed.. What do you think I am? Tum aisa soch be kaise sakte ho angad?? (wow ekta the dramaqueen has got a power on me..) And she runs off...


Angad doesn't feel sorry at all.. and goes to his room... But everytime he closes his eyes he sees the tears in kripas eyes.. Nobody has ever seen kripa cry.. Is he feeling guilty? he thinks by himself.. NOOO I didn't love her.. It's not my mistake she loved me.. Than why do i feel so awfull?


****kaisa ye pyar hai tune****

The next morning Angad goes to the breakfast table where everybody is having breakfast...

Sur talks to her mom and says: Mom? aaj sunday hai na? To phir kripa kyon nahi aayi.. Now this is weird.. And she starts laughing..

Angad was just about to take a bite from his bread.. but leaves it and stands up..

Naina: ANgad.. yeh kya beta.. Nashta to kar ke jaoo..

Angad: No mom.. mujhe bookh nahi hai..

angad has a depressed look on his face and priya sees this..She goes after him.. Angad is sitting on his chair (moving)..and starts to flirt with him to distract him...But angad isn't appreciating it..

Priya: Angad.. Aoo challe hum dono bahar ghoomne?

Angad: no i am not in the mood sorry.. Mere tabiat kuch theek nahi.. Let me rest ok.. some other time plz?

Priya: NO angad.. I want to go.. STand up..

Angad goes with her and they go to a park with a lot of children.. Priya gets annoyed real soon..

Priya: hum kisi private jaga nahi jaa sakte the.. Their are o many kids here.. and they are screaming a lot.. It gives me a headache..

Angad looks at priya and can't believe she said that but ignores that.. Then he sees a very cute baby.. and starts playing with the baby.. he picks the baby up and talks to priya thru it.. Priya laughs coz she sees angad loves babies..

Priya: Mujhe do zara angad.. (she wants to impress agaiN)

Priya holds the baby but the baby just had some milk and throws it up.. On her clothes( way to go babe👏😆).. priya looks disgusted

Priya: Ewlll Angad take this baby.. Mere saare kapre kharab kar diue .. Chi... and she looks really disgusted at the baby..

Priya: Thats why I don't like to hold babies..

Angad instantly remembers the way kripa played with the baby and starts smiling.. He gets back to his senses and wipes his smile as soon as possible..and again has this distracted sad look on his face..

****Kaisaaa ye pyaaaaar hai tune*****


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To be continued😳

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