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sara_06

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys! i am sara! i am new here on india-forums.. so well i love maan and geet and thought that i should write a story on them two.. here's just an introduction! :) hope u like it! do comment whether i should continue my story or not! thx! :)

*Maan Singh Khurana:*

-26 years old

-a business man

-full of attitude

-owns khurana constructions company

-elder son of khurana's

-strong minded person

-cant control his anger

-full of anger from outside but sweet from inside

-hate girls

-arrogant

*Geet Handa:*

-19 years old
-completing the first year of college

-2nd youngest daughter of Handa's

-full of life

-full mad.. but yet sweetest

-can't stand angry ppl

LOCATION: Delhi!

MG/FF:Tere Liye:

A beautiful journey of two different personalities: Maan & Geet!

Maan who thinks being lonely is a gift

but Geet an ordinary girl from Hoshiyarpur living her life to the fullest.

BUT destiny has something else in mind.

what happens when fire meets water?

Sun meets moon?

Maan only thinks that love exists in fairytales and/or filmy movies!

What happens when love makes it way to the 'real' world?

Will they fall in love..

will they sacrifice everything for each other?

or NOT?

Read Tere liye to discover new meaning of love with maan and geet!

*Note* so guys how did u like my introduction! comment if u like me to continue! :) thank u! waiting for ur reply! ~sara~

PARTS & PAGES:

part 1: page 1 below

part 2: page 1 below

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

Part 23

Part 24

Part 25

Part 26

Part 27

Part 28

Part 29

Part 30

Part 31

Part 32

Part 33

Part 34

Part 35

Part 36

Part 37

Part 38

Part 39

Part 40

Part 41

Part 42 (Last Part) Page 73 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1901685/maan-and-geet-tere-liye

Looking forward for your comments!! :) If you want a pm then add me as a buddy! :) ~Sara~

Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Welcomeee!
and scrap me if you need any help i'll try to help you
aha but i'm warning you now i'm not that pro at working this forum either xD
well continue this story soon pleaseee
and do pm me the links after you've updated :D
i'd appreciate if the update is mostly in eng though as i suck at hindi :P

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Posted: 13 years ago

Tere Liye

Part 1:

The night was dark.

The moon was full.

Trees and stores are found everywhere.

The stores were all close.

Not a single soul can be found in Delhi road.

After all it was 1:00 a.m. But a girl was found running in white saree.

Her white sandals in her hand. She looked like an angel.

But why was she running?

because of 2 goons following her.

She kept running

All of the sudden she fell to the ground.

but she didn't give up.

she got up n started 2 run

If she didnt then who knows what these two goons will do to her?

"Geet himmat ker. After all, you are Geet Handa!."

"Oye madam g, kahan ja rahi hain? hamray saaath chaliye na.." called on of the goons

geet turned her face towards the goon to see how close they are...

But she kept on running..

All of the sudden, her soft body hit sumthing hard.

she luked towards the thing, and found a figure standing so close to her.

They both were so lost in each others' eyes.

When all of a sudden geet remembered about the goons.

The goons were standing so close to them 2.

The figure happens to be MAAN SINGH KHURANA!

How can MAAN SINGH KHURANA be so lost in a girls' eyes?!

Geet was all of the sudden scared yet happy 2 find sumbudy to help her.

"Please help me!"

She fell to the ground.

tears cuming out of her eyes made maan sad 2.

He picked her up with his hard hands.

he nodded towards her and made her stand behind him.

he rolled up his sleeves.

showing his perfect muscles.

he took one step towards the goons.

geet was all of the sudden sooo happy n frightened at the same time.

the goons were laughing their heads off.

they didnt know wat was cuming towards them!

each steps towards the goons made maan more angry.

How can MSK be so angry just for a girl?!

maan didnt care!

all he knew was that that girl needed his help.

he finally reached up to the goons. his eyes were filled with anger.

he was so close to the goons

"Abhay hatt, humain to madam se baat kerni hai. q madam g?" one of the goons said luking over to geet.

maan snapped his fingers right on front of the goons face.

"dont u dare luk at her!"

laughed the goons

"tu kya keray ga... aabhay tu kahin us chokri ka wooohhh to nahi.."

one of the goons touched his shoulder with his hand that made maan more angry.

"haath neechay!" demanded maan

"tu kya keray ga, maray ga mujhay.main dar gya!!!!"

they pretended to be scared.

maan couldnt handle his anger anymore

he puncehed one of the goon so hard that he fell 2 the ground really hard.

maan luked at the other goon

he also punched him n he 2 fell to the ground with a thud.

geet was however, enjoying the moment

"chadna na kameeno ko! Nas nas ke to mujhay adha ker diya.. aur kambakht taxi bhi nahi mili... ufff..."

maan turned around luking at her..

maan couldnt believe it, the girl who was crying a minute ago is talking like this..

geet was jumping up and down.

she couldnt believe it. how can he be so nice!

"get out of here!" maan demanded at the goons

in 5 seconds the goons were up and gone from there.

maan again turned around seeing geet's beautiful and ofcourse joyfull face.

he couldnt stay here, but he couldnt leave her either.

ANNIE WOULD KILL HIM!!!!!!!

he had 2 get home..

he promised annie to spend the night with her and dev talking!

so he turned around and walked off the opposite direction of geet..

geet ran up 2 him..

"oh hello sir.."

maan didnt stop!

he wanted her 2 follow him..

just 2 make sure she is fine.

