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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


@ mugdha 24

blue part mera hai,
black di ka h...

sahi kaha ,di ko hum hindi shikhate h......😆...


Sahi bola rashmi. 😆😆😆 tun. di ko tun ka meaning pata hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update

veer is totally under spell

but now his proximity is affecting her too

so rise of tension on both sides

eager to see wat will happen
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Posted: 13 years ago
im so sorry 4 being late !!!
dat was an awesum ud !!!
Veer is totally mesmerised by Chandani !!!
she felt SOMETHNG on his touch !!! but dark ??
waitng for more ...
plz ud soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear😃...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply
loved the update
so veer trying hard to get her
n she sensed something strange in his behaviour
but veer plz don't develop lust for her but love!!
or else u will lost her forever evenif u will get her
try to be amibitious like her as she is in her young age

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 8


"Sure Kaka, we can start this project from tomorrow...i am scaling the area...some workers will help soiling it...then we can start planting..." she said while holding the file and a measuring tape in her hand... "its easy to say Chandni...how long will it take?" Kaka was now curious, not only that but there was something that made him think like that... "well I can't give exact time frame...but six or more months..." she didn't look up to see Kaka's face... "six months...it means by January next year" he may not see the next year...only some miracle can save him...deep thoughts occupied Kaka's mind...

"this side is completed..." she collected the data and moved towards the other side... Kaka wanted to be alone "Chandni, can you please carry on your work, I will have a round", he said smilingly without showing her any signs of his worry. "that's alright Kaka" she resigned back to her work after briefly glancing at the old frame.


It was still windy, she tied her hair with a band and made a pony tail. She looked up the sky that stared with black clouds covering all over...she quickly went around the entire land to complete her work before the rain...


Chandni held the file tightly in her hand and stepped towards the rough patches of the land when she stopped, something was pulling her from behind, she froze for a second... someone was following her...she turned behind to see him "Veer...when did you come?" she said with a surprising tone... "i was following you" he said without any hesitation... she wasn't happy with his reply...somehow she felt unsafe...she saw something different in Veer's eyes...she smiled a little and went back to her work... "anyone can scare you easily" he said while putting his hands in his pockets... he looked handsome...his dark hair covered his forehead...his smile could make anyone melt for him...he looked extremely dignified...his eyes were making Chandni look at him "i don't know what to say..." she said while jotting something in the file "sometimes you make me feel scared..." she didn't look into his eyes...she avoided looking at him...


Veer knew Chandni was different and he can never melt her...but there wasn't any desire in his mind...he felt different with her...different from the entire world...it wasn't love...it wasn't lust...it was different... "who ever made you, I am sure even he won't understand what he has made" Veer penetrated his eyes on her...she didn't heard what he said but she could feel his eyes piercing at her... it didn't made her uneasy...she somehow felt different...there was a dangerous feeling urging inside...but she took a deep breath and concentrated on her work...

He came closer to her "Chandni" as he came more closer to interrupt her...she didn't look at him..."there is a unique charisma in you" she wasn't surprised to hear...he didn't say anything bad...she dared to look into his eyes this time...Veer moved his hand towards her face when she stepped backwards and turned towards the other end of the land without looking behind...her heart was beating faster...her hands were cold...


Veer fixed his eyes on her but did not follow her...he turned towards the opposite direction...all he could hear was the sound of the wind...he felt one drop on his cheek...he looked up...suddenly it started raining and paths became more slippery...he walked slowly...he liked rains...it was something new for him, he had never walked in rains before...he smiled and looked up...long trees were planted on both sides of the path...It wasn't bright...it was dusky.


he was walking leisurely when he saw an old woman sitting by the path...he could see her wrinkles on her face and neck...she gazed at him when he passed by her and smiled... "A mere human has adorned her but these angels have bowed their heads in front of her" he stopped and turned around ...the voice was trembling because of her age but she was still clear...


