My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
great part love mr.mitaal (not literally 😆 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
im so happy mittal agreed but i have a feeling he will be the villian in the story.. i dont know y but its just a feeling.. but why did she stop him and how??? lol!!! well.. continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
I am sorry its taking too long but I am very busy nowadays.. I'll try continuing Tonight... 😕 😊
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Ok guys i am reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllyyyyyyyyyyy realllllllllllllllllly sorry for making you wait for sooooo long.. But I ws VERYYYY busyy..

But now I'll try making the best of it

So here it goes...

Previously..:

It's angad and kripa's wedding night😳 and Angad is totally focussed on his lady love...



Kripa stopped him...Now my story continues..

Angad looks at kripa with a disturbed look on his face..

Kripa: Angad.. I am sorry...

Angad: Sorry......?

Kripa: Woh angad... Mujhe yeh theek nahi lag raha...

Angad: what do you mean! Tum meri biwi hoo.. We are married....!

Kripa: Just because we took saath phere? .. I know we are husband and wife now... But who has accepted it? No one... Logon ke saamne tumaari shaadi priya se hone wali thi... Aur meri raaj ke saath... Duniya hamme pati aur patni nahi maanti..

Angad: The heck with the world... Humme to patta hai ke humne koi galat baat nahi ki..

Kripa: Kya tum khush reh sakto hoo... Keeping your parents unhappy.. and unless they accept us..

Angad is silent and doesn't answer kripa's question...

Kripa: no we cant angad... I love you.. and only you can be my husband... But not till aur parents accept aur marriage... I want to bee a real suhaagan.. Only when aur parents accept us.. and we go back to YOUR home..

Angad is hesitant.. but realizes this is something kripa really wants...
and he agrees with her to some extent...

*scene switches*

Priya is standing in angads room and picks up his gorgeous picture😳 on the cupboard and starts crying.... Naina comes from behind and puts her hand on her shoulder...

Priya wants to walk away but Naina stops her... They start discussing... Its not shown what they are saying.. (ekta style😉)

Priya goes away finally..


* scene switches *

Angad and Kripa are in there Room....Kripa just took a shower and is drying her hair..Angad looks at how gorgeous shes looking... He goes behind her... and starts smelling her hair..

kripa turns around and angad an kripa are REALLY close now....Angad tries to kiss kripa and just when he is real close to her.. she puts her finger on his lips..

Angad: WHAT... Now i cant kiss you??

Kripa: No! Tumse sabar nahi hota kya?

Angad is irritated.. he starts tickeling kripa and they both fall on the bed... Kripa on top of angad...😳

Angad holds kripa tightly and doesnt want her to stand up.. He removes the hair from kripa's face....Kripa is almost drawn away.. but pulls herself back in time...

Angad: uhm.. challo acha.. Mujhe bohat neend aa rahi hai...

He lies down on the bed... and turns of the light..Kripa turns the light on again

Kripa: Angad.. utho.. tum yahaan nahi so ge.. I'll sleep here and You will sleep on the sofa...

Angad: WHAT sofa NOW WAY..!

Angad and kripa start bickreing...

Kripa: OK fine... Mine jaa rahi hi sofa par soney..

Angad Grabs kripa's hand just as she wants to walk away...

Angad: wait...

Angad takes some sheets out of the dresser and spreads it on the floor next to the bed...He lies down on it...

Angad: Kirpa.. Ab tum let jaao...

He tells kripa to llie on the bed next (above) him...Kripa lies down...
They both lie down in a way they can look at each other...Angad puts his hands up.. and holds kripa;s hand... He kisses her hand... Kripa in her turn kisses his... angad takes kripas hand real close to his chest... In this position they both fall asleep😳

To Be continued Guys..

I am sorry i didn't use pix but I am at my work and here they dont have such a great inet connection so its hard to get the pix! I ll try adding sum pix later!

Agains SORRYY!

Luv-Aisha






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Posted: 19 years ago
fit was a great part... i really liked it.. it wasnt much but it was goodd.. umm continue soonn.. after ur internet connection gets better..ill wait till then
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Posted: 19 years ago
Amazing part !!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

VERYYYYY SORRYYYYY ... Now I'll Continue more often... I was too busy lately 😭

Ok so angad and kripa slept by each others side that night.. Now my story continues the other day....


Angad wakes up and sees kripa is still asleep... He removes the hair coming in front of her face... He goes closer and kisses her on the forehead.. Kripa wakes up and they both stair at each other..