"aray suniye to.. kaisa insaan hai yeh... oh hello main aap se baat ker rahi hn..""

maan had it enough he turned around n she was right behind him.

he put his index finger on her lips to indicate to shut up...

she was quite all of the sudden.

maan liked it...

"chup bilkul chup.. jab daikho bolti rehti ho.."

maan was enjoying it..

for the 1st time he felt completed with that girl..

maan finally took his finger off of her lips.

"per main to aap ko..."

maan cut her off.

"phir bolne lag gayi ho.. mainey abhi tumhay mana kiya hai.."

b4 maan could put his finger on her lips she put her index finger on her lips ..

"ab bolo ke tumhara ghar kahan hai?"

she didnt speak.

"aray main tum se pooch raha hn..kuch bolo"

"ae lo, kabhe kehte ho ke mat bolo or kabhi kehte ho bolo.."

maan loved her attitude.

"acha tumhay ghar jana hai ya nahi.."

"ofcourse mujhay jana hai ghar!"

"to phir batao ke tum kahan rehti ho.."

"ok. aap aik dafa gari main batihay to sahi i will tell u as we go.."

maan and geet walked up 2 maan's car.

he opened the door for geet n indicated 2 sit.

geet automatically sat down.

maan finally got in the car.

he started driving.

"waisay gari to bari achi rakhi hai aapne.."

"hmmm."

geet rolled her eyes..

"ufff mera matlab.. chado.."

maan was about 2 ask her sumthin when his cell rang..

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove...

that was his phone bell.

he was shocked bcoz he never changed his cell ring..

he h8ed it..

maan knew it's probably annie..

she plays with his phone all the time...

geet was dancing on the tune.

he finally picked the phone up.

"hello.."

"hello bhai kahan ho aap.. intni dair ho gayi hai.."

" main bs abhi aata hon.. just give me 10 minutes."

"10 minutes!"

dev snatched the phone form annie's hand..

"bro, waisay aap ker kya rahay hain... office main to nahi hai..q ke hum ne wahan pe call ki thi aur unhon ne kahaa tha ke aap office main nahi hain.."

annie's phone was on speaker..

"sach sach batao bro, aap kis ladki ke saath ho.."

"DEV!"

dev dropped the phone..

"sooorrryyy bbbrooo... woh yeh annie se baat kerain.."

annie was cracking up...

n as 4 geet she didnt know wat was going on..

so she fell asleep.

"g bhai.. to aap ke paas sirf 10 min hain agar aap ghar naa aye na to phir main aur dev aap ko saza dain gain.."

when dev heard her say that he instantly replied "annie sirf dai gi bro main nahi..."

maan rolled his eyes..

"ok annie theek hai sirf 10 mintues.."

he hung up..

geet was sleeping when maan turned to luk towards her..

"OH GOD main is larki ka kya karon.. mujhay to is ka ghar bhi nahi pata..."

but he didnt want 2 disturb her..

he opened her purse 2 c if her home address is in it...

n yes he found it..

a paper with ugly handwriting of her address..

but he couldnt read whoevers writing it was..

it couldnt b hers.. maan thought

but he tried his best n started to drive...

precap: geet and maan are lost! OH NO or OH YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

part 2 is right below

Note: hope u enjoyed.. do comment! :) ~sara~

Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

AWESOMEEE
i loveeed it sooo much
cont soon
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sara_06

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Posted: 13 years ago

Note: ok guys i hope u like this part! i know sum ppl have questions like maan is not arrogant.. he doesnt hate girls! but just keep on reading :P ENJOY! i will keep on posting each part every day! so part 3 will be posted tomarrow! :)

PART 2:

Maan didnt know where he was going...

he tried his best 2 go by the address but unfortuntley he didnt understand.

but he didnt want 2 wake geet up.

it was now more than 10 minutes..

annie called maan again and again...

maan kept on ignoring it..

he didnt care...

it was 2:00 a.m. now.

he was driving since 1 hour...

all of sudden geet's cell rang:

bhaiya ka phone hai.. utha re phone.. utha re phone.. ABHAY PHONE UTHA RE.. EMERGENCY!!!!!!!!!

geet got up instantly n picked her phone up..

as for maan, he couldnt stop laughing cause of that ring tone.

"hello bhaiya"

"arey geet kahan hai tu raat ke 2:00 baj rahay hain.."

"ji bhai bs woh main thori dair main aa rahi hn.. doston ke saath hoon"

geet lied 2 her own brother for the 1st time..

she had 2..

she cant tell him that she's w/ a stranger in the middle of the night!

NO WAY!!!!

"Chal theek ha geet, jaldi aa jana. mama pareshan ho rahi hain"

"ji bhaiya.."

they both hung up...

geet luks over 2 maan..

"hum abhi tak ghar nahi pohnchay.."

"well listen, since u were sleeping i didnt know ur adress.. soo thats y we r in the middle of nowhere.."

"ae lo... mujjhay utha nahi saktay thay aap... ab gum ho gaye na.. maine zindagi main pehli baar apnay bhaiya se jhoot bola...i cant believe it..."

"oh hello madam, aap bhot thaki huwi thi, since i am a gentleman mainay socha aap ko disturb na karon.. rahi baat apki bhaiya ki, to kis ne kaha tha ke jhoot bolain.."

