OS: Not Like This

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

just stumble upon ur os
beautifull piece of writting
wow u write so well
bt d ending felt like incomplete...

i thot u mite gave update in between some pages n went thru ol of them..

thru comments i came to know u hav not continued actually...

lol
m a year late in commenting
bt vl u plsss cont pls pls plsss

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PreenaRak

@PreenaRak

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I liked it. Plz continue soon. The way he asked dat u r not in love. Amzing

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

aren't you going to continue...
coz im defo gonna be mad if its not complete..!!

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ipkknd786

@ipkknd786

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

whoa gal that was intense...you brought out the vulnerability in Arnav very well...but even at the end he did not have it in him to confess...break down the barriers and let the only person who affected him in???

You have to continue this...there is no way you can leave us like this...

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memyarshi

@memyarshi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Meera gud one...was expecting a happpy wala :-) ending...but
It as intense & beautiful...

Meera I have a suggestion ...have u ever tried lighthearted comedy...let me know what do u feel?

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

From the list of your One Shots, I picked this up because I thought it was related to amorous activities. Khushi tells Arnav- not like this, Arnavji! Not here! What if someone sees or something!😆

But reading this OS, my mind just snapped out of that gutter and by the end of it, I had goosebumps on my arms. It was that impactful.

I was thinking that she would forgive him by the end, mostly because of convention, and did NOT expect her rejection. It is incredibly satisfying all the more for it. Like a personal catharsis.

He doesn't deserve forgiveness.

Not like this, indeed.