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PART 14:
maan enters the KM..
he sees dadi ma standin waiting for him..
maan walks up to her..
maan: dadi ma aap is tarha q khari huwi hain aap ki tabhiyat nahi theek.. aap ander chalain..
annie and dev cums n they both start laughing n so does dadi ma n maan just stands there watching them all in total MSK style..
maan: maine kuch ghalat keh diya hai?
dadi ma: aray nahi betay.. woh kya hai na humain pata tha aap ghar jaldi nahin aaye gain to is liye hum ne aap se jhoot bola take aap ghar wapis aa jain aur dinner hamare saath karain..
maan: (getting angry) dadi ma aap achi tarha janti hain ke mujhay jhoot se sakht nafrat hai aur jhoot bolne wale se bhi..
dadi ma: to kya aap hum se nafrat kertay hain?
maan: nahin dadi ma.. chalain aaye dinner kertay hain..
everyone head over to the table..
dadi ma: nakul! khana laga dain..
nakul cums n sets the table..
dadi ma: aaj maan hum ne biryani banayi hai.. aap ki favorite..
maan: (not smiling) g dadi ma..
maan is about to take one spoon of biryani when his cell rings..
maan picks it up..
maan: hello?
mr. chopra: mr. khurana?
maan: yes..
mr. chopra: aap se aik urgently discussion kerni hai..
maan: yes.
mr. chopra: yahan phone pe nahi ho sakay to hum aap ke office main aa rahay hain in about 15 mins..
maan: ok mr chopra i m coming..
maan hangs up..
dadi ma: kahan ja rahay hain?
maan: dadi ma bhot zaroori meeting hai.. i have to go..
dadi ma: maan betay this is not fair.. itnay dinon ke baad hum akathay dinner ker rahay hain.. aap ja rahay hain?
maan: dadi ma jana to parhay ga.. mayb tomarrow main jaldi ghar aa jaon..
dadi ma: (sad) fine baitay.. jain..
maan gets up n leaves..
geet in the office ( in her cabin):
8:00 pm
geet: itni raat ho gayi hai.. but this is important... get ready maan sir..
geet is busy putting sum stuff together...
geet: sab set ho gaya hai.. ghar lai jati hn in sab ko.. kya pata kal subha koi chori ker dain ya phir idher udher ker day..
geet gets up n puts everything in her bag..
shes holding 2 files n is getting out of her cabin..
geet: bhaiya ko call ker laiti hn..
she's getting out of the building.. n she is also looking in her bag for her cell phone..
geet doesnt look up..
on the other hand maan gets out of the car n is walking in the KC..
maan is looking at his cell phone..
n geet is still looking in her bag..
geeT: musibat phone kahan chala gaya..
they both r getting closed..
n unknown to them two..
they both bump into each other..
'geet drops her files n maan drops his cell phone..
n geet also falls but maan saves her from falling..
their lil eye lock..
MAHIII
MAHIII VE MAHIII MAHIII VE!
MAHIII...
geet's POV:
i cant believe it that he's here..
i m so happy..
but y m i happy to c him again..
geet sudhar ja..
maan's POV:
wat is she doing here??
didnt she go home..
no one's point of view:
they both were so lost in each other..
trying to get their answers from each others eyes..
MAHIII
all of the sudden a car pulls up next to maneet..
mr.chopra gets out of the car..
maan and geet r still lost in each other..
they dont know wat is going on around them...
mr.chopra stares at them two for a lil while..
mr. chopra: kitnay achay lag rahay hain yeh donon..
he smiles n decides to break their lil mahi session..
mr. chopra goes up to maan n pokes his shoulder..
no reply..
then mr. chopra waves his hand in front of maan and geet's eyes..
still no reply..
mr. chopra: wat the heck is wrong with them? itna pyaar!?
mr. chopra clears his throat..
no reply!
maan and geet were so lost in each other!
mr. chopra had it enough..
he goes back in his car n honks the car..
beeeppp...
both maan n geet get scared..
geet finally stands up..
they both look around n find mr. chopra standing next to his car folding his arms..
maan: (surprised to see him) aap? u came?
mr. chopra: yeh mr. khurana maine hi aap ko call ki thi ke i m coming in 15 mins at ur place.. n u said yes.. so i m here.. but aap thoday busy lag rahay thay..
mr. chopra teasing maan..
maan looks at geet n geet looks at maan..
maan: ehhh.. nahin i m not busy shall we go in..
mr. chopra: yea sure...
maan: u go ahead i'll b there in a sec..
