SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 16

Originally posted by: prahelika

lovely update dear...😊

veer is in a full on mood to impress chandni😳...

and he can feel the new kind of longing in him😳 for her...

it was going to happen as she's not like the other girls to give someone her heart easily😳...

you need to change yourself which is not very easy...😆

at least he's drinking tea in stead of alcohol*sighs in relief*

and smiling after so many days😊...

i'm waiting for the next...

plz update soon dear...😊

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

beautiful update dear..!!!

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

SO SORRRY

For late commenting

but I couldn't coz my pc ''Bimaar'' tha 😭 😭

n use thik thik hote hote itna late ho gaya

u know i miss so much Veer chandani n ofcourse U

I read all updates whichever I missed

All updates are too good Dhanvi

U are Fabulous writter n ur story day by day aur bhi interasting hoti ja rahi hai

👏

Chandni n Veer

hmm 😳 first touch of veer on Chandni's cheek 😛

waiting for next

continue soon dear

Originally posted by: caged23

Brilliantly written 👍🏼

Originally posted by: mugdhas24

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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

megha, don't worry di hindi bol leti hai...

she wiil understand for sure...

i love the way u comment...

too good.

Originally posted by: mugdhas24

thank you Rashmi.Par main apni taraf se sure hona chahti thi. ofcourse hindi to aati hogi unhe. main bhi budhu hoon bilkul,i am waiting for the update.

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

but di kudh bhot kaam hindi bolti h...

mere sath kabhi bolene ki try kati h...

pata nhi voh mere ff kitni difficulty se padhti hongi...😆..

may be mujhe di ke liye aapne ff main hindi dialogues kam kar dene chahiye.....😆

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😳

oye hoye, meri di ki hindi ke kya kahane...👏...

chagayi di aap...tunnn...🤗...

aakhir kaar aapne mere ffs padhkar aapni hindi sudhar hi li...😳

i noe, well i give credits to myself for all good reasons...😆...

good di, ur hindi is really on rock👍🏼