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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh u finaly back.
Superb update.
1 questn in last part u wrote "he threw his wife" did he 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

Oh u finaly back.
Superb update.
1 questn in last part u wrote "he threw his wife" did he 🤣



it was a typo.but it was a good one,he threw his wife.😆

@radhi lets see if he will be caught or not as neera definitely won't let that happen plus that locket,wo locket rumasha ka baap hain.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede



it was a typo.but it was a good one,he threw his wife.😆

@radhi lets see if he will be caught or not as neera definitely won't let that happen plus that locket,wo locket rumasha ka baap hain.



Yeah, That's Right !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊Merry Christmas Moni and Happy New Years and need some time
SO Big Reees

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awesomeee part <3👏

so poor hrithvik will be tortured eh? he's already in pain.. i wanna know wat neera does next.

update soon if possible n thanks a ton for this pm & continuing this🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter-2-Final Goodbye
Hrithvik entered the room desperately.
Hrithvik-where is Neera?
Yuuvi had a sad expression on his face.
Hrithvik-where is she?😡
Yuuvi-she is upstairs.
He ran upstairs to meet her.
Nupur read yuuvi's mind.
Nupur-why?why she wants this?
Yuuvi-you know her better,why are you asking?After all you are her niece.
Nupur-huh,Niece,a niece who used to torcher her.
The kids came running.
Nandini-where is mom?
Yuuvi saw her with sad expression.
Hrithvik entered the room.Neera turned.Their faces met each other.
Neera and Hrithvik both had tears in their eyes.
He didn't think for a second and ran to kiss her.They kissed passionately like it was their first time.
Hrithvik-why you left me like this?why?😭
Rathod was standing outside as he too was happy to see neera but couldn't show it in front of Hrithvik.
Neera-i...i...i am sorry.😭
Hrithvik-why tell me,just why?i thought you would never leave me.you don't know how much i missed you.
Neera-i don't deserve such compassion from you.I am LEAVING.
Hrithvik shocked.
Virat and Manvi entered the mansion.
The kids turned.They saw them with strange eyes.
Yuuvi-k..kids...they are your ah...grandparent's ah...siblings.
Karthik-what?😕
Yuuvi couldn't say it and he left.
Nandini was about to go after him when Nupur grabbed her.
Nandini-master???😕
Hrithvik-why?no you can't separate Yuuvi from Nandini.They belong together.
Neera-i too find yuuvi perfect for her but it is for her safety.
Hrithvik-safety,from Rumasha?
Neera-yes,you now know many things about her,don't you?(with a sarcastic smile)
Hrithvik-Master told me about her.And my another ...
Neera-i know about veena.
Hrithvik-Veena?
Neera-your daughter,who cries there.
Hrithvik was speechless.He wanted to cry but just couldn't.
Neera-I am leaving.This is the last time you are seeing me.As she was about to leave He grabbed her from behind.
Hrithvik-what is the reason behind you sadness?why you are being so cruel to me?From my childhood till now i have seen nothing but sadness.The only light in my life was Surya and she was snatched away from me by some cruel witch and Now when i started loving you,you are leaving me in pain.
Neera just couldn't bear such important words from his mouth because she didn't deserve all this compassion at all.
Neera touched his hands and grabbed him in vein.

Neera-I am so sorry.
she turned towards him and grabbed his face.
Hrithvik-why you look at me with such sadness?what has caused all this?Is it something related to rumasha?
Neera hugged him desperately.He too did and kissed her neck.
Hrithvik-Don't leave me.
Neera-I Don't love you.
Hrithvik-ah
Neera-I ...I love you...
Hrithvik-what you mean?
Neera-I don't love Hrithvik,I love VIKRANT.
Hrithvik-huh?
She kissed him again.
Neera-na na na na na...na na na ...na na na na...
Hrithvik-huh this tune...wh...what?Hrithvik suddenly started fainting.
Neera-when you get up you will understand everything,all your memories will come back to you and...and you will realize the person you love is the person you hate the most.Still i am happy that i was able to live this world with much sanity and most importantly with you.I will protect you from my own shadow(rumasha),the person who is reason for our meeting and also of sadness in our life.
Jhanvi came running to the room.
Jhanvi-mom...mom...ah what happened to Daddy?
Neera-its nothing.😭
Jhanvi-mom those two people who came with you,they are forcefully taking Nandini with them.
Neera-i know.
Jhanvi-but why?
Neera-to your brother,Rehan.
Jhanvi-Rehan?😕
Neera-honey listen,i want you to take this.She gave her a diary.
Jhanvi-huh...
Neera-this is a very important thing but read it only when i leave.
Jhanvi-where you are leaving for again?
Neera hugged her.
Neera-Never become like me,Remember that.You are not a Flower of Hell.Please never bloom there.
Jhanvi-huh...
Neera came downstairs.
Nandini-no i don't want to go,yuuvi.
Yuuvi was all crying in his room.
Nandini-no...
Maanvi-Nandini...we are taking you to your grandparent's house where your new born brother is.
Karthik-then i want to go to.
Neera-no karthik,you can't.You are needed here to protect others.
Nandini-I want to protect others as well.
Neera-you are not powerful enough.
Nandini-no i am,why only jhanvi is considered as powerful,why only she?why only she gets happiness.you can't separate me from...
Neera-you are a child,you won't understand such deep things.
Nandini-and jhanvi can,this is not fair,not fair,no...not fair.😭
Neera made her faint.
Neera-Virat,take her.
Virat picked him and took her to the car.
Nupur-What you are planning now?
Neera came outside without saying anything.
Nupur-Hey you can't go...Neera pushed her with her powers.
Neera-you...take care of others.I am off to my home.(referring to valkyrie)😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
was this update that bad that no one liked to comment on it?

it would have been better if i just abandoned it instead of getting humiliation.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede

was this update that bad that no one liked to comment on it?


it would have been better if i just abandoned it instead of getting humiliation.



kya yar... u should not feel disappointed.. comments will come, its just u need 2 understand, sometimes readers can't leave their comments.. unki bhi life hai na yar! aur problems bhi honge.. don't abandon dis and no dont feel that u r humiliated ok?

now smile plzz?
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update dear... so neera is leaving? but... oh is she repenting for her deeds?

superb portrayal of her character yar! very very nice chapter... i wonder wat happened to hrithvik..

u need 2 update soon, u write brilliantly!

cheers!

thanks for da pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyamvada



kya yar... u should not feel disappointed.. comments will come, its just u need 2 understand, sometimes readers can't leave their comments.. unki bhi life hai na yar! aur problems bhi honge.. don't abandon dis and no dont feel that u r humiliated ok?

now smile plzz?


i guess i overreacted.sry honey and sry to my readers.
hope you guys understand,when they cry is the only story that is really close to my heart.😃

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