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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Loved it

So finally Geet made him drink the soup

I really like their self-talk

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sara_06

@sara_06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Note: thank u all for lovely comments.. i really enjoy reading them! :)

~sara~

PART: 18

maan gets up n moves towards geet..

maan comes close to geet n he makes her turn around facing him..

maan: geet...

geet looks up into his eyes..

maan looking back in her eyes..

maan: pehle kyun nahi pataya mujhe..

geet: aap ne bolne hi nahi diya...

maan: (softly) geet...

geeT: aap hamesha mujhay ghalat samajhte ho..

maan looking deeply in her eyes..

trying to find his answers..

then there is a knock on the door..

annie: bhai.. main annie hoon.. aa jaon ander..

maan n geet seperate..

maan: han aa jao annie..

annie enters n is shock to c geet in KM n especially in maan's room..

annie: aray geet tum! tum yahan kya ker rahi ho?

geet: woh annie.. main sir ko ghar chodne aayi thi..

annie: bhai aap driving bhool gaye hain kya?

maan rolls his eyes..

annie: geet mujhay bata na..

n then geet tells her the whole situation..

she leaves the soup part though..

annie runs upto maan n checks him here n there..

annie: oh GOD! bhai aap theek to ho na? us ullu de pathe ko nazar nahi aa raha tha.,

maan: (thinking) sahi hai.. donon ki soch aik hi hai.. geet bhi sahi galiyan daiti hai aur annie bhi..

maan: main theek hoon annie..

annie: oh thank God! chalo acha hai geet hamare saath ruk rahi hai..

maan smiles at hamare!

geet: (awkwardly)emm.. annie.. main kahan rukoon gi?

annie: geet tum mere saath mere room main.. sari raat baatain kerain gain..

geet smiles..

annie: chal geet.. tujhay room main le chalti hn.. bhai apna khayal rakhna..

annie and geet r about to leave when geet stops..

geet: annie tu chal main abhi aati hn..

annie: emmm ok.. waisay woh koune(corner) wala room hai.. udher aa jana..

annie leaves totally confused..

geet turns around..

geeT: woh maan sir... please aap apni medicines lai lain.. aur plz argue mat kerna..

maan: han tumse koun argue ker sakta hai.. kahan hai medicines?

geet hands him the medicines.. (pills)

geet brings water from the side table..

maan takes one pill n drinks the water in one go..

geeT: ok main chalti hn.. ab yeh medicines 1 week tak laini hai.. subha dupher(evening) aur raat ko.. aur haan khali pait nahi khani yeh pills..

maan: (thinking) wow mera kitna khayal kerti hai geet..

maan: haan geet ab tum jao.. mujhay neend aa rahi hai..

geet: ji.. good night..

geet leaves..

geet enters annie's room..

geet calls her brother..

geet: (on the phone) bhaiya..

brij: han geet bol..

geet: aaj raat main annie ke ghar rukoon gi.. mama ko bata dain..

brij: kyun sab theek to hai na? achanak?

geeT: han sab theek hai.. bs woh annie ki dadi ma ghar nahi jane dai rahi thi.. keh rahi thi ke itni raat ko wwoh mujhe kahin nahi jane dain gi..

brij: hmmm.. chal theek hai.. phir kal annie ko kehna ke woh tujhay ghar drop ker dian..

geeT: ji bhaiya.. good night n sweet dreams..

brij: good night..

geet hangs up..

annie and geet talk non stop..

they fell asleep after an hour..

THE WHOLE KHURANA HOUSE WAS FAST ASLEEP!

around 3:30 am.. geet wakes up..

she gets really thirsty..

she looks around in the room n found no water to drink..

she went downstairs in the kitchen..

geet opens the fridge door.. n looks for a water bottle..

while somebody comes behind her puts their hands on her shoulders..

geet screams!!

somebody puts their hand on her mouth..

"shhh..."

geet wont stop she was still screaming under the persons hand..

"geet chup kero.. saray ghar ko uthana hai kya? main maan hoon"

geet all of the sudden gets quite..

maan: shukar hai..

he removes his hand..

maan: tum yahan kya ker rahi ho?

geet: pehle aap batain?

maan: geet yeh mera ghar hai aur main jahan marzi jaon tumhay is se koi problem nahi honi chahiye..

geet: oh thx for the info.. mujhay ghalti se pyaas lag gayi thi.. aur pani peenay aayi thi...

maan: oh acha.. to piyo..

geeT: aap agay se hathain gain to main pee sakoon gi..

maan moves away from geet..

geet goes to the dishwasher..

she gets an empty glass out..

geeT: aap ko bhi pani chahiye kya?

maan nods..

geet drinks the water in one go..

she gets another glass n pours water in that glass.

she hands it to maan..

maan drinks it one go..

maan: emmm i think we should go back to sleep..

geet nods n leaves..

right then maan drops the glass accidentally n the glass pieces shatters.

geet runs back..

geet: maan sir aap theek to hain na??

geet checks him here n there..

geeT: main theek hoon..

geet nods n she bends down to pick up the glass pieces..

maan: geet wait.. let me go call nakul..

geet: (nods her head in no) nahin maan sir woh so rahay hon gain.. ainvayi un ko takleef uthani parhay gi..

maan: geet woh waiter hai.. us ka kaam hi yehi hai..

geeT: kyun waiter insaan nahi hotay..un ko neend nahi chahiye hoti kya??

maan speechless.

without another word geet bends down to pick up the glass pieces..

maan bends down with her n helps her pick up the glass pieces...

they pick up all the glass pieces carefully n throw it in the trash can..

geet smiles at him

geeT: thank u sir..

maan smiles back..

n geet leaves..

she goes to sleep but maan doesnt go to sleep..

her thoughts were haunting him down..

he tried to sleep but when he closes his eyes he would see geet n when he opens his eyes he sees her standing..

maan smacks himself with his hand..

maan: sudhar ja maan!!

n finally after an 1 hour he goes to sleep..

PRECAP: maan standing in the store room..

all the staff members r there..

including sasha tasha pinky adi and geet...

part 19: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1901685&TPN=29

sorry guys its really short! :( i was really busy so i couldn't write a lot! cant wait to read ur comments! :) ~sara~

Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago

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blue24

@blue24

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Awesome update dear loved the part where maan and geet picked up the broken glass..
Do continue soon.thanks for the pm..the preacp seems to interesting.'

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

again mind blowing update👏👏

thank you so much for lovely update and pm⭐️⭐️

wondering what is precap about i think maan will learn the truth that geet is an innocent hope so😉

do. cont. soon

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

awesome
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Awesme update asusual.i just loved it.omg precap is sme wat excitng..maan in store room.phir se geet se koi galti nahi hogayi?hey babaji is baar geet ke saath aisa kuch na ho..
Waitng 4 next part.
-MONA