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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww so maan is changing hmm gud ! And u said he has different way to show his concern...hmmm interesting, great part dear ! me waitin !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats dear...
I'm so happy for you...
Well you deserve it...

lovely part...
Maan surprised me...yeah he is not ready to leave his stubborness...but love his final - word - will - be - mine attitude...

Aww...confessed his love...
Hope we'll get maaneet moments now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,
As I promised..here is another part for today. I won't be able to udpate 2marow at all! Sorry!
Also, I will pm you guys link to my OS😳
😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 26
Maan was getting ready the next day. He didn't speak to her nor saw her face since last night so he decided to sleep in the guest room. He wanted to stay away from her but couldn't...there is always something that pulls him toward her. Today he was going to leave to start his work. He waited for this day when he will ruin everything. He will finish what was started. Everything was perfectly planned nothing and no one can get in his way. No one. As he was about to fix his tie, his phone rings. He picks up the phone putting it in between his shoulder and ear while he tried to fix the tie at the same time.

Maan: Is everything good? (he smiles) okay have my plane ready will be there soon...(he looks at Geet when she started helping him with the tie. He straightens up and looks at her while her whole concentration was on the tie.) I will call you back. (She looks at him as he hangs up the phone. Maan puts his arms straight as he lets her finish his tie. She finishes the tie and backs up...Maan steps closer to her and kisses her on the lips...) I will be gone for the whole day today.

Geet (She stops him..Maan turns around to look at her) woh I want to go too

Maan (looks at her amused) You want to come with me?

Geet: Yeah I uhh can't stay in this house alone.

Maan (picks up his phone and walks out...leaving Geet there..he doesn't turn around but puts his head sideways) be ready in five minutes. (he leaves..Geet looks at him surprised and quickly runs to the bathroom to get ready...Maan waits outside in the car...he looks at the time and then at her...cursing all women who take time getting ready when it is necessary. He saw her running out carrying a food box with her. She got into the car and waited for Maan to start. She looks at him while he looks at the box confused. She looks down following his eyes...)

Geet: woh I thought this will be helpful on the road. I don't know how far we are going.

Maan (turned his face amused by her...and starts driving..) hmm (the ride was long and very quiet..every often both of them would look at each other when the other wasn't looking. Geet's sari pallu fell on Maan's hand which was on the stick...he looks down at it..Geet was looking out the window smiling feeling the wind, the air and the sun. He holds the pallu in his hand while he drives. Geet saw the sign for Mumbai on the road. She looks at Maan)

Geet: We are going to Mumbai?

Maan: hmmm for work

Geet: Ohh

Maan (looks at her) why?

Geet: No just asking...(she looks out the window again...Maan stops the car in front of the hotel...Geet gets out of the car and follows Maan inside. He takes the key from the receptionists and holds her hand leading her to the elevator. Geet looks at him waiting for him to speak up...)

Maan (looks at her...) You will stay in the suite while I finish some work

Geet: But what will I do?

Maan (pulls her closer) You wanted to come. I can show you at night what we were supposed to do if I didn't have to work...(He whispers in her ear...she shies and turns around...Maan picks her up as soon as the elevator stops. He lies her on the bed...) I will be back later..
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Maan sits in the car watching the guy go from one place to another finding a job. He smirks looking at his state. "You won't find any job anywhere as long as I am around..." He watches him as he goes into the bus..he follows the bus...he makes a phone call..."Hello...looks like he is going home. Are you there? Good.." He hangs up the phone. He stops the car few blocks away from his house. It was a small cottage type home with broken roof...he smiles...He saw a man coming out of the car and proceeds toward his house. The same man knocks on his window. Maan roles down the window smirking.

"Sir the work is done."

Maan: Good...did you tell him the start date?

"Yes. He should be joining your company tomorrow."

Maan: Good...(he takes out the money) here you go. I don't want to hear from you ever again and delete all the contacts we had.

"yes sir. Thank you!" (he takes a briefcase full of money and leaves...Maan smirks at him..."I will make you suffer...")
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Meanwhile, Geet sat in front of the balcony overlooking the hotel. The view was amazing if only Maan was here with her to enjoy it. She looked at the time it was already 2pm and still no sign nor any phone call from him. She gets up and leaves the hotel room to eat...she couldn't wait for him anymore here but its better then staying at home all day with nothing to do. She calls his phone from the lobby to but no luck. His phone was turned off. She went to the restaurant inside the lobby to eat when somebody places a hand over her eyes. From the touch she could tell it wasn't Maan's. Slowly she brought the hand away and turned around to look at Yash. She smiles and gets up. Yash hugs her...as she hugs him back.

Yash: Geet it is a surprise to see you here.

Geet: Forget me what are you doing here? (she felt light and happy after a long time. Yash was her college mate and a BF of her friend Pari.)

Yash: college ke baad aab main business man hogaya hoon. Yaya par ek meeting thi abhi main ghar chal raha tha jab maine tumhe dekha.

Geet: Ohh okay. That is good.

Yash: What about you? Last time I heard you were suppose to be in America. Right?

Geet (looks down) woh umm

Yash: Wait till I tell Pari that you have returned. She kept eating my brain asking me when you are returning as if I knew.

Geet (puts her hand on top of his): No Yash please don't tell anyone.

Yash (looks at her worried...) Is everything alright? (he notices her mangalsutre and sindoor) When did you get married?

Geet: woh umm (she looks up and saw Maan looking at them with anger. She stands up. Maan comes in front of her to look at Yash..he stands up smiling at him)

Maan: Geet lets go

Yash: oy hello who are you and where are you taking Geet? (he holds her hand. Maan looks at Yash's hand holding Geet. Yash swallows hard seeing his anger and immediately lets go of her hand)

Geet: woh Yash

Maan (Looks at Geet) Geet lets go. I am not gonna say it again

Geet: Maan but (He begins dragging her with him while she looks back at worried Yash. When the elevator came there was no one inside, he pushes the button for the suite and corners Geet in the elevator. She looks at him with worry) woh Ya

Maan: Don't say his name. (he holds her hand where he touched her..) This is where he touched you...(he kisses her arm as if trying to erase his taste...) You are only mine! Only I can touch you! You can only say my name no one else's. (The elevator opens..she looks at the back thanking that no one was there..)

Geet: Maan...woh...(he picks her up without another word...)
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Posted: 13 years ago

oh my goodness... i m d first one for this update too... yipee...

well wht cn we expect 4m maan. but i really want tht he will nt do something stupid to yash. hope geet will make him understand ... else poor yash...
uhh. we hv to wait till day aftr 2mrw... 😭
Edited by krati5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my god, possessive Maan!!!
Maan does everything hatke, chaahe pyar ho ya nafrat, its not that easy to understand him!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww...so sweet...
Loved Maan in this part...
he is behaving so sweetly with Geet...excpet the last part where he becomes possessive...
What is he upto now...??? Lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow double update diwali bonus
Ok updates were lovely first time itna calmly behave kiya maan ne after he saw yash with geet i was so scared 4 her i thought he will b angry with geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow another update in a same day, must be something in the air 😆

MSK is trying to ruin some guy, I got that, but who it is, still remains a mystery...
Possesive MSK has come alive, oh boy...poor Geet, what will he do to her now. Whatever it is, I can't wait to read about it. I'm loving this shetan 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
luvly
awww geet wanted to b wid maan
luvd d angry j possessive maan
bechara yash
cont soon
u just rock with each updt!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haayee, Maan J n possessive abt GEET...
How much I miss tht Maan in the show...
Wish to see him the same way with the change in track...
Continue soon... Thnkx a lot n keep writing...

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