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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

dreamy dreamy dreamy

sigh!

superb

loved ChrisNA

Loved u r description

it is very difficult 2 capture every essence of the love story in one update

but u do flawlessly.

the change in colors of flowers .loved this symbolic way to describe chris's feelings

finallly true love's kiss woke from her deep slumber. oopsie wrong fairytale that was sleeping beauty

woke our snow white from deathly sleep.

loved ann'a chase 2 the church

i adore u r dialogues. they r superb

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago

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samantha1987200

@samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Aww... Such a sweet little story... I really loved it... It was fantabulous !!!!!😊😊😊😊

Plz continue writing such pieces😊😊😊😊

love😊

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

ressop jii

ie h humra res, kal subah tk pakka edit hovi javega

~~EDITED~~

o mummy mujhe chimtii katu, main abhi bhi dream land main hoon...

oach!!...itna joor se kyun kata mummy..

ek aur kaam karo mummy, meri ridzzi di ki nazar bhi uthar do, haaye, kinna cha likha h..

atii, aati sunder...mannmohak... dil chura le gya by god yeh os...

wowie dowie,

so hamre chirs yahan ek doc h...cute lag rhe h kaafi..

anna is in coma, so sad...

family main koi nhi h.

wow, chirs humari anna ka kitna khyal rakhta h,

rooz rose late h,

white se yellow, den pink, n den red...increase in number too.

wowie, yeh stry ka best prt k, mujhe bhot pasnd aaya,

wow, chirs ki kiss ne anna ko thiik kr diya, ...yeh tho sachio main prince charming h...hamuri aana ke...

anna thiik ho gyi, wow,

dey r friendz now,

airport chondne aaye, nhi jane dena chahiye tha na usse...

but agar jane nhi dete tho realize kaise hote ki u lov her so much,

n she loves u too, isliye tho india se bagh kr tumhare paas aa gyi...

best scene ws----

-''sorry and thank you''-and then she disappeared leaving behind a stunned man,looking at the people and to the empty bottle.

hahahahaha.haste haste pagal main tho iss scene pr,

kya sahi expression hoga uss bande ka..

father k kaha- ma life ...

vah, ab chirs uski life bann gaya..

church scene ws funny bt adorable,

anna ka dialogue ws mostest fantastic...

chirs ki bagvaan ne bhot jaldi sunn li.

sooperbo stry di, ekdum masttt..

chaa gye tussi ek bar phirr aur, kamaal , ek dum dhamaal..

do write more,

lov u di.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

WOW!!

It was absolutely wonderful!!!!

I lovd Chris's expresion on seeing the files...

How he came across Anna's room and felt an instant connection

Lovd the way u described the change in color of roses...how he cudnt resist kissing her

Lovd their convo after she recovred

Her realisation and jennet's convo

Her running around was funny!!

And i totally loooved ther answer she gave to father about Chris being her life

And the end was sooo lovely!!

Keep up da good work di!

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

That was really very beautifulll

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Ress

ohhh Fairytale 😛 😛 😛

It's me who believes in fairytales...kasam se

thanx for writting this

it's too much threemuch ...infinity Nice

I loved it

u written very nicely

Fairytales bhi sach hote hai 😃

White Pink then Red roses ohoho 😳

He didn't know what he was doing and because of kiss she came out of coma justlike snow white ⭐️

Loved her Running from airport to church . It was hillarious

and her pray to god which she indirectly telling him ..it was awesome

They got married .yipeee

and happy happy life started 😛

thanx dear for such alovely OS

Love u ⭐️

Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Oh my god.This OS was just just drop dead awesome! 👏

My fav line in the whole story -''I have forgotten my surname,can I use yours???????'

That line was just like sooo cute!i was like awww 😍

i loved it..but one question..tragic ending kyun diya? 😭 😭 😭

Neways,please write more stuff on RT-MC! 😊

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

dear 1st page pe index nahi hai

title bhi modify bhi nahi kiya

do it b4 the start of 1st ss

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

superb
superb
superb
i just love this os
wow kya story thi

loved it thoroughly
chris n anna so cute couple
really chris was her prince charming...he loved her so much na

last church wala scene to rocking tha bs maza hi aa gya by god
she prayed so innocently in front of jesus
so cute

lovely os ridz
gud work
luv u

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Lovely OS..like a fairytail...and you almost described a whole story...instead of one shot...great job.

I love the way you proved that love do not see physical beauty...good to see how a doc get attached to a girl who is in coma and lost her beauty...lovely towards the end...how they met again in church..!

Simpley beautiful piece of writing.

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