mr. chopra leaves..
maan: tum yahan kya ker rahi ho? abhi tak ghar nahi gayi?
geet: wooh main actually..
geet thinks for a lil while..
geeT: haan main woh apna cabin theek ker rahi thi.. gandagi bari thi..
maan: tumhara cabin theek kernay ke liye yahan pe kafi nauker hain..
geet: nahin mujhay kaam kerna acha lagta hai..
geet gives maan a weak smile..
maan: acha.. tumhay kaam kerna acha lagta hai.. theek hai main tumhay aik kaam dai ta hoon..
geet: jjii sir..
maan: ander aao..
geet: per main...
maan: (intrups geet) maine kaha ander aao.. right now..
maan showing anger to geet..
geet: aa rahi hn sir. chalain..
maan looks at geet angrily..
maan goes inside n geet follows..
maan' point of view:
so she loves doing work..
especially cleaning work..
fine i will give her a work..
i m so angry at her that i wanna explode..
how dare she..
she talks behind my back n then she ruins my reputation in front of my clients..
i will tell her wat i can do if somebody talks behind my back n ruins my reputation..
geet's point of view:
i m very much tired n just wanna go to sleep..
where is he taking me?
it was pretty dark inside..
but i could still see some places..
i could see pinky's place (reception)
now i could c adi sir's lil office place..
now i could c maan sir opening the door of store room..
what could he possibly need from the store room..
no one's point of view:
maan n geet went inside the store room..
geet didnt know wat he was doing..
maan was very busy searching for something..
after a minute or two maan finally came n stood next to geet..
he was holding a broom n a trash holder..
geet was confused..
geet: sir aap broom marne lagay hain?
maan looks at her like MSK..
maan: kya kaha tumne?! main?! no main nahin.. tum maro gi..
geeT: ji?
maan: ji...
geet: but sir..
maan: no buts.. ab meri baat kaan khol ke sun lo.. i m not repeating it afterwards..
geet gets quite n listens..
maan: tum building se baar jao gi to bilkul samnay road ke uper gand parha huwa hai.. ja ker woh saaf kero..
geeT: but sir..
maan: maine abhi bola i dont want to hear no buts from u.. tumhay acha lagta hai na safai kerne ka ja ker kero.. aur haan chahay tufaan aa jaye tum wahan se bilkul nahi hilo gi jab tak tum woh jaga saaf nahi ker laiti.. got it?
geet nods sadly..
maan leaves the place...
geet: (anger) DUSHT DHANAV!
maan: (hears it from outside the store room, he cums back) kya kaha?
geeT: me? i said get to work to my self!
maan nods in attitude n leaves..
geet: (whispering) dusht dhanav!
geet leaves the store room with a room n a trash holder..
maan's point of view:
i didnt want her to do that stuff..
but the way she was talking to me..
n wat mr. chopra had said about us both made me angry..
y was i really into her?
y did i loose myself in her eyes?
maan u have to stay away from her?
i enter the conference room..
mr.chopra gets up..
mr. chopra: emm mr.khurana geet madam nahi aayi kya?
i look at him..
y does he need her..
i m here..
isnt it enough?
maan: no actually she needed to do some important work..
i blurted out..
mr. chopra: ok.. so i wanted to talk about the blueprints...
geet's point of view:
i stepped out..it was raining..
wait wat?
raining?
but it wasnt raining before..
so i have to work in this rain.. aur aaj to thand bhi bhot sakht hai..
ofcourse its march 10, 2011
it will be cold. duh..
but it wasnt raining when i went inside with maan sir..
Ae Allah wat r u doing?
its not that i hate rain..
its just that its too cold..
n its 10:00 pm..
its raining as well its really windy..
i dont have a jacket or sumthing to wear..
my legs were trembling..
as i was making my way to the spot he had told me to clean his words were covering my brain..
"aur haan chahay tufaan aa jaye tum wahan se bilkul nahi hilo gi jab tak tum woh jaga saaf nahi ker laiti.. got it?"yes sir i got it..
he would fire me if i didnt do my task..
i closed my eyes n opened them..
i walked to the place..
it was on the road..
right on front of KC building..
i looked at the place..
it was covered with dirt n garbage..
there was a also a coffee spill on the road...
it was mixture of many thing..
so he wanted me to clean that..
hmm..
fine i will..
i will show him..
i start working..
i was sweeping the road with the broom maan sir had given to me.
i was sweeping n as well i was trembling too..
as i was sweeping more garbage would fall at that place..
thanks to the wind..
i might get a cold..
i was trembling so bad..
back at conference room..
maan's point of view:
mr. chopra kept on talking..
but my mind was thinking about geet..
i looked out the window n i saw it was raining..
raining?!
wait.. so she's outside when its raining..
no it cant be..
she probably left..
she will probably do it tomarrow..
i sighed of relief..
but...
my mind was bringing back the words i have told her earlier..
