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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

That was absolutley fabulouse!

I LOVED the lines:

K: "Jiji was in love, so was Lavanyaji"

A: "And you are not"??

PERFECT!! Loved it!! Wish there was more!

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 13 years ago

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Meera ki bachchchciii...

cliff-hanger..!!!! Aaarrghh..!!!

Please continue dear,.. Please Please Please.!!!

:-) ;-)

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

OHH EM GEE.. THIS IS SOMETHNG.. HEART WRENCHIN N NAIL BITIN.. CONT SOOONISHH..

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@love9devi_maiya

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

that was totally wicked! :D so ArHi x x

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

OMG I love it! But do continue...even if it ends with her walking away...why this cliffhanger? </3

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

I like you. Hehe! :P

I like the OS. I like how you left it there to highlight the impossibility of such a situation! :D

Loved it Meeraji! :)

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Preity

@pepples_joy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Oh God... Do continue dear... Can't wait to read more...

Just awesome OS..😊😊

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Amazing OS... Really wish that you'd continue this =)

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

wow that left me so confused...just like khushi feels i guess...pulled in all directions...cant arnav ever verbalise how he feels...i guess that's what it comes down to...she knows that and him...so its up to her to decide if she can settle for that...or willing to sacrifice everything just because he cant say the words...on a cliff indeed...perfect...well done...