RTMC FF - Pyar Ki MuRat - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
wonderful update !!! 👍🏼
so d game of truth doest it again !!! FINALLY usne admit to kiya !!!😉
Karnika ko bhi kuch-kuch feel ho raha hai !!!
d poems u use...just LUV dem !!!
especially d one in d precap !! 😍
desperately waitng 4 d proposal !!!!
next ud jaldi dena...varna mein chain se jee nahin paongi !! 😭
luv u... ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
thanks for updates
sorry for lare reply
loved all parts
all r beautiful
so karnika having prob with her family!!
and samar n she are good frnds now
instead whole group is now frnds
and samar came to know that she sings
beautiful parts

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
really awesome...👏
just hope when samar propose her...she will say yes...
otherwise samar k saath mera bhi nanha sa dil toot jayega...
n yes sry for not commenting on previous update...my exam u know...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
loved updated part!!
cool game
heheh kaksh donkey!!
thts true n he proved it in next min.
and true came out samar love karnika
loved arth taking out truth for samar
"marathi Mulgi aur punjab da puttar'!!
heheheh tht was beautiful combo
RTMC too have such mugz marathi n rajat jat!!
loved precap with poem

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: shruja


"marathi Mulgi aur punjab da puttar'!!
heheheh tht was beautiful combo
RTMC too have such mugz marathi n rajat jat!!


yeah!...
beautiful co-incidence...
rtmc n kasam roxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
superb update dear...loved it...

samar admitted his love...precap is interesting...

plz plz update soon...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

woowww...simply amazing n superb part..

just loved it..

sooo awsum..

finally he admitted...

cant wait for more..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

KEEP THE SPEAKERS ON!

Part 3:

In the college:

Except Samar and Karnika, all are in the canteen and chatting.

Jiya ' Ok Guys! So you mean Samar loves Karnika?

Harsh ' Yup. That's right.

Pragya ' Okay... So what now?

Rajiv ' I think we should convince Samar to propose Karnika...

Jiya ' Have you gone mad? If Karnika doesn't like him, she would surely put an end to their friendship...

Arjun ' How can you be so sure?

Jiya ' I am her best and childhood friend. I know her very well.

Pragya ' Well, she is right...

Kaksh ' Hey! Why can't we go to Karnika and tell her that Samar loves her?

Harsh ' Just ignore him or somebody just kill him, I am ready to give the bribe!

Kaksh ' okay! You can ignore me...

Arjun ' Shush! Samar is coming!

Samar arrives and there is a sudden silence...

Samar ' Someone is dead or what?

Harsh (smiling) ' No one...

Samar ' okay...

He sits on a chair and...

Kaksh ' Err... So who is going to tell Karnika?

Rajiv ' Bhaijaan! Err... You would be hungry... so please...

Arjun (ordering) ' Go and bring samosas and burgers!!

Kaksh ' But...

Samar ' Who is going to tell Karnika? And what ?

Kaksh ' That you...

Jiya ' That, you are going to fail!

Samar ' What? I am going to fail? Who said that?

Jiya ' Err... Rajiv!

Rajiv ' Arjun!

Arjun ' Harsh!

Harsh ' Oberoi sir told me...

Samar ' What the hell you all are speaking! Tell me what you all were talking about!

Pragya ' Ok!

All (except Samar) look at her with a surprise...

Pragya ' Guys! I think we will convince him...

Rajiv ' I think she is right...

Harsh ' Okay...

Jiya ' But who is going to convince him?

Arjun ' Err... Kaksh?

Kaksh (Curiously)' What?

Jiya ' okay! I will try... as I am her best friend...

Samar- What is going on??

Jiya ' Look Samar... We all know that you love Karnika...

Samar looks stunned and amazed.

Samar ' What?

Rajiv ' Yes bhaijaan. And we want that...

Harsh ' we really want that...

Arjun ' that you should... you should...

Kaksh ' Propose Karnika today!

All look at Kaksh.

Kaksh ' what? Was it not my dialogue?

Samar ' Are you all gone mad? If I proposed her she will surely say no!

Kaksh ' So you really love her?

Harsh ' Hey Sam! Come on... you can't hide your feelings...

Jiya ' Yup! He is right. And being the best friend of Karnika, I can say that she also loves you.

Samar ' Did she say so to you?

Kaksh ' Why Karnika will say "I love you" to Jiya?

Rajiv to Kaksh ' Bhaijaan! He meant that if Karnika told Jiya that she loves Samar...!

Jiya ' No. Her love is not as visible as yours but I know she is hiding her love for you...