"aur haan chahay tufaan aa jaye tum wahan se bilkul nahi hilo gi jab tak tum woh jaga saaf nahi ker laiti.. got it?"
oh no..
she's probably there..
cleaning..
its too cold outside...
n wait do i see trees dancing outside the window?
so its also windy..
i started getting a head ache..
n now my heart started to hurt too..
y was i in pain?
who is she to me?
NO ONE!
she's just my secretary n thats it!!!
waisay bhi woh pehle meri bari baat sunti hai jo ab sunay gi..
she probably had left..
i tried to focus my self on mr. chopra..
mr. chopra: so i just told u the basic things about wat i need in my house.. kuch cheezain to ms. geet ne aaj subha pata di theen.. so plz be carefull..
geet?
again geet?
i m tired of hearing her name?
cant the world go on without geet?
whenever i try to take my mind out of her then somebody says her name n i go back in her thoughts!
maan yeh tujhay kya ho raha hai?
tu pehle to aisa nahi tha!
mr. chopra's point of view:
maan looked tensed..
like he was getting hurt from inside..
i have never seen him like this..
is this bcoz of that girl, geet?
no i dont think so..
he never lets anyone come close to him except his dadi ma n my friend savitri devi..
he's probably tensed about her..
yea i think thats true..
is savitri ok?
i should call her when i get out of here..
if i ask maan then he wouldnt answer me improperly..
he doesnt share his personal stuff to anyone other then savitri..
maan: ok mr. chopra.. i think this is enough for today..
mr. chopra: yea u r right.. i should take a leave.. let me call my driver to bring the car..
he nods..
maan's point of view:
i wanted to see her badly..
if she's still outside cleaning..
mr. chopra calls his driver to bring the car in 2 mins..
mr. chopra: mr. khurana since i m here.. i still have 2 mins can we check the payments n bills..
maan: yea sure mr. chopra.. let me go get the file from my cabin...
no one's point of view:
maan goes to his cabin while mr. chopra waits for him in the conference room..
maan goes up to his desk..
maan: yeh bills wali file kahan rakh di..
maan starts looking crazily on his desk when he spots a file..
maan: this must be the file..
he picks the file n opens it to make sure..
he was shocked to see the blue prints file in his hand..
maan's point of view:
i cant believe my eyes..
am i really seeing the blue prints file?
it was on my desk the whole time n i kept on yelling geet?
oh no wat had i done?
aur aaj to maine had hi paar ker di!
us ko naukrani bana diya!
aur woh bichari chup chaap bahar ja ker saaf ker rahi hai aur woh bhi barish main..
maan aaj tune pehli baar ghalti ki hai aur woh bhi itni bari..
sorry to bolna hi padega..
par maan singh khurana ne kabhi kisi se sorry nahin bola..
no one's point of view:
maan was so angry..
he punched the table..
n his right hand started bleeding..
without noticing he leaves his cabin n goes to conference room..
maan: mr. chopra hum next time meeting jab kerain gain then i will show u the bills n all that.. right now i m in a hurry..
mr. chopra's point of view:
ive never seen maan in such a hurry..
Allah khair kare..
its probably savitri devi..
mr. chopra: yes mr. khurana u go ahead.. i will catch u later..
i should call savitri..
i just hope she' fine..
no one's point of view:
maan and mr. chopra leaves the conference room..
geet"s side:
however geet is still in trouble removing the trash..
the wind would blow more trash at her spot..
suddenly a car came behind geet..
n the car's lights werent on..
so geet couldnt see the car bcoz her back was to the car..
the car came closer n closer..
but the stupid driver wouldnt even honk the car..
now mr. chopra n maan got out of the building..
they both saw the car cuming closer to geet..
maan: (yelling) geet peechay daikho.. GEET!
geet confused..
she turns around
eyes wide open n shocked..
geet screams..
cause of the biggest shock her legs wouldnt move..
geet's point of view:
OMG y arent my legs moving..
geet move ur legs..
the car was coming closer n closer n closer..
closer...
closer...
closer...
closer...
Precap: rano n rajji crying!!!!!
cant wait to c ur comments!! :) ~Sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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