IMPORTANT NOTE: I AM REALLY REALLY REALLY TRULY SORRY GUYS! I KNOW RIGHT NOW U ALL ARE CURSING AT ME OR MAYBE WANT TO KILL ME! SO U MAY THROW ANY JUTIYAN AT ME! I UNDERSTAND! SINCE GEET HAS ENDED I HAVE NEVER POSTED ANYTHING! AND I HAVE A REASON BEHIND IT: I AM A KHALA NOW OF A SWEET LITTLE GIRL! AND I AM REALLY BUSY WITH HER! PLUS I HAVE SCOOL WORK THAT I HAVE TO FINISH! SO PLEASE JUST BARE WITH ME! I HOPE YOU LIKE IT! I THINK IT IS KIND A SHORT BUT I WILL POST THE NEXT PART SOON! PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR ANY MISTAKES! BECAUSE I WAS WRITING THIS TOO FAST DURING MY CLASS! TRUST ME IT IS NOT EASY WRITING DURING MY TEACHER IS GIVING A LECTURE! :)
part 28:
And then maan and geet heard people yell at the top of their lungs..
everyone: SURPRISE!!
geet jumped back.. maan held on to her arm and pulled her forward.. geet landed on his chest!
some one in the crowd yelled.
mr. sharma: oh yeh to sirf maan and geet hain.. ,
maan looks at him.. geet straightens herself..
maan: pani..
one of the waiter brings water for geet..
geet drinks it..
maan: geet tum theek ho na?
geet: (smiles) yes sir i am fine..
she was trying to be brave from inside but from inside she was still scared..
she was already scared of discos and this action led to more disaster..
her heart was thumping so loud..
she was praying that nobody hears her thumps..
mr. sharma: sorry about that ms. geet..
geet: its ok sir.. it wasnt ur fault..
mr. sharma: ok guys.. lets get back to out position.. rohan might be here in any minute..
everyone hides.. the room gets darker..
maan and geet are hiding behind the bar counter. they were alone..
geet has her head duck very low.. she loves giving surprises to people.. i guess she was more excited than mr. sharma..
maan tried to duck very low but still u could see his head from the counter..
geet keeps on telling him to duck low..
geet: sir aap ka sir nazar aa raha hai.. neechay jhukain please..
maan was so frustrated.. mssn: geet. ab main kya keroon agar meri height bari hai.. tumne hi yeh jaga choose ki thi..
geet rolls her eyes..
geet: yeh jaga maine apne liye chunni thi.. hamare liye nahi!
right when she said that, she regretted... the truth was she wanted him with her every moment..
a place like this is too scary for her.. but after maan assured her that he will be with her made her so delighted..
maan: theek hai.. main phir ja raha hoon..
maan is leaving when geet holds on to his hand..
geet: sorry.. yeh jaga maine hamare liye hi chuni thi..
maan smiles and sits back down.. it was dead silent.. not a single pin dropped.. the clock's sound seemed so loud..
and then everyone started hearing footsteps.. they knew the birthday boy is finally here...
everyone including maan and geet get up..
EVERYONE: SURPRISE!
rohan stood there totally shocked..
maan was staring at geet the whole time..
one by one everyone came forward gave rohan his gift and said happy birthday..
geet has given him a tie and maan has given him a watch..
mr. sharma: ok guys.. time to cut the cake.. e
everyone make their way to a huge table rohan cuts the yummy chocolate cake..
geet: (whispers to herself..) chocolate cake! my favorite!
maan overhears this n smiles..
geet gets the cake and starts eating as possible..
maan was tired of the crowd.. he leaves the area and goes to a side bar where they both were hiding before..
maan: 1 soft drink..
the waiter hands him the drink.. he drinks it..
geet is all alone.. she's standing in the middle of the disco..
she's trying to find maan in the crowd..
geet: yeh maan sir kahan chalay gaye hain.. unhon ne kaha tha ke woh mere saath rahain gain..
maan cant see geet and geet cant see maan!
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"woh daikho!" said one girl to her friends..
all of the girls huddled in the corner staring at a figure sitting on a stool in the side bar..
"kitna cute and handsome lag raha hai!" said another girl..
