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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
yeh main unn logon ko deti hoon jo mujhe sach main impress karte h...😆...

both r sitting on bench not nt talking to other...
chalo at last samar broke d silence......

samar a poet n karnika a singer...
yeh hoi na jodi ek dosare ke liye...☺️...

karnika's family suspence is really sm thng i m worried abt, hope this will nt be a big hurdle in kasam relation......

if yes, i want samar to be damn brave n take her away frm all misery...😎...

precap haye...
kinna shona precap haga...
iss baat par main chota dance karungi...
kal bhangra karungi pakka.

bade maze aayenge...
make it bit sensational scene...
ud soon kahne ki jarurat hi nhi h.rite??????????
coz nivi tho pehle se hi rooz ud deti h.🤗

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awesome ud dear...
eagely waiting for the special episode...
ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
woow... dat was niice !!! 😃
Samar is so...understandng n considerate !!!!! awww...
n d poem was... 😍
yeah !!! he heard her SING !!!!
uske beautiful kavitaon pe uski melodious voice !!!! d perfect combination !!!!! 👍🏼
d precap is makng me verrry...impatient ...n eager !!!
so next ud bhi jaldi dena (well ure nevr la8 but still...aapne dil ki tasalli ke liye..kehna padta hai.. )
❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Nice part 👏 👏
loved it
continue dear 😛
waiting for special episode ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
lovely update dear😛

garden scene was awesome...but why her family hate her😭
itni shoni...or pyaari ladki se koi nafrat kar sakta h bhala😛
i hate her family😡faltu mein meri karnika ko rula diya😡

but koi baat nhi swthrt mein hun na...or...or sam bhi to h na😉😳

thanks for long update 👏
its getting interesting dear😆

but yeh kya 😲precap is superb👏
why are u playing with us...like that🥺aise koi beech me rokta h kya precap ko😲
poora to dena chahiya na😕

i know veer admit his love for her😆
i know...im dammmn know😃yehi hoga ...
agar nhi hua to
agli update mein pta chal hi jayega🤣
plsss update soon😃
thanks for pm😊
sorry for late comment😭
luv u😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

wooww...

simply amazing n lovely part..

loved it...

they look so good together..

n understanding each other..

cont. soon..

cant wait wid this precap...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
kal subah subah hi ud de dena...
plz.

plz buddy.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Part 2:

At Boys' Hostel:

Harsh, Arjun, Kaksh had arrived to Samar's room and they all were chatting with Rajiv while... Samar is lost in Karnika's thoughts...

Samar (thinking) ' Wow! Today I saw her singing... she looked so beautiful and...Hey! What am I thinking? Huh... Not again!

Kaksh ' Hey Sam! What happened?

Samar ' Nothing...

Arjun looks at Harsh and they both nod and smirk...

Harsh ' If nothing has happened then play with us... I have a game...

Samar ' Play? Come on... We are grown ups and...

Harsh ' Who is going to play?

All (except Samar) lift up their arms and...

Kaksh ' Come on Sam... play with us, please please, please...

Samar- ok! Ok! Dumbo! Tell me the game!

Arjun ' It's an easy game... I will say a word and you have to relate it to another word. Ok?

Samar 'huh! What a stupid game!

Harsh ' Come on yaar...

Samar ' ok...

The game begins...

Arjun ' yellow

Samar ' lemon

Arjun ' Mobile

Samar ' Blackberry

Arjun ' Photo

Samar ' Frame

Arjun ' Sky

Samar ' Stars

Arjun ' Moon

Samar ' White

Arjun ' Donkey

Samar ' Kaksh ! (Obviously)

Arjun ' Love

Samar ' Karnika

Samar realising that he has done the biggest blunder ever, tries to run and they all stop him...

Harsh ' Humm?

Rajiv ' I knew it... I knew that it is going to happen...

Arjun ' It's a stupid game, huh?

Harsh ' It may be, but it always reveals the truth...

Kaksh ' No! I am not a donkey!

Harsh to Kaksh ' We are talking about Samar's love for Karnika, you idiot!

Kaksh ' oh...

Arjun ' Love? Karnika! Huh?

Samar ' It's just a game... whatever came to my mind I just spoke out!

Arjun ' That is what we are talking about Samar! You relate love to Karnika, right?

Samar ' Ok! I admit! I like her.

Rajiv lifting his eyebrows up ' Like her?

Samar ' okay... okay... I love her...but...

Harsh ' But what? Is there any villain in the love story?

