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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments! I really appreciate it! :) SURPRISE IN TODAY'S UPDATE! :D

Part 40:
And they leave the house leaving Geet with the obnoxious guys. Geet tries to scream but she couldn't.
"Lagta hai woh chalain gaye hain! Chal nikalte hain is se pehle woh namoone phir aa jain!" They both push Geet out the closet. Geet tries to protest but she's too weak. Now she has lost hope! Nothing can save her now. She will never get out of here. Maybe her dead body will finally make it out of this house. They both take her downstairs in the basement. And tie her against the chair while a cloth still rapped around her mouth. "Pata hai, Us din jab is ne mere moun pe thapar mara tha, tab se le ker ab tak mere ander khoon kholta hai. Bara zor se thapar mara tha." He places his hand on his left cheek where Geet once slapped him. He then moves towards Geet, places his left feet on the side of the chair. He takes bunch of Geet's hair and pulls it. Geet's eyes pops in fear and pain.
"Us din to tune apnay bhai ko bacha liya tha per ab yahan pe koi bhi nahi hai! Tera woh nakhatu bhai bhi nahin hai! Kya keray gi ab?!"
"Boss kya kerna hai?"
"Kerna kya hai? Aid jawan aur khobsurrat ladki saamne baithi huwi hai aur tu mujhse pooch raha hai ke kya kerna hai." He gave him a mischief smile. Geet shakes his head rapidly. Like it will affect them. They both move towards her rolling up their sleeves.
"Ready hai na?!"
Geet still shaking her head.
"Dar lag raha hai? Darne ki kya zaroorat hai. Humain apna yaar hi samajh lo!"
Geet shuts her eyes in disgust. One of the goons places his hand on her shoulder while in process of removing her dupatta. While the other one removes the cloth which was rapped around her mouth. Geet shakes her hand as well as her feet (which are tied against the chair but she still tries).
"Aisa mat kero mere saath please! Please aisa mat kero!"
"Ab tujhay yahan se koi bhi nahin bacha sakta!"
"GEET!!!"
Someone shouts from the door. Everyone turns to look at an anonymous figure standing and staring back at the goons from his burning with anger eyes.
"Maan sir?!"
"Maan? Yeh Maan koun hai. Abhay tu jo bhi hai na yahan se phut le! Chal ja werna..."
Maan was burning from inside with anger. Thank God he came otherwise she would have gotten killed.

