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Posted: 13 years ago
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Read all d parts nw...awesome...hey geet is 2 comedy nd her gang also... Luvd it awesome...plz PM me nd continue soon...hope dat deir misunderstanding gets solved..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hates when maan is easily fooled, that too by sasha
but he was back to check on her ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 11 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

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NOTE: THANK u all for lovely comments! enjoy! :)

PART 12:

NO ONE'S POV:

ITS MORNING!
maan woke up to go to KC..
maan got ready..
he had his breakfast n left...
geet side:
n geet woke up to go to college..
she went straight to the bathrooom..
geet got ready n went stairs..
after 5 minutes she left the house to go to college..

geet point of view:
i reached my college.
OH NO my class assignment!!
i didnt do it..
SHOOT!
wat shall i do??
DONT PANIC GEET??
everything will b fine..
no it cant b fine..
sir chadda will complain..
he will call my house n then mama and baba..
NO..
i was so worried n thinking deeply n then all of the sudden sumthing or sumbudy was pulling me..
i looked up n saw uday pulling me..
geeT: uday? uday mujhay chodo.. yaar leave me na..
he kept on holding me..
geet: UDAY kahan le ker ja rahay ho?
uday: geet dont worry yaar i m just taking u too our group.. kidnap nahin ker raha hoon.. jo itnay cheekhay maar rahi hoon..
i relaxed...
wait y was i worried??
oh yea assignment!
we finally reached the college cafe..
i spotted my gang there..
annie n arjun were there too..
it was really nice to see them..
i walked up to them n sat down..
it was already 8:30 A.M.
at 2:00 i have to get to my job!
ugh..
again i have to work with my khudus boss! :(
geet right now u dont even have to think about him..
worry about ur assignment which is due in 10 minutes!
OH NO!

Nobody's piont of view:
everyone is sitting and enjoying except geet..
everyone noticed..
mayank: geet kya huwa hai tujhay??
geet looks up..
geet: woh main...
nupur: bolo na geet..
geeT: actually kal raat ko main job se 1:00 AM ghar aayi thi.. us ki wajah se maine apna assignment nahi finish kiya...
annie: oh thats sad.. mujhay pata tha tumhare saath yeh problem ho gi.. is liye mainay tumhara assignment complete ker diya tha..
annie hands geet her assignment..
geet: (so happy) thank u annie.. u really made my day..
geet gives annie a hug..
annie: btw geet tumhara pehla din kaisa gaya? boss kaisa tha??
geeT: mat poocho.. ufff..
everyone: bata na geet..
geet: ok batati hoon.. annei tujhay yaad hai na ke main late ho gayi thi..
annie knew it that she got in trouble..
she nodded her head..
geet: when annie left.. i was so scared that i ran inside without the gaurds seeing my face.. they thought i was a thief or sumthing like that..
everyone got interested to hear her story..
geet: (continuing) i kept on running cause i didnt have time to stop.. n finally they caught me.. when i was in the office.. on the 10th floor.. then THANK GOD my boss came.. he rescued me from these two idiots..
annie was a lil shocked..
annie: (thinking) bhaiya helped geet??
geet: then i got my own cabin.. my first assignment by my boss. i had to look at the mistakes from 10 files..
everyone was surprised..
nupur: geet tune kaam kiya?
geet: nahi maine dance kiya.. ofcourse job main kaam kertay hain..
uday: geet tu nupur ko chod u continue ur story..
nupur punches uday on his arm
uday: oww..
geet: (continuing) phir kya huwa? oh han.. yaad aa gaya.. i finished my work early.. had nothing to do.. so i took a lil rest... i closed my eyes n then sumhow i fell asleep.. the next thing i remembered is that when i opened my eyes.. my boss was standing right next to me.. and he was very angry.. he was yelling at me.. (in maan singh khurana style) TUM YAHAN SONAY AATI HO YA KAAM KERNAY AATI HO.. MUJHAY FILE dO! waghaira waghaira.. n then i met two girls.. sasha and tasha...
she kept on talking n talking..
telling her story..
everyone was shocked after hearing wat sasha n tasha did n maans reaction..
nisha: geet tere boss ka naam kya hai?
geeT: DUSHT DHANAV!
everyone laughed..annie was a little concerned..
nupur: geet tu bhi na, apnay boss ko nickname bhi dai diya.. un ka asli naam kya hai..
geet: oh acha asli naam.. un ka naam hai Mr. MAAN SINGH KHURANA the AKRU..
again they all laughed..
nupur: dikhnay main kaisa hai?
mayank: oh hello ms. nupur bushan yeh kaisa sawal hai?
nupur: mayank maine to aisay hi pooch rahi thi..
geet: dikhnay main to bas theek hi hai.. gardan(neck) hamesha akri rehti hai.. her kisi se rude hota hai.. uff btw y r we talking about that dusht dhanav..
right then the bell rings..
nupur: not again... phir wohi mr. chadda ki class main jana hai.. (to arjun) arjun remember last time tumnay kuch aisa kiya tha jis se humain jaldi chutti mil gayi plz is dafa bhi kuch aisa hi kerna..
arjun: (smiling) i will try my best! :)
annie rolls her eyes at him..
arjun notices it..
arjun: (thinking) is ladki ki problem kya hai? wat did i even do to her? sirf smile to kiya hai na?? GOD GIRLS!
they all left to their class..


