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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I love the story!! Aye, continue re!!!

Every single thing, from the windchime to NK, played its part beautifully. Its like, everything just fit together perfectly.

That was so... Deep,lol. Sorry, i couldnt think of a better word.. =P

Great writing!!! Thankyou for the pm!!!

Ill comment on careless whispers later!!
Because i am on my phone, and my phone doesnt support blogspot.

Love,
V

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sval000

@sval000

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

sooo sad... please please continue...

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madforipk

@madforipk

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

it was so beautiful!!

please please continue!! Emotions portrayed beautifully

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Oh...I enjoyed this. The impossibility of the situation is right. Nicely done.

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Very poignant OS. So beautifully written The emotions, anger, hurt, every thing detailed so well. Marvellous work.

👏

You need to continue. PM me too.

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

amazing os ..plz do continue and let me know when u updt

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Are you or are you not gonna continue this ??

This was one hell of an amazing OS meera !!

i loved every bit of it !1

the initial panic Arnav goes through, the way he finally comes to terms that he has not only put up his Di's and his life in a mess, but Khushi's life too !! And her life in a bigger mess than he can imagine !! Finally, him realizing that he isnt all courageous and smart as he seems !! That was put amazingly !!

And the NK-Arnav bonding !! How I loved it, cause NK I guess is the only one who doesnt seem what he is actually like, and yet he is such a powerful character ! So powerful that the way he assures Arnav about it being alright if Arnav needed a friend !! And then the way Arnav lets it out to him !! Loved that part !!

And the ending !! The way you bring out Arnav and Khushi to a stage where Payal and Aakash once were !! That was so great !! And I loved the way you let Arnav express his emotions, cause that's what he is ! He cant say it loud !! But I wish he did !! And Khushi !! Gosh !! She did have a heartbreak yet again !!

Oh loved this OS !! pl do try and continue ? Pretty please !!😳

PS: im catching up on Careless Whispers, and shall comment ASAP !! Sorry for the delay !!

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Beautiful...

poor arnav,he want to change but he dont know how...ie truth

"I'm not going to jump of this cliff, Khushi. Because I died when I realized you were gone forever."

It was really touching...Awesome.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Very good job.. I loved it.. & wanna read the update soon..

It seemed so realistic with no false promises changing, declaration of undying love.. Also for a change Khushi didn't give in at the moment he kissed her. ;)

PM me whenever u update.

& yes it was a torture, a good one , a sweet one.. & I definitely want more of it :)