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kriti_angel1819

@kriti_angel1819

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

its really good definetly continue

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Idk if i commented on this previously or nt..bt evn if i had i wud comment again..
a very powerful piece of work meera..
d description of d initial panic coursing thru arnav was fabulous..it tugged at my heart..
d xchange btwn nk n arnav was touching..so wonderfully u brought out d vulnerability in arnav..n m glad nk cud b of much use to him in dis situation..u wrote him hw he is exactly, staying behind evn aftr arnav's outburst..
loved hw u brought d payash incident as an arguemnt from arnav..d emotions it wrenched out was moving..it hit d field hard..
d ending was so heartbreaking..d kiss n d thghts flowing in khushi's mind was mini war..n d way she left..totally unxpctd..
i wish d cvs showed this much needed seriousness instead of fooling around wid d characters..

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ArnavKhushi1996

@ArnavKhushi1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

OMG PLEASE CONTINUE AND PM ME :D

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

As always left speechless! So overwhelmed with anxiety and sadness at the cliffhanger where they stand. What to say - sometimes we let EGO take a lead!

A good one meera! 👍🏼

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

@meera30: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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reshkn

@reshkn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

very beautifully described...

loved the strong kushi and a vulnerable arnav...

nk played his part as a friend,a brother perfectly...

it felt so real to read...

i wish u continue😊

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

@meera30: Nyc OS!!!!😊

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Beautiful OS but feels incomplete.. Please give it an ending in your own way :) we know Khushi cannot leave Arnav hanging there do we :D

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Nicely written.
:)
"This is all I know"--aww,Arnav

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

What the Meera!😭

It began so well...Khushi leaving Shantivan, Arnav crumbling down with NK' being the saarthi to Arnav in the literal sense.

The cliff part wasn't expected. ASR would never take his life but to delve into that prospect was pretty interesting. And after she arrived, they kissed, he confessed to dying the day she had left him all hinted towards a reconcilation. But haaye!

I could have accepted her refusal but the end...that is what affected me the most. and so almost a year after that OS has been written I have to say please continue.

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