"very gud.. to main apnay bhaiya se kya kehti.. yeh kehti ke 'raat ke 2 baje main aik stranger ke saath hoon'...wah re wah... aap mere bhaiya ko nahi jantay..."

maan knew he couldnt win this argument.

so he didnt bother arguing..

instead he started driving.

"ab hum kahan ja rahay hain..."

"trying to get out of here.. rasta thoda bhot samajh aa jaye to main apnay ghar chala jaon ga.. ofcourse tumhay saath le ker..."

ufff... their nok jhok was nonstop able...

yet they both were enjoying it..

maan turned right, left but still couldnt find his destination...

"lagta hai aaj ki raat idher guzarni ho gi... oh no Annie mujhay nahi choday gi.."

"annie koun"

"my youngest sister anwesha a.k.a annie"

geet smiled...

all of the sudden his car went out of gas...

"OH NO!!"

"kyaa huwa?"

"gas khatam ho gaya hai aur yahan pe door door main koi gas station nahi hai.."

"shoot! ab kya ho ga..."

maan shook his shoulders...

3:30 a.m.

it had been 1 and a half hour..

n still they didnt know where 2 go...

so maan found a way:

"humain raat is jungle main guzarni ho gi.."

maan tried his phone: no network..

same with geet..

they both entered the jungle...

geet was very scared but as for maan he was really brave..

he luvs jungle...

SO PEACEFUL..

but when geet is around, how could it b peacefull...lol

she kept on talking n talking basically distracting herself..

all of the sudden it was so dark, she screamed sooo loud...

maan covered her lips by her finger..

geet was all the sudden quite...

"shhh.. main hn na...no need 2 worry.. i promise main tumhay kuch nahi honay doon ga.."

geet was so happy that she wanted 2 hug him..but she tried 2 keep long distances between them two..

maan noticed her behaviour..

"i m not gonna kill u nor eat u..."

geet smiled..

"nahin woh main..."

geet couldnt finsih off..

she didnt know wat 2 say...

so she sat down not saying a word to him...

maan was also confuse with her behavior.

but maan knew she cant sit quite 4 so long...

even a person who is deaf can say that...

she just likes to talk n talk...

"hum yahan se kab jayen gain. mujhay dar lag raha hai.."

they were still walking...

trying to find a suitable place 2 sit...

"jaisay subah ho gi tab nikal chalain gain.."

geet got so scared n angry at this situation that she started yelling at maan..

not that she was angry at himm

she cant..

"WAT!!! are u out of your mind... meri family kya sochay gi..."

"exxcuse me excuse me... kis ne kaha tha ke itni raat ko bahar raho.."

"meri friend ki birthday party thi... i had 2 go..."

maan was mesmerized by her innocence..

"is tarha kero tum so jao main yahan pe sari raat gaurd karon ga.."

"arey wah.. aap mere body gaurd thodi na ho, jo sari raat jag ker guzaro ge.."

"to main so jata hoon aur tum bhi so jao..phir jo hoga hamare saath woh to ALLAH hi hafiz hai..."

geet so scared that she got so close to maan...

maan was liking this for the very 1st time..

he was smiling..

just to make her sure that she is alright maan held her hand very tight that geet luved it..

she never wwanted him to let go of her hand...

"dont worry main hoon tumharay saath.. i would never let anything happen 2 u.."

geet was so happy...

suddenly geet tripped from a rock n almost fell when maan caught her...

MAAAHIII...

MAHIII...

Mahiii...

mahi ve mahi ve...

they both were so lost in each other.

they both had weird feelings inside them..

they didnt know what those feelings were yet...

but they will one day..

finally after 2 minutes they both came back 2 senses..

geet stood up n started 2 luk around except maan..

geet was not scared anymore..

she knew that maan woudnt harm her...

maan: daikho baith jao.. sari raat tum khari to nahi raho gi na..

geet nodded n moved towards when she tripped AGAIN!

maan caught her just in time..

again their long maaahhhiii...

maaahhhiii...

mahi ve mahi, mahi ve..(fast forward)

they both came back to their senses..

maan: tum din main kitni baar girti ho...

geet: (making golgappa face) excuse me...

maan: kitna wiegh kerti ho.. bhains ki tarha...

geet: (making golgappa face) i dont weigh alot..

maan rolling his eyes..

geet: mera poora kandha hila chadya hai...aayeee

maan: to kya sari zindagi statue of liberty ban ker kharay rehna hai?

geet: oye khote

maan: kya kaha tumne???!! (maan angry)

geet: jo aapne suna...

maan: wow izzat bhi daini hai aur gali bhi.. kya baat hai tumhari...

geet: mujhay neend aa rahi hai.. main sonay lagi hoon

maan: to mainay tumhay band ker rakha hai??

geet: aap se to baat kerna hi azab hai!

maan started to take his shirt off... n put it aside...

he layed down n closed his eyes..

geet went up 2 maan very quitly, picked his shirt up n put it on the floor n started to lay on top of it..

maan was not asleep...

in fact he tuk his shirt off so geet could take his shirt..

he opened one eye luked at geet when he maked sure that she is asleep then he got up n went up 2 her...

he was mesmerized by her beauty...

maan (thinking): yeh mujhay kya ho raha hai.. yeh larki mujhay her pal change ker rahi hai... main pagal ho jaon ga!!

part 3

Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice story please add me in your pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago

Note: sorry for the delay guys! i was kind of busy! well tell me how u like it! do comment n like it bcoz it gives me more strength to write! :) ~sara~