As for MAAN SINGH KHURANA:
he was so bored..
even though he distracted himself in work but still he couldnt stop thinking of geet..
maan: (yelling at himself) yeh mujhay kya ho raha hai.. y am i thinking about that stupid girl.. maan concentrate..
maan sighed one more time n went back to his work..

1:30 PM.
college is over now..
everyone is leaving
annie decides to drop geet to her work..
annie n geet in the car..
annie: be honest geet.. tum waqai(for real) bhai.. i mean MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko nahin pasand kerti?
geet: annie aisi koi baat nahi.. its just that he is so rude.. he never listens to anyone.. but before i joined his office, he was so nice n friendly..
annie: (thinking) bhai nice n frienly? i m sure she got mistaken..
annie: oh acha.. geet main bhi ander jaon gi..
geet: han q nahi.. u should meet everyone in the office..
annie smiled..

Geet point of view:
we finally reached my office..
annie wanted to come inside n i didnt want to argue..
atleast i will have accompany..
we both enter the building
but before i enter the building i give a stare to the two bodygaurds..
annie turns around n giggles..
annie: geet chal na..
she pulled me..
we got in the elevator i pressed the 10th floor..
n off we went..
after a minute or 2 we came out of the elavator..
as we were passing the staff..
everyone got up..
why are they getting up??
i looked over to annie and she was smiling at everyone!
wat's wrong w/ everyone?
everyone is treating her like she's the boss here!
i quickly take her in my cabin..
geet: annie yeh sab tujhay hello hi q ker rahay thay??
right when she was about to answer..
sumbudy called..
i picked it up..
geet: hello..
maan: geet ander aao. abhi isi waqt..
geeT: yes sir i m cuming..
i hang up..
he looked angry..
wat did i do now..
geet: annie my DUSHT DHANAV boss is calling me.. be right back.. kahin na jana.. pata chalay mujhay dant pit gayi ho..
annie nods..
i leave..
as i go to his cabin..
i recall all the moments...
this morning i havent done anything wrong..
last night he yelled at me so i dont think so he's gonna yell at me cause of that either..
OH GOD PLZ HELP ME!!
iss dusht dhanav se aap hi bacha sakte hain mujhay..
i knock on his cabin door..
a very roughly voice comes from inside!
maan: geet ander aao..
i enter his cabin..
i was kind of scared..
he was as usual sitting down on his chair next to his desk..
khudos kahin ka..
y cant he just leave me alone..
or no just ughhh...
forget it..
geet: yes sir? u called me??
maan: yea geet.. i want u to take this file n give it to mr.sharma.. our client..
geet: yeh kounsi file hai sir?
he looks up at me like MSK style..
maan: geet dont ask questions.. just do as i tell u too..
uff.. agar ALLAH g mujhay aik khoon maaf ker day na to main is aadmi ka karoon gi..
he's too much yaar..
aik simple sa qustion poocha tha..
watever..
i m so out of here..

no one's point of view..
geet rolls her eyes n starts leaving the place when maan calls her..
maan: geet!
geet turns around..
maan: yeh file tumhary paas khud chal ker nahi aa sakti? isay pakro aur mr.sharma ko mail ker do.. right now..
geet: (whispering in MSK style) RIGHT NOW!
maan: tumnay kuch kaha..
geet: no sir.. how can i say something to u...
saying that she leaves the place..
she goes back in her cabin..
annie is waiting for her..
annie: kya huwa geet??? sir ne kya kaha?
geet: kya hona hai annie.. woh khudus boss. uff. kya keron us ka main.. itna dantta hai mujhay!
annie: (thinking) bhai bhi na!!
geet: yaar tum idher baitho main zara computer se aik kaam ker loon.. phir baad main yeh file bhi to mail kerni hai na..
annie nods n sits peacefully.. while geet sits n do sumthing with the computer..