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PAST! (MAAN'S OFFICE)
Maan sitting in his office thinking about Geet obviously. Adi comes in with a file in his hand.
"Maan sir, woh maine aap ko aik file di thi hamare new client ke uper. Yeh us ki further details. Please parh lain."
"Adi tum hi parh do!"
"Right sir."
Adi opens the file and starts reading.
"Hello Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. I will like to give you further information on my new house in Hoshiyarpur."
Maan was lost first but by hearing the word Hoshiyarpur awaken him up.
"Kya kaha, Phir se bolo aadi!"
"Emm right sir, I will like to give you further information on my new house in Hoshiyarpur."
"Hoshiyarpur?"
"Right sir, maine aap ko aik file di thi na us main sara Hoshiyarpur ke baare main likha huwa hai. Koun si jaga hai kaisi jaga hai. It's actually weird sir that Mr. Kumar wants to rebuild an house in Hoshiyarpur sir. Woh ghar kafi saalon se balke centuries se khaali hai!"
"Ok when do we leave?"
"Whenever you want sir."
"i am going there tonight."
"Sirf aap sir?"
"Yes I will go and check, you stay here and deal with Mr. Kumar. I just want to go check on the place before I start the project."
"As you wish sir." Though Adi couldn't understand the logic behind his decision but he kept quite. The truth was Maan just wanted an excuse to go check on Geet. And he couldn't miss the only excuse he had! Maan left for Hoshiyarpur as soon as possible.
Past Over
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Maan's anger was boiling. Though he didn't wanna fight cause he was not in a mood and plus ainvayi bicharon ko kut parh jaye gi! Thought Maan.
"Daikh! Jo tunne harkat ki hai us ke liye to tujhay maafi to door ki baat hai chodna nahin chahiye Per phir bhi I'll give you a chance. 1 min ke ander ander yahan se dafa ho jao! Kyun ke aik dafa mera haath uth jaye na to rukta nahin hai!" Maan threatened. But to Maan and Geet's surprised, the goons started laughing their heads off. They definitely thought Maan was some kind of a loser or "Ranjha" in their dictionary who came to save his Heer.
"Oye mujhay Heer Ranjha picture nahin daikhni! Chal ja yahan se humain apna kaam kernay dai!"
They both took one step towards Geet assuming Maan had left.
"Maan Sir!"
Maan now couldn't control his anger. He gave them their one and only warning but they didn't listen too bad for them . Maan jumped on them at the same time showing his stunts. He didn't spare them for only one second. It felt like he was a robot and just knows how to punch, kick, and slap people.
"Maan sir! Bas ker dijiye!" Geet yelled while she was trying to open the ropes around her from her mouth. Maan seemed not to hear her. He kept hitting and hitting. The goons almost fainted. Finally Geet took the rope that was surrounding her and jumped to save the goons.
"Maan sir bas ker dijiye! Woh donon Mar jain gain!" Geet pull Maan's arms but still he wouldn't budge. Maan pushed Geet aside not realizing that he just pushed Geet to the floor.
"OWWW!" Maan stopped hearing Geet's voice. It was like someone finally switched the off button of the robot. Maan came to live. He turned back to see Geet laying on the floor injured. She hit her ankle on the rocks laying in the basement.
"Geet! tum theek to ho na!"
Maan automatically picked Geet in his arms and took her out of there not glancing once at the goons. He didn't even care about their condition! All he cared about was Geet and his Geet.

Kaisa raha?????? Do reply! :D


Precap: SURPRISE!!!! XD

Ok guys hope you liked it. Do shower me with your lovely comments and like this post! :) I BETTER GET LONG COMMENTS! :) ~Sara~

Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
Mishti13 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing
love the way maan come and save geet
haw he pushed her 😆now he is gone 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update yaar!!!...
Thank God Maan came nd saved her... wah acha hua uss gundon ko Maan ne maara...
Loved it...
Plzzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

yipeee

maan d saviour came on time...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments! I really appreciate it! :) SURPRISE IN TODAY'S UPDATE! :D

