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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next update dear...
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Haye i adore dis lovable shetan
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Hi!!! waiting for the next update eagerly...
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nice now there is some hope
loved it its awesome
please cont soon
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waiting dear...plz update BM also
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ll be waiting dear
update soon
cant seemuch shethan dear
hope little laugh
geet seeing movie and enjoying
where maan lost in the smile
and when she praises hero
so much of J PSSS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

I am back!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THE COMMENTS!!! It really means a lot to me...

I have three announcements to make!!!

First:
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!😈 enjoy this day eating candies and scaring people😆😆😆



Second,
I have been named as the writer of the week!!!😃😃
Please check out this link!!!😳

THIRD,
If I get more then 7 pages then I will update another part today because I am so happy😃😆 and also becuase I can't update 2maorow!😆😆😆
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 25

Both returned home...Geet looked at Maan..he was little bit softer right now but that Shetan anger of his was still there...she walked past him to go to the room when he stopped her.

Maan: Did you eat?

Geet (turned around to look at him shocked..this was the first time he asked her anything...first time...he never bothered about asking all he did was just tell..he told her what he wanted..he told his decisions and made her follow his decisions no matter what but today for the first time this shetan asked her something...she nodes her head yes and was about to go up the stairs when she felt herself being lifted into the air. She looks at him shocked as he carries her to the couch...he sits down with her on the couch as the food is being served.)

Maan: You guys may leave for the night. (he looks at Geet who was still staring at him) If you can't lie then why do you even try? (She turns her face away from him...its true that she hadn't eaten anything the whole day since after the incident. The things that happened between them and the words that they exchanged...Maan makes her sits down on the floor in between his legs while he sits on top of the sofa..he places his legs over her trapping her while he bends over to take a bite of the food...he holds it in front of her waiting for her to open her mouth...)

Geet: I will eat...

Maan: Open your mouth Geet...(he said firmly...pushing her back toward him on the sofa..she opens her mouth since she knew that she is trapped...Maan puts the food into her mouth...)

Geet: woh aap

Maan: I am not hungry...(She pushes his hand away when he tried to feed her again...she did the same thing again when he tried again...he puts her on his lap and holds her waist...) What is your problem?

Geet: Woh aap bhi kahana

Maan: I told you am not hungry

Geet: I am not either...(she tried to get up but he held her in place...he leans closer to her making her lie on the couch with him semi on top of her...)

Maan (caresses her face) Why do you have to make it so difficult?

Geet: because you make everything complicated as well...

Maan: I am trying Geet...do you like it when I am a shetan to you? hmmm (he squeezes her waist)

Geet: I want to go to sleep (completely ignoring his question...)

Maan: You didn't answer my question

Geet: There are many questions that I have as well that you didn't answer...until you do am not answering any one of your questions...

Maan (makes her sit...on his lap again..she tried to get up but he holds her tighter...he takes food from the plate and holds her mouth...forcing her to open up the mouth...she tried to move her face and her body but couldn't...she was weak compared to his strength...he feeds her while she looks at him...she stopped fighting...he loosens his hold from her face and silently feeds her...at the end he picks her up carrying her upstairs...he places her on the bed...and looks at her) Get this one thing straight Geet...as long as you are in this house...you are to take care of yourself...

Geet: Why does it matter if I am alive or dead?

Maan: GEET! (he holds her hair...) it matters to me...you understand! IT MATTERS TO ME!

Geet; Why?

Maan: BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!

Poem by Bloomysunday aka Priya!🤗

I always knew that love would come find me somedaybut never did I know that it would be you who was headed my way
you caught me off guard and took me by surprise
but you simply captivated me, the same way you do when I look into your eyes

It's true that every good and perfect gift is from above
you were presented to me as a beautifully packaged gift full of humor, talent, intelligence, beauty and love
"it isn't finding the perfect person but learning to see an imperfect person perfectly"
we all have our flaws but when I view you through my eyes, perfection is all I see

For now, I'll be waiting patiently for that day when we'll be together
that precious moment in time when I'll say, "it's you that I want to be with forever"
God made everything beautiful, precious and new
just as beautiful and precious as the day will be, when I look into your eyes and say, "I Love You"

He screams..everything around them stopped...she looks at him with tears..Maan realizes what he said and left the room leaving her alone...he goes to the gym to exercise...he tried so hard to keep his emotions in but he can't whenever she is near...he can't...his inner thoughts, what his heart desires comes out...what does she have? He looks at the tawiz she tied on his arm...he puts his hand to take it out but stops...he couldn't remove it for some reason...he hits the wood chopping it in half in anger...he sits on his knees closing his eyes to calm down but he couldn't...nothing was going his way...everything that he tried to compose was slipping...he had no control...he hated that...he hated it...all his life he was in control of everything but not anymore...He lies down on the floor..feeling the cold surface...his thoughts disturbed by constant ringing of the phone...he gets up and answers the phone call..

"Hello...yeah what is the status?" (he wipes his sweat with the towel and smirks) "okay I will leave tomorrow...until then keep an eye out on him and ohh by the way what about his family? tsk tsk tsk...we can't have his family live in luxury while the son is out on the streets..why don't you reunite both of them on the streets..." (he throws the towel on the floor in anger...) "I pay you to do what I say..not to give me advice got it! I don't care about the family..." He hangs up the phone...He sighs..."it took me a while but I finally found you..." he smirks and leaves the room...

Note: You guys will see that Maan is changing slowly and I also know that many of you guys are still confused with his behavior..but fikar not hopefully as I go by I will answer most of your questions...this Shetan has different ways to express himself...😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

me first... let me read it

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Posted: 13 years ago
maan's style of showing his love is definitely different...

who has he found?? whom does he hate this much??

continue soon...

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