SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 20

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

beautiful n awesome part

thanks dear...😊

Originally posted by: shruja

beautiful update!!
so chandani felt somthing strange abt veer staring her!!
loved the rain scene description
old lady making story more mysterious
chandani feeling concern abt veer!
n veer not feeling lust for her but not love too!!
then wht made him to hold her hand?????????

hi Dear...was waiting for your comments...thank you so much...well lets see why he hold her hand and what will happen...😉

Originally posted by: mugdhas24

love you for this, you are amazing Dhanvi. pls pls pls update soon. i think you are a writer. can i please ask you how old are you? please don't mind. i just love the way you write. i am your biggest fan. pls pls pls update soon. i have started imagining different things. aapko hindi nahi aati?

hi sweetie...thanks for appreciating...i am not a writer...i am writing because of Ranju who has incouraged me, and inspired me...i will update soon...you must imagine... haan mujha hindi ati ha...😃... keep enjoying...

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

wow... Superb update loved it...
Continue sooonnn
Thanx for the pm

thanks a lot neha...will cont soon...😃

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

yeh tho aise mat bolo megha,

verna mera aur tumhara zabardast jhagada ho jayega...

hum dono hi di biggest fans - AC coolers, sab hain...

include me in.

mujha aapna fan bana lo plz... 😆

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesoem update dhanvi...👏

i liked this update more than the others...i don't no why but i think cause ur writing has been becoming day by day better n better n better,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,really...too good...

''...Veer penetrated his eyes on her...He came closer to her "Chandni there is a unique charisma in you...''

Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Kyun fiza, rang chhalka rahi hai
Mere dil bata aaj hona hai kya

''...Veer knew Chandni was different and he can never melt her...but there wasn't any desire in his mind...he felt different with her...different from the entire world...it wasn't love...it wasn't lust...it was different...''

Chaandni, din mein kyun, chhaa rahi hai
Zindagi, kis taraf jaa rahi hai
Mere dil bata kya hai ye silsila
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai

''...Veer fixed his eyes on her but did not follow her...he turned towards the opposite direction...all he could hear was the sound of the wind...he felt one drop on his cheek...he looked up...suddenly it started raining...he liked rains...it was something new for him...''

Jahaan tak bhi jaayein nigaahein, baraste hain jaise ujaale

Jahaan tak bhi jaayein nigaahein, baraste hain jaise ujaale
Saji aaj kyun hain ye raahein, khile phool kyun hain niraale

''he had never walked in rains before...he smiled and looked up...long trees were planted on both sides of the path...It wasn't bright...it was dusky...''

Khushbuwein, kaisi ye beh rahi hain
Dhadkanein jaane kya keh rahi hai
Mere dil bata ye kahaani hai kya
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai

''... As soon as he reached the steep path...he saw her coming from the other side ...''

Ye kiska hai chehra jisse main, har ek phool mein dekhta hoon

Ye kiska hai chehra jisse main, har ek phool mein dekhta hoon
Ye kiski hai awaaz jisko, na sun ke bhi main sun raha hoon

''... Veer smiled "old woman was right...angels must have bowed their heads in front of her beauty..." he murmured...''

Kaisi ye aahatein aa rahi hain,

kaise ye khwaab dikhla rahi hain
Mere dil bata kaun hai aa raha
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai ...😍

really loved gardens convo b/w veer n chand...😳

n what does that old lady means...😕...n who is she...😕...is she is a wellwisher...or...????????...😕...why doesn't she say anything clearly...😕

''...she smiled at him "remember, she has such a beauty, that you won't be able to stand it. The moment you will touch her, keep in mind you will burn...''

now what does that mean...?????????...😕

n even veer found her talks useless...no veer it's not...😉...u r soon going to know it...😉

n chandani...is also feeling something strange...n wiered...n she is thinking about the incidence...asar toh ho raha hai...😉...but no she is feeling unsafe...n dangerous...when he was looking at her...

n veer is unwell...n chand went to check him...oh lovely...

but he can not resist himself...n grasped her hand...😲...???????...

oh god u are making me very curious...why u wrote something like that...i m superrr...excited...

i m liking this story more than tum mere ho...😊

update soon...

luv u...😊

hey sweetheart...i was missing your songs love...thank you so much for appreciating... you will understand the story as it moves further...even i don't know what will happen next...i am super excited after reading your wonderful comment...oh thank you darling... 😊 you make me swim in the air...😆 i am just trying to write...i am far from perfectionism...

Originally posted by: prahelika

lovely update dear😃...sorry for being late...

the change is initiating in veer😳...

he always stayed away from rain and now he loved rain so much that he was suffering from fever...

knowingly or unknowingly chandni has started nourishing a soft corner in her heart for veer😳...

"veer is unwell"...the moment she heard it the rest of the world affair became useless to her...

it's really strange how chandu was recieving both positive and negative vibes from the dark angel veer...😳

i love this old lady for making the ongoing already mysterious events even more thrilling😃...

and just like sweetsanyo even i want a nurse patient track here😍...it's an inevitable part of RT MC romance😳...

plz update soon dear...😊

was waiting to read your comments...thanks a lot love... thank you so much for liking and passing the comments...much appreciated...will try and update soon...😊

Originally posted by: Freethinker

hi sweetie...thanks for appreciating...i am not a writer...i am writing because of Ranju who has incouraged me, and inspired me...i will update soon...you must imagine... haan mujha hindi ati ha...😃... keep enjoying...

Thank you. aap achi hindi likhte hain. who ever encouraged you has done right. aap deserve karte ho. acha likhte ho. you live in New zealand? i hear it is very nice country. aap kitne time se ho wahan. aap bohat down to earth ho.

hey dear..

Love that nandini is cute and sweet but veer is little msyertious some time hope evey thing gets nice