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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
it was a lovely ud...
i enjoyed it reading...

specially kaksh's dumbo question...🤣
he is a real character..😆.

rajiv is the only one who can bear him with patience , making him understand every thing.😉

the way karnika ws frank n open to samar ws very very sweet, she trust him...that d most imp. part of a relationship...😳

happy the way he consoled her by embracing her...ws so romantic.☺️

he received the call frm aman...HE WARNED HIM 😡dat he will kill him...
hw dare he???????????/😡
aman ke bachhe, hath bhi lagaya tho yeh haryanvi ladki tere hathon se khudi hoi teri hi kabar main tujhe dhakka maar dongi...beep, 🤬beep,🤬 beep, beep...😡

samar din wanted her to be tensed so changed the topic...so cute n caring ur samar is.🤗

i mean kya ghande father n bro hain...😈
mujhe tho shak h🤔yeh karnika ke asli father n bro h bhi yah, koi property voperty ka chakkar h..🤔.

kuch bhi ho...ITS FACT...KASAM ARE INSEPARABLE...


ud soon...love u🤗
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
both parts r awesome n so beautiful
loved the prc music u used nice idea
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
nice update dear
loved the scene when he console her
loved the way u write
i think that man was her father or elder bro na

hope everything will be fine with her
cont soon
thanx 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
both the update's were really awesome...too good...👏
n the prc background music u used for the special episode...amazing...👍🏼
the way samar proposed her...in a poetic way...that was really different...😍
n liked karnika's frank behaviour...towards samar...
she told everything about her n her family...to samar...😊
n he assured her that no one will seperate them...😍
n aman...i m sure he will be her brother...n that man will be her father...
but not to worry samar is always there for her...😉...no one will seperate them...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Shaheedon ko salam. Aaj shaheed diwas hai(23rd march) . Hit the like button and remember them.

Sarfaroshi kii tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazu-e-qaatil mein hai

Ek se karataa nahin kyon dusaraa kuchh baat-cheet
Dekhtaa hun main jise woh chup teri mehfil mein hai

Aye shaheed-e-mulk-o-millat main tere oopar nisaar
Ab teri himmat ka charchaa gair kii mehfil mein hai

Sarfaroshi kii tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazu-e-qaatil mein hai

Waqt aane de bataa denge tujhe aye aasamaan

Hum abhii se kyaa bataayen kyaa hamaare dil mein hai

Kheench kar laayee hai sab ko qatl hone ki ummeed
Aashiqon ka aaj jamaghat koonch-e-qaatil mein hai

Sarfaroshi ki tamanna ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazu-e-qaatil mein hai

Hai liye hathiyaar dushman taak mein baithaa udhar
Aur hum taiyyaar hain seena liye apnaa idhar

Khoon se khelenge holi gar vatan muskhil mein hai
Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Haath jin mein ho junoon katate nahin talvaar se
Sar jo uth jaate hain vo jhukate nahin lalakaar se

Aur bhadakegaa jo sholaa-saa hamaare dil mein hai
Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Hum to nikale hii the ghar se baandhakar sar pe kafan
Jaan hatheli par liye lo barh chale hain ye qadam

Zindagi to apnii mehamaan maut ki mehfil mein hai
Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Yuun khadaa maqtal mein qaatil kah rahaa hai baar-baar
Kya tamannaa-e-shahaadat bhi kisee ke dil mein hai

Dil mein tuufaanon ki toli aur nason mein inqilaab
Hosh dushman ke udaa denge hamein roko na aaj

Duur rah paaye jo hamse dam kahaan manzil mein hai
Sarfaroshi kii tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Jism bhi kya jism hai jisamein na ho khoon-e-junoon
Kya wo toofaan se lade jo kashti-e-saahil mein hai

Chup khade hain aaj saare bhai mere khaamosh hain
Na karo to kuchh kaho mazhab mera mushkil mein hai

Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhanaa hai zor kitnaa baaju-e-qaatil mein hai

I know it's not about the ff but I felt to share it as an Indian.

Proud to Be Indian!

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Nivi_princess

Shaheedon ko salam. Aaj shaheed diwas hai(23rd march) . Hit the like button and remember them.

Sarfaroshi kii tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazu-e-qaatil mein hai

Ek se karataa nahin kyon dusaraa kuchh baat-cheet
Dekhtaa hun main jise woh chup teri mehfil mein hai

Aye shaheed-e-mulk-o-millat main tere oopar nisaar
Ab teri himmat ka charchaa gair kii mehfil mein hai

Sarfaroshi kii tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazu-e-qaatil mein hai

Waqt aane de bataa denge tujhe aye aasamaan

Hum abhii se kyaa bataayen kyaa hamaare dil mein hai

Kheench kar laayee hai sab ko qatl hone ki ummeed
Aashiqon ka aaj jamaghat koonch-e-qaatil mein hai

Sarfaroshi ki tamanna ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazu-e-qaatil mein hai

Hai liye hathiyaar dushman taak mein baithaa udhar
Aur hum taiyyaar hain seena liye apnaa idhar