OVER TO MAAN!
maan is busy checking all the files on his desk..
maan: yeh mainay accounts ki file kahan rakh di..
n then he remembers.
maan: woh to maine geet ko di thi..
maan calls geet..
however geet accidently steps on the telephone wire n therfore the wire gets out of the telephone..
so the phone is disconnected..
maan gets angry..
he rushes over to geet's cabin..
unknown to him that annie is still there..
maan cums bursting in..
maan: GEET!
annie and geet look up..
annie gets up..
maan: tumhari himmat kaisi huwi ke tumnay mera phone disconnect kiya.. apnay boss ka!!
geet shocked.
she looks over at the wire n sees that its disconnected..
geet: sir woh..
maan: just shutup geet.. agar tum is tarha ki harkatay kerti rahi na to main tumhay job se nikal doon ga..
geet: no sir plz dont do that..
n then maan realizes that annie is in that room..
maan: tum?
annie walks up to maan..
annie: hi..
maan: tum yahan kya ker rahi ho? tumhay to ghar hona chahiye tha na..
geet: ghar? annie tum maan sir ko janti ho??
annie nods..
geet: (thinking) bichari..
geet: maan sir aap is ko kab se jantay hain..
maan: 18 saal se isko daikhta aa rahi hoon..
geeT: 18 saal? but how are..
maan intrupts..
maan: geet tumhay is se koi matlab nahi hona chahiye..
annie: bbhai kya ker rahay ho aap? janay bhi do na? her waqt ka ghussa acha nahi hota!
geet: bhai?
annie: han geet, tumhare boss mere bhai hain..
geet: real wallay?
maan: (angry) wat do u mean by real wallay? bhai nakli bhi hotay hain?
geet: no i meant.. kuch ladkiyan aiwin ladkon ko bhai bana laiti hain..
annie: (walks up to geet, n puts her arm on her shoulder) geet han yeh mere bhai hain.. the "real" one (putting quotations on the real)
geet: hayyo RABBA!
maan: ab tumhay kya huwa hai?
annie understood y she was acting like that..
annie: bhai aap yahan kya ker rahay hain? aur plz meri friend ko hamesha draya and dantaya na kerain.. plz..
maan: friend? yeh kab se tumhari friend bani?
annie: jab se maine college join kiya.. yeh bhi usi college main jati hai jis college may main jati hn..
maan: ok watever.. geet give me the accounts file NOW!
geet quickly hands him the file..
maan leaves..
geet fells back on her chair..
geet: HAYYO RABBA! yeh mujhse kya ho gaya.. apne boss ki buraiyan kerti rahi aur woh bhi un ki choti behan ke samnay!
annie: geet...
geet: aur tumnay mujhay aik baar bhi nahi toka.. aik baar bhi nahi kaha ke jis insaan ki main khushi khushi buraiya kerti hn woh aur nahi tumhare bhai hain..
annie: i dont mind.. i mean main janti hoon bhai ko.. woh sadu hain i know.. he's rude to everyone.. even my other brother is scared of him.. nobody dares to speak in front of him except me n dadi ma..
geet: really? ur other brother is scared of him??
annie: yeah dev bhai bhi na woh aisay hi hain.. he will never change.. NEVER i tell u..
geet and annie laugh...
geet then remembers..
geet: oye teri khair.. maine to yeh file mail kerni thi..
annie: chal geet tum file ko mail kero.. i will take a leave.. dadi ma must be waiting for me..
geet: ok annie.. i will c u tomarrow.. wait aaj thursday hai na..
annie: yea.. matlab no college on the weekends..
geet: yup! anyways tum ab jao is se pehle tumharay bhai phir se aa jain.. by the way u dont mind if i call him dusht dhanav..
annie laughs
annie: no no not at all.. yeh boss n secretary ka maumla hai.. i shouldnt interfere..
geet smiles n leaves..
geet is leaving her cabin..
geet: aik dafa file check ker hi laiti hn..
when she was about to open the file sumbudy comes in her cabin..
adi: geet! tumnay abhi tak yeh file mail nahi ki.. boss will fire u.. go now..
geet doesnt look at the file n leaves..
geet is leaving..
sasha cums in front of her..
n she accidently bumps into her..
n geet drops the file..
sasha: YOU!!
geet: i am sorry sasha ma'am
sasha: geet tumnay abhi yeh file mail nahi ki.. GO NOW!! warna tumharay saath saath meri bhi nokri jaaye gi..
geet nods n leaves..
geet goes to a person (mail delivery person MDP)
geet: aray suno.. mujhay jaldi jana hai.. kaam hai mujhay to aap yeh mail ker dain mr. sharma ko.. address uper likha ho ga..
MDP: g madam.. aap aram se ja ker baith jaye.. aday ghantay main unko mail pohnch jaye gi..
geet smiles..
geet: thank u.. :)
geet leaves..