"acha tujhay bara cute lag raha hai.. chal theek hai..i dare u to make him dance with u." said the girl to another..
"pari kisi bhi challenge se peechay nahi hat ti.. watch and learn my friend.." said pari..
pari gets up and makes her way up to maan.. he's just sitting there and chilling trying to take off his mind on this party. this chaos made him forget about his promise to geet..
pari: hi.. i m pari.. aap?
no reply..
pari: shaid uncha sunte hain.. (loud) HI I M PARI.. N U??
maan glares at her..it was definitely not a friendly glare..
maan: (rudely) what do u want?!
pari flinches at his reply..
pari: hmm.. attitude huh? anyway u look lonely so i thought i should give u company..
maan: nahin.. mujhay kisi ki company ki zaroorat nahi hai..
pari: one dance doesnt hurt.. aur agar kuch huwa to main hi aap ko hospital le ker jaon gi.. dont worry..
maan: maine kaha na NO! now go before i call the security..
pari leaves heart broken..
pari: PARI! u cant go back.. agar wapis gayi to baisti ho jaye gi.. kuch to kerna ho ga.. aha!
she calls one of the waiter..
pari: daikho.. i want u to mix this soft drink with...
she pays the waiter..
after 5 mins the waiter makes his way up to maan and hands him his drink..
waiter: sir yeh aap ke liye..
maan doesnt hesitate.. he takes the drink n drinks it.. leaving lil bit behind..
pari: ab daikhti hon ke tm kya kertay ho.. ab to tumhay mere paas aana hi ho ga!
pari smirks..
MAAN'S POV:
oh GOD! this tastes so good.. i've never drinked this kind of drink before..
oww!
why does my head hurts all of the sudden... abhi to theek tha..
NOBODY'S POV:
maan is totally drunk now.. he doesnt know wats going on..
geet finally spots him..
she runs up to him..
geeT: maan sir! aap kahan chalay gaye thay?! maine aap ko kitna dhoonda!
geet notices his behavior..
geet sees the drink which was sitting on the counter in front front of maan..
maan takes it n is about to drink it when geet takes it..
geet smells the drink..she was totally shock to smell some kind of alcohol..
her eyes popped..
geet: maan sir aapne...
she couldnt finish it, thanks to maan..
he pulled her and made her sit next to him.. geet lands on the stool next to maan very hard..
maan: geet..
geet: maan sir.. i think we should go.. i will drop u home so u can sleep properly..
geet gets up but maan pulls her again and make her sit down..
geet confused and scared..
they sit there quietly while maan slowly moves his hand towards her hand.. he hold it tightly..
geet's eyes pops..
maan is about to say something when pari comes.. she takes maans hand in hers and pulls him out of there..
geet jaws drops and maan can't protest because he is drunk!
maan let her pull him. they both end up on the dance floor..
geet was getting really jealous and she didnt know why she was geting jealous..
geet: (whispering to herself) why am i getting jealous?? yeh kya feelings hain? (geet then sees the way they are dancing) haw haye! sharam nahi aati us ladki ko!
geet moves herself towards maan and pari. pari's friends are shocked to see pari completing her dare...
precap: kya ho ga? will geet take maan away from there or will she do something else??
NOTE: LOL.. DID U LIKE IT? WHAT I REALLY FOUND FUNNY IN THIS SCENE WAS I WAS WRITING THIS DURING MY HEALTH CLASS.. AND OUR TOPIC WAS HOW UNHEALTHY AND DANGEROUS ALCOHOL COULD BE! MY TEACHER WAS TELLING US THE SYMPTOMS OF ALCOHOL WHILE I WAS WRITING THIS! LOL.. SO I FOUND IT FUNNY HOW I M MAKING MAAN DRINK ALCOHOL.. I HAD TO THINK 10x ABOUT THIS SCENE BECAUSE I DIDNT WANT OUR GABRU JAWAN TO GO THROUGH THESE SYMPTOMS! ANYWAY I WILL SHUT UP NOW! HOPE U ENJOYED IT! PLEASE DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMONT BECAUSE IT MOTIVATES ME! :) ~SARA~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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