Angad: Utho... meri liye chaay banao...

Kripa: what :-s

angad: Haan.. Ab tum meri biwi ho... GO get me some tea jaldi se...


Kripa stands up and is about to go to get angad some tea... And angad stops her...

Angad: Kahaan jaa rahi ho?

Kripa: Tumhaari liye chaay lana..


Angad pulls kripa onto his lap..

Angad: Kripa do you know how happy I am having you as my wife... Mujhe aise lagta hai jaise mere saare sapne poore ho gaye.. KOi khwahish nahi aur is zindagi mein...Angad again kisses kripa forehead



Kripa: You know... Kal tak mujhe bohat dar lag raha tha... But this is right.. WE belong together.. Hum apni families ko bhi manaa lenge...

Angad hugs kripa and they share a cute and lovely moment together



Angad: acha ab choro mein nahane jaa raha hoo...wanna come..

Kripa hits angad with his naughty thoughts

Kripa: ANGADDD! She runs behind him and he runs into the bathroom..

KRipa sits on the bed for a while waiting for angad to come out.. suddenly there's a knock on the door..

Kripa: is waqt... kaun ho sakta hai.


She goes to the door and opens it real slowly...

Kripa is shocked to see who's there


Kripa: Aaappppp?

Kripa is standing face to face with her mother-in-lay...Naina.... Kripa doesn't know what to say and is scared... She keeps standing there saying nothing..

Naina: Kya huwa.. Mujhe andar nahi bulaao ghi..

Kripa doesn't understand what to do...: Oh ofcourse.. I am sorry

Naina comes into their hotelroom and looks around with a disgusted look on her face but then turns around and looks at kripa with whole another look... She's smiling...............

Naina: Kaisi ho kripa..... aur angad kaisa hai?

Kripa: THeek hai.. Par aunty aap yahaan kaise...

Naina: KRipa mein tum dono ko lene ke liye aayi hoo..Challe ghi na.. Apne ghar...

Kripa is getting excited....: Kya aunty sahi!

Naina: Aunty nahi.. Mummyji


kripa runs to naina and hugs her... Naina looks disgusted but doesn't let kripa know... They begin to talk like friends... Kripa starts crying and appologizes for whatever happened... She has tairs in her eyes and is whiping them away.. just then angad comes and sees this.. he thinks his mother is making kripa cry.. He gets an angry look on his face immediately..



Angad: Mom.. Aap yahaan kya kar rahi hai...

angad looks at kripa he goes to her...

Angad: Kya kaha mom ne tumse..

Kripa: angad... It's not like that.. Woh hume saaath le jaane ke liye aayi hai...

Angad doesn;t believe it...And is not willing to listen to any thing..

Naina: angad i realise i was wrong.. Tum kripa se pyaar karte ho... aur yeh mujhe bhi pata tha.. Plz ghar wapas aa jao..


Anga"d: No mom... Hum aapke saath nahi jaayege... aap jaaye ab yahaan se... Us ghar me Kripa ki izzat kisi ne nahi ki..

Naina looks at angad and is disappointed.. she leves the house....

Angad is depressed and sits on the bed holding his head... Kripa comes sit next to him..

Kripa: Angad why did you do this.. Woh tumhaari mom hai.. Aur unho ne hamse maafi bhi maangi.. I appologized to her too.. and she forgave me...

Angad: I dont care...

Kripa: Angaad....... HUmne bhi to galti ki.. We have hurt so many people.. If they can forgive us.. then why can't we forgive them...

Angad looks at kripa..



Kripa continues trying to convince him...

Kripa: Angad plz ab ghar chalte hai...Mein aise nahi rehna chahti ..



Angad realises kripa is right.. SHe has the convincing power 😉

Angad: Acha theek hai.. We will go back.. Pack your bags.. Mom ko bataa do ke hum aa rahe hai...

Kripa is happy and hugs angad....Angad kisses kripa



And they leave.....


To be continued..

Sorry for the delay
😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG WOW!! i jus d hole fing n its briliant!!
absolutly mindblowin!!
u'v dun a gr8 job 👏 👏 👏
plz continu as soon as u can
cant w8 4 d nxt part!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 19 years ago
mind-blowin fanfic ..dis z really kwell ...plzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue sooon.. wonder wat naina has in mind..

good part btw....

wat about kripa's mom.. i wonderrrrr..... i think naina and kripa's mom is in it together.. wats their plan.. only time will tell so please dont make us wait too longg............................

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