RTMC FF - Pyar Ki MuRat

I have made some changes in the character sketch, pls read it.

New Characters:

Mr. Raghav Singh- Samar and Arth's father.

Mrs. Sumita Singh- Samar and Arth's mother.

Mr. Pratap Singh- Samar and Arth's grandfather.

Chapter 1

Part1:

Golden sky and birds chirruping, it is 7:00 am.

In Amritsar (Punjab, Amritsar), higher middle-class family lives

in Jeevan Apartments... Mr. Pratap Singh, the eldest family

member sitting on a chair in the dining room sipping hot tea and

reading newspaper while Mrs. Sumita Singh, daughter-in-law of

Mr. Singh, preparing lunch, and Mr. Raghav Singh entered the

dining room and touched the feet of Mr. Singh with respect..

Mr. Raghav- Parnam bauji.

Mr. Singh- Jiunda reh putter.

Mrs. Sumita (while serving tea to her husband)-

What is the arrival time of the train?

Mr. Raghav- It's 8:30 am and let me tell you, you have asked the

same hundred times before...Why are you so worried?

Mrs. Sumita - It's already 7:00 am... and Arth (elder son) has

woken up but you know Samar (younger one), I am sure he

would still be sleeping... Arth! Come on get ready quickly

(shouting).

In the room:

A 22 year old guy, tall and thin, carrying unusual shine in his eyes

was combing his hair. He is Arth Singh. And on the bed is lying (in a superman posture!) his younger brother

(Just 1 year younger to him) Samar Singh. He has slept covering his face with the pillow.

Arth (shaking Samar) ' Samar! Come on! Wake up!!! Wake up!! Oh God! Many people sleep as if they are dead!

Samar (lazily shouting) ' Let the dead be dead and don't try to be my dad!

Arth ' Ahh! This boy! Sote hue bhi kavitayein soojh rahi hain! My great poet bro, wake up!

Samar ' Poems are the voice of the heart, let me wake up and welcome a new start! (As he spells this he places the pillow on the bed and wakes up with a cute smile).

He is 21 year old guy, healthy but not fat, poetic nature and a cheerful lad! Oh! Am I a poet too? Arr... Sorry! I forgot I am the narrator. Let me do the "narrator's job" .He is a handsome and carefree guy.

Arth ' It's 8:00 am!! We are getting late Samar! We have to go to the station and...

Samar (interrupting) ' Worries Worries everywhere, giving current shocks, Why to worry my bro? It's just 8 o'clock ... (gaining consciousness) It's 8 o'clock!! Bro! It's 8 o'clock!!

Arth ' Yes Mr poet! Now just go and have bath and get ready quickly!!

Samar runs towards the bathroom while Arth takes the luggage and goes to the ground floor...

I am open to all praise and criticism. Do comment.

Part 2:

It's 8:15 am

In the hall, Samar and Arth are ready to go.

They touch the feet of their grandfather, father and mother and taking leave...

Mr. Singh – Have a safe journey to Mumbai.

Mr. Raghav (looking to his wife Mrs. Sumita) – Sumita... why are you crying? Your sons are going to Mumbai for studies. Be happy.

Mrs. Sumita – You won't understand! You are not a mother...

Arth (to Samar) – Mummy's tag line! (Giggles)

Mrs. Sumita – Laugh as much as you can! But beta; whenever you reach the hostel, do call and inform us.

Mr. Raghav (mischievously) – Inform us or inform you?

All laugh and they take leave.

In the train:

Samar – Oh! We got our seats.

Arth (mischievously) – Oh! We got the train at time!

Samar – What? I was totally ready at time.

Arth –yeah... yeah...

Arth – I am going to the washroom, if the TC comes give him these tickets. (Handing over the tickets to Samar)

Samar quietly sitting and writing something in a diary.

A poor child comes singing and begging – Allah ke bande has de Alaah ke bande...

Looks towards Samar and says – Bhaiya! Kuch paise de do na, bhook lagi hai..(Brother! Please give me some money, I am very hungry...) and starts singing again...

Samar( in his poetic mood) – What shall I give you? Who am I to give you? It's the life given by Him (pointing towards the sky), Life full of different hues...

The poor kid – Kya bhaiya! Keh do na paise nahi hai, fokat me pakate kyun ho??(What Bro! Just say you don't have money, why are you irritating me?)

Samar (Smile changing into irritation)-Oye?

The child runs away...

Precap: Karnika's entry.

Chapter 2

The train stops at Mumbai station.

Station - full of crowd and noise everywhere. People running in hurry and coolies trying to earn money...

In the crowd, a girl in white suit- beautiful and lovely; is searching her friend in between the crowd coming out of the train.

She is Karnika Deshmukh. A 20 year old girl and as beautiful as an angel! She has a melodious voice and is good at studies.

Karnika( waving hand) ' Jiya! Jiya!