All come together and their posture was the same as that of James Bond...

All ' We are going to eliminate that villain!

Samar ' What a crap!

All ' What? We are serious! Are not you?

Samar ' I am! But she just takes me as a friend... She never showed love for me...

Rajiv ' But hey bhaijaan! Perhaps you would have not noticed it?

Samar ' May be...

Harsh ' Don't worry bro! We know you both are made for each other...

All smile...

Samar ' It's better not to see dreams which can never be fulfilled

Than to be left with a broken heart because it's difficult to get healed...

Harsh ' It's always better to see dreams because people who see dreams can only turn them real...

Rajiv and Arjun smile and Kaksh about to question something...

Harsh to Kaksh ' I know what you are going to ask... that am I also good at poetry? But hey! You forgot I am fond of reading poems... right?

Kaksh nods...

At Girls' Hostel, at 9:00 pm:

Jiya is sleeping whereas Karnika lying on the bed is lost in the thoughts of Samar...

Karnika (thinking) ' Samar... he is a nice guy. He writes poems and he spoke some for me too... and...Oh god! Why am I thinking about him?

She stands up and moves to the corridor and thinks...

Karnika ' What is happening to me? Yeah I know he is a nice boy and...

She sees Samar in his corridor and at that precise moment he too looks at her...

Both are lost in each others' eyes... then Karnika looks to the ground and feels shy...

Samar too looks shy.

They both leave to their rooms.

Chapter 7

Part 1:

Days pass away... They both have been feeling strange but never told it to each other, but they knew there is something between them that is special for both of them.

It is 5:00 am, Samar is writing something in his diary and suddenly he hears footsteps and

Arth ' Hey! You have woken up?

Samar ' Good morning...

Arth ' Morning... you didn't answered me...

Samar (thinking) ' How can I wake up so early when I have not slept till the morning... How to tell you bro what I feel for her!

Arth ' Ok...

Samar (surprisingly) ' What okay?

Arth (in ordering tone) ' Tell me the name of that girl...

Samar ' Her name... what?

Arth ' I know you very well Samar. You are in love.

Samar ' Oh! Now not you!

Arth ' Ok... then tell me what were you doing now, at 5:00 am?

Samar ' I can ask you the same!

Arth ' Ok... I was here to take my mobile back... Yesterday you had taken it, remember? Now it's your turn!

Samar ' Ok! I was ... err... writing my diary...

Arth ' So early in the morning, huh?

Samar (trying to convince) ' Yeah... I had forgotten to write something yesterday!

Arth ' ok... If you don't want to tell me, that is absolutely fine...

Samar ' ok... Her name is Karnika... Karnika Deshmukh.

Arth ' Ok! Marathi mulgi and Punjab da puttar together!

Samar ' Bro! I am serious! I don't know what happens when I see her...

Arth ' It's love my brother!

Samar ' hmmm...

Arth ' By the way, your diary is so cool! I mean, its golden colour shimmers when comes in contact with the light... nice...

Samar ' Thanks!

Arth ' Hey what's written on its cover?

Samar (looks at the diary and reads) ' "I never knew... It was fate."

Arth ' You wrote it or?

Samar ' It was already written on it.

Arth (yawning) ' ok... I am going to my room...

Samar ' ok...

Arth leaves...

Samar keeps his diary in his wardrobe under the clothes so that no one could see it.

Precap - KaSam's friends encourage Samar to propose Karnika.

Har taraf bas Pyar hoga,

Dil ishq k do lafz sunne ko Bekaraar hoga,

Waqt tham jayega, Saansen ruk jaanyengi,

Jab Inki Mohabbat ka Izhaar hoga!


Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
i knew it,i knew it
meine kaha tha na ki he admit his love 4 her
wahi hua nice
beautiful update dear
very intresting
loved it
thanks 4 pm
pls cont soon
ur precap!!damn intresting
make me curious
so pls pls ud soon
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
the game scene was really cool...
awesome sense of humor samar had wen he related donkey to kaksh...
so finally he openly admitted that karnika is his love...

both r in each others thoughts...
cool...not cool , so romantic.
i just love this kinda scenes...

samar attempt to escape arth's question-''even i frgot to write ma dairy last nite?????????////'' sooperb answer...

punjab da putter loves marathi mulgi...so perfect na, made for each other...

so here is ma bhangra...



agar karnika ne haan kar diya tho...

tho.
tho...
hmmm...

dhol bajangi....

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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