Murat Love Chronicles By Radhika(Just One Shot)... - Page 6

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

😛Resss Me First

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First of all thanx for writting second one ...

most important with Goood ending

Loved it thoroughly

I really very nicely Written .

It's a violect concept but which is the bitter side of world

It's happeningin society n mornful thing is no one responded against that cruelity.

liked it ending both of Sonia n Dev got married n

after 6 moths on valentines day ...wow 😳

they lived Happiely After 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: Freethinker

that was nice sweetie...

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

resss...

jii

me 3rdd...😊
~~EDITED~~
di yeh main trisiri bar edit kr rhi hoon

bhagvaan kre ho jyae...
main aapko daant laga na chahti hon, shayad isliye nhi ho rha h

chalo, ab vaps se aapna bhasan likhti ho...

di, stry, kya stry thi
bachi ko rola diya ek dum
sachi, dil k paar chli gyi stry
bhot emotional n moral wali stry thi

end main dil khush ho gya h

the way u showed their cute relationship in park mornings..
wow.lovely shovely...

kinni cute baatin karte the dono..
dev ws really really man of dreamzzz...
hamari sonia k liya he is best,,,

voh uske liye oinmet lya tha...
wow...kitna caring h

di aapne yeh isliye likha h na ki aap ka yeh last os h,...

coz iske baad humme ek ff se gift karne wale ho...
mujhe aapke decision pr garv h
i m proud of u di

aap kabhi galat ho hi nhi sakti

aapne shi samjha

hum aapki writing se itne impresss h ki humarai os se koi kaam nhi chalega..
we need a ff...

chalo party abhi se kr le.🥳

Originally posted by: aru_86

i just love you for this...look you are a born writer..and i love to read os's like these...and i love coz ur thoughts are different ..though sad but still happiness finds own way in sadness...love ur moral too..its the main problem of indian woman ..tolerating domestic violence...god will rethink 1000 times before get married😭

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

very nice update :)

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Oh I luvd it so much

That moron Jai

m so happy that sonia stood for herself

till date there are many women who dont even dare to do so

They should not tolerate such inhuman behavior n sud always stand up fr their rights

Because a Devraj may not come in the life of every victimized woman.

Originally posted by: tejjo

ridz can i tell u something
juthi,
juthi,
juthi
u said in previou os that u r not writer to yeh sb kisne likha h tell me i want answer write now

update was amazing
start was very said.,i want to kill that jai sacchi...he was so wicked
how cud she beat her like a animal
i just kill him if he was in front of me
idiot,

bt like dev he is so cute...really very supportive for sonia

beating session of sonia was ma fav...when she beating him like the way he was im really very happy

last part very nice she married with dev
oh ho nice couple or dev itna romantic niklega uski bato se to nhi laga tha
thanks 4 happy ending
lovely os

i salute to u dear to write a os on domestic voilence
really this is vry big problem of our country
if every women tried to express herself n be brave like sonia
then this problem will also dimnish vry soon

write more os n ff also
we r waiting
thanks 4 pm
luv u

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

hi di!

Another amazing OS...though it seemed like a SS to me

First of all, I'll applaud u for writing on domestic violence...👏

It reminded me lot of dat show 'Saubhagyawati Bhava'

U wrote it exceedingly well 👍🏼

Sonia's pain...how Dev supports her and how she finally stands up for herself...well potrayed!!👏

But plz don't say this is ur last story...never say never...

Take ur time..and keep writing😃

Lov u...😊

P.S. I think u shud edit the title of the thread..

Originally posted by: ridzzi

daant lagana chahti ho mujhe...kiu bhai humne kya kia...?...😕

n thanx for the lovely comment sweety...😊

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Awesome... Just awesome i really liked it