Jiya Rai is Karnika's childhood friend. She is lively and never thinks before she speaks anything!

Jiya ' Karnika! Oh! Thank God you came! You are my best friend! (Hugging Karnika)

Karnika ' Come, let's go... and by the way how was your journey?

Jiya ' Nice one.

Samar and Arth step out of the train.

Arth (satisfactorily) ' So finally we are here!

Samar feels something strange as Karnika is standing behind him. He feels as if something is really different!

Samar ' Finally in Mumbai! The Dreamland

Which changes the destiny of each and every man..

Will this turn change the destiny of Samar and Karnika forever?

*****

There is a request, if you like it let me know it..

Chapter 3

Part 1:

Karnika and Jiya in the taxi:

Jiya – So... are we going to your home? Or...

Karnika (interrupting) – We are going to Girls' Hostel.

Karnika looks tensed. Jiya looks worried too.

Taxi stops in front of the girl's hostel. Jiya and Karnika step out of the taxi and it moves on.

Jiya (hugging Karnika) – I am sorry! (Really feeling bad)

Karnika- Why are you sorry?

Jiya – I know you'll never make me feel sorry but I am sorry for what I asked you, though I knew that your family...

Karnika – Jiya... now that time has passed and I don't want to live that time again... Come on, let's go to the hostel...

They smile and go to the hostel. As they leave, another taxi comes in front of the hostel...

Samar and Arth step out of the taxi.

Samar (yawning) – Oh! Thank God! We reached here in minutes... Otherwise I would have slept...

Aaa! (Shouting)

Arth (giving money to the taxi driver) – What happened?

Samar – Are we going to stay in a ... a Girls' hostel? (Totally confused)

Arth – What? Have you gone mad?

Samar – Then why the taxi driver has stopped the taxi in front of the "Girls' Hostel"?

The taxi driver – Bhaiya ji! Peeche dekhiye, aapka boys' hostel... [Brother! Look there, (pointing towards boys' hostel that is in front of girls' hostel) there's your boys' hostel...]

The taxi departs...

Arth – Sam, you are too much!

Samar – What? Sorry, I didn't look there... (Embarrassingly)

In the Boys' Hostel:

Samar and Arth are shifting to their respective rooms...

Arth – Bye bro! My room is on 2^nd floor as I am a 2^nd year student...My room no. is 16.ok?

Samar – Ok! Mine is 23, 1^st floor...

They took leave...

At Girls' Hostel:

Jiya (panting) – Ah! I am tired... Have you find my room no. And off course my room partner?

Karnika – Jiya! Your room no is 23, 1^st floor!

Jiya – Hey! But that's your room... (Then taken aback) Wow! You are... you are my room partner! I am not tired anymore! OMG! I can't believe my luck!

Karnika (singing) – It's never too late, because no one knows what comes next, because no one knows his/her fate!

Karnika and Jiya both smile and move to their room.

At Boys' Hostel:

Samar (looking at the no. plate on the room's door) – Oh! This is my room!

The room is spacious but seems someone has entered in and destroyed everything... Chips' empty packets are thrown here and there and someone is sitting in the couch and gulping potato chips...

Samar (he entered and shockingly) – Aaa! This is my room!!

And as he moved in...

Samar(again) – Aaa!

He has faced that guy! Someone strange but not the stranger...

He is Kaksh Singh!!!

He is a 21 year old guy, Samar's childhood friend... He is a funny lad and somewhat stupid and an idiot too. He cares for Samar but he is an annoying boy...

Samar (almost fainting as he never wanted that annoying boy in his life again) – You!!

Kaksh – Hey Sam!! Nice to meet you, yaar!

Samar – What are you doing here?

Kaksh – I will stay here in this hostel... and you? (After sometime with a wide smile) Are you also going to stay here??

Samar (sadly) – hmm... Yes...

Kaksh – I can't believe my fate! I thought it's too late to see you again...

Samar (in poetic mood) - It's never too late, because no one knows what comes next, because no one knows his/her fate!

Samar (struggling to move towards corridor) – Kaksh! Just clean the room! Ah! Finally in the corridor!

Kaksh – Hey don't go there!

Samar – Why?

Kaksh – There is girls' hostel...

Samar – So what? Let it be... It doesn't matter, I am not going to come here again...in this corridor... (Closing the door of the corridor)

Kaksh – Amm... May I ask you why?

Samar – Because... I am not going to bear the struggle while moving from the room to the corridor!

Kaksh – but why you have to struggle?

Samar – You idiot! Because of your packets and chocolate wrappers and your luggage that you have thrown here and there!!

Samar goes out of the room in anger... And Kaksh feels bad...

Precap: Rajiv's entry and Samar and Karnika are about to meet.

If anyone likes this ff, let me know..

hi nivi..

just came across ur ff..

n its really amazing..

loved the way u narrated it..

continue soon..

n do pm me when u update...