PART 3:

The night went by quickly...

maan didnt go to sleep..

he was 2 busy watching geet sleeping..

as for geet: she met maan in her dream..

very 1st dream of MAAN!

she was smiling in her dream..

now it was 6:30 a.m.

the sun was shining over both of them...

geet was getting bothered by the sun..

maan blocked the sun just 2 c her sleep more...

but he knew she had 2 go 2 her home...

maan touched geet's shoulder n shook them softly..

geet turned around

geet: kya hai RAJJI hat na...

maan: lo mujhay jhat se larki bana diya...kya karon main is larki ka..

maan: oye sleeping beauty utho...

geet: rajji teri awaz ko kya huwa hai..

maan rolled his eyes...

maan: main rajji nahi hoon main...

geet opened her eyes before maan could finish...

geet: ae lo.. aap hain? main samjhi meri behan rajji hai...

maan: its ok..

geet: mainay sorry to nahi kaha.. to aap its ok q bol rahay ho...

maan again rolled his eyes...

maan: tumhay ghar jana hai ya phir aik or raat is jungle main guzarni hai..

geet: OFCOURSE JANA HAI!!!!!!

maan had 2 cover his ears!

maan: main behra nahi hoon...agar tum aista bolo gi to main sun loon gan...

geet rolled her eyes...

geet: ab chalain..

they both got up took their stuff n left the place...

(stuff: maan's shirt and phone and geet's phone...)

they got out of the jungle safely..

now they were on a road...

maan's car was way behind..

he will call adi and tell him to bring his car..

but he wanted to walk with geet...

but as for geet she was so bored...

maan wasnt talking to her n she wanted to do sum masti...

all of the sudden geet saw a dog laying down peacefully...

she had an idea..

if they wanted to get out of here they need 2 run n 2 run they need 2...

geet: (yelling) moti moti moti moti...

maan: yeh tum kya ker rahi ho

geet ordered him 2 not ask questions but 2 say moti with him..

but the dog didnt even look up

geet: oye khote..

maan: yeh khota nahi hai yeh kutta hai...

geet: oye kutte... idher idher... yahan per...

maan was so confused...

geet: aray aap kaisay insaan hain.. yahan per aik ladki cheekh rahi hai aur aap us ka saath nahi dain gaain...

maan rolled his eyes..

maan: hey dog! hey you!

geet: aap bahar ke mulk me nahi hai.. yeh delhi hai.. yahan per insaano ko english samajh nahi aati aur aap kute se english main baat ker rahay ho... wah bhai wah... meharbani ker ke isko kuta kahain dog nahi...

maan felt awkward...

maan: kutey.. chchchchchchchcchchchch... kutay..

the dog got up...

maan: ab kya???

geet: BHAAAGGG!!!

maan: WHAT!

geet: oho RUNNN!!!

they both started 2 run as fast as they could...

the dog was chasing them 2...

he was running very fast...

but maan and geet were running SUPER fast!

maan didnt know where to go...

maan:(thinking) yeh ladki pagal ho gayi hai.. kabhi koi kuta bhi apnay peechalay bhagwata hai kya???

all of the sudden maan saw a cottage..

he took geet's hand into his and started to run again..

geet was liking it..

she is scared of dogs yet she made the dog chase her...

they finally got to the cottage..

maan closed the door behind him..

it got really dark..

geet got scared..

she held his hand very tight..

geet: mujhay plz chor ker mat jaiye ga.. mujhay andhere se bhot dar lagta hai...

maan was smiling.

he put his finger on geet's lips.

maan: (whispering) shhh.. main hoon na.. mere hote huway tumhay kuch nahi ho sakta...

geet was so happy that she gave him a sweet hug..

maan hugged her back..

this was the first time MSK hugging a GIRL!

7:15 a.m.

they sneaked out of the cottage...

maan checked his cell phone signals n finally maan got the signals..

so did geet..

maan called adi and geet called bhaiya...

geet: hello bhaiya..

brij: geet tu kahan hai.. sari raat kahan thi.. tu theek to hai na..

geet: oho bhaiya aap agar itnay saray questions kero ge to main kaisey jawab doon gi..

brij: tu mujhay yeh bata ke tu kahan hai?

geet: bhaiya, main yahan nupur and mayank ke saath hoon.. jungle main...

brij: jungle??

geet: han woh kya howa ke raath ko hum loog gum ho gaye.. car ki gas bhi khatam ho gaya to hum jungle main ghus aaye.. to bs main ab ghar pohnch rahay hain..

brij: theek hai.. jaldi aa jana ab.. aaj tujhay daikhnay ke liye larkay walay aa rahay hain..

geet was really shocked.. she literally yelled..

geet: WHAT!!??

maan got scared.. he luked towards her n shook his head as in she is crazy...

brij: to ghar aa ja phir baat kerain gain...

they both hung up..

geet: HAYYO RABBA!!!

maan: tum theek to ho na??

geet didnt hear his question because she was 2 busy planning sumthing..

geet: (mumbling to herself) koi to plan banana hi ho ga.. yeh jo bhi log hain, they will regret it...

maan again shook his head...

maan shook her shoulder

maan: oye hello.. mera driver abhi aata hi hoga... main tumhay ghar drop ker doon ga aur main apnay ghar chala jaon ga... ok?

maan and geet didnt want 2 go...

they will say their final good-bye in 5 minutes..

they both were sad..

but geet had 2 do sumthing..

she cant be with sumbudy else for the rest of her life...

she wanted to be with sumbudy special... *ahem ahem*

but she still doesnt know about her feelings towards maan..

she doesnt even know his name...

