My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago
i hope by shocking u mean it in a good way for us lol like they run far far away together hehe!! great part plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

cont soon plz!!!!!!! 😊


can u please continue ur fan-fic iqbals4ever? sharam???
or did u already continue if u have please send me the link? 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv


can u please continue ur fan-fic iqbals4ever? sharam???
or did u already continue if u have please send me the link? 😭



i hav almost finished the next part of sharam and will post it soon but this is abt aisha86's fanfic cont soon plz!😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever




i hav almost finished the next part of sharam and will post it soon but this is abt aisha86's fanfic cont soon plz!😊

sry i shud have pmed...please continue soon aisha86
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Posted: 19 years ago
Finally cot up wid ur story !!!!!! 😛

its damn gud !!!! 👏

keep da wrk going !! continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Guys sorry it took so long Now I'll continue..

So previously:

Angad and Kripa have decided to do what everyone wants.... They have decided not to tell anyone about each other and to marry Raj and Priya... They don't know how their future will be...But it's the best for everyone in their lives...

Couple of days go by and angad and Kripa haven't seen each other.....It's Angad and Priya's wedding and all the engagements are in full action... It's a hectic day and Raj realises Kripa hasn't come yet...

Raj asks Naina: Aunty...woh kripa abhi tak nahi aayi.. she was going to help out too wasnt she?

Naina: Yes beta... I don't know.. jaao usse le aao jaake..

This is just what Raj wanted to hear.. he goes to kripa's house and her mother lets him in..

Neelam: arre Raj.. What are you doing here...

Raj: woh mein Kripa ko..

Neelam: Oh yes yes... Kripa abhi bathroom mein hai... You wait in her room i'll send her ok..

Raj sees the door of kripa's room is open... and goes into her room.. he looks around and sees her picture... He holds her picture and starts making all kind of promises...

Raj: Kripa... You know how much I love you.. I'll make you the happiest girl in the wordl...I promise...

Raj blushes and puts the picture back.. Just then he sees a beatifull locket next to the picture and looks at it...

Raj wonders....He picks up the locket and keeps staring at it: It's kripa's locket... So this is her taste.... I'll buy one for her and give her on our wedding day..

Raj realises the locket can open.....He is too curious and opens the locket.....This is one thing he better shouldn't have done... He is shocked to see whats inside.... He sees kripas pic on one half of the locket... and where he expected his own.. THERE'S ANGAD's!! Raj can't believe his eyes... his world starts falling apart in that one moment.... He stands there for a while and suddenly gets angry.....He walks away.....

Neelam ocmes in his way and asks him: raj beta kahaan jaa rahe ho... Kripa abhi aa rahi hai..

raj ignores her and walks away...

Scene switches to the Khanna's...
The preparations are still going on.. T he pandit has already arrived and has started to wait for the right mahurat... Not all the guests have arrived as yet and even the bride and groom aren't ready yet... There's still an hour to go till the wedidng... Kripa is helping out and sees angad...

They both look at each other with tears in their eyes .....


Their eyes talk..

Kripa:
Tum Ho Gham Ko Chupaye
Main Hoon Sar Ko Jhukaye
Tum Bhi Chup Ho
Main Bho Chup Hoon
Kaun Kise Samjhaye
Ab Dooriyan Itni Hain To
Milna Yahan Kal Ho Naa Ho

Angad:
Sach Hai Ke Dil To Dukha Hai
Hamne Magar Socha Hai
Dil Jo Hai Gham Kyon
Aankh Hai Nam Kyon
Hona Hi Tha Jo Hua Hai
Us Baat Ko Jaane Bhi Do
Jiska Nishaan Kal Ho Naa Ho



Raj comes back and isn't looking allright.. hes very silent....
(nobody notices hes drunk)

Mr Mittal: Hey raj,, tum kahaan gaye the...

Raj is silent and sees Kripa going up the stairs.... : dad... Mein abhi aaya...

He starts following Kripa ***Drums in the background*** Angad notices somethings wrong with raj..

Kripa goes to surs room to adjust her dupatta just then Raj comes in....

Kripa :Raj... tum yahaa....



Raj: SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Raj pulls kripa real close to him... Kripa gets scared and asks him what is wrong... He throws her on the bed...



Raj is out of his mind and tries going too far.. forgetting all the guests are outside....He is about to do something.. But then is pulled away... By angad... angad starts punches raj in his face and raj falls down...Angad holds kripa and puts her dupatta around her again.. Kripa is crying and clinges to angad....Just then all the familymembers come in..

Naina: ANGAD what's going on...!

Raj takes his oppurtunity and yells.: Look aaunty... Angad aur Kripa humme dokha de rahe hai... I caught them red handed... and when I told Angad I will tell everyone he punched me..

Angad: JOOTH BOLTA HAI.. HE:S LIeing mom BELIEVE ME...

Naina, Neelam and Priya know angad and kripa are indeed in love.. And so start believing Raj...

Kripa: No mom you have to believe me.. Raj tried to..

Priya interrupts Kripa: OH SHUT UP KRIPA.. Its known by now.. You are a BESHARAM girl.. you had an eye on my brother and on my fiancee from day one.. YOU ARE CHARACTERLESS.. My brother isn't lying you are!!

Priya starts throwing all kinds of accusations towars kripa and just then angad has had
enough

Angad: JUST SHUT UP... Agar tum mein se kissi ne bhi kirpa ke khilaaf ek shabd bhi bola... Then...



Everybody is looking shocked at angad... Raj gets furious.. but is unable to do anything now... The secret is out....Angad looks at kripa




he grabs her hand and starts walking with her....Priya tries to come in their way but her father stops her...Angad walks down the stairs with kripa......He goes to the pandit sitting their and takes the sindoor ki dabbi...

He waits and keeps looking at her He then applies the sindoor on her forehead...Kripa is shocked and all others are shocked too..



Angad then looks at the pandit and the pandit realises what he has to do... Angad grabs kripas hand and starts taking the Phere...Nobody can do anything.............................

Ab shuroo ho gayi nayi daastaan..
Hamarri Yeh nayi zindagaani..
Poori huwi ab hamari pyaar ki kahaani..
Bhulaa denge saara jaahan...

Teri Aashiqui mein..


*****Kaisa ye pyaar Hai*******


To Be continued guys.....


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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG what a great part! I'm fainting!!!!!!!😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
aweosme finally married yess n that raj 😡
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow that was awesome 👏 cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
YES!!!!!! exactly wat i wanted.. i think raj planned this.. i really dont want him to be a neg charecter.. well. thats up to u tho.. but amazing part. my heart was beating so fast that i was about to have a heart attack!!!
continue soon.. cuz i cant wait to find out how the paremts and all react!!

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