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Posted: 12 years ago
oohhh studies kkept me busy and now u abandoned it? plz continue wheneva free.. cuz i love dis ff :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
when they cry(note:guys i am sry but there will be a long break for this i mean maybe this update will be after march.)😭

i request you guys to go with the story again.😊

volume-4-ILLUSIONS

THIS IS THE FINAL VOLUME OF FIRST GENERATION.

NOW THERE WILL BE A LEAP IN CHAPTER 1 OF THE THIS VOLUME.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm Soo Happy To See U Back Di !!! I Missed Sooo Much !!! Oh Thank God U Did Not Abandon It !! It's Okay...But Do Update In march !! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter !!!! And Merry Christmas !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Moni good to see you back...Welcome🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
okkk...here is the same thing with cocoahut.😭...but trying desperately.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww i will miss da story.. n ur updates, will read da existing chapters when free...

I'm gonna miss u too! keep smiling and take care.. <3

thanks for da pm n letting me know :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Im super dooper trooper happy!!!
WOWOWOWOW!!!
illusion!
SO nw we'll start wid d 2nd generation soon...
More mysteries to b revealed...
Hayyee...
Waiting 4 it desperately!
Update soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
n0te-hello guys.sry for very late update.ah...i know that i have left so many mysteries in the ff so i am now writing it from a leap of one year and about the mysteries,well i will reveal it in this last volume or in second generation.

so here is the final volume of the story.

VOLUME-4-Illusions

chapter-1-Return Of the Flower of Hell
One year passed in this hellish world.Hrithvik still wasn't over his despair of losing his wife but for his children,he was trying to cope up with all the events.After his children fainting incident(well their souls came in past he took that scorpion locket from jhanvi and started wearing it himself).
neera was standing on the door.
jhanvi(her mother)-don't go.😭
she was carrying 6 years old rehan.
shekhar-i am surprised you didn't kill anyone here.😡
neera-i am too.without hrith..ah vikrant's healing and nullifying presence,i was able to cope up with my insanity,i was surprised too.😭
neera-please take care of my child.vikrant will not be happy with this deciding by myself but this is just for his safety.
shekhar-if rumasha wants,she can attack us too,what will you do then?i want to assure my family's safety.
neera smirked-ah...don't worry,my child(Referring to shekhar)i will try my best.
neera left.
nandini,jhanvi and karthik at school.
nandini-jhanvi...
jhanvi-hmm..
nandini-one year before,we went to that egyptian past,whatever we saw there was just nothing na.
Flashback
jhanvi,nandini and karthik roaming in eyptian palace.they were following remnasen.she came to a room.Imhontep was there.he bowed.
imhontep-my great queen.he gave her a key.
jhanvi-what he said?
karthik-something in egyptian.
remnasen took the key and smirked.
and they came out of the dream.
yuuvi-nandini are you alright?
hrithvik came running.
jhanvi-whatever happened,just forget already.dad was not pleased with us that day.already he was in so much despair and we,we were icing on cake of it.
nandini-yeah.
hrithvik was in his office with nupur.they were discussing this year's plan when suddenly nupur heard some voice in her mind.
neera-nupur,i want you and hrithvik to come home immediately.
nupur smiled-you are back.
neera-plea...se...come.😭
neera-jhanvi,nandini,karthik,they heard her voice in their classes.
nandini-mamma...?
neera-i want you to come home back right now.
jhanvi-okay.😃
nupur-hrithvik,we gotta go.
hrithvik-why?
nupur-someone is waiting for you at the house.
hrithvik-is neera back?😲
nupur-yup.he threw away his file and just rushed to his car.
nupur smiled.😊
yuuvi in the house.
yuuvi-sis,i am sry.(referring of her blood bonding with nandini)
neera-no bro,i am sry.
yuuvi-
rumasha in this previous couldn't do anything.she couldn't grab that locket,somehow she felt that it was not right time to attack the family.but she decided to make hrithvik a member of valkyrie like imhontep.(trust me guys,making hrithvik torcher will be the worst moment of my life).

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow...it's a truly good part...glad to see u back.😊...ur stories have aways been such a graceful addiction to me...upd soon.

& vry good title...u know I've a desperate fascination towards titles😳...so any part containing title makes me happy all time.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update And Title...OMG !! Will Hritvik Be Caught ?????

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