AFTER HALF AN HOUR:
geet is in her cabin..
maan calls geet..
geet: hello..
maan: mere cabin mai aao.. abhi..
geet: g sir..

geet goes to maan cabin..
when se enters the cabin she sees a girl standing..
geet was confused..
maan looks up..
maan: emm geet meet pinky.. pinky this is geet my secretary..
geet: hi..
pinky: (shy) hi..
maan: geet starting today she is joining our office.. she's going to be a receptionist..
geet: g sir..
maan: so i want u to handle her.. show her around.. stay with her all the time.. if anything wrong happens then geet u know tumharay saath kya ho ga..
geet scared..
geet: yyyeeesss sssiiirrr...
maan: now u both may leave..
pinky was scared of maan's attitude too..
geet takes pinkys hand n indicates her to leave..
they both leave..

geet's cabin:
geet: dusht dhanav..
pinky: huh? koun?
geet: hamaray khudus boss..
pinky starts laughing n she is scared too..
pinky is eating chips non stop able
geet luks at her..
confused..
geet: pinky yeh kya ker rahi ho? ahista khao? its really unhealthy for ur health..
pinky: woh kya hai na ma'am..
geeT: before u continue. aik meri baat kaan khol ker sun lo.. khabar dar mujhay ma'am kaha. call me geet yaar.
pinky smiles..
pinky: ok ma'am, i mean geet woh kya hai na whenever i m in tension i eat like this..
geet grabs the chips from pinky's hand..
geet: tension? kis cheez ki tension?
pinky looks over at maan's cabin through the window..
geet looks where pinky is looking..
geeT: oh i c.. us dusht dhanav ki wajah se tum tension mai ho..
pinky nods..
geet: dont b yaar. u know wat i do when he yells at me?
pinky: wat?
geet: main aik kaan se sunti hn aur jab woh dusht dhanav chala jata hai na main doosray kaan se nikal daiti hoon..
geet and pinky laughs


maan's cabin:
maan is looking over a file when somebody calls him..
maan: hello..
mr. sharma: mr.maan khurana?
maan: yes speaking..
mr. sharma: kahan rehtay hain mr. maan khurana?
maan: ji? main to idher hi hoon..
mr. sharma: hamain file dai ker khud kahan khoy khoy rehtay hain..
maan: oh aap ko file mil gayi! thats great.. to agli meeting kab rakhay?
mr. sharma: mujhay koi meeting nahi kerni..
maan: excuse me..
mr. sharma: agar aap isi tarha her client ko handle kertay hain to sorry to say this i dont want to work with u..
maan: wat do u mean? koi ghalti ho gayi hai?
mr. sharma: ghalti hum se ho gayi hai jo hum ne aap se deal ki..
maan: mr. sharma! if anything happened tell me!?
mr. sharma: aap ne kaha tha ke aap mujhay blue prints ki file bhaijain gain..
maan: yes?
mr. sharma: aur mere paas abhi kisi ki property ki file hai. jo aap ki taraf se aayi hai! i think woh tumhari hai..

maan's point of view:
did he just called me tumhari?!
is ko to main!
control maan..
yeh deal hamaray haath se nahi jani chahiye..
dadi ma ke friend hain..
dadi ma ko acha nahi lagay ga..
just control..
maan: i think by mistake mail ho gayi ho gi..
mr. sharma: u guys are really lazy then.. aik file check nahi ker saktay thay jab mail ker rahay thay..
maan: mr. sharma i will like u to come to our office with ur team. just give us last chance..
mr. sharma: dil to nahi ker raha hai.. agar boss itna lazy hai to employees kaisay hon gain..
WAT!!
HOW DARE HE?
after all i am MAAN SINGH KHURANA!
mr.sharma: anyways i will give u one last chance.. i will c u in 1 hour with my team..
i hang up..
wait whom did i give the file to mail?
GEET!
it must b geet..
she must have changed the files..
aaj yeh nahi bachay gi..

PRECAP: maan: geet tumhari himat kaisi huwi aisi herqat kertay waqt..
geet is scared n tensed..



part 13
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
yipee !!! me first ...

i sandwiched ur update as well ... lolz ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
getting interesting
loving it
waiting for more
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
LOVED IT
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
@ part 12
annie ka "real" bhai ...
and another scolding session for Geet :(
but atleast she has some good company in form of Pinky at office
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Hey dat Real part ws nyc...awesome update continue soon
Poor geet nw wat will she do...
Edited by renjini263 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Awesome part...superb
m loving this ff
thnx for pm
continue soon...

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