My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago
great part.........it was too good and angad finally told priya to shut up dats was awesome........plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing parts! continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
NICEEEEEEEE!! that was awesome!! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
I am glad you guys liked it!!... 😳 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was awesome
plz contineu soon
i can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
just read it alll
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OK... so Angad and Kripa got married... They got into the sacred bond Of MARRIAGE.. And now there's NO WAY ANYONE can break them....😛



...So my story continues..

All the familymembers are speechles... They don't know what to say.. or what to do.....Angad and Kripa are married... And now nothing else can be done about it..

Angad looks at kripa... Kripa still has tears in her eyes... He takes her hand and goes to his parents... He stands in front of his mother.... Just than Naina gives Angad one tight slap..... (ok guys he deserved in a parent-perspective.. although naina deserves on too😆)

Naina: Angad... TUm aisa kar bhi sakto ho.. I can't believe.. GET OUT...

Dilip: Naina... what are you saying....TUm hosh mein hoo..

Naina: YES I AM... I don't want to see his face ever again...

Angad looks at his mom.. but he was already expecting this...Kripa looks at her mom and her mom just walks away......Totally disappointed in her daughter...

Angad takes kripas hand... and they leave from there....

Scene switches...

Angad and Kripa are both walking on the road... Together.... They are both still distracted... Thinking about what they just did....Then suddenly it starts raining dogs....

They see a hotel and run to it..... They get a room...😳..(nothing happened as yet)

Scene switches:

At the Khanna's everyone is in a heavy depression/discussion... Priya is Crying like all hell broke loose and Raj is just sitting there upset... Saying nothing...

Naina: Mr Mittal, PLz try and understand...Woh

Mr Mittal: theres no explanation for this...Just leave it naina...

Naina: Dilip.. IT's ALL YOUR FAULT tumne usse bohat sar par charaya hai... You spoilt the idiot!

Mr MIttal: IT's NOONES fault.. Ab choor do is baat ko...Leave it like it is...

Priya: Whats wrong with you dad???? Apne mujhe tab kyon rooka? I could have stopped angad.. He would have never gotten married...

Mr. Mittal: Just give up priya... Why don't you JUST GIVE UP?? angad ne tumse shayad kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi... He loves kripa... That's why they are together.......It would have been wrong if we stopped them.. ITs'better now... Agar yeh sab shaadi ke baad hota to! It would have been a disaster.. This heartbreak is nothing compared to what you would have gone through THEN!...

Raj says nothing.. and leaves from there silently..

Naina: I don't care if they love each other... Angad kitna bhi Kripa se pyar kare... I WILL NEVER ACCEPT THAT GIRL.. Never..

Mr Mittal: Oh come on naina... You will have to.. If you want your son in yur Life...

Naina: Angad mere liye mar gaya.. (oh wat disaster!)

Scene switches.....:

Angad and kripa ar both sitting on the bed.... Kripa is crying... Angad goes over to console her.... Kripa walks away..

Kripa: Angad... Why did you do this.......What did we get from this...Tumne wo dard humare parents ki aankhon mein dekha..?

Angad: I know kripa... Par ye zaroori tha... What where yu going to do then... keep silent.. And marry that RAJ!!!!? who practically tried to RAPE you?

Kripa starts crying even more...

Angad: arent you happy to be my wife...?

Angad has a desperate look on his face and looks at kripa...



This time Angad is really hurt by Kripa's words..... He can't see the slightest bit of happiness in her eyes.. While their dream came true.. No matter how much heartbreak.. IT DID COME TRUE... THey are married for god SAKE!....

Kripa sees and feels angads pain.....He is about to walk away but she stops him...They both look at each other ... Kripa comes close to angad.. ANd kisses him..



tu hi meri shab hai subha hai tu hi din hai mera
tu hi mera rab hai jahaan hai tu hi meri duniya
tu waqt mere liye main hoon tera lamha
kaise rahega bhala hoke tu mujhse judaa

aankhon se padhke tujhe dil pe maine likha
tu ban gaya hai mere jeene ki ek wajah

Angad comes close to kripa and kisses her too..😳



tu hi meri shab hai subha hai tu hi din hai mera
tu hi mera rab hai jahaan hai tu hi meri duniya
tu waqt mere liye main hoon tera lamha
kaise rahega bhala hoke tu mujhse judaa

aankhen teri shabnami chehra tera aaina
tu hai udaasi bhari koi haseen dastaan


(you Should really listen to this song during this scene.. Wow......😳I am getting shy because of A-K's chemistry...!)

Angad and kripa are getting totally lost into each other... Angad kisses kripa all over ... and is almost going too far...



Just then kripa pulls away... AND>......STOPS...him...(Whyyyy?!)
Angad is like WT????


Now.... why she did that😕

Wait till the next part😉

Too be continued soon..........


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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
i like mr.mittal he understood the situation but naina 😡 n i think kripa doesn't wanna go far until their parents accept n i listen 2 tehs ong while readin n i wus blushin n i luv that song well
continue soon

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