Samar ' But ... if she doesn't, our friendship will be at risk and...

Harsh ' Take a chance, make a choice and see how your life changes...

Samar ' okay... but how should I propose her?

Pragya ' Don't worry! Leave it on us.

All of them make a plan.

Karnika is in the library. Jiya enters...

Jiya ' Err... Karnika?

Karnika ' yeah?

Jiya ' We all are going to Hansraj hotel...Are you coming with us?

Karnika ' Who all are going?

Jiya ' The whole gang. Rajiv, Arjun, Pragya, Me, Kaksh and Harsh...

Karnika ' Err... Samar too?

Jiya(smiling) ' Yes he too.

Karnika ' Why are we going to Hansraj hotel? I mean something special?

Jiya ' Yes ... something special for sure!

Karnika ' Huh?

Jiya ' Tell me are you coming?

Karnika ' okay... I am in.

Jiya ' Great! See you at 5:30 pm...

Karnika 'ok...

Jiya goes to Pragya and informs that she has agreed to come. Pragya informs others.

Harsh (disconnecting the call) ' Karnika is coming!

All hoot.

Samar ' But will she say yes or...

Harsh ' Another good news! Sam, when Jiya asked her if she is coming, guess what? She asked whether you are too coming or not!!

Samar looks shy and others start teasing him.

Harsh 'okay okay! Now Sam, come on! Tell me what will you do?

Samar ' I will move towards her and go down on knees and say "I love you"...

Arjun ' okay! Good, not bad at all...

Rajiv ' Hey! But where is the rose?

Kaksh ' here it is...

Kaksh gives the rose to Samar and they leave.

At Girls' Hostel:

Karnika ' What are you doing Jiya and Pragya?

Pragya (applying lipstick) ' Karnika! Keep quiet! Okay!! Now you are ready...

Jiya ' Okay! Now I wish I could be a boy...

Karnika ' Why?

Jiya ' So that I could flirt with you!

All laugh...

Jiya, Pragya and Karnika are in the taxi.

Karnika ' I should not have worn this saree!

Jiya ' You look damn beautiful! Don't worry!

Karnika ' But we are going to a hotel and not in any reception!

Pragya ' Oh! Don't worry...

They reach the hotel.

Karnika ' Ok... So where are the others?

Jiya ' They must be in the hotel's garden...come on...

They go to the garden and Jiya and Pragya silently hide behind a tree.

Karnika ' So where are they?

And she turns back and finds no one there!

Karnika (nervous) ' Jiya! Pragya!

Samar and others were standing behind a wall.

Samar looks at Karnika in red saree. He is lost in her beauty.

Harsh ' I know she is looking good but it's time to propose...

Samar (nervously) ' No! I can't do it! No!

Samar steps backwards and they all push him in front of her...

He comes in front of her and somehow manages to stand...

He looks at Karnika, she has wore a red saree with golden work on it and her diamond earrings are shining in the moon light, her opened hair cover her half face...

Karnika becomes nervous and she gradually looks at Samar as she moves her hair aside... She looks at Samar. But today, she felt that there is someone else standing in front of her, someone handsome in red shirt with black jacket and blue jeans, gelled hair and holding a red rose.

Samar moves down to his knees and holds the red rose in his hands and...

Harsh (murmurs) ' Now he will finally say I love you!

They wait eagerly to hear those words but for some time Samar and Karnika were lost in each others' eyes...

After sometime:

Samar ' "I never knew,

Why am I here?

I never knew,

What is my strength?

But ever knew my fear...

That was to lose you,

I never knew,

I was going to find a gem,

I never knew,

I was going to find you!

I never knew...

But I know,

Here inside my heart,

There is love that I want to show,

Dreams that I want to share

with you and only with you...

I Love You, Do you love me too?"

Karnika (with a shy smile) ' Yes, I love you too...

She takes the red rose and they hug and kiss each other.

Precap - Karnika reveals everything about her family and Samar consoles her.

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
nice part dear...oh prc background...that was wonderful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
prc bg.roxxx...

i told u we r gonna hav a BASH...


HERE IT IS...

FULLTOO INDIAN ISHTYLE-




bhangra-




dhool bajao jii...




cheers...

kasam roxx.
jii...

chaya gaya aaj ka ud...

kissi paloo nivi jii,
jhappii palo nivi jii...

dil khush kar ditta...

haye shone proposal tha...

dil chiir legaya, though it was typical proposal but i loved it...reading, n imagining...

convincing samar -that part ws awesomly writtennn

ab tho party karenge...





Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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