Khoon se khelenge holi gar vatan muskhil mein hai
Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Haath jin mein ho junoon katate nahin talvaar se
Sar jo uth jaate hain vo jhukate nahin lalakaar se

Aur bhadakegaa jo sholaa-saa hamaare dil mein hai
Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Hum to nikale hii the ghar se baandhakar sar pe kafan
Jaan hatheli par liye lo barh chale hain ye qadam

Zindagi to apnii mehamaan maut ki mehfil mein hai
Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Yuun khadaa maqtal mein qaatil kah rahaa hai baar-baar
Kya tamannaa-e-shahaadat bhi kisee ke dil mein hai

Dil mein tuufaanon ki toli aur nason mein inqilaab
Hosh dushman ke udaa denge hamein roko na aaj

Duur rah paaye jo hamse dam kahaan manzil mein hai
Sarfaroshi kii tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai

Jism bhi kya jism hai jisamein na ho khoon-e-junoon
Kya wo toofaan se lade jo kashti-e-saahil mein hai

Chup khade hain aaj saare bhai mere khaamosh hain
Na karo to kuchh kaho mazhab mera mushkil mein hai

Sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai
Dekhanaa hai zor kitnaa baaju-e-qaatil mein hai

I know it's not about the ff but I felt to share it as an Indian.

Proud to Be Indian!


meri taraf se bhi ek ...

hai kismain itni jurrat...
jo laye mere makhab main kothaii...
hum havaaoon se nhi...
huasaloon se udda karte h...

saluting SOLDIER SPIRIT.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

awww...the special part was sooo cute...

sooo sweet...reallly lovely..

n specially the way he proposed her..

n aman is warning him...saying to stay away..

but i really hope nothing goes wrong..

thnx for the pm..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
beautiful update!!
love all frnd talking abt KaSam
kaksh is dumbo!! don't know how rajiv bears him!!
love Karnika telling abt her family n samar console her
which type of father n bro r they? r they real?
liked samar don't wanted karnika in worry
they r 1 soul and no one can separate them

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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Part 2:

Next day in the college:

All are in the college canteen except Karnika. Samar is worried about her.

Samar to Jiya – Where is Karnika?

Jiya – After the class she said that she has some work in library and she will meet us in the canteen...

Samar – It's too late now. She has not come yet...

Arjun – Don't worry Romeo... Look there, here she comes!

Samar enters the scene. Samar hugs her. All look at them.

Karnika – What are you doing Samar? All are looking at us...

Samar – Sorry... Why were you so late?

Karnika – I was not getting any good novel so got late...

Harsh – Karnika, your Samar was so worried about you that he has not even drunk some water after the class...

Karnika looks at Samar.

Samar to Karnika – Amm... Come on let's have some food.

Karnika nods.

Kaksh – Hey Guys! Are you all free today? I mean... Can we go somewhere together and have some fun?

All look at each other and...

All – Yeah!

Pragya – But where will we go?

Kaksh – I know a place, it is near our college and it's so beautiful, hills and trees...

Rajiv – Wow... It will be fun to be there...

Jiya – But we have to come by 8:00 pm. It's rainy season, who knows when the shower comes?

All nod.

Rajiv – So we will meet in front of the college, sharp at 6:00pm.

All – Done!

At 6:15 pm:

They have arrived to the place. It's a lovely place. Sky is cloudy.

Harsh – Nice place!

Kaksh – I know, I have come here many times... for picnic...

All give Kaksh a puzzled look.

Kaksh – What? It's fun to come here for picnic!

All laugh.

Samar and Karnika are looking at each other and smiling...

Harsh notices it and...

Harsh – Ok Guys! I think we should move there...and leave the love birds alone (pointing Samar and Karnika).

Samar and Karnika give shy smile.

Arjun – We will be here after few minutes... so talk and enjoy.

All the friends move leaving them alone together.

Samar – Nice place huh?

Karnika – yes.

Samar – Karnika, Please promise me something...

Karnika looks at Samar.

Samar – Promise me that you will never leave me alone and always be mine.

Karnika – I promise, I will be always yours.

Samar – I too promise, I will always be yours and never wipe your tears as I will never make you cry... We will always be together.

They hug.

Samar – I promise that I will never forget you and I will be there for you always...

Jiya (clears her throat) – eham eham...

Samar and Karnika break apart.

Harsh – Time up bro!

All smile.

Arjun – Hey! We should leave to hostel... It's 7:30 pm.

Pragya – yeah, you are right! Come on hurry up!

All are leaving but Samar's bike has gone out of petrol.

Samar – Uff! This bike!

Harsh – You and Karnika come in the taxi, okay?

Karnika and Samar nod and all others take leave.

Precap - Kahani me twist.😲 Sorry because this twist will surely hurt you but believe me, it will make the story more intresting.

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear😛

i liked the way he worried for her😛
so sweettt na😊
loved them😃

precap is scary😕
hope everything will be ok with them

cont soon😛
thanks for pm😊
luv u😉

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