My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 16

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Posted: 19 years ago
very nice....plz continue... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Sorry Again guys for taking that long... ๐Ÿ˜• Really sorry...

So Angad and Kripa went back to the Khanna's residence... They arrive and are both treated very well..

Sur is delighted to see her brother...: Bhai!!!!! And now i can call YOU bhabi can't I?๐Ÿ˜ณ Sur gives both angad and kripa a naughty look

Angad and Kripa look at each other and blush.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Naina: Angad jaao.. Kripa ko kamra dekha lo.. So she can settle in..

Angad is happy he can spend some time alone with kripa.. He throws himself on the bed... He notices kripa unpacking her clothes and opening the closet... He looks sneaky and instantly jumps off the bed..

Angad: Uhm Kripa? Yeh Tum Kya kar rahi hoo?

Kripa: what do you mean? Apne kapre is almari mein rakh rahi hoo..

Angad: hehehhe.. dekho kripa..

Angad walks behind her and hugs her..



Angad: Look.. mein apni almari share nahi kar sakta.. You will put your clothes.. It will be annoying you know... To see al thos saris/kurtas... Mujhe apne kapron ke liye privacy chahiye hai..

Kripa looks at angad with a stunned look..

Kripa: Ok... Challo theek hai... Mein sur ke paas ja kar reh leti hoo

Kripa is just about to walk away but angad stops her

Angad: arre mein to bas mazaak kar raha tha... you can use the whole closet.. Jaga bana lenge na...

He kisses her on her cheek




Kripa looks at him with a "yuck" look on her face and whipes her cheek.. She irritates him and runs out of the room.. Angad runs behind her and is just about to pick her up when they both stop and look at who is standing there in the living room... KRIPA's PARENTS!

Kripa is stunned to see her parents... But the unexpected happens.. Neelam and Neeraj open their arms and kripa runs to them and starts to cry...

Kripa: Mom dad.... Apne mujhe maaf kar diya?

Neelam and Neeraj hug their daughter once again and Neelam kisses kripa on her head...

Neelam: haa beta... Hum tum dono ko aashirwaad dene aaye hai...

Angad walks to them and touches their feet... Everyone sits around to have some tea and to chat... Angad sneaks out and calls sur..

Sur: Kya hai bhaiya...?

Angad: Aao sunno...

Angad whispers in sur's ear... (not shown what's being said..)

Sur: Wow bhaiya MiNdblowing idea... Dekhna mein kaise pataati hoo..

**Scene switches**

Kripa's parents leave and say goodbye to their daugther.. Sur comes running to her parents..

Sur: MOM DAD!!!!!!!!!! Today is Kabhi Alvida Na kehna's PRemiere.. Mujhe dekhni hai plz mere saath jaao.. I have already booked three tickets..

Naina: no.. no beta... Angad aur Kripa ko saath le jaao na..

Sur: Uffoo Mama.. Aap samajhti nahi hoo... I want to go with YOU TWO..

Naina doesn't buy it.. And certainly isn't in the mood to leave angad and Kripa alone...

Sur goes over dilip and whispers in his ear...

DIlip: Oh haa.. Theek hai beta tayaar ho jao..

Naina is still hesitant but dilip convinces her in going... The three of them get ready and leave...

Kripa: angad... Woh mein nahane jaa rahi hoo...

Angad doesn't say anything and starts laughing...

**Scene switches**

Kripa comes out of the bathroom and sees a letter on the dresser..

"meet me at the outhouse, Love angad"

Kripa starts smiling and thinks, whats angad up to?

She puts on a gorgeous churidaar and looks lovely.. She goes to the outhouse.. Just as she opens the door she sees how lovely and romantic it has been decorated... With candels all over the place... She looks around but doesn't see angad...

Suddenly she hears someone....

Chaand Sifarish Jo karta hamari..
Deta woh tumko bata...

Kripa looks behind and sees angad... She starts blushing and tries walking past him..

Angad stops her... and pulls her real close..




chaand sifarish jo karta hamari deta woh tumko bata
sharm-o-haya ke parde gira ke karni hain hamko khata
zidd hain ab toh hain khud ko mitana hona hain tujhmein fanaa ๐Ÿ˜ณ


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teri adaa bhi hain jhonke wali chhu ke gujar jaane de
teri lachak hain ke jaise daali dil mein utar jaane de
aaja baahon mein karke bahana hona hain tujhmein fanaa


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SubhanAllah..SubhanAllah




Jannat Hai Yeh Zameen oh Piya Tere Ishq Mein
Mein Kya se Kya Huwi.. Oh Piya Tere Ishq Mein
Apna banale Mujhe Apna banaa..
Sapna Sajade Mera Sapna Sajaa..

Jannat hai Yeh Zameen.. Oh Piya tere Ishq Mein..๐Ÿ˜ณ






So finally Angad and Kripa became ONE!

That's it for now..

I'll continue later this week.. I'll try to make it sooner this time ๐Ÿ˜•


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Posted: 19 years ago
HOW CUTE!!!! plz continue soon that was awesome!
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part
continue soon evil naina ๐Ÿ˜ก
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat woz awesome!! luvd it!!
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 19 years ago
pllzz continue...its sch a long timmee...
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome fic ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ i just read all d parts 2day and liked dem a lot ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and last part was just fab ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› cont soon ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooon ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 18 years ago
i just read the entire fan fic in 3 hrs n i totally loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
i havr read your ff today it is great ,fantastic,wonderful!
continue soon
great job๐Ÿ˜Š

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