5 minutes passed by quickly..

maan and geet didnt noticed..

they were busy in their own world..

both thinking about each other..

but geet was also thinking about her plan 2..

maan's car came...

they both sat down.

they both were quite the whole time..

nobody spoke..

geet's home came..

geet: thank you so much.. aap ne meri itni madad ki... and sorry about the kuta...

they both started 2 laugh...

maan: its ok.. ainda dhayan kerna..

geet smiled and left..

maan was lost in her thought...

geet entered the house..

Rano was sitting on the sofa, sad...

geet: mama kya howa?

rano and everyone luked up..

rano ran up 2 geet and hugged her sooo tight...

geet was so confused..

wats going on??

geet: mama aap ro rahi ho?patao baba ne kuch kaha aap ko..

brij and rajji and mr.handa started 2 laugh..

mr. handa: aray geet beta, tera rishta aaya hai to is situation main tere mama roay gi nahi to aur kya hoga...

geet smiled..

being a good daughter..

but they dont know wat is going on in her mind...

rano: geet, tu sari raat jagti rahi ho gi na.. ja tu rest ker..

all of the sudden geet remembered last night...

every bit of the time she spent with MAAN!

after getting out of her thought she excused her self and went straight 2 her bedroom...

she dialed nupur's phone #..

nupur:(sleepily) aaa helloo...

geet: oye nupur abhi tak so rahi hai.. uth!

nupur: oye geet sonay dai na..

geet: aaj bhot zaroori kaam kerna hai and i need all of u guys help..thair main baki sab ko call kerti hoon.. (conference)

she dialed mayank, uday, nisha's phone #..

they all got 2 work..

geet went on and on about her marriage proposal and her plan..

they all listened carefully..

nobody dared to speak..

bcoz they all know when it cums 2 marriage proposal geet is dang serious!

8:00 a.m.

geet had been talking on the phone since 3 hours...

on the other hand..

maan got home..

he knocked on the door..

annie: koun hai?

maan: annie darwaza kholo, its me maan..

annie: to acha ab aap ko time mil gaya...

she still didnt open the door...

maan: annie daikho darwaza khol do.. i am feeling awkward..

annie: yeh pehle sochna tha..

annie: Dev bhai! DEV BHAI!!!!

dev came running..

dev: annie kya huwa??

maan: dev darwaza kholo...

dev got the situation..

dev: sorry bro...

annie: ab aap ki koi madat nahi karey ga.. not even dadi ma...

maan gave up..

maan: theek hai baba jo tum kaho gi woh ho ga.. I PROMISE!!! now open the door!

annie opened the door but she put a stop sign on her hand towards maan..

annie: bro u will regret it.. aap ne apne siblings ka dil toda hai.. apko to bari saza milni chahiye...

dev and annie gave high five 2 each other...

maan: theek hai... ab ander aa jaon..

annie let maan in.. but instead of making him sit and rest they took him upstairs in annie's room...

annie closed the door..

maan: annie yeh kya ker rahi ho?

annie: jo mujhay kerna chahiye... chalay bhai apna credit card dheela kerain...

maan: dheela? dheela to nahi ker sakta main usko..

annie: uff hoo bhai give me ur credit card!

maan takes out his used credit card.

annie takes his wallet and takes out a brand new credit card

maan astonished!

annie: woh purana credit card apnay paas rakhay.. aaj se yeh credit card main use karon gi..

maan shoook his head...

dev came in the room with a rope...

annie: gud dev bhai.. ab maan bhai aap chup ker ke us chair main bhaith jain... aur koi awaz nahi aani chahiye...

annie nods towards dev 2 tell him 2 start his work..

dev came near maan..

maan had his angry expression...

dev: sorry bro, annie ne mujhay force kiya hai.. aaj aap mujhay jitna bhi dantay gain but i wont stop..

maan rolled his eyes...

annie: suniye dev bhai, jab aap finish ker chuke na to yeh door lock kerdena.. or keys mujhay la ker dena..

maan: look annie u r taking this 2 far...

annie: raat ko mainay kaha tha ke late aayen...

maan: wo pagal ladki...

maan stopped..

annie and dev shocked!

annie and dev: ladki????

annie: now bhai u got 2 tell us about that girl!

maan sighed

maan: aisi bari baat to nahi hai...

annie and dev: no excuses tell us now!

maan sighed again...

maan: f9 i will tell u...

annie and dev got so quite... annie was kind of shocked bcoz he never shared his personal stuff with anybudy!

maan: kal raat ko jab main office se ghar ja raha tha tab mujhay aik girl mili...uske peechay goons lagay huway thay.. to main us ki madat kernay chala gaya... maine socha ke us ki help ker doon... raat ko hum gum ho gaye thay is liye raat humain jungle main guzarni pari...

annie: ooo...

maan: ab to chor do..

annie: bhai aap ne itni achi baat batayi hai to is tarha kertay hain ke aap shopping hamare saath kernay jainn gain.. meri ya dev bhai ke liye nahi... aap ke liye jana hai...

before maan could protest they both were gone locking him in...

while the Handa's were preparing the food for their guests...

geet was in tension...

geet: ae ALLAH g meri help karain.. i hope yeh plan work keray... ap ko to pata hai ke main us bande se shaadi nahi ker sakti..

there was a knock on the door...

rano came in with a glass full of milk...

geet: mama aap...

rano sat down n geet layed her head on ranos lap...

rano: beta tu is rishte se khush to hai na?

geet got up: kya mama.. maine us ladke ko aaj tak daikha bhi nahi hai in fact i dont know his name...

rano: bunty

geet: nahi mama mujhay bunty nahi khani..

