awesoem update dhanvi...👏
i liked this update more than the others...i don't no why but i think cause ur writing has been becoming day by day better n better n better,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,really...too good...
''...Veer penetrated his eyes on her...He came closer to her "Chandni there is a unique charisma in you...''
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Kyun fiza, rang chhalka rahi hai
Mere dil bata aaj hona hai kya
''...Veer knew Chandni was different and he can never melt her...but there wasn't any desire in his mind...he felt different with her...different from the entire world...it wasn't love...it wasn't lust...it was different...''
Chaandni, din mein kyun, chhaa rahi hai
Zindagi, kis taraf jaa rahi hai
Mere dil bata kya hai ye silsila
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai
''...Veer fixed his eyes on her but did not follow her...he turned towards the opposite direction...all he could hear was the sound of the wind...he felt one drop on his cheek...he looked up...suddenly it started raining...he liked rains...it was something new for him...''
Jahaan tak bhi jaayein nigaahein, baraste hain jaise ujaale
Jahaan tak bhi jaayein nigaahein, baraste hain jaise ujaale
Saji aaj kyun hain ye raahein, khile phool kyun hain niraale
''he had never walked in rains before...he smiled and looked up...long trees were planted on both sides of the path...It wasn't bright...it was dusky...''
Khushbuwein, kaisi ye beh rahi hain
Dhadkanein jaane kya keh rahi hai
Mere dil bata ye kahaani hai kya
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai
''... As soon as he reached the steep path...he saw her coming from the other side ...''
Ye kiska hai chehra jisse main, har ek phool mein dekhta hoon
Ye kiska hai chehra jisse main, har ek phool mein dekhta hoon
Ye kiski hai awaaz jisko, na sun ke bhi main sun raha hoon
''... Veer smiled "old woman was right...angels must have bowed their heads in front of her beauty..." he murmured...''
Kaisi ye aahatein aa rahi hain,
kaise ye khwaab dikhla rahi hain
Mere dil bata kaun hai aa raha
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai ...😍
really loved gardens convo b/w veer n chand...😳
n what does that old lady means...😕...n who is she...😕...is she is a wellwisher...or...????????...😕...why doesn't she say anything clearly...😕
''...she smiled at him "remember, she has such a beauty, that you won't be able to stand it. The moment you will touch her, keep in mind you will burn...''
now what does that mean...?????????...😕
n even veer found her talks useless...no veer it's not...😉...u r soon going to know it...😉
n chandani...is also feeling something strange...n wiered...n she is thinking about the incidence...asar toh ho raha hai...😉...but no she is feeling unsafe...n dangerous...when he was looking at her...
n veer is unwell...n chand went to check him...oh lovely...
but he can not resist himself...n grasped her hand...😲...???????...
oh god u are making me very curious...why u wrote something like that...i m superrr...excited...
i m liking this story more than tum mere ho...😊
update soon...
luv u...😊
Ishaani
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