His eyes were asking her what she meant, he took few steps towards the old lady who did not had anything to protect herself from heavy rains besides a sag that she covered her head with...she smiled at him "remember, she has such a beauty, that you won't be able to stand it. The moment you will touch her, keep in mind you will burn..." he watched her carefully and went closer...sat on his knees to look at her...there was a warning, a prediction in her voice...


Veer was about to ask her when the old mouth opened to say something "when beauty is revealed, that time is incomparable...one loses sense of oneself, even the one in command of his senses loses them." she said and closed her eyes...he couldn't relate to what the old woman was saying and about whom she was talking...he stood still for few seconds...he wanted to ask her but then he felt her talks useless and baseless...she must be some mad woman just sitting beside the road to utter this nonsense to every passer by...he shrugged off and started walking towards the path... after taking few steps...he halted and turned back to stare at the decrepit, another second he thought of not looking at weird people...he continued walking...


the journey was not so long...he felt cold...as it was windy and he never walked in the rains...there wasn't anyone around, but still he felt nice...he took out the bottle from his pocket...had a sip and kept it back...


As soon as he reached the steep path...he saw her coming from the other side...she was all wet, her clothes were transparent now...he could see a thin dark color strap under her pink top...her cleavage was clearly visible...he wanted to suck all the rain drops from her lips and body...she crossed her arms and walked carefully...her beautiful hair was dripping wet... as she reached the end of the path...she saw him standing...it was a mere glance but she could make out he had been staring at her, his eyes were scanning her from top to bottom...she moved upwards towards the steep path towards the house...the door was opened she went inside...


Veer smiled "old woman was right...angels must have bowed their heads in front of her beauty..." he murmured...


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"Weather is certainly not good, Mr Guncha" Kaka was talking to him on the phone... Mr Guncha asked Kaka to have patience as the rains won't last longer...it was just the season and no one could help.


Chandni went inside her room and bolted it from behind...for a moment she closed her eyes and leaned against the door...she could imagine his eyes looking at her...she touched her forehead...it was rain drops and sweat...she was sweating...she picked up her towel and walked towards the bathroom...took off her wet clothes and wiped her body with a dry towel...then wore a nice suit with white kurta and red dupatta...it was pretty cold...she dried her hair nicely...


She thought of having some tea... as she came out, she saw Kaka worried... "what happened Kaka" Kaka looked at her...she looked different with a traditional wear, whenever he looked at her he got positive vibrations..."nothing Chandni...i was just thinking about the project that we have started..." Chandni now knew why he seemed worried "don't worry Kaka...this is normal rainy season...it will not last long..." she smiled at him "in the mean time...you can enjoy this place..."


Kaka was making tea for her...he knew she loves drinking tea when it rains... the steam from the kettle makes her feel more tempted to drink one... "you know I like tea..." she took the cup from Kaka who smilingly offered her "yes..." her eyes were looking for Veer...she thought in her mind...she saw him outside the house...she didn't wanted to ask...but somehow she glanced upstairs, but couldn't figure out...she would never ask for him, even though she knew how he spoke and stared at her, her eyes were still searching for him...finally she asked Kaka "where is Manohar? Didn't saw him since yesterday" she asked while sipping her tea... "Chandni, I am fed up of him...he is even worse than Veer sometimes...firstly he eats a lot, then sleeps a lot...i told him to get the groceries...but he's not bothered...and Veer is unwell...i can't send him...i have to go myself now...i am waiting for the driver to come..."


Chandni revised his words "Veer is unwell" that's all she heard... she immediately asked Kaka "Veer's not well?? what happened?" she asked curiously but then pretended to be normal... "he has never been outside in rain...and today he came all wet...he's having fever now ...i have given him some medicine." She didn't asked another question...Kaka went towards his room to get ready...


