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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Powerful and intense. Loved it!

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tish18

@tish18

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

loved it Meera!!
n i especially loved d way u ended it hanging.
leaves us some hope, dat maybe some day u might continue :P
thank u for pm. :)

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Summer

@buttercup122

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

that was amazing, and really powerful. Please do continue and let me know when you do

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wow! its absolutely amazing but please continue, as it is, they just HAVE TO end up together

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@sherlockthor

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

you have to continue it !!! please please !!! i can't live otherwise!!? cliffhanger !!! this was brilliant!!! i think first time in history of stories, arnav confessed his feelings other than di!!! yay!!

nk is still in love with khushi ain't he?!

what i really loved was arnav's answers in the end!! brilliant!!

pls pls continue!!!

thnx or pm!😊

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809768

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

A cliffhanger! :(
A beautifully described one! xD
Exactly like how arnav was almost close to hanging on the cliff..

Loved the way arnav confided in nk..
For once, arnav singh raizada was really in need of a friend!
How true this statement is! :D

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Amazing... and I can truly understand how impossible situations become when both parties involved dont want to speak the truth in the way it should be spoken. Arnav doesnt know how to emote verbally and she doesnt know how to hide or even show it properly. So yes they are impossible and this is a beautiful piece of writing.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Nice one meera.. It screams you from it's word. Loved the way you shown Arnav in the beginning, the panic , the restlessness he felt when he learn Khusi had left . Damn beautiful.
Arnav and NK 's part was really nice. NK is one character who never judge people based on anything he heard or saw. I love that about him. alays positive and never showed anyone how sad he's from inside.

If you are ending here then i would say it's sad to see such a beautiful love story ended like this. But if Arnav can't change then i don't want Khusi to forget n forgive everything always ..

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

loved it that was awesome beautifully written loved it

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deepterence

@deepterence

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

amazingly brilliant,pls continue...hope cvs read ur version of story...pls do continue...The dialogues u wrote for ASR..very apt and i really felt sad for him...

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