Murat Love Chronicles By Radhika(Just One Shot)... - Page 4

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Its really touching ridz..oops radhika.

From beginning till end you portrayed her emotions beautifully...the flashbacks and then present moments were mingled so apt.

Its very hard to forget a person who was so dear to you but ,they stay with us or not the beautiful moments spent with them always cherish us.

And that is what I liked in ur OS,she laughs remembering all sweet fights.Lovely...though at end I too felt sad for her...!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Love It !!!😭

Originally posted by: samantha1987200

Hi😊

Really enjoyed reading, its superb😊

Love

Originally posted by: prahelika

very sorry for commenting so late ridz dear...

but there is no way i wanted to miss commenting here...

this OS actually touched my heart...

i'll thank rashu,priye and sonali for making you share it with us...

just brilliant work...and i did cried when i finished reading it...i don't use smileys when i get too much emotional and u can see it in this comment...

could it be more tragic for her than regretting for her whole life that a mere reckless behaviour of her costed the precious life of her beloved???

who new a silly fight over a red dress will cause her dedicating red flowers to the grave where the love of her life lay resting forever???

just one OS and you made me a big fan of yours...

plz write this kind of stories more...

luv u🤗

Originally posted by: aru_86

u r so talented...u made me cry..m crying like hell...now never ever dare to say that you are not writer else i have to stop writing in shame...😭

i am still visualising all that pain and grief

Originally posted by: shruja

atlast read ur os!!
its awesome!! mindblowing n mindblogaling!!
loved their first meet!!
and he save her from tht guy (it reminded me prc)
and the way he proposed her was very beautiful
their convo was superb!!
their fights over blue & red were also cute!!
but y u ended it sad!! i m feeling like crying after reading it!!
and loved song lines u used at the end!!
so don't lie tht u r not good writer!!
and do keep writing such more! but not sad ending plz!1
thanks to sweetsanyo, sonali n all whom who insisted u to write😊

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

Di!!! U wrote an OS!!! 🥳

rashmi sent me da link whr evry1 was persuading u to write on RTMC...I had exams...so cudn't pitch in my few words...but u wrote! Awesome!!

Valentine'd Day...how romantic..😍

College ya lover's point...😆

THeir fight was really cute esp when he tells her not to be sorry

He gave oder ppl paper balls to throw on her..🤣

Lovd the way he savd her from the oder guy..and the guy got so scared that he called her sis...and stayed away..😆

lovly proposal...the song was so apt

Humare bechare hero ke knees hurt ho rahe the...

I lovd the way u used one-liners fro their confession...

Their fight ovr the sari was again cute...

But...But di!!! Yeh kya kiya!!

His accident was very unfortunate...😭

But the OS was very well written 👏

Lovd ur song selection...and the title is nice

And plz next story ko aap happy ending dena...

Keep writing

Thx for PM

Lov u...🤗

Originally posted by: ridzzi

thank you...n it's ok if you r not able to imagine rt...abhay raichand ko imagine karna hai...toh shock se kar...vo toh pehle se mara hua hai...😉...😆

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

u know di
jb maine ye os read krni start ki thi to tbi se rt ko imagine nhi kr pa rhi thi
bad me pta chla kyu
well ab ap ne jhut to bhut bol liya
ab ek mst si ff start kro
jisme m rt ko imagine kr sku 😳