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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats for writer of the week
waiting for update...
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congo for writer of the week...👏 Waiting for update.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wait for the update but please update hahk and bm also pleaseee
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part!!!
just loved it!!
good job simi!!!
ouuu posessive maan ha!!!!!!... i like it...no i actuallly loved it...LOL!!!!!...
geet n yash scene was awesome!!!!!
who was the man???????...n why would he work 4 maan????
]ok plz cont soon...as i can't wait 4 the next part!!!
love u tons
esha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

hahah yeah take it off is my all time favorite..okay I will pm you the other songs😳



thanx in advance...but first update baaki sab baatein baad mein😊 wat abt hahk??? updating today???
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys will update soon got busy at work😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

hey guys will update soon got busy at work😳

Please soon... soon... can't wait to read the next part... wonder what Maan will do now that he has seen someone else touch his priceless possession geet... lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

So here is my update for today...won't update 2marow since I have to update HAHK and BM..so umm yeah...this might be the last update for this week😭😆😆 I don't know but I will see if I can update this 2marow after I udpate HAHK and BM ohh and maybe CYSF too😳

😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 27

Stood stood against the wall as Maan placed both of his hands on either side of her. His lips lightly hovering over hers, looking into her eyes making sure she is looking at him. He slides one hand down to her left arm...he holds it in front of him...the same hand where Yash touched her...he gives her a peck on her lips...and pulls her toward him..."say my name" Geet looks at him..."Maan..." She whispers with shaky lips...looking into his dark eyes. One by one he slides her bangles off with the same hand he was holding. They drop on the floor. Geet winces when one of the bangle broke..

Maan kisses her wrist licking the blood away...he picks her up making her lie on the bed. He removes her sari pallu from the stomach and kisses it. "You are only mine! I will kill anyone that touches you...anyone!" She looks at him with fear. His eyes showed threat and anger. Say my name again...he kisses her stomach again and squeezes it after getting no response...'Maan.." He smiles against her stomach..."it sounds so nice coming out of your mouth..." He leans on top of her and kisses her eyes...and lips...Something was different today..he wasn't mad...his each and every touch was caring unlike before...he had love that he confessed the day before...she closes her eyes feeling his touch...his lips move to her shoulder...she felt him removing her sari pallu...she hugs him...trying to hide herself...he makes her lie down..."I know your whole body inside and out...why are you shy then?" She hides her face with her hands...unable to answer him..."this shetan...will he understand why she is shy? He is asking questions that I cannot answer..." Maan smirks...he kisses her between her chest...his hands roaming all over her body...she was halfway bare now...she only had her blouse and sari skirt on...Maan lies down taking her on top of him...he removes her hands looking at her..."I like it when you sleep on top of me like this...it comforts me..." He hugs her tightly...she places her head on his chest...for the first time...she felt hope...she felt as if she could change him...her fingers glide over his arm where the tawiz is tied..maybe Babaji was right...maybe i need to give time and understand but still there is something that still bothers me...his past...did his dad really do that? How can a father do that to their own wife and kid? She heard him going to sleep...she tried to move but his grip only got tighter and tighter...she brought up her hands toward his to remove them..he opens his eyes and looks at her mad...

Maan: What happened?

Geet: I want to go to the bathroom

Maan (he growls) okay...(he lets go of her...she gets up trying to look for her sari...) You don't need to wear it...no one is gonna look at you...

Geet; but (he sits up and pulls her to his lap)

Maan: You want me to carry you to the bathroom? (his fingers roaming on her back...tickling her)

Geet: Nahi

Maan: Then go like this...(She gets up and walks to the bathroom...Maan watches her each move..he lies back down on the bed..waiting for tomorrow to come to start on his plan...it will be a new day tomorrow...Geet comes out of the bathroom after few minutes and saw him sleeping. Slowly she walked to the other side of the bed and lies down...next thing she knew she found herself on top of Maan again...) I want you near me like this...(she nods her head and puts her hands on top of his chest...his protectiveness and possessiveness scared her but at the same time liked it...)
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The next day both were leaving the hotel. She saw Yash waiting in the lobby looking at her while Maan pays the bill at the receptionist. She looks at Maan with fear. What if he sees Yash...what will he do? Her heartbeats quickened when she saw him getting up walking toward her.

Yash: Hi Geet...(Maan turns his head looking at him with anger...Geet just smiles at Yash...) woh umm

Maan: Excuse us..we have to go..(he holds her hand)

Yash: Who are you?

Maan: I don't need to answer you anything

Yash (steps in front of them) Yes you do especially since you are holding my friends hand like this

Geet (steps in between both before anything happens) woh Yash say hi to Pari for me.

Yash: But Geet (Maan drags her away...he puts her in the car and then drives off. He was speeding while driving in anger. Geet looks at him scared...)

Geet: Maan slow down..I am scared...(She touches his arm but he removes her hand... ) Maan! (She yells when they were about to hit a car...he stops the car and looks at her...she gets out of the car running without looking at Maan. Her eyes blurred as she kept running with tears. She could hear his voice in the background yelling at her..telling her to come back rather then asking...she found herself struggling against a strong grip..) let go of me..let go...(Maan held her by the waist while she still struggled...she started hitting his chest...) let go! I don't want to go with you! Let go!!! (Maan picks her up and puts her in the backseat...she just hugs her knees crying as Maan drives slowly this time...he brings inside to the room and makes her lie down...) I hate you! (She cries hugging him...Maan wanted to hug her back seeing in pain because of him again but he just can't control his anger. He can't!. He goes outside of the room when she falls asleep...)

Maan: Hello...cancel everything for today and there is suppose to be someone coming to see me today. Ohh he is there already? hmm make him wait for five hours in the lobby telling him that I am busy in some meeting...after that tell him he can go home and come tomorrow at 9am sharp. Bye...(he hangs up the phone smirking..."too bad you have to wait for little bit longer but don't worry pretty soon..I will make your life worse then it already is...that is my promise...) He goes back to the room and saw that she is not there anymore. He saw the bathroom lights on. He sits on the chair looking at the closed bathroom door waiting for her to come out.

She comes out after washing her face and looks at Maan. She ignores his presence and lies on the bed without looking at him once. Maan sits on the edge of the bed. He caresses her head but she turns around showing him her back. He lies next to her pulling her closer but she didn't hug him or anything. Maan sighs...for once someone was mad at him rather than the other way around but now the question remained what should he do? He drifted to sleep thinking of something. Few hours later he woke up when he felt empty. He slowly opened his eyes and saw Geet missing. He walked out of the room to find her. He saw her sitting down on the swings looking at the flowers. He sat next to her...looking at her but she ignored him. Few minutes later she looks at him handing him his phone.

Geet: A girl called wanting to talk to you from office. (she gets up and walks away. Maan looks at the phone and calls back)

Maan: Hello. (he smirks) okay...I will see to it tomorrow...ohh and next time don't bother wasting my time with small details like these. I give work expecting it to be carried out. (he slams the phone and looks back at Geet who he knew was standing behind the pillar listening to him...)

Okay guys..I switched it up a little with Maan😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey me first ...
wow ...
nice part maan is changing ...
atlas he is trying to control his anger ...
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago

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