Kaka asked Chandni to rest...and he will be back soon...Chandni went inside her room...she packed her bag for tomorrow as she had to leave for Darjeeling to attend her college... she kept her things ready...she was sitting in front of a huge mirror...she was brushing her hair when she heard him coughing... she felt a strange feeling...she remembered what had happened in the morning...he came so closer to her and was about to touch her...even the thought of it made her body cold and nervous... she got up and walked outside her room...


Hundreds of thoughts flowed in her mind at every step that she was taking towards him...slowly she started climbing the stairs...it wasn't easy...something was stopping her from going near him and something was pulling her towards him...she never had this strange feeling ever before...she always knew what she was doing but this time her mind was against her heart... she reached outside his room...


She took a long breath...and slightly opened the door...she could see his wardrobe, a huge glass window that looked like an antique...she saw so many bottles in one line... "how many times should I tell you to knock Manohar" Veer spoke up as he heard the door open...but soon he froze to see Chandni in his room... "its me...if you want I can go..." she said without looking at him... "no that's alright" he said while lifting up his head a little to view her...her wet hair made her look more beautiful...she looked as pure as an angel...he couldn't let his eyes off her..."please come in" he said while he saw her standing at the door waiting for his permission.


Chandni walked towards him...he lay on a huge bed covered with a silk sheet and had a soft quilt over him...he gazed at her...but didn't say anything... she sat on the chair next to the bed ' "Kaka told me you have fever?" she said and waited for his answer to which he simply nodded... "i am better now" she thought of touching his forehead... "can I check" she asked him and moved her hand towards his forehead...as she placed her soft hand on his forehead he closed his eyes...her mere touch caused him to hold her hand...he couldn't control...and gripped her delicate wrist with his hand...


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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
do i need to say it ws really a awesome ud.
well agar aapne itna accha ud diya h tho, awesome tho mujhe kahana chahiye.
di u r amazing, i loved it.
the way veer ws following her secretly ws awesome.
and being frank to her ws seriously something like daqsh, u noe na, he said it very free and frank that dhwani is his wife for sure.
well veer is not at that level as his character demands., but i still like his attitude.

he doesn't hav love, no lust, a strange feeling...hmmm/...

''who has made u, does he even noe wat he hd made''...veer is so bad in praising his lady honour. wat he had made means wat- he has made her the the delicate, and serene soul, which one veer shud nt hurt, or instead protect.
god ma toughts, r improving day by day, jus coz of ur stories di...

the old lady-the lines u gave for her were awesome.
specially dat one- her single touch will burn u inside...loved this line.
but u noe i really like this old lady theme n part- she even once met to chand, rite????

its too good.
now the way u described her in rain, imagining mugdha lke dat, really makes her look damn sexy.now the way u presented veer staring her, jus completes the scene...JUST PERFECT. but veer eyes's shud hav only love, no lust.

veer is having fever, n tomorrow is her college... well i need a nurse and patient scene here.
its a rule of every rtmc story.
remember the way she use to bandage him always wen he ws hurt and even use to do it wen she ws hurt, man i jus LOVE DHARAMVEER.
if she is going to college too, at least make her call veer once to ensure his health...cellphone part plz.
now abt dat black crown..????🤔

di u r amazing , 'that i say in every post of mine.
even u wud have been bore listening this.
but wat to do , u have to listen this till wen i m nt bored, and till that u r amazing...

so here it goes once again-

U R AMAZING.

LOVE U DI.
CONT SOON...
WA8ING.
LOVE ONCE AGAIN.🤗

do remember u hav given us all 3 wonderful stories.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ur writing gets better and better each update.
Please upload soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear,
i loved it and love u 2
oh veer try to touch her thats nice,
and chand also have strange feelings...hmmm,.

This getting more interesting dear

im eagerly waiting for next update
plsss ud soon
u made my morning today by this fab update
thanks 4 pm dear
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx for pm me di 😊
nic ud 😃
di i want to ask 1 thing as u said in ur previous ud whn veer's father said to kaka dt whn a pure girl touch veer tn that black cown break
n now chandani touched him now wt abt that crown ?? [:O]

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