Part 41:
Maan automatically picked Geet in his arms and took her out of there not glancing once at the goons. He didn't even care about their condition! All he cared about was Geet and his Geet.
Maan ran outside the house. Geet was unconscious in Maan's arms. However, Maan tried to shake Geet, She would open her eyes and blabber something but then shut her eyes.
"Geet?! Geet I am really sorry! Utho!"
In the jungle Maan finds a huge rock in front of a river. He makes her sit on it while he went to get some water. When Maan came back, he poured her face with water. Geet popped her eyes in confusion.
"What the heck?!"
She looked up at Maan with her brown innocent eyes. It was enough to melt him down. His heart was filled with guilt. He scowled himself from inside. Geet understood his condition from his facial expression. She automatically got up.
"It's ok sir. You don't have to feel guilty!"
Maan looked at her with disbelief.
"H-how did you know?"
"Woh aap ke facial expressions..."
"Look Geet I am really sorry. Mujhay bhot ghussa aya huwa tha un ghundon pe..."
Without even letting Maan finish his sentence Geet asked, "Kyun Maan Sir? Aap kyun ghussa ker rahay thay?"
Maan looked in her eyes deeply. He was getting lost in her eyes the more deeply he looked. It felt like he couldn't find his way out.
"Boliye na sir!"
Maan then realized that she was the one who kind a ditched him Leaving him to suffer for ever. Maan folded his arms up to his chest.
"Inhay kya ho gaya! Lagta hai dantnay ka dil ker raha hai inka!" Geet whispered to the rock thinking that Maan couldn't hear her but he was smirking listening to her little "side converation" with a non-living rock.
"Geet! Mujhse baat kero ussay nahin." Maan demanded nodding over to the rock.
"Ok fine. Aap yahan kya ker rahay hain? Aaap ko to Deilhi main hona chahiye tha na?"
"Main Hoshiyarpur site daikhne aaya tha naye project. That site happened to be this place."
As Maan was telling his little story, Geet would open her mouth in shock.
"Geet is main itna shock honay ki kya baat hai! Waisay bhi tum Delhi kyun chod ker aa gayi, office ko chod ke, dadi ma ko chod ke, mujhay chod ke!?"
As soon as the words left Maan's mouth, Geet melted.
"Geet agar tumhay mujhse pyaar ho gaya hai to mujhay batao na ke tum mujhse bhaag jao!"
"Ae lo, in ko pata bhi chal gaya. Meri speech ka kya ho ga jo maine yaad ki thi. Maine socha in ko woh speech parh doon gi. Ab mujhay thodi na pata tha ke yeh yahan aa tapkay gain!" Geet blabbered to herself which was pretty loud for Maan to hear.
"Geet tumhay speech ki bilkul zaroorat nahin hai! Pata hai, in pichle kuch dinon se to mere hosh udh gaye hain. Har pal tumhari yaad aati hai! Per tum.."
"Mujhay bhi aap ki bhot yaad aati hai! Her woh pal jo maine aapkay saath bitaye."
Maan holds her hands, and he makes her look up in to his eyes.
"To phir Geet woh kehdo jo tumhare dil main kafi dinon se hai.."
"Pehle aap!"
"Fine. donon akhattay boltay hain."
Maan smiled at her. Geet now places her free hand on top of Maan's hand and presses it tightly. Together they say:
"I... Love... You!"

Kaisa raha?????? I know bhot ho boring confession tha. But i tried my best. Sorry huh! But hey they atleast confessed! :D

Ok guys hope you liked it. Do shower me with your lovely comments and like this post! :) I BETTER GET LONG COMMENTS! :) ~Sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the proposal
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesomeee update...

Finally dey confessed...!!!!!
Plzzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments! I really appreciate it! :) Sorry for the late update! I had exams! :(

