FF:When They Cry-First Generation - Page 72

Created

Last reply

Replies

764

Views

88.8k

Users

28

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

702755 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
This chapter is continuation of this flashback.Now as Neera gave Hrithvik back his memories,He is reminding all that happened in his childhood.Guys this is one conclusive chapter so those who were confused all along will get their questions answered in this chapter.


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3187823&TPN=83


chapter-3-FADED MEMORIES GOT COLOURED WITH BLOOD
vikrant fainted and was reminding his past in his unconscious mind.
In evening.
surya and vikrant were going to market.
surya was sad that vikrant was leaving.
surya-vikrant,please can't you stay for one more week?
vikrant-i can't but i promised you na,i will come back again.
surya-ya but...hey look,its tomatoes,you like it na,i will prepare it for you before you leave.
vikrant-okay as you wish.
they went their.
suhani was in her house.
suhani thinks-vikrant is leaving today,i...i should go to his house,he is packing his bags so i will also be able to help him and meet him for the last time.
she decided to go.He told her where his house was so she was walking by forest,she saw a person was cutting a tree there.she didn't think for a second and torn him apart.
she after 15 minutes reached market,as she was walking by she saw
surya hugging vikrant.
vikrant-you idiot,what are you doing in public place?its embarrassing.(and then they are still children😆)
surya-i don't want you to leave.
Suhani shocked.
She thinks-he...he lied to me,he...no...why?why he did that.
she remembered
no..actually i promised my father that i will help him in packing bags.thats why
she became angry.very angry.suddenly she torn a person apart in the market.
everyone got shocked,they didn't understand what just happened and started running.
surya-what happened?i don't know.huh...vikrant run,there must be something really bad here.lets go...yeah
he thinks-why i am feeling that someone is calling me.
suhani was too sad to cry.
she thinks-you lied to me,LIAR,you lied to me,i...i will never forgive you.
vikrant and surya reached their house.his sister came outside.
sister-hey vikrant,you came really early.
surya-there was a rush in the market.
his dad came out.
dad-rush?
vikrant-yes everybody in the market suddenly started running.
dad-oh i am glad that you two came back safely.😲come inside and tell me everything.they all entered.suhani was in their backyard standing behind the tree.
suhani thinks-revenge...you lied to me.😡😭i loved you and you betrayed me.i will never forgive you,i will cause you the same pain you did to me.everybody (she started thinking of rumasha,the girl who told about the dog to the bullies at her orphanage(as suhani))who i think loves me,always betray me,no one is mine,everyone hates me,i...i will kill you all,i hate all of you,bloody selfish world,i will scorn and torn you guys apart.😡blood started coming from her eyes.
Next day in evening.
Vikrant was waiting for suhani to arrive as she said she will meet him before he leave.
dad-vikrant,what are you doing?just come and sit in the cart.
vikrant-just wait,i am waiting for my friend.
surya-friend?Who?
vikrant-she is someone special,i really like her.
surya thinks-her?when he befriended a girl?
surya-ah vikrant,i don't think she is coming so you should go.
sister-yes,come don't waste your and our's time.
vikrant-well okay...
vikrant sat in the cart.
the cart came far for two kms when suddenly it stopped.
dad-what happened?
cartman-a girl is standing in front.
vikrant-girl??😃
he came outside and saw suhani.
vikrant-hey you,i was waiting for you to come but you didn't.i am so glad that i could meet you before i leave.his sister and father came out.
surya came running from behind.
surya-vi...vikrant,she was taking heavy breaths.
vikrant-surya??
dad-surya??who came this far??😲
surya-yes uncle,..she was taking heavy breaths,vik..vikrant left his favorite shirt,i just wanted to give it back,he told me that he never do any good work without it so.
sister-oh my god,you came running.
Suhani-your legs are bleeding.😡
surya-huh?who are you?
vikrant-she is my friend.
suddenly cartman's and its horse's face came apart from their bodies.
vikrant and everyone were dumbstruck.
vikrant-😭
surya-aaa...
his sister-brother run...she came in front of him to protect him.
suhani also killed her.
vikrant-aaa😭
vikrant-why???????why you bas***d?you are a mutant like me...why?he tried to kill her with his telekinesis but he couldn't.i...i thought we were friends.
suhani-what are you talking about you are alive because we are friends.
surya became very shocked and scared.she came behind a tree.
suhani-you are a liar.
vikrant-liar?????he remembered him lying to her.
vikrant-you bas***d,just for a petty lie you killed my family.😡😭
suhani-now its your turn.
vikrant-surya...no not her.
he came and pushed her to the ground and started slapping her.
vikrant-you bitch,you ...******...*******...*******he was slapping her hard.
(due to his nullifying blood suhani came to her senses)
suhani-huh...she saw him with sad face.she was feeling so guilty that she couldn't even say sry,her sin was too tainted for a sry.she gladly took those deep slaps on her face.
surya-come vikrant.
vikrant-no...i have to kill her..
surya-no vikrant come...
vikrant-no...
surya took vikrant with him,they ran away cryingly.
(this was his flashback)
suhani was lying on the ground having a sad smile on her face thinking that she herself killed her happiness.😭
she got up.
suhani-you must be really happy by now,SISTER.
rumasha-huh...???oh...how you remembered me today?😆
suhani-you really snatched it all.
rumasha-what you mean dear.
suhani-i will call this debt one and losts of blood you will have to pay.
Hrithvik got up,he remembered everything...
hrithvik reminded surya's death,sunil's death and shekher's words.
Hrithvik-aaa😡
jhanvi and everyone heard his scream.
they came running.he was looking hell shocked(remember mahadeva cutting gannu's head,exactly that expression)
jhanvi-dad...(she had that diary in her hand)
nupur-so your memories came back,finally.😭
hrithvik saw her with anger in his eyes.
karthik-dad,they took nandini to...
hrithvik-shut up...😡
everyone scared.
hrithvik-i can't believe it,i can't believe it.
rathod entered.
rathod-kids come with me.
jhanvi-but.
amrit too came(she just arrived and yuuvi told her everything)
amrit-kids come.
rathod and amrit took them away.
hrithvik-my identity,my life,my everything was snatched away by her.
nupur was speechless.
hrithvik-me...my life...my dad...my sister...my cousin...my wife...my child...everything...why?why she always do this?didn't she feel satisfied after killing my dad and sister that she took reincarnation to kill my wife.i still can sense her presence in me,i touched her with these hands,i want to cut these sinful hands...what i ever did to her that she so wants to add sadness in my life.
nupur-hrith...
hrithvik-my name is vikrant(showing her finger).
nupur-yes vikrant,i took your memories away,not she.
vikrant-you??
now the biggest khulasa of neera to hrithvik...
NUPUR-NEFERTINI...
vikrant-huh...
NUPUR-NEFERTINI,SUHANI,ANUSHKA,NEERANJANA,NEERA...
vikrant-what?
NUPUR-THEY ARE ALL ONE PERSON.
vikrant shocked.
NUPUR-NEERA IS NO ONE BUT NEFERTINI,the one who was cursed by rumasha,her own sister.AND me,my real name is REMNASEN,who was named after her grandmother.i am RUmasha's daughter.
VIKRANT WELL I DON'T HAVE TO MENTION SAME EMOTIONS EVERYTIME.😆







Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
MrToolConfuser thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I can understand yaar kaisa feeling hoga, aisa love nai chahiye joh family ke khoon se judha ho! Rumasha, huh still how could she? How could ?!
-Serene.Rose- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
aww superb part..👏 a bit sad though! Poor vikrant/hrith.. I understand he'd have got such a jolt..

dis neera wrecked his life.. aw ab age kya hoga? I'm so eager to read..

thanks for da quick update yar.. <3
-Serene.Rose- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


i guess i overreacted.sry honey and sry to my readers.
hope you guys understand,when they cry is the only story that is really close to my heart.😃



its k dear... it happened wid me too! I write FFs and I've almost ditched writing one on junoon forum u know.. i got 2 likes and no comments.. i understand,and its k.. no need 2 say sorry..

keep smiling n keep writing...

yes when they cry is my addiction yar..my fav ff ever :)
702755 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
thank you guys for the comments.foram dear you should have added your comment as well.

I hope that you guys will like this conclusive volume and will try to answer many questions that i left in this generation.

AND

there will be epicness in last chapter,i will try to make it hell epic.
702755 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyamvada



its k dear... it happened wid me too! I write FFs and I've almost ditched writing one on junoon forum u know.. i got 2 likes and no comments.. i understand,and its k.. no need 2 say sorry..

keep smiling n keep writing...

yes when they cry is

my addiction yar..my fav ff ever :)


thanks honey,i am glad you are liking it,as the end is near i am not going to abandon it because it won't be good as now we are only few chapters away from the end and then SECOND GENERATION WILL START.😉😉
702755 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
NEXT CHAPTER TITLE-

CRAVING FOR REVENGE


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4iGTgV_2YM[/YOUTUBE]
SilverBell thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting For The Final Chapter.
702755 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=f4iGTgV_2YM[/YOUTUBE]

THE SONG IS VIKRANT'S THEME.

