SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 19

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

well i need a nurse and patient scene here.

its a rule of every rtmc story.

remember the way she use to bandage him always wen he ws hurt and even use to do it wen she ws hurt, man i jus LOVE DHARAMVEER.

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

do i need to say it ws really a awesome ud.

well agar aapne itna accha ud diya h tho, awesome tho mujhe kahana chahiye.

di u r amazing, i loved it.

the way veer ws following her secretly ws awesome.

and being frank to her ws seriously something like daqsh, u noe na, he said it very free and frank that dhwani is his wife for sure.

well veer is not at that level as his character demands., but i still like his attitude.

he doesn't hav love, no lust, a strange feeling...hmmm/...

''who has made u, does he even noe wat he hd made''...veer is so bad in praising his lady honour. wat he had made means wat- he has made her the the delicate, and serene soul, which one veer shud nt hurt, or instead protect.

god ma toughts, r improving day by day, jus coz of ur stories di...

the old lady-the lines u gave for her were awesome.

specially dat one- her single touch will burn u inside...loved this line.

but u noe i really like this old lady theme n part- she even once met to chand, rite????

its too good.

now the way u described her in rain, imagining mugdha lke dat, really makes her look damn sexy.now the way u presented veer staring her, jus completes the scene...JUST PERFECT. but veer eyes's shud hav only love, no lust.

veer is having fever, n tomorrow is her college... well i need a nurse and patient scene here.

its a rule of every rtmc story.

remember the way she use to bandage him always wen he ws hurt and even use to do it wen she ws hurt, man i jus LOVE DHARAMVEER.

if she is going to college too, at least make her call veer once to ensure his health...cellphone part plz.

now abt dat black crown..????🤔

di u r amazing , 'that i say in every post of mine.

even u wud have been bore listening this.

but wat to do , u have to listen this till wen i m nt bored, and till that u r amazing...

so here it goes once again-

U R AMAZING.

LOVE U DI.

CONT SOON...

WA8ING.

LOVE ONCE AGAIN.🤗

do remember u hav given us all 3 wonderful stories.

Thanks a lot sweetie...thanks for reading and giving wonderful comments...much appreciated...love you too 🤗

Originally posted by: caged23

Ur writing gets better and better each update.
Please upload soon

Thanks dear...will try and update soon...😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

Awesome update dear,
i loved it and love u 2
oh veer try to touch her thats nice,
and chand also have strange feelings...hmmm,.

This getting more interesting dear

im eagerly waiting for next update
plsss ud soon
u made my morning today by this fab update
thanks 4 pm dear
luv u

hey Sweetie...thanks for your wondeful comments...i am glad you liked it so much...😃

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

lovely ud dear

Thanks sweetheart...😊

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

Thnx for pm me di 😊
nic ud 😃
di i want to ask 1 thing as u said in ur previous ud whn veer's father said to kaka dt whn a pure girl touch veer tn that black cown break
n now chandani touched him now wt abt that crown ?? [:O]

Hi Priya... thanks for the wonderful comments...hmmm lets see what the story says and how it takes its turn...i am sure you will like the story as it moves further...😊thanks for enjoying...

Originally posted by: sparksfly

woww... dat was an awesum ud !!! 👏

(well considerng u were d one wrtng it...its obvious !! but still aapne man ki tasalli ke liye...kehana padata hai..) 😉

in beautiful mountns of Darjeeling...

... dono...akele... i d beautiful tea gardens...

...wid Veer's dialogue" who ever made you, I am sure even he won't understand what he has made" ...

...n d old woman's words..."A mere human has adorned her but these angels have bowed their heads in front of her"...

.... ...n d way he lukd at her...

..n d ever romantic RAIN... had me goin... 😍 n 😳

it was gud dat Veer isn't feelng d lust..." he felt different with her...different from the entire world...it wasn't love...it wasn't lust...it was different.." waitng 4 him 2 realise d luv !!

i just luvd it !!!

ur wrtng abilities r incrsng exponentially wid every post... soon u'll reach infinity...i wonder how dats even possible...ure already sooo... gud...how much bettr can u get ??

i really like d old , learned woman...her words add a lot of mystry ... 😊

plzz... ud fast...its gettin damn difficult 2 wait...

hello Sweetheart...thanks a lot for your sweet comments...yes you are right it is mysterious...all your doubts will be cleared once you read more updates...well right now even i don't know what will happen further...thanks for reading and giving wonderful thoughts...loved it 😊

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Ok now I'm nervous... what's going to happen...
Continue soon and Nice chapter..

hi dear...even i am nervous 😉...lets wait for another update...thanks for appreciating...sure i will continue soon...😊

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

OMG.. story is turing more and more mysterious.. as its going on...

My sweet Nandu thanks a lot for your sweet comments dear...it is a mysterious story indeed...but lets see how it takes its turn...thanks for reading and passing your comments...that really encourages...😊

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

it is getting interesting

thanks for appreciating...😊