(if u guys dont know wat bunty is, it is a candy name, it tastes just like m & m's except a lil different taste)

rano started to laugh..

rano: oho tujhay main bunty khanay ko nahi keh rahi,, bunty tumhare future husband ka naam hai...

geet litterally spit the milk out of her mouth...

geet: wat mama.. kaisa naam hai bunty!!??

rano: oho woh movie yaad hai bunty aur babli,, us main jo main hero hota hai us ka naam bhi to bunty hai...

geet: to aap chahti hain main us ullu de pathe bunty ki babli ban jaon..

rano started laughing and nodded..

geet stood up n raised her hand just like politician when he/she is about to give a speech..

geet: aaj tak geet handa kabhi bhi kisi ke liye bhi change nahi huwi to yeh bunty kya cheez hai...

rano shook her head and went out of the room with an empty glass of milk..

after 1 hour geet got ready...

geet: ab tak to mere gang ko aa jana chahiye...

geet was going back and forth in her room when all of the sudden the doorbell rang...

geet ran out of the house..

she opened the door to find bunty's family standing there...

bunty's mother: aray beta aap.. main bunty ki mama woh inke papa aur yeh hamara bunty..

geet luked at everyone one by one...

when she luked at bunty..

he had long curly hair, braces, big glasses, etc

geet made them come in..

geet went back in her room and called mayank..

geet: oye ullu kahan ho tum sab...

mayank: hum log bs 5 min main aatay hain... wait for us...

geet hanged up..

after a sec rano came in..

rano: geet aaja beta..

geet nodded n moved towards the door..

she sighed one last time before getting out of her room...

geet came downstairs...

she was so worried..

bunty's mom: bhot hi beautiful bachi hai g aap ki..

everyone smiled..

bunty's dad: bunty tum bhi kuch bolo na.. kaisi lagi kuri..

bunty: (blushing?) g woh kya hai na...

bunty's mom: sharma gaya hai..

geet rolled her eyes...

geet: (whispering) khota!

all of the sudden the bell rings..

geet was so happy that her frnds are here...

geet went 2 open the door n found everyone in her gang standing..

geet: itni dair bhi koi lagata hai.. pagal..

nupur: acha ab to aa gaye hain na to kaam shuru kertay hain...

nisha: oye geet tu chal ker baith, baki hamara kaam hai...

geet nodded...

they went back in the living room

geet sat down but all of the gang members went in the kitchen...

nupur: where is salt?

mayank gave her the salt, n nupur pured all of the salt in the sweet...

while uday was busy putting black peppers in the juice...

they all did everything they could do to make the food and drinks make it miserable..

now it was time to serve food..

all the gang stood next to geet..

the waitress(lachi) in the house served the food..

unknown to the bunty's family they put tons of food on their plate...

bunty took the first bite and screamed like a baby...

precap: more fun...

part 4: right below

thx for reading this! :)

Do comment n like this bcoz it gives me more strength to write! :) .sara

Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 4:

bunty: mama mama yeh kya hai??

geet and the gang started laughing..

brij: oye lachi, yeh tunay kaisa khana banya hai..

lachi: veer g maine to theek khana banaya tha..

everyone got angry towards lachi.

lachi: sorry veer g... ainda nahi ho ga.

lachi went back in the kitchen..

they took away the food and gave them drinks...

again bunty was the first one to drink n again he screamed like a baby..

bunty: yeh kaisa juice hai..

brij: (whispers) lachhii!!

after 10 mintues..

bunty's family was about to leave.

bunty's mother: humain to kuri bhot hi pasand hai..

bunty's father: han g mujhay bhi bhot pasand hai kuri...

bunty's mother: bunty tu bhi kuch bol na.. kuri pasand aayi?

bunty smiled and nodded..

geet: (to gang) ewww... kitna ajeeb ladka hai..
everyone laughed..

mayank: chal geet tera rishta pakka...

geet started to hit him...

uday: han geet sahi to keh raha hai...

nupur: kyun geet ko tang ker rahay hoo.. btw geet tumhay tumhara future wooo kaisay lagay??

geet made a golgappa face..

geeT: yeh rishta nahi ho sakta... main hone nahi doon gi..

nisha: to ab kya karain..

geet: plan B...

bunty's family was about to leave when the gang came...

bunty's parents: acha g hum chaltay hain..

bunty: bye

geet: (whispering) bye? vada angrez!

mayank: (towards bunty's parents) aunty and uncle g, aap khud nahi jao ge hum aap ko lai ker jain ge.. plz... plz.. plz..

bunty's dad: (smiling) theek hai baita, itna force kertay ho to lai jao..

everyone cheered.

especially geet!

they all left the house..

nupur: uncle aap apne handsome se baite ki is ladki ke saath shadi kerain gain?

bunty's dad: han g baita.. q nahi kerni chahiye?

nupur elbowed mayank to speak..

