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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


Am gonna start writing the part now😆

wow waiting...
any idea how much time it will take dear ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

wow waiting...

any idea how much time it will take dear ?


umm like half hour or so😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


umm like half hour or so😆

ok dear ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
reallyyy nice... loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 30


Geet looked at Maan in awe...she didn't know why...but his confession made her happy. She was happy to hear about the love she had read in the diary. But did she like him? Was Pari right? Can she fall in love with the Shetan? Is it possible? Is it allowed? She diverted her attention back to the front. The car stopped at a red light...

Maan still hadn't looked at her and was quiet thinking about what he had said to her...she always made him do unexpected things..made him voice his emotions that he never told anyone...but after she came into his life..he is not himself anymore...he could tell...so much was happening..and even if he wanted to stay away from her...he knew that he can't...he has to see her in front of him everyday..his life feels so incomplete without her now...

He turns to look at her and notices tears in her eyes...he makes her face him..she looks at him with tears...and points forward...Maan saw her father on the road...she turns her face...everyone in the back starts to honk..Maan starts to drive again...he pulls the car in front of the Khruana Mansion...she was still crying...he carries her inside the house and up the stairs...he makes her lie down...she hugs him while crying...

Maan hugged her back in pain...its his fault..what he has done...he wanted to sooth her pain away but didn't know how...what can he do? He looks at her face and gently kisses her tears away...he kisses her nose...he stops at her lips and kisses it...it started as a gentle peck but Geet hugged him tightly and started responding back...

She opens her mouth...Maan enters her mouth...how much he had missed her...Maan's hands messaged her back...pushing her toward him...he opens her blouse hook...his mouth moving down to her neck...both were drowned in their own pain...both didn't know what they were feeling...how to express them..they just needed each other...Maan makes her lie down while trailing kisses all over her upper body...Geet hugged him tightly...he looks at her face...there were still tears coming out of her eyes...he kisses them away again...both were semi-naked...

Maan hugs her body shielding her...before they knew it both were bare...he holds her hands above her head as he kisses her around her curves moving down to her stomach...gently kissing them...he looks at her before entering...he was hesitating for the first time...he didn't know why...Geet opens her eyes and looks at his hesitating face...she gave one look...that look was enough for Maan to know...he gently enters her...it wasn't rough like before..he was gentle..Geet hugs him tight as he moves in rhythm...

The next day she wakes up finding no Maan. She goes to the bathroom to get ready. As she was going down stairs she heard some noises coming from the study room. "Yeah...make him work the whole day today...keep him busy and make sure he stays late today..." He opens the door pulling Geet's hand in...He spins her around..and kisses her lips..before hanging up the phone...she didn't question him how he knew she was there...she knew...she knew he knows where she is without even looking for her..he could smell her, just like he says...she is his shadow that is always there...

Maan: Good morning...(She smiles...) what is for breakfast?

Geet: I don't know...

Maan: I want eggs...scrambled eggs

Geet: hmmm (She tries to get out of his grip but couldn't she looks at him helplessly. He begins walking with her until cornering her against the wall...) woh breakfast

Maan: Its right here in front of me...

Geet (blushes for some reason) I uhh am hungry

Maan (lets go of her) okay lets go...(both ate quietly at the breakfast...Maan gets up to leave for work before giving a kiss to Geet..)
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At work Maan enters the office as usual. He gets full update of the new person from Adi. Maan was happy with the amount of work he was doing...he wanted him to suffer every minute, make his family suffer..they will forever remember not to mess with Maan Singh Khruana...Maan gets out of his office to look for him. He stops in front of the storage area...he was cleaning every book and shelf..it made him happy...that is what he wanted to see..his back was toward Maan...so Maan quietly closed the door...he won't be able to get out now...he notified the guard to not open the door at any cost...only at night after everyone leaves...if he still survives..if not then take him to the hospital...He smirked leaving the poor guy to his faith...but he didn't care..he had no sympathy...he could care less

Maan sat in his office..smiling..."pretty soon I will meet your family...from there my real game starts...this is just the starting...lets see if you survive tonight..." he got busy with work..around lunch time someone knocked on his cabin door. Someone entered his office without asking for permission. Maan was about to yell when he saw who it was. Geet...she was carrying a lunch box with her...

Okay how was it?😕😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was an amazing part simi, i love maaneet in this part. and she brought lunch for him that was so sweet. but this guy, who is he? if geet overhears the way maan is talking about the guy then she might start distancing herself from him again, please dont let that happen 😔 excited for tomorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww she brought lunch for him!
Cant wait for the next part!
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update finaly dere is sum change in shetan
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love it
so maan felt little guilty for making geet separated from her parents
that a start
slowly everything will come around
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww loved it
aww geet brought him lunch
do continue

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