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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Nice part

loved it
finaly Samar proposed Karnika 😛 😛 😛
n she accepted 😳 😳
Here new love story starts 😊 😛
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
beautiful part!!
liked all gang tried to make samar to propose karnika!!
and most dambo kaksh told first to samar that!!
loved all trying to help samar n karnika!!
liked all girls made karnika ready!! wow me imgining mc in red saree n rt in red shirt n black jacket!!
so at last samar proposed karnika
loved the way he proposed her in his peom!!
liked background music of prc 'ni-sa-sa-re' u used for this chap
interesting precap
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
yeah !!!! he PROPOSED !!! n she ACCEPTED !!!! 🥳
n my fav prc backgrnd music !!!! was playng !!!
their gang rox !!! ⭐️
girls preparng Karnika n guys planng d proposal !!! 😆
ur poems r soo.. gud !!! 👍🏼
dey add a lOT to d entire update !!!
now... we'l get 2 noe abt her past !! dat'l b intrstng !!!
gr8 ud !!
luv u... 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
nice part dear loved it
keep it up
so finally he proposed her
n she accept his proposal that scene was awesome
yiepeee

cont soon
thanx 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Wow..its so beautiful..Samar proposed her and prc bg is awesome❤️
love this update...thanx for PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
nice one dear 😊...loved it...& prc bg tune was superb 😊...

finally he proposed & she said yes 😳...wow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
waaaooo akhir propose kr hi dia 😳
w8ing for next damal
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
aaj ka ud bhi dedo buddy jaldi se.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Chapter 8

Part 1:

Next day in the classroom:

Arjun to Rajiv ' Hey! Where is Samar?

Rajiv ' He...

Pragya to Jiya ' And where is Karnika, huh?

Jiya ' She...

Harsh ' Guys! Wherever they might be but they are together for sure...

Kaksh ' How come you know that?

Rajiv ' We all know that because they are in love, Kaksh bhaijaan...

Jiya ' Yes... And they need to be alone for sometime...

Harsh ' Samar really needs to spend some time with her as he still thinks that this is a dream!

Arjun to Harsh ' It is natural bro... He loves her so much that he is unable to accept that now his dream is reality!

All smile...

In the college garden:

Samar and Karnika are sitting still on a bench. They both were quiet and...

Samar ' Err... So now we are not just friends...

Karnika ' yes...

Samar ' So we love each other?

Karnika ' yes, we love each other...

Samar ' Okay! Can't we talk as we used to?

Karnika ' yeah...

Samar ' Okay! I know it's very weird to talk after accepting love for each other but some day we have to talk...

Karnika ' right... So what we are going to talk about?

Samar (thinking) ' Err... okay... err...

Karnika - Samar, I want to tell you something...

Samar ' go on...

Karnika ' Samar, I want to tell you about my family...

Samar ' ok...

Karnika ' I used to live with my family in Pune. We lived happily... I still remember... my mother... she cared for me and loved me so much. She never used to go and travel much because of her ill-health. But one day...

She shivers with fear and tears start to roll from her eyes...

Samar keeps his hands on her shoulder to console her...

Karnika (crying) ' She died... and left me all alone in this world!

Samar hugs her and consoles her...

Samar ' What about other family members?

Karnika ' I have father and an elder brother. After mom's death, they became very protective towards me and they used to scold me if I got late or I spoke to a boy... They never wanted me to be with someone I love and betray them...

Samar ' Why will you betray them?

Karnika ' I won't, but they thought so... never knew why! (Starts crying ceaselessly)

Samar ' Where are they now?

Karnika ' They are in Pune. One day when they saw me singing in front of my friends in the college, my father slapped me and my brother beat me... So I decided to run away from them... Jiya helped me and I came to Mumbai.

Samar again hugs her.

Samar ' Don't worry... I am there with you always.

Karnika ' But if they find me with you, they will not leave us...

Samar (keeping his finger on her lips) ' Shh... Don't worry... No one can separate us.

Karnika (smiling) ' Thank you for being there with me...

Samar (smiling) ' Thank you too for trusting me...

Karnika keeps her head on his shoulder and he holds her hands with care.

Somebody clicks their photograph, hiding in bushes...

At Boys' Hostel at 7:30 pm:

Rajiv has gone to meet Arjun and Harsh while Samar is sleeping in his room. His mobile rings... It's a private no.

Samar (Accepts the call) ' Hello...

A voice, harsh and dominating, answers back.

The voice ' Samar, listen carefully! Stay away from Karnika!

Samar (surprised) ' What? Who is speaking?

The voice 'I am, of course not, your well-wisher! Stay away from her... Do as I say otherwise...

Samar ' Otherwise what?

The voice ' Otherwise be ready to die!

Samar (angry) ' Who is speaking? I love her... No one can separate us! Stay away from us otherwise you be ready to die!

The voice ' So you love her? Ha ha ha! I have seen many Romeos like you! You and Karnika can never be together!

Samar ' You just...

The call disconnects. Samar looks worried for Karnika. He calls her, but her no. is unreachable.

He tries many times and finally she picks up.

Samar (very worried) ' Hello Karnika?

Karnika ' Hello Samar...

Samar ' Your no. was unreachable, are you alright?

Karnika ' yes. But why are you so worried? Is everything ok?

Samar' Err... Yes, everything is fine. And, listen to me carefully; don't step out of your hostel today, ok?

Samar ' okay... Samar, tell me what happened?

Samar ' Nothing...

He changes the topic so that she could not think that he is hiding something. He doesn't want Karnika to know about the call as he doesn't want to disturb her unnecessarily. He disconnects the call.

9.00 pm, at a Mansion:

It's a big hall; a man is sitting on a chair.

He has an arrogant face and viciousness clearly visible in his red eyes. He looks at the photograph; his employee had clicked, of Samar and Karnika together.

The man to his employee ' Ok... His name is Samar Singh. What did he say?

His employee ' Sir... err... Aman sir had talked to him...

The man ' What? I had given this job to you and you...

A voice ' Dad calm down... I thought it would the best that I should call and warn him...

The man ' hmmm...So Aman, what did he say?

Aman ' He refused to do what I said.

The man ' Tough guy...

Aman ' So now what should we do? Should we call her?

The man ' No! ... So they are lovers, huh?

Aman ' Yup, deep in love...

The man (smirking) ' Ok... Do you know Aman? I think they are like body and soul... inseparable...

Aman is totally surprised.

The man ' Don't be surprised... I have not completed my sentence...

Aman looks puzzled.

The man ' They are like body and soul... inseparable...until death!

Both smirk and plan something.

Precap - KaSam and their friends go to a hilly place and enjoy there.

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Sry frnd...😔 i was not well that's why I have posted late today. Enjoy reading.😊

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