mayank: nahi kerni chahiye.. aap ko pata nahi hai yeh mini skirts pehan ker disco jati hai.. aur 3 or 4 glass pee ker yeh sabke saamne dance kerti hai.. ab aap ko pata hai na ke yeh ladkiyan kaisay dance kerti hain.. aur to aur iske to 100 boyfriends reh chuke hain..

nisha: han g uncle g.. mayank bilkul theek keh raha hai.. mera to dil hi nahi kerta us ladki ke saath ghoomon per majbori hai..

bunty's mom: kaisi majbori baita g??

uday: woh... han.. agar hum is ke saath nahin ghoomain to yeh humain threats daiti hai.. u know marne wale threats..

bunty got shocked..

bunty: mama mujhay yahan per shadi nahi kerni..

bunty's dad: han bunty sahi keh raha hai.. aisi ladki ke saath hamare baitay ki shadi nahi ho sakti.. main abhi ja ker un say baat kerta hoon...

bunty's mum nodded.

mayank: listen uncle, un ko yeh na pataye ga ke hum ne yeh sab aap ko pataya hai... warna geet humain jaan se maar dai gi.. plz uuncle save us...

bunty's dad agreed..

nupur and nisha started giggling..

they went back in the house..

brij opened the door..

brij: uncle g aap?

geet was smiling, she knew the plan had worked..

bunty's father: apnay dad ko bulao...

the whole family came..

bunty's father: listen, hum nay yeh shadi nahi kerni... do you understand??

rano: g hum say koi ghalti ho gayi hai..

bunty's father: nahi g ghalti to hum se ho gayi hai jo itnay handsome se ladkay ka rishta aap ke ghar kiya.

geet made a face

geet: handsome???

mr. handa: per g...

bunty's mother: aap ne suna nahi ke hum ne yeh rishta nahi kerna.. ab hum chaltay hain.. bye

they all left them..

rano: hayyo RABBA yeh kya ho gaya...meri bachi ka rishta tut bhi gaya..

geet was so happy.. now she needed to make the whole family happy..

geet went up to veer gi..

her secret weapon (her brother)

geet: bhaiya, kya aap ko woh idiot ladka pasand aya hai?

brij: to be honest with you, nahi.. i am happy for u ke woh rishta tut gaya hai..

geet: to bhaiya mama and baba kyun nahi khush hain.. us idiot ladke ke saath main to khush nahi reh sakti thi..

brij started laughing..

they both went up to their parents..

geet: mama y r u crying?

rano: lo roon gi nahin to hasoon karon..

geet: g mama.. be honest.. aap ko woh ladka pasand aaya?

rano: wooo.. per tera rishta pehli bar aya aur tut bhi gaya..

geet: oho mama.. its ok..

mr.handa: mujhay bhi yeh rishta bilkul bhi nahi pasand aaya..y woh kya hai ke hum ne pehle ladkay ko nahi daikha tha to isliye... aur yeh tumhari mama ne mujhe force kiya hai..

geet: its ok.. now i want both of u 2 smile..

both of the parents started smiling.

the gang went to their house..

the khurana's house:

maan was still stuck in aninie's room..

maan: (yelling) annie, dev. mujhay yahan se nikalo.. its been 1 hour since i am stuck in this room...

but nobody answered..

maan closed his eyes..

all of the sudden geet (ghost) appeared in the room..

maan opened his eyes to see the most beautiful girl in the world.

he was so happy that he 4got he was tied with a chair..

he got up but couldnt move further and fell to the ground with a thud.

maan: ufff. yeh mujhay kya ho raha hai..

he got up..

maan: yeh annie bhi na.. i have to do sumthing.. but what!?

maan kept on thinking for a plan to escape this place..

but no plan...

then all of the sudden he got an idea...

Maan: HELP!!! ANNIE, DEV!!!! HELP!!

in one second annie and dev both entered the room...

they both were so scared..

maan: annie, dev woh daikho..

maan nodded towards the wall..

annie dev both looked there but found nuthing!

annie: bhai kya ho gaya hai aap ko?

maan: tum dono ko wahan pe aik ladki nazar nahi aa rahi hai??

dev: bro aap theek to hain na?? wahan pe kuch bhi nahi hai!

maan: nahi dev wahan pe kuch to hai..

dev tells annie: annie, we should free him.. daikho kya halat ho gayi hai!

annie nodded...

maan tried to hear their conversation but made a frightened face as soon as they both looked..

annie: bhai i am sorry humain aisa nahi kerna chahiye.. main aap ko khol daiti hoon...

annie started to free maan from the chair..

maan knew he had to make a move.

QUICKLY!

maan is free.

maan starts laughing.

dev: annie lagta hai bro ke ander woh bhoot chala gaya hai...

annie stares at dev like he is insane!

dev: mujhay na daikho udher bro ko daikho..

maan: thank you annie and dev..

annie: bhai aap kaisay batain ker rahay hain.. this is the first time u said thank you to us..

maan noticed the changes in him.

he was joking, laughing, smiling, and saying thank you!!!!!

maan: anyways annie mujhay rasta do, mujhay kaam kerna hai..

annie: matlab aap mazak ker rahay thay!

maan: ofcourse!

dev: annie mainay tumhay kaha tha na ke na kholo unko.. meri kabhi baat mani hai tumnay..

annie rolled her eyes.. n elbowed him on his stomach..

maan went in his room..

to do sum work..

but he couldnt concentrate bcoz he was 2 busy thinking about geet!

geet came in his mind..

