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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
nice part dear...loved KaSam library scene😳...

precap is awesome😍...they become good friends😊...but what is the suspense of K's family???...

& yes u gave us a shock with that promise thing😲...we all know he will break that promise😉...& we want that too😳...

& now u told to read carefully - 'samar looks karnika singing'...i hope this is 'looks & listens'...i want them both to know about their common musical interest soon, which will bring them closer😳...

plz update soon...eagerly waiting for next part😍...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awesome ud yaar...
nd fanstastic vm ...
luved it...
plz ud soon varna ye suspence muje kha jayega...
waiting for the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
dats beautiful !!! 😛
d precap is verry intrestng !!! its makng it really hard 2 wait !!!
now...im waitng 4 her song...n ur song selectn...evrythng u've done is perfect ...so its put sum pressure on d song !!!! 😛
eagerly waitng 4 d ud !!
gr8 work !!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
nice precap...
cool one.

suspence n dosti n singing...

oh! hooo...

wa8ing for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Hey nivi🤗
Read all the parts in one go and now able to comment.

Concept and CS is awesome and I like this poetic Samar.His and his bro's bonding is adorable...

samar and kranika first meet is good and i like his poetry a lot...
hope a good pace of relationship b/w them.

Keep updating.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

simply amazing part...

loved it..

hope he keeps up the promise..

loved the poems...beautiful..

n the video was really interesting...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
read all parts...very nice sweety...keep it up...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Chapter 6

Part 1 :

In the college garden:

Samar and Karnika are sitting on a bench. Both are quiet as they don't know what to say and...

Samar (interrupting the silence) ' A ... So... Now we are friends...

Karnika ' yes...

Samar ' So we should know about each other...

I am from Amritsar... I love my family the most in this world... You know... Having a family makes you feel secure...

Karnika (with teary eyes and looking at the ground) ' Yes, I know...

And she stands up and begins to walk slowly and Samar accompanies her...

Samar ' You know? My brother also studies in KPSC, he is in 2nd year. He stays in same hostel... Though we always tease each other but we are best friends as well and...

Karnika breaks into tears...

Samar (caringly) ' What happened? Did I say anything wrong? Please don't cry...

Karnika (sobbing) ' I am missing my family...

Samar ' Why? I mean... I am also missing mine but...

Karnika ' But my family hates me! And perhaps my brother too...

And she runs away crying...

Samar feels sad and thinks perhaps his words hurt her...

It is 10:00 pm at Girls' Hostel:

Karnika (in thoughts) ' Does my family really hate me? If no then why they did this to me? (Starts crying silently)

Next Day in the college:

All are at the canteen except Karnika.

Samar is thinking that what did yesterday hurt Karnika so badly...

Pragya ' Jiya, where's Karnika?

Jiya ' I don't know. She didn't attend the class too...

Kaksh ' Hey! This is not fair, I have also not attended the class but no one is worried about me!

Rajiv ' Let me tell the reason, bhaijaan. That's because...

Arjun ' You were in the canteen and gulping millions of samosas! And don't forget you are present here!!

Harsh ' okay! Okay! Now don't fight over that!

Samar ' Has she come to the college or...

Pragya ' She had told us that she could be late but I don't think that she is present today...

Samar becomes sad and goes to the garden...There he sees Karnika standing under a tree and lost in her thoughts...

Karnika (deep in thoughts) ' Should I call them or should I...

Samar pats on her shoulder. She turns back and...

Samar '

"I am not here to ask you anything,

I don't know the reason behind the painful time you are going through,

I am here just to say one thing,

That this friend will be always there for you,

May it be the most painful moment or,

May it be the happiest one, I will be there,

Don't worry; this friend is always there for you..."

Karnika (smiling with tears in her eyes) ' I thought you...

Samar ' I am here to ask you what happened, right?

Karnika ' yes, but you surprised me...

Samar ' I know something is hurting you but I won't ask until you are ready to tell...

Samar (changing the topic) ' Well, you are a very good poet.

Samar ' Thanks... Err... I am very fond of composing poems but...

Samar ' But what?

Samar ' But I never told anyone that I have a poem collection...

Karnika (smiling) ' Really? That's nice... So poems by many poets...

Samar (interrupting) ' I have written all those poems...

Karnika (Taken aback) ' Ok... So are you...

Samar ' I am going to show you...

Samar and Karnika sit down on a bench in the garden. Samar takes out a copy and shows her.

Karnika ' Wow! So many poems...

Samar ' yeah.

Karnika ' How you write these poems...

Samar ' They come naturally...

Karnika ' Err... If you don't mind can I read them alone?

Samar ' yup, but can I ask you why?

Karnika ' I just like to read alone...

Samar ' As you wish... But hey I will take it after the college ok? And please don't give it to anyone...

Karnika ' Okay... I won't give it to anyone...

Samar ' Bye.

Karnika ' Bye.

Samar leaves and Karnika is lost in reading the poems...

After the college:

Kaksh ' Hey Sam! Where are you going?

Samar (while running) ' You all go... I will meet you in the Hostel...

He goes to the garden and looks that Karnika is sitting on the bench...

He takes a step and...

Karnika starts singing:

"I remember the day

When I met you,

I remember the day

When you were there

Standing in the sunshine,

I was too standing unknown

To the feeling that went through

Me...

And now that we are facing each other,

There is something I want to feel...

I want to be there,

With you,

I want to be there

When time passes by,

Looking at you...

When each..."

Karnika suddenly stops singing as he sees Samar looking at her...

Samar (completely lost in her melodious voice) ' Wow!

Karnika ' you here... I mean, please don't tell anyone that I sing...

Samar ' But why?

Karnika ' Because I don't want to...

Samar ' okay! Okay... I won't. But your voice is so sweet and melodious!!

Karnika with a shy smile ' Thank you. (handing over the copy to Samar)

Samar ' Oh God! I am getting late!

Karnika ' yeah me too!

Both ' Bye!

They leave.

Precap😊: Special Episode! Special Episode!😆

Samar😃

is going to

admit...😲

...😲

...😲

...😲

his ceaseless ❤️love❤️ for Karnika!🥳😍

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Hey friends!😊 This is a long post 4 u all.😉
Enjoy!😃
How is the precap?
Abhi precap se kaam chalao, kal post padhne par dance karna...😆


Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
wao nic ud
chlo akhir dosti to ho hi gai
but wht abt her family ?? 😲
y they hate her ?? 😲
itni pyari bachi se koi hate krta h kya 😔
this poem suit both of them 😊
w8ing for next part

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