chapter 4-craving for revenge(the title belongs to basically neera and vikrant who want their revenge with rumasha.vikrant wants his revenge with nephi as well).
Vikrant was absolutely broken.He had no words to say.
vikrant-you,and everybody are reasons for all this.😭😡.fine then...
nupur-its not like that,i have read her mind,she still feels hell guilty for what she did to you and she took all those reincarnations just to have a chance to meet you.
vikrant-😡
nupur-she does feel sorry.
vikrant-oh she feels sorry,she feels sorry,SHE FEELS SORRY,well then i will now relieve her from all the pain by killing her badly...RUMASHA's task is mine now.😡but first its you.
the eyes of vikran't were almost like bleeding,the anger in him was growing rapidly.suddenly the locket he was wearing radiated a bluish red light from it,nupur could not see that light.the light was so radiant that it was about to destroy the whole place but it only hurt nupur.the light started burning her up,burning badly.it was the same feeling of torcher.
nupur thinks-oh so now i understand,i am punished for my sins now.she tried to look behind the rays,she could not see it first but then something happened that she was able to see,she saw a beautiful man whose eyes were full of anger,he was in pain.
nupur shocked,she wanted to raise her arms to him but ...-AAMMU...AND SHE DIED.
amrit came to the room,she was shocked to see her mother dead...nupur turned into ashes.
amrit-mom...😭😭,she grabbed vikrant's collar...why????😭how you developed such drastic powers?why my mother?she always helped you.
vikrant-i will kill everyone,everyone who is related to her or helps her.rathod came running to them,he got shocked to see all this...
but...
rathod-hrithvik,there is no time to hate on anyone,Jhanvi and Karthik ran away.
vikrant-what?why?
rathod-they said that they want to help their mother...
vikrant-didn't you try to stop her?
rathod-how can i stop nephi's children?they are too powerful.even karthik was powerful and determined enough to help her.
vikrant-nephi??oh so you knew it too...
amrit-there is no time brother...please calm down.
vikrant-her black shadow cursed them as well.he called other mutants from his telepathy.he and amrit closed their eyes and were trying to find jhanvi and karthik.amrit could not find them but vikrant was seeing through his telepathy...he saw jhanvi and karthik in a car(taxi one)crying,he then tried to see neera,he saw in a plane sitting all sad.he then tried to find her whereabouts by entering in her head but her head had a shield.he was trying to penetrate it.
neera-ah who is trying to penetrate my sheild?😡
she pushed him with her telekinesis and realized it is vikrant.
neera-vikrant??😕he realized that i am...SUHANI.but...how?i only gave him back his memories but how he realized that i am the one.
vikrant to neera-i am coming to you to settle the final score.
neera-huh...no please don't come.this is dangerous.
vikrant-now even if i die,i will kill you and your sister to hell,give you the same pain you two gave to me and my family.
neera-you don't understand,rumasha is too powerful for you,she will capture you and beat you till everything in your body is torn apart.
vikrant-i am COMING,because my children left to save you 😡
neera saw jhanvi and karthik at airport now.
neera-kids go back.
jhanvi-why you?
neera-huh
neera-why you always have to suffer?we are coming to help you mother,i read the letter in the diary that you gave me.
neera-but...

the letter she wrote for jhanvi.
dear jhanvi,
i am leaving,leaving forever,please take care of everyone and never become like me at all.i may now never come back.


jhanvi showed that letter to yuuvi.
yuuvi-jhanvi listen to me very carefully,she has left for valkyrie.
karthik-what?why she is going to that place?
jhanvi-what is valkyrie?
karthik-i will explain all this to you but we don't have time now,we have to save her.
jhanvi-but...i will tell you while we go there.
yuuvi-what?go there,are you crazy?😡
jhanvi made yuuvi sleep by her powers.
karthik-from master nupur's memories i once saw valkyrie,i know its location,lets go...
they both ran to nupur's room grabbed some money and a bag and quickly left.
vikrant came to yuuvi's room.
vikrant-oh so they tricked yuuvi.
yuuvi got up-hri..
vikrant-i know we don't have time.WE ALL ARE GOING TO VALKYRIE,EITHER I DIE OR THOSE TWO SISTERS WILL DIE.
yuuvi shocked...



Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
702755 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
SHORT UPDATE.
neera tried to make jhanvi and karthik sleep but rumasha stopped her.
now neera is outside the building of valkyrie.
Neera-here i am sister.😭
rmasha came outside,neera saw her like this

rumasha-so you came to kill me this time han.you are so stupid.
neera-shall we begin.
rumasha-but first,i will like you to meet someone.MOHIT,KITTY...
mohit and kitty came from her behind.
NEERA SHOCKED.
neera-you two...you two are with her.
kitty-yes,we want power,we want to rule this world of mutants,so when we got to know the truth of yours
mohit-we decided to come and join the lord(to rumasha),so that we can become more powerful.
neera-when my own sister could betray me,i really don't care about you two.
tons of mutants came out of valkyrie.
rumasha-hmm...shall we...😃
neera-i am ready...😡...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".