Part 42 (Last Part):
Right after their confession, Maan and Geet found their way out of the jungle. Geet couldn't control her feelings. As they were walking, Geet shared some stories with Maan. She blabbered non stop. Maan looks at her and just smile pleasantly. "You have no idea, ke maine kitni lambi speech tayyar rakhi huwi thi..."
"Geet main tumhay interrupt nahin kerna chah raha tha but hum jungle se nikal aaye hain. So agar tumhay problem nahin hai to tum mujhay apnay ghar ka raasta pata do.Agar tumhay ghar jana hai otherwise mujhay koi jaldi nahin hain!" Maan said sarcastically. "Aap to is tarha bol rahay ho Maan jis tarha sara waqt main hi bolti aayi hoon." Geet made an innocent face which was not gone unmissable by Maan even in the darkness. Not only Geet was very delighted but Maan too. He was just waiting for this moment where he will have the perfect woman or girl in this matter next to her, hand in hand, walking while the moonlight showers its light on them two. He never felt happy before as he was today. Maan immediately stopped in his footsteps.
"Kya huwa Maan?"
Maan slowly bent down on his knees, and pulled out a diamond ring. Geet was flustered first but then realized what he was about to do. Her heart jumped inside like in any second it will burst out. "Geet."
Her name from his mouth felt very comfortable like it was suppose to come out from his mouth only. So beautiful and mesmerizing. Seeing her facial expression made Maan just tease her a little.
"Geet, yeh ring maine dadi ma ke liye kharide hai. To main tumse advise laina chahta hoon. Kaisi hai dadi ma ke liye?" Geet expressions which excitement was written all over it dropped down to not only confusion but feelings of being a stupidhead.
"J-ji? Matlab yeh dadi ma ke liye hai?"
"Haan!" Maan said making an obvious tone."Tum kya samjhi?" Maan was cracking from inside. If he didn't laugh out his laughter then maybe his stomach will burst open. And in a second or two, Maan burst out laughing. That made Geet more confuse. After Maan settled himself down, he again bent down on his knees.
" Will you marry me?"
"Yeh aap Dadi ma se kahain gain?"
Maan again burst out laughing.
"Let me make it much more clear Geet."
"I, Mr. Maan Sing Khurana MD of Khurana Constructions, is seeking, Geet Handa's hand in marriage. Will you accept my proposal?"
Geet was now jumping up and down not caring about her wounds.
Her hair flying all over the place.
It felt like all of her wounds were healed after his mesmerizing words.
"Yes Yes Yes!" Maan quickly placed the ring on her finger and hugged her as tightly as he can. He never wanted to let go of her. Everything seemed perfect. The moonlight, the silence, the trees and most importantly this moment which Maan and Geet wanted to seize forever and ever.
"Geet, hum tumharay family ko abhi bataye gain. ok?"
"Aur aap ki family?"
"Unko to pehle se pata hai." Geet smile.
They both walked as if they were never going to stop until they reached Geet's house.
"Ok Geet. Main chalta hoon. Kal mujhay pata daina tumhari family ka faisla."
Geet held on to his arms tightly as he was about to leave.
"Aray aap kahan ja rahay hain? Hum donon ne patana hai. Aap hi ne to kaha tha."
"No Geet family tumhari hai to tumhay patana parhay ga."
Geet sensed fear in Maan's tone and actions which made her laugh.
"Don't tell me! Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, MD of Khurana Constructions. Jin ka naam sun ke saray dar jatay hain aaj aik ladki ki family se rishta mangtay huway dar rahay hain! Unbelievable!"
"Aisi koi baat nahin hai!"
"To chalain lets go in."
After pulling Maan inside the haveli, they finally reached the doorsteps of the Handa Haveli. Maan gulped down. He has never done this before. Usually people ask his permission for anything but for the first time in his life he will be seeking someone else's permission.
Rano came to open the door.
"Geet! Tu kidher reh gayi thi. Tujhay pata hai ke hum kitna pareshan ho gaye thay!"
Geet hides her hand in which the ring was on. She didn't want to show it to them at least not now.
"Mama. Main bilkul theek hoon. Yeh Maan Singh Khurana. Yehi to mujhay jungle se le ker aayen hain."
Rano hugs Maan unexpectedly and showers him with thank yous.Maan stood shocked. After the session of thank yous and hugs and kisses, Maan and Geet were finally told to go change themselves. Maan had no choice but to change into Brij's clothes. As per Maan's knowledge, Brij's clothes doesn't fit him. They are very tight but he has no choice but to wear it even though he feels like he's gonna suffocate.
"Dinner Time!" Yelled Mr. Handa at top of his lungs. Maan covered his ears. Maybe Mr. Handa assumed that everyone is deaf in the house. Brij, who just entered the room, looked at Maan's condition and burst out laughing.
"Kya yaar tu dar gaya kya?"
Maan assumed that Brij has cracked a joke and he must laugh. After all, Brij is his future Salay sahab. Maan laughed till Brij looked at him in confusion.
"Khair, aa jaiye dinner time. Yahan pe waqt pe khana milta hai. Wait maine aap ko kahin daikha hai!"
"I am Geet's boss Mr. Maan Singh Khurana."
"Oh haan! Sir ji! Haath te mila phir se!"
Maan, flustered, extended his hand and shook it with Brij's hand. After some time they both went down. Geet came prepared to tell her family tonight at the dinner table. Thanks to her friends advise.
"Mujhay aap sab se baat kerni hai."
"Ok Geet tell me kya tod ker aayi hai tu." Declared Brij.
"Nai Nai Bhaiya. Mujhay kuch aur baat kerni hai." Geet kicks Maan's legs indicating that he should also speak.
"Daikhiye. Main Geet se shaadi kerna chahta hoon." Maan came straight to the point without hesitating. Everyone stood frozen as if they are playing statue statue game, waiting for Maan to unfreeze them. Geet looks at Maan.
Main inka kya keroon! Direct baat kerdi. Banda ghuma phira ke karta hai! Uff! Geet thought to herself while giving Maan the longest glare that he deserved at that moment.
"Sorry beta. Shaid humne sahi nahin suna. Phir se kehna." Mr. Handa finally gathered the courage to ask Maan the question. Maybe he misheard him.
"Ji maine kaha ke main Geet se shaadi kerna chahta hoon aur Geet ko bhi koi iteraaz nahin hai."
Brij got up from his seat. He has a stern face which made Geet and Maan gulped as if he's gonna jump on Maan and strangle him to death. Brij stood behind Maan's chair followed by Mr. Handa. Silence in the room. No one dared to talk. All of the sudden...
"Oye! Balle balle! Congratulations! Maan babu! Shaadi kab ki rakhni hai!" Everyone jumped in the room including Geet. But Maan stood frozen. All of this happened too quickly, he didn't know how to react. Brij forcefully made Maan get up from his chair and hugged him.
"Rajji! Mithai le ker aao jaldi! Hamaray Jeeja ji ka moun to meetha kerain."
Rajji brought a plate full of Mithais. Brij took the biggest Mithai out of the plate and made Maan eat all of it. Maan tried to protest but failed. His mouth became just like a gol gappa. Geet was laughing and hugging her mother.
This was the night which nobody could forget. The night which Maan for the first experienced fear. Brij and Rajji finally could tease their one and only Jeeju ji as of now. And Mr. Handa, Rano, and Darji finally realized that Geet is finally grown up. Annie finally realized that a guy like Maan Singh Khurana, who used to be so Sadu or arrogant, can be changed by love. For the first time Maan played pranks on Annie. Everyone had so much fun. Geet's friends played pranks also.