maan: yeh tujhay kya ho gaya hai?? aik ladki ke liye...

maan couldnt resist himself..

maan: yeh kaisi feelings hai.. maine kabhi aisa feel nahi kiya..

maan wanted to c her beautiful face..

just once...

maan: control maan!!!

maan got out of his room..

on the way dadi ma met him

dadi ma: maan baite aap kab aaye..

maan: woh dadi ma aik ghanta ho gaya hai..

dadi ma: aik ghanta? aur humain pata hi nahi tha..

maan: woh actually dadi ma, mujhay saza mili huwi thi annie and dev say.. woh abhi bhi nahi nikalne dai rahay thay.. woh to main zabardasti nikal parha..

they both started laughing..

dadi ma: per aap abhi kahan ja rahay hain?

maan: woh dadi ma, office main aik importan file rakh aaya hoon.. woh le ker aata hoon.. atleast 1 hour to lagay ga..

dadi ma: file lainay ke liye aik ghanta?

maan: woh dadi ma, main thodi dair wahan pe kaam kerna chahta hoon.. dinner main aap ke ssath hi keron ga... theek hai dadi ma?

dadi ma sighed and nodded..

maan left...

Handa's house:

geet was in her room enjoying the moment..

all of the sudden she was missing maan sooo freaking much..

geet: geet pagal na ban... u dont even know his name or tu us ke bare maain soch rahi hai... tujhay yeh bhi nahi pata ke woh tumharay bare main soch raha hai ya nahi..

geet paced back and forth in her room..

she didnt know wat 2 do..

she was so confused about her feelings towards a stranger.

geet: per main usay miss q ker rahi hoon.. kya woh bhi mujhay miss ker raha hai??

somebody opened the door of her balcony n stood there listening to her..

geet: kya karon?

maan: i miss u 2!

geet turned around..

she was so happy to c him here in her room..

she ran up2 him but didnt hug him...

geet: aap! aap yahan kya ker rahay hain..

maan: tum mujhay miss ker rahi thi aur main tumhay.. to socha tum se mil loon...

geet: acha g yeh aap ko kisne keh diya ke main aap ko miss ker rahi thi..

maan: hmmm...

geet hugged him tightly..

but when she opened her eyes, she realized she was hugging the balcony's door...

geet: geet tu pagal ho gayi hai.. 100% pagal!!

she layed on her bed n fell asleep...

As for Maan Singh Khurana, he didnt know wat he was doin..

he was in Khurana Constructions all alone...

thinking of geet..

maan: tu pagal ho gaya hai... per main kya keron woh ladki itni yaad aa rahi hai.. pata nahi woh kya ker rahi ho gi..

maan thought for a second..

maan: raat ke 10 baj rahay hain, so rahi ho gayi..

maan got back to his work..

1 hr has passed..

it is now 11:00 PM.

maan started to get up and move towards his car when he heard a thud outside the office building..

maan ran towards the noise..

2 men were breaking in his car.

maan ran up2 them but 2 late, they already took his car..

maan: oye!!!! ruk jao.. wait!!!

maan ran for a lil while but then stop..

maan: raat ke 11:00 baj rahay hain.. sab so chukay hon gai.. unko disturb bhi nahi ker sakta.. chal maan baita, start walking.. its a long way home!

he walked and walked..

2 eager to get home..

but how could he...

it would probably take 2-3 hrs to get home..

nobody was found outside the Delhi road..

all of the sudden maan stopped at the spot where he met geet.

the very first time..

she was begging for help..

the goons, himself!

he was imagining the whole scene..

how he punched the goons...

how he looked over to geet!

everything!

for no reason he went the opposite direction of his house!

sumthing pulled him towards the other direction.

he went the other direction without even thinking twice..

he kept walking walking and walking until he came to a stop..

it was geet's house!

he was shocked too..

maan: yeh main kahan aa gaya hoon... yeh to us ladki ka ghar hai.

maan was confused..

he wandered around..

however, geet was asleep...

but sumthing was bothering her..

sumthing was telling her to wake up..

n so she did.

she woke up rubbing her eyes..

she looked at the time..

geet: hayye RABBA 12:00 baj gaye hain.. per ab mujhay neened kahan ani hai.. is tarha kerti hoon, bahar terrace main chali jati hoon... jab neend aaye gi to ander aa jaon gi..

geet got up n moved herself towards the terrace..

the cool breeze felt her face...

she was lost in her thought..

looking up the sky..

soo dark..

but then all of the sudden she looked down and saw a person wandering outside her house..

geet: oye khote...

maan looked up..

he could c geet's beautiful face but geet couldnt see his face because of the darkness.

a smile teased on maan's face.

he was so happy that he couldnt express it..

geet: yahan kya ker rahay ho?? tum ghar jao... per nahin in khoton ne q meri baat manni hai.. sari raat awaragardi kertay hain aur sara din sotay hain.. lafangay kahin ke..

maan wanted to go near her..

his eyes automatically started looking for a ladder..

maan found one and started to move towards the ladder.

geet was so confused..

geet: (to herself) yeh kya ker raha hai?

geet saw the ladder in maan's hands..

geeT: hayo RABBA! yeh to uper aa raha hai.. oye geet kya zaroorat thi bolne ki.. ab kya ho ga..

geet started to think. then she had a bright idea...

she went in her room n took out a long heavy stick!

geet: abhi pata ti hoon..

maan was now coming up towards the terrace..

geet was ready...