My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 10

Originally posted by: Aisha_86

Hey guys what do you suggest.. I still don't know which name to use for my ff..

tere pyar mein ho jaao Fanaa?😳

Destroyed in Love😳

Teri Aashiqui mein😳

Hamara yeh rishta..😳

I dun like any of thes.. You give me suggestions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

id say Teri Aashiqui Mein is best😳

Guys thank you so much for the suggestions.. SO I go for:

Teri Aashiqui Mein

It's taking a little long for me too post i know and i am sorry😭.. But i promise this one will be reaaaaaal funn...At least i hope soo.. And i promise.. it wont be a sad story for toooo long😳

Someone else is going to find out about angad and kripa... guess who that is😉 What will that person do?? Will he/she stop this drama... and make kripa and angad one.. or will he/she ruin it even more?????

What you guys think?😛...and remember...Distance makes the love even stronger... LOLZZ!!..😆

Sorry to make you guys wait for so long..I'll try to make it up..

Previously:

Angad and Kripa heared the news of the early engagement/wedding...And so my story continues:


Everybody has packed their bags...Kripa walks to the wagon where everyone else has already taken seat...She turns around and sees angad standing there... angad looks at her with hurtfull eyes..They are both devastated...

Angad sits in his own car and is in no mood to drive his car... He keeps looking at kripa and then Sheman comes..

Priya: Angaddd! I'll sit next to you ok!...

Angad doesn't want her sitting next to him.. HE wants to be left alone..

Angad: Why don't you sit where you were sitting before...?

Angad is very much annoyed...But also feels sorry for priya..

Priya: Why what's the problem..? Can't I spend some private time with my fiancee... Uff angad.. Humne ek minute bhi ek saath nahi guzaara...And waise bhi.. let the others sit a little more comfy..

The others have already left and Angad starts driving too... Angad keeps thinking about Kripa and Kripa too is only thinking about angad in the car.. They both think about the happy moments spent together..Again the song dil teri deewanagi is played again on the background.. This time with male voice😳

((((((I don't know if you guys can listen, i uploaded it. http://www.megaupload.com/nl/?d=RWKC2NQN)))))



Angad is still distracted and still driving.. Priya keeps on chatting in his ear but he doesn't listen.. A long the road he sees a girl eating ice cream.. and the guy buying it for her... He remembers kripa and himself and starts smiling again... He isn't paying any attention to the road..He almost closes his eyes..



Priya: ANGADDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad looks at the road and almost hits another car.. He pushes the brakes as hard as he can... THe car stops... It's immediately silent...

Priya: Angad.. kin khayalon mein khoye hoye ho.. Keep your eyes on the road!!!!!

Angad looks sad and sad tune plays*****Kaisa YE pyar Haii******

Scene switches...

Everybody has finally reached..and the Sangeet/Mehndi for kripa preparations start....Kripa goes to her room and stands on her balcony...looking at the moon... ANgad is also in his balcony gaizing at the stars...They both notice each other and keep gazing at each other... with tears in their eyes...



Angad's eyes speak: Kripa...Ye kaisa modh aa gaya hai humari zindagi mein...Itni paas ho ke bhi tum meri nahi ho...

Kripa's heart talks to angad: Ek dooje ko chahte hai hum.. par chaah kar bhi ek nahi ho sakte....

Neelam: Kripaaaa.. Kya kar rahi ho beta..

Kripa goes back to her room...and the scene stops on angads face...Angad tries going to sleep but has nightmares of kripa getting married with Raj..He even dreams he kills raj only to have kripa to himself...Angad wakes up yelling her name.. And realises it was just a dream...

Next day...(around 6 pm)

Everyone is sitting around kripa and putting mehndi on her hands....Meanwhile angad is getting nuts and leaves the house...Kripa can only think about angad.. And how he must be feeling...She gets tears in her eyes and goes to her room..

Kripa opens the door of her room.. her window is open and there stand Angad.....She is shocked...

She is about to say something but angad holds her lips..

Angad: Kripa....I was turning mad without you and the thougt we'll never be together...I can't let you get engaged.....I CAN'T

Kripa: I know angad.. I love you too... But's it too late...

Angad: it's not...

Angad grabs kripa and hugs her... For a while kripa just stands there.. But finally hugs him back...Angad feels happy...Kripa forgot she has mehndi on her hands and angad is wearing a WHITE shirt!

Seene se lag ja tu..
Mein hu tera deewana..
Mujhe tujhse milne se roke ga kya zamaana...
chodunga na saath tera..
Mein sab kuch loota doo gaa..
Teri chaahat mein...

Main sab kuch bhooladoonga teri chaahat mein...


To be continued guyss... Hope you liked it😳

They'll be together soon.. This way there love grows and they realise even more they can't live without each other😉