After some days Dev and Dadi Ma came to Hoshiyarpur. They finalized the wedding after 3 weeks. Until then Dulha and Dulhan can't see each other. Maan went back to Delhi and Geet stayed in Hoshiyarour. Maan was very busy in his wedding preparations and also his office. But he always find time to miss Geet. Adi and Pinky were fond to know that Maan has finally changed and he is getting married. Pinky went to Hoshiyarpur to help out Geet and Adi stayed in Delhi to help his brother Maan.

After 3 weeks:
The wedding went perfectly. Everyone enjoyed it very much. Everyone played pranks on Maan and Geet. Playing Silly games. Along with Doodh Pilai ki rasam and Joota chupai.
"Mujhay to lagta hai meri Saalian bhot greedy hain. Her cheez ke liye paisay laiti hain. Kabhi baithne ke liye, kabhi Geet se baat kerne ke liye, aur jooton ke liye, aur ab to doodh pilai. Lagta hai yeh to sirf bahana hai. Yeh sari rasmain to aap ne abhi banai hai. Vadhai ke time jab Geet roi gi to us ke bhi paisay na maang laina yeh keh ke yeh bhi aik rasam hai." Maan joked. Everyone laughed. During the Vadhai time Geet cried non stop and Maan stood beside her at all time to support her. After some time Dulha, dulhan, Dadi ma, Dev and Geet's friends bid Adios to Geet's family and went to Delhi.

Annie and Arjun settled in New York along with Meera and Yash. Mayank and Nupur stayed back in Delhi happily married couples.
And Maan and Geet lived happily ever after just like Prince Maan and his Princess Geet with a lot of masti and little baby arguments between them two which Dev and Dadi ma were bond to solve. :D

The End

Ok guys this is it! This was a looong Last Update of Tere Liye.Tere Liye has bid Adios! I tried to make it special and I hope I succeeded.Thank you all of you supported me no matter what! I will be back with another FF. So also read that one. Thank you and now shower me with your lovely comments and do like this post.You guys are the best! .Sara

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful end dear

